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I think Maxwell is a better playboy.
This story is only just starting and Maxwell has 2 girlfriends who know about their selves and one girl who knows about the two gfs but still wants him... Like I said before, that's EPIC.

Am I the only one that thinks this story should hit front page already? Maybe the traffic would boost chistar's morale to update more efficiently. Let us kindly recommend it. Cc Obinnau

Chistar, dis is why I like ur stories. Dey are so realistic,educational and easy to relate with.u teach us the good , the bad and the ugly . You once taught us how to use water dispenser to dispense drinks in a party and that has been helpful in the past. Now I know something new about amnesia. I didn't even know there were different types of amnesia before reading this update.

Dividing the chapter into smaller bits sounds like a good idea. It would keep the thread active and ease the excess suspense.

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About the story so far, I have a few observations.
1 - what happened to Mary-anne's pregnancy or she wasn't pregnant in the first place?
2 - you have painted Henry to be a hard core cultist and "bad guy" character , I think he is too soft. He hasn't really showed us much "fire"
3 - is Funmi confused or what? One minute she hates Maxwell and the next moment she's going to look 4 him.
4 - my favourite character so far is Maxwell, the guy is the king of all players.one of his girlfriend is in a hospital and his other girlfriends are with him. That's epic!!!!!!

Awaiting your next update.

laykorn:
Hi. Got your mail. Were you trying to say something?
Ayamlaykorn

I sent you no mail.

SexySapphire:
Problem? What cud dat be o. I tink it's either with her womb or dat she had lost the baby. Chistar, why did u av to stop there? So nt fair. Tnx for the update and for nt abandoning us.

I agree with you. I think Mary-anne has lost the baby.

OMG!!! why did mary-anne have to run like that? chistar please drop an update this morning. .. even if its a short update

Romantic date gone wrong.chistar you have come with your suspence again o.If you are going to be packing all ur posts with suspence then we are going to have a big problem. This your one update daily is not going to satisfy us at all.Looking forward to read ur collaboration chapter too.

Chistar sweety! You started a story an I'm the last to know? is dat how life is? Nice story and following.

Hello B. ITCH/ Chistar fans.I made contact with Chistar after he promised to resume updating frequently some days back and he didnt fulfill his promise and he gave me multiple excuses. because I don't want you guys to think he has changed or just abandon us,here are his excuses.

1. According to him,he is at a relative place in PH and doesn't have much time to type like when he was home in lagos
2. He didnt take his laptop with him and typing with his phone isnt helping matters.
3. He also added he doesnt have money to spend on data on his phone for now since its the festive period and he is investing his money in other things.
4. He entered into three writing competitions and they were time consuming (I pray he wins), so he didn't have much time to type a new episode.

So in conclusion,I told him about Clemzy16's comment and he asked me if he should go ahead and rush the story and conclude it on 23rd as promised and start a new series by January or he should take his time and plot the story properly so that he can give us a better and befitting conclusion of the story.

I didn't know what exactly to reply so I thought I should ask u guys directly. Please drop your suggestions ASAP so I can tell him so he would know either he should start typing the concluding episodes or not.

he also said that no matter what... This series aint going to see 2014, so no matter what u guys say, he promises to end it this year, the question is must it end on the 23rd

Enhen.. B4 I 4get. I've seen the rough sample of the first two episode of his new series and its crazyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Although he hasn't given the series a title yet, its seems like a blend of the sci-fic and thriller genre.. I was seeing a lot of "agent this" and "agent that". Its something like '24 and one of all does James Bond 007 movies put together'... (I know he would kill me if he sees this my post, but I just thought u guys should know..)

- Number one Chistar's Amebo Fan

So I went away 4 just a week and see all the drama that you people acted here . @Chistar - I'm not surprised John turned out to be gay because I knew you were the "twist master" and things was going allitle to easy for Jummy, so I was expecting a twist even though I'll admit that John being gay didn't even cross my mind for once.

In my opinion, Jummy shouldn't take John's offer because it would surely come back to hunt her someday.

And this one you have involved "Taofeek" (Zainab's Brother) in the plot now, I wonder what you have planned for him .
*anticipating the next update*

PEACe

Chistar chistar chistar!

If u are experiencing a writer block and you can write such interesting update, I wonder how your updates wud b like wen u eventually overcome this particular writer block.

Thanks 4 dz post, u made my day! I was starting to miss ur stories. Many people have said it but I'll say it again, Chistar you would go places with this your writing.

Kudos.

HEY!!! CHISTAR!!! WE ARE ON FRONT PAGE!!!! *POPS CHAMPAIGNE*

good morning guys, don't you think its high time we expose this story to other nairalanders who don't know about it yet? I know the traffic would make Chistar update more often. Let's endorse it for front page >> https://www.nairaland.com/1210134/endorse-topics-make-frontpage/19#19180101 <<ENDORSEMENT THREAD.

#TeamChistar #TeamB1TCH #TeamJummy #TeamRichard

Good morning mods, I endorse "Babe In Total Control" by chistar01.

Wow! I've been gone for just few days and u have gone this far? I love that Richard and Bukky se.... *coughs* ... *Changing topic*
Just read d story "beauty salon" on your blog, we know ure the king of suspense, nobody is dragging it with u so y must u always flaunt ur throne? My heart was already in my throat when I saw "the end", I felt like slapping you ... There would be a part two shey?

HBD chistar.. have a blast chistar and u must update 4 us oh whether its ur bday or not

Nice update chistar, u sure know how to twist sha, so like play like play, u have pinned Zainab missing car on Richard? Lol... That was unexpected. BTW I love ur skelewu review on your blog.
Reporting life from yaba left
Mz_chistar

Firstly,i should have dropped dis comment on ur blog when i got the email alert of u uploading it dere by 3pm or there about but after reading it, i had issues with commenting so work on that.
I like d fact dat u post it on ur blog first and i get an alert, that's more professional.

*this is another long boring speech from ur number1 fan but read it *

Ur stories have made me have a keen interest in literature and i plan on writing a story soon so i googled some writing tips and they kept on emphasising on building of characters and i went through MCLS and School life recently and i noticed something about u chistar, its either you read a lot of books and study them or you just take to correction.
Here in "babe in total control", which i think is ur 4th online story, your typos have drastically reduced, ur updates are more organised now and the story line seems to be improving. I have a feeling this story is going to be a long and interesting one because so far, i haven't seen any reason to call zainab a "Babe In Total Control",i don't want to be a spoiler but I believe this whole Richard thing is just your way of letting us into Zainab's background and it cool becos that's exactly what they said concerning build of characters.

Anyway, Cool update, at least i can boldly say i know more about John and Samuel, plus I know about Jummy work place, although the suspense is killing me (i want to know if her boss wud sack her).

**still following** n by the way, you've got a mail.

ROTF.... LMA0, I can only picture Richard running round the compound and Sam chasing him, dat wud have been a nice sight . More grease to ur elbow, it seems d story is just about to start *grabs popcorn and juice*.

U guys shud endeavour to take a few seconds and vote 4 chistar at the awards thread 4 the fantasy award(@chistar, I hope am not jumping to conclusion oh), it won't take more dan a minute to do. Cheers.

@chistar *singing* all we are saying, give us one more post .

Since everybody is campaigning on behalf of dia favourite writer, let me campaign 4 my chistar.
Seems he is intersted in winning the fantasy award because dat was d only vote he casted. Let's show our appreciation for chistar's gud work and make sure he wins d fantasy award. If yu have voted for him in anoda genre u can go and change it to "fantasy", and if u are yet to vote, go and vote now b4 d thread is locked. The story u shud vote 4 is "my complicated luv story".
Let us use this to thank him for keeping us in suspense and making us laugh like crazy. #TeamChistar

Signed-
Campaign chairlady

In my complicated luv story u almost killed us with suspense, in school life u almost killed us with laff, and now in dis 1 u want to kill us wit your twists and suspense put together, its not fair oh.Ur plan wud not work *dails doctor number* lemme c as heart attack will kill me when my doctor is by my side. Better come n tell us what happened as Jummy opened d wardrobe

In my complicated luv story u almost killed us with suspense, in school life u almost killed us with laff, and now in dis 1 u want to kill us wit your twists and suspense put together, its not fair oh.Ur plan wud not work *dails doctor number* lemme c as heart attack will kill me when my doctor is by my side

sкчscrαρεr™:
chistar, i swear if there is any word i should use to describe you, it`s not yet in a dictionary¡ so for now, i`m qoinq to say you`re qood x100|

hehehehe, I tot I was d only one who checked d dictionary searching 4 a word and didn't see o.

Chistar comman update na, I tot dat u must have updated by now, that's Ɣ I even came online,or are u still doing dat "6PM" only thing?

tinahrex: all of u shuld go n check awt d rest on his blog

he hasn't posted a new episode of bitch yet,I just checked.

Fantasy - My complicated love story -chistar01
Romance - My complicated love story -chistar01
Adventure - my complicated love story -chistar01
Comedy - my complicated love story -chistar01
Thrller - an evening wit eva -kayemjay
Action - an evening wit eva -kayemjay
Crime -an evening with eva -kayemjay

Please moderators,I can't boast of being a literature lover but I luv dis nd tink it wud be nice if the whole nairaland gets to read it >> https://www.nairaland.com/1469546/letter-ex#18661819 by christar01. Thanks. *modified*

I've already commented on dis yesterday, .
And am following ur blog already

Wow!! Wow!!! And wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
CHISTAR YOU ARE THE FCCKING BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The way you twist your stories can't be done any better!!!
I was happy Zainab was movin on frm richard and the next moment she is on the floor,maybe dead (I know she can't die, she is the babe in total control,or isn't she?)And just wen I tot notin worse can hapen, jummy has an accident.
And the way u intoduce yur characters is awesome, I didn't noe anytin abt dis doctor but now, I know everytin dere is to noe about him.
THUMBS UP.
Frankly speak, u r d only reason I joined nairaland and d only reason am still on nairaland.
Can u drop d voting thread link, lemme rush and vote for u.

chistar01: Viewing this topic: Mz_chistar(f). I see you!!!

Viewing this topic: Chistar01(m), Mz_Chistar(f), Leebliss13(m).. I see you too.
#Following.

chistar01: Speaking of which, if I call your name, say present! ...Simplifier, Ms spaq, Mz_chistar, Madawaki, valdes, foxy and princesa? They are all absent? Chai! If any of you see any of the names listed above, tell them their presence is neededon this thread.
Thanks.

LOL Chistar the legend remembered me , maybe I should throw a party self .Sorry for my late arrival,was at school all this while and didn't have time to browse.seems I've missed a lot oh. U have finished school life (which made front page), and you now have a new story and a blog (nice blog indeed,but why didn't you sort out 4 new stories all tru and not stories most of us from nairaland are already following, #justSayin), I saw that "a letter to my ex" on ur blog this morning, why don't you post it here on nairaland, am sure u would get many positive reviews... U wud go places with this your writing, you have got a rare skill that people would kill for, you make writing seem easy and I know it isn't because I've tried writing before.
Am already talking too much shey? Hehehe I know I know,am just excited that u noticed my absence.
About this Babe in total control story, the real title is b1tch right? That doesn't matter self, all I know is its really interesting and you have started with your suspence again oh, come and continue jhur, tell us what happened next to Richard na,I wud have said "waiting for 6PM" but I know you wud post it on ur blog before den so I'll start refreshing your blog front page from now till when I see a new update.
Uve got a DM, btw.

Pweedylipsmoi: Hmmm, wat happend 2 MsChistar? Btw, where is she?.....totally loving the story...still following

me? I've been here from the start. I just they look as chistar no even observe my absence. Nevertheless,I agree with you on the 'loving the story'.

Guys,chistar sent me a mail and said i should tell you guys he isnt feeling too well so won't be able to update for a while, he just said you guys should pray for a quick recovery and be patient with him,

Ah!!! Chistar has done it again. How can you stop here? We already know you are a good suspense writter, please reduce it small. Do you want to give us high blood pressure?