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"THE PERFECT ROSE"

he he he
saintsam, you want to kill us.
I'm left speechless.
Its absolutely incredible.
Your winning another prize again for that poem COS your the best today.

love it, love it, love it.
Keep on the good work.

Please what does this word mean: faerie
and also whats an "Elfen Shew(s) "

franc1982:
@somegurl
this is your poem, I just hope u like it.

[center]' Anguish'

I lost my heart to heartbreaks,
Early in life when i could wail,
Enough to flow into lakes,
Through lonliness of self,
But with the creative touch of the gods.
I paint with words,
What I've so onged but can't experince,
My definition of how it should be,
Life, love and you,
The trinity that's next to God.
It's moment into sunset,
A time to paint,
A point where words rain,
When my soul sails forth,
Through thoughts into poetry,
My forte.

If I wasn't me,
We would,ve walked when the night is cool,
When hearts melt into the warmth of embrace,
A point where love isn't just the feeling,
But our breath and actions.
Like a toddler,
I would bath you,
Put you to bed,
Sing you to sleep,
While wrapt in my arms.
I really would've given you a rose as you wake,
The symbol of a beautiful undying feeling,
But see what people have made me,
Just a man who's deep in solitude,
A painter of thoughts,
An admirer of yours.[/center]

this is F-A-N-T-A-S-T-IC.
I'm not going to comment more than that. _{waiting to see somegirls response}  

Also, your "tribute to a mother" is touching. sorry about the loss .


Mukibaby,
dry your tears _{*gives a hug*}

saintsam,

i love your "My love" poem. who says your not a good love poet? this poem is goooood



angelstone,

welcome to the club. nice one. its purely pleasureful _{i stole that from your poem}

Sista:
@Nilla

You weren't in that Igbo sacraficial lamb topic?

I was. it was fun wasn't it

magneto:
@nilla - thanks babe!

@saintsam - they say great minds think alike, huh.

@simmy - dope ish mayne, big up!

your welcome.

saintsam:
Nnilla,I think u are the best babe in this thread,good job babe.

Nnilla,what tribe is that, efik or akwa ibom?

Magneto,Ya are rite.

macalurs, I will miss u bro.

moremia, u are welcome.

thank you . best judge you mean
tribe - its a mixture _{i assume you were talking about the language. . . right?}

ok.

byeeeeeeeeeeeeee