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Odeku:
you and this your moth na Gd go save you, how I go appriciate when person dey lie say i be moon, i be star, i be light, na which kind yeye lie be that. abeg tell me wuz up, me i no get time for romancing the stone.

all them people dey compete so tell ask them wash your car, wash your clothes and on top of that cook you dinner and make wee see wetting hamatan do. stop all that lie show me the real deal.

Odeku:
MR dannyluv she go still be your shinning star if she sleep or flirt with your best friend?

Odeku, its poetry.
Do you mind not spoiling the flow of the thread.

dennylove:
i more poem then I REST MY CASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MY STAR
When God created heaven
and he placed those stars above
I knew right then the star I'd choose
would fill my life with love.

The greatest gift bestowed to me
is the best recieved by far
Cuz that's the day I met you Babe,
and realized that you're my star.

I can't forecast what life will hold
but there is one thing I know
That if we keep it watered well
our plant of love will grow.

The greatest gift bestowed to me
is the best recieved by far
Cuz that's the day I met you Babe,
and realized that you're my star.

You will always be the brightest star
in the heavens of my heart
and I won't despair when dark clouds near
for my star shines through the dark.

you are the greatest and happiest thing
that have ever happened to me.MY STAR. frm ''DENNYLUV''

You have the same paragraph twice. is that what you intended?

Odeku:
make una dey waste time romancing the store there, i dey do my own for yonder. there is more to getting a lady than all that lie.

spoilsport like you.
If you dont want to appreciate or understand them byeeeeeeeeee

mac,

@Genial: You coolashellmaketheladiesfeelgoodsonofagun.

lol

@Nilla: The best judge I ever had.

A happy judge gives good points. keep making the judge happy.

@The ladies unwooed: Bring your friends and family, we got enough guys in here to make y'all feel good. Y'all are just too beautiful, we're still searchin' for the rightest words.

lol. rightest words indeed  .

saintsam:
I think I should have stumbled over this thread long ago.I so much love u guys. keep the poetic world alive.

everyone here is feeling that too.
I absolutely love your "I am an African" poem. _{love anything that has to praise, or give hope to Nigeria & Africans}



Genial,

@ Nilla. . .

Well, bless your noble heart.

Shall we open the dance floor?

i don't feel like being beheaded on orders of the queen today 
but if your refering to the competition. yes.

your "My Father" poem is nice. As usual i know i'd have known it was your poem without seeing your name.

dennylove,

"you are the one i want"
thats nice, looks like you like long poems.
Whats my name doing at the top though? I did not understand that.



franc,

"Missing you"
Who you dey miss self?? I'm kidding nice one.

@ Nilla
I see you're the type that serve the best wine last.
That was a very nice poetic tribute.
How about an anthology of our poems on this joint?

' The very best of Nairaland '

thanks for liking my tribute .
I agree with you, we should combine all our poems.



Mukina darling,
your "a poem to steal your heart" is to die for. Simple but sweet.
So who's heart are you stealing

wow!my king noo
and wats with the dance floor
i'll shoot the two of youwhere's esly?

meanwhile i already gave you my word, i ain't after the king. so pls dont shoot

mhmmm this keeps getting better.
nice one Denny. Lets see what the others have to offer.

People keep it rolling in