Zionista:


You wobbled and fumbled throughout the whole write- up.

Your introductory line just gave you away as an unserious writer. "Welcome to the thread, am pradoic"

Will heaven fall if you write '..... I'm Pradoic'. The spelling of your name should begin with a capital letter. 'Am' shouldn't be used interchangeably with ' I'm '.

You are appraising the works of other great writers and you couldn't even adhere to basic rules of grammar.

The whole passage is riddled with grammatical blunders, punctuation errors, shorthands, colloquial English etc.

Young ones come here too. You wouldn't want your wards to start writing junks like this.

What is worth doing is worth doing well.

Silver1996:
KINGS
EPISODE 152


"He said the thought of me been born kept him alive.... So when he got home... I was in my mother's arm..... He lay his bleeding hand in my head and named me Taka meaning the one who is strong in battle....."

"Really....... "Francis bug his eyes at him...

"Ya... That explains my big muscles..... "He said bulging out his arm muscles.....

"Oh i see... They are very big.... Only the kind of muscles that can build this nonsense we are underneath in a bush......"

"The nonsense is saving you from getting drench by the rain.... "

skubido:
Oyana OP,

Comma update

genius43:
Make we start the countdown,

Odumodu - Resting in pieces
Buzo
Mayo
Azuka
Joseph
Marcus
Ayu
Carlos.

Add the rest na these ones I remember for now.

sly12345:







E don dey happen o


but Odumodu quick die o, all those remaining chief when nor get anything to contribute for the story, na dem for die first now


chiefs like dem Azuka, Ayu, Joseph, Marcus

Silver1996:






Much love brother

AdiscoPele:
That was too fast of pious, too fast and bad planning.

Has he forgotten his beloved mother is still underground in Carlo's house?

Why was he so quick to take over the hotel.

He could have simply played along until his able to get his mother out or when he has Carlos at the corner, he then negotiate his mum's release.

Pious is still a boy

petersononome:





if am her,i will just go and marry the Chief

Evold:
What kind of material is Carlos made of. He seems impossible to beat.

kikiwendy:
Francis would team up with his brother and fight that smart Carlos

Princesstee:
The princess will miss Francis greatly , but then he's coming back to become the king of Mogula

egwolopretty:




There is no need assuming, you are not my boyfriend, so i cant die for you

egwolopretty:






you that cannot even die for your girl

Silver1996:





The time of Romeo and Juliet don past

purity23:




you are supposed to be dying for your girl, not the other way round

purity23:





even me too o, it has got me wondering if my bf can die for me

Silver1996:






Ahh my baby... If you break up with me.. I will drink rat poison and die o

egwolopretty:





see them o, our future husband, ordinary die you cannot die for your girl, even you silver, you have joined bad gang, so you cannot die for me, infact we have quarrelled,i don tire, make we break up

Silver1996:




Physical die dey
Spiritual die dey
Emotional die dey


So which of the die are you referring to?

Silver1996:



....it depends on the die