Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 11:51pm On Feb 27, 2017 |
#Singing Finally ooooo Two of them has finally found sense. I'm happy for them awhn
Shame to Myra
Madam Pinky,thanks for the updates. God bless you |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 10:06pm On Feb 25, 2017 |
daretodiffer: Why don't you do your research well? Your brother was not born a dada. He became a dada because they failed to comb his head. I grew up believing that some are born with dreadlocks until I learnt otherwise. Why don't you do the same instead of regurgitating the same old BS? You are not our parents
UNCLE or AUNTY,i hate to argue o but I know what I'm saying. When my brother was a baby,my mum would always try combing his hair but the combs always get broken. Even if you comb it now,it would tangle back almost immediately. The dada was barbed later but up till now his hair tangles and he has to carry a comb everywhere he goes. Thanking you |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 3:22pm On Feb 25, 2017 |
daretodiffer: @chumzypinky, there is nothing like a naturally born dada but you can have natural locs. Your hair turn to locs when you do not comb it. Babies who have dada do because either their scalp is too sensitive for combing or their carer do not comb their hair.
I think you should edit that sentence on the first page. Great work! I beg to differ. My younger brother is a naturally born dada..... do your research and get your facts right. Mummy Pinky to sure..... Kudos to you |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 11:05pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
OMG These guys are criminals ooo Well-done ma'am |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 5:28pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
gtin:
My dear we both knw she didnt move on, she has always prayed for dis, so i dnt see any need for her drama She was mature to have asked him to still be her friend but he rejected her so what would you have her do? Nathan should also be a man and do the needful 3 Likes |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 5:25pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
fam24:
To me, there is nothing rude about how Kainene reacted to Nathan here. Do you expect her to run to him or jump at him? Someone who said he's no longer interested in the relationship, and didn't even accept to be a friend. She can't allow someone to start controlling her emotions, she needs to know where he belongs. Or do you expect her to keep begging him? My thoughts exactly 1 Like |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 10:39am On Feb 18, 2017 |
Hmmnnn.... This Chuks' cup would soon be filled up. Stupid man Lazy Pamela,it's now she wants to start up a business. Anyways,thanks for the update and hoping to get more soon..... Long ones oooo |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 12:04am On Feb 15, 2017 |
: yorhmienerd: It's high time we start flogging people that quotes long post. Hian! |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 5:48pm On Feb 14, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: KAINENE. 'i'm sorry MozB but i cant' i said in a slow voice after listening to him speak. There was no way things were going to work out between us. Firstly, i didnt love him and secondly, i was carrying another man's child and i was even in love with another! Guilt plaqued me.
'Kainene...' he tried holding my hand as i stood up.
'i'm sorry Moses but i have to go' From the corner of my eyes, i sighted Nathan standing up with Myra and they were both walking out of the restaurant.
'Kaine...' but i was already gone. Tears filled my eyes when i realised that i couldnt get the man i wanted anymore. Someone loved me but i was in love with someone else, it was very funny.
I sighted Nathan and Myra walking towards his car. I just watched them. I wanted to go to him, but i couldnt. Not with Myra watching.
I slowly walked to my car and got into it. I suddenly felt weak to drive. I just relaxed my head on the steering. I didnt know how long i rested my head there until i heard a knock on my window.
I looked up 'Nathan?' i muttered as i rolled down the windows.
'are you alright?' he asked surveying me with his eyes 'have you been crying?'
I reached for my eyes and noticed they were still wet 'i'm alright' i nodded, then i looked around for Myra 'where's she?'
'who?' he looked confused.
'your secretary, your lover. Myra'
'she's gone'
'okay' i simply nodded.
'you look weak. Do you think you can drive in this condition?'
I jerked 'what condition?' he certainly hadnt found out i was pregnant, did he? No one knew i was pregnant, except Kaka. Kaka didnt snitch on me, did she? I would never forgive her if she did.
'you're weak. Are you sick?' he touched my forehead.
'do you care?' i said in what looked like a whisper.
'not like i care too much. I just happened to see someone i knew looking distressed and i thought i could be of help' he said nonchalantly withdrawing his hand.
Though i felt bad, i didnt show it 'thanks alot but i'm fine by God's grace. And thanks for extending your kindness to "someone you knew". God bless you'
I saw the amusement in his eyes and heard the sarcasm in his voice when he said 'God bless you too'
I was even beginning to wonder when i became this spiritual. I wasnt an atheist really but i hardly went to church. Infact, i couldnt remember the last time i stepped into Winners Chapel which was my place of worship 'your regards to your mum for me' i said in a husky voice.
He shrugged and turned to leave. I shuddered. I didnt want him to leave 'Nathan?' i called and he turned to me. I wondered if he didnt feel anything for me anymore. Was it so easy to cast aside what we once shared? Yes, i made so many mistakes and i realised them now but didnt they say love is forgiving?
Shoprite was buzzing. Remember i stated that Rodinia was inside Shoprite? People were trooping in and out. We couldnt talk here. He came closer 'what is it?'
'please i beg you' i said with my palms together 'could you perhaps, get in the car? I...i want to discuss something with you'
He eyed me suspiciously for a while then he went over to the other side and entered the car. I whined up.
'what is it you want to discuss with me?' he asked.
I suddenly felt foolish. What was i thinking? This guy hated me already, what would he think of me when i say what i had to say? But then i had to tell him something, i had to say something.
'i just want us to be friends' i blurted out. Where did that come from? He looked at me like an interesting piece of art 'that we are ex-lovers doesnt mean we turn enemies right?' i searched his face for any reaction.
'are you kidding me?' then he laughed.
'i understand that you're in a very important relationship right now. With your secretary so i want us to be friends, no strings attached.
'sorry, i'm not usually friends with rude personalities'
'i'm willing to change. I know i'm rude, saucy, arrogant, badmouthed and what have you. And i've lost so many important things because of that. But i'm willing to become a better person now. I'm not asking you to take me back, i'm just asking for your forgiveness and your friendship. Nathan, i know i've wronged you in so many ways but the fact remains that i can never forget you. The hatred you have for me is killing me, its shattering' i poured out.
He looked at me for a while. Then i heard him sigh heavily 'Kainene' he called out.
'i know its too late. You're already in love with someone else. And i dont plan on destroying that relationship. Infact i'm happy you've found happiness with the right woman' tears dropped from my eyes. I didnt mean all i was saying. I was crazy about this guy for goodness sake!
'why are you doing this Nene?'
'because i still love you!'
'you said what?'
'i love you Nathan. I love you! I still love you with every ounce of my being and i miss you like crazy. I dont know how i'm going to live without you!' i cried.
TBC Awhn so so emotional.... I almost cried Nathan should just forgive her already. Well done mummy Chumzypinky. Happy Val's Day |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 12:23am On Feb 12, 2017 |
Beautiful... Thanks for the update ma'am |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 11:51pm On Feb 09, 2017 |
smizel: haha say wetin apen Say Kainene needs brain to function properly ni 1 Like |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 10:04am On Feb 09, 2017 |
wizsolzy: Dis keke is a nonsense gal. Can we fast and pray for her my brothers and sisters. Regede Mali fathom Kainene za zum fanta mirinda Pepsi cocacola..... Oya Kainene receive brain..... Madam Chumzypinky,you are doing well.. More ink to your pen ma'am |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 9:38pm On Feb 08, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: Update comes up tomorrow morning guys. Gudnyt! Time for the oda room Awhn.... Was really expecting an update tonight.. Anyways,enjoy the oda room but be careful with our baby that's inside of you |
Literature / Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 3:41pm On Feb 08, 2017 |
Mehn! This story is mind blowing... I finally got to page 84.... Madam Chumzypinky #wehdonma I love your tory well well.... E dey sweet me for body.... Dey totori my thoughts God bless you and your family |
TV/Movies / Re: MTN Project Fame Season 9 Official Thread by motawlahnee(f): 12:13pm On Aug 04, 2016 |
samhay:
Probably we watched different performance Yeah maybe. Mtn project fame is getting better. The stage looked better last Sunday than that of the gala night. |
TV/Movies / Re: MTN Project Fame Season 9 Official Thread by motawlahnee(f): 5:06pm On Aug 03, 2016 |
samhay: Posted this on d locked thread
I gotta criticize now
The audience r so dry,no excitement at all. The stage too small for God sake The judges got it wrong putting Oluchi on probation I don't Knw how Yousuf wanna stay long in the academy, The Fuji stuff is even reflecting when he talks
Just bored watching it.
Stand out performers
Pere Winner There is a big difference between being a good musician and someone studying music. Mtn Project fame judges are very mature and impartial. |
TV/Movies / Re: MTN Project Fame Season 9 Official Thread by motawlahnee(f): 5:02pm On Aug 03, 2016 |
The fact that people compare Project fame with The voice is really annoying. Airtel shot The voice in SouthAfrica not in Nigeria. Team Project fame for life. 1 Like 1 Share |
Literature / Re: Bloodline.......part One[ The Family]. by motawlahnee(f): 11:18pm On Jun 17, 2015 |
Still waiting for the next update |
Literature / Re: Bloodline.......part One[ The Family]. by motawlahnee(f): 2:21pm On Jun 11, 2015 |
Ok ooooo.... I'll be here |
Literature / Re: Bloodline.......part One[ The Family]. by motawlahnee(f): 9:03am On Jun 03, 2015 |
Wow.. Well done sir |
Literature / Re: Bloodline.......part One[ The Family]. by motawlahnee(f): 8:02pm On Jun 02, 2015 |
Mr Ironkurtain,I appreciate your updates but I can't help but shout "where is our update oooo"... Lolz.. More ink to your pen |
Literature / Re: Bloodline.......part One[ The Family]. by motawlahnee(f): 4:25pm On Jun 01, 2015 |
OMG!!! I'm so scared for Lisa |
Literature / Re: Bloodline.......part One[ The Family]. by motawlahnee(f): 12:19pm On May 25, 2015 |
Hmmmmmnnnn... Getting more interesting |
Literature / Re: Bloodline.......part One[ The Family]. by motawlahnee(f): 9:44am On May 24, 2015 |
[color=#006600][/color]... Phew.. What a beautiful story. Patiently waiting for more |
Literature / Re: Mother Inferior (most Read) by motawlahnee(f): 12:36am On Jan 30, 2015 |
Waiting patiently |