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You almost had me emotional reading the pastor comment.
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judging others as if we are a saint ourself
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we are all guilty one way or the other and yet we want God to keep forgiven us over and over again when we keep on sinning.
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ride on boss.

Good job Mr Soul, but it's very glaring that you alter the original ending for reason best know to you. Well done, at least you give it a suspense lace ending.
My observation:
you should have say a word or two about the white guy.
Well done!

Your story is WOW!
But pls next time you want to write an inspirational story like this, pls write it with an african home. nothing inspire a black guy or lady than knowing some1 out there (without white privilege) overcome challenges.
RIDE ON BOSS

Mr Soul, I dey vex o, I dey vex no be small. You told me the devil would be stone not burn ke, so all the stones we laboured to transported from Mecca come end up in waste? The devil papa must be stone o, Pa kenneth must be stone.

[quote author=Criis post=61813652]Oluchi probably went to get help... My guess is : She'll meet Benedict

It would be sweeter if she met the white guy, the guy don't suffered so he deserve to play a significant role.

You are so good guy, you are so brilliantly good.
My observation though: Dont you think it's about time we hear about the white man also; where is he while all this is going, what part would he take in getting rid of the devil and saving some soul...

[color=#006600][quote author=donblazer10 post=61741520]so you cn jerk off all you want..
Sorry o bros, no vex, na God I take beg you. Please don't be annoy.

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okeyben10:
are yu sure abt him having only one story to h name

I think Delayed diagnosis is his first on nairaland & then this. He deserved real praises. It's not easy to please nairalanders

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donblazer10:
if it's nt an update it's nt making sense

Bros show some wisdom. Don't just think of what U want, think of what the writer want and appreciate who gives him that. Ride on Mr Soul

[/quote][color=#006600][quote author=donblazer10 post=61739963][/quote]Bros pls show wisdom. Mr Soul need what the man wrote up there more than anything. You'll understand if you are a writer or motivational speaker. That is the fuel Mr Soul need.

Now I got it, Pa Kenneth strick deal with Dibia to protect his son, the devil called pastor which the villagers did not know related to him. Rev is coming to open the can and everything will come into open.
Ride on Mr Soul.

God is your strength.

Congratulation Oga Soul, Pastor Osi is alive so no more stick for the back of your head. But remember, the more you are delaying bringing the devil to the marketsquare for stoning the more you are annoying more people. Oya continue, we are with you.

I need to make arrangements for Osi's burial....

Ogbeni remember say you be nigeria and na nigeria story you dey write o. If you no wan receive stick for the back of your head you better no kill Osi o.

Oga Soul, don't let Osi to die if you don't want what happened in 1917 to happen in 2017 o.

As for the devil, he too must not die yet o, all this stones were not transported from Mecca for nothing o. the devil must be stone in the marketsquire.

Mr Soul, have you read THROUGH VIOLET EYES by STEPHEN WOODWORTH? Your work remind me of the book. But please and pleaseeee, don't kill Osi as he killed Dan.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
May the Good Lord bless your new age and grant you all your heart desires.

Good job mr soul. From the beginning I have marked Pastor Bat down as the devil and you didn't disappoint me. Sometime one need to think like the writer to guess where the writer is directing the plot to. Now let the stones get ready.....

Part of d stones satan received in Mecca this year is on d way to deal with this devil.
Right from d beginning I had been suspecting Pastor Bat and ever since Sofiri charater had been introduced, I knew devil or his accomplish had been introduced.

Oga Souloho19, u really deserve to be arrest & prosecute since u know d devil who had been committing all this evil crimes & u refused to name him so that he can receive part of the 49.4 million stones satan received in Mecca this year. Ride on.

[color=#006600][quote author=OluwabuqqyYOLO post=60115236]If, eventually, Steve happens to be the killer, the story won't be extraordinary

you are right.
Pastor Bat or his brother appeared more suitable to be the devil.

Mr Soul had finally introduced the devil('s accomplisher). Steve can't be the devil- that would make people hate stranger. Paul can't be it, that would bring a lot of I know it, I said it. So all finger point to Pastor Bat and his brother.

[quote author=souloho19 post=59732845]don't worry it would soon be unraveled.[color=#006600]
It's Pastor Bat, Osi must have seen his hand writing before.
Great work bro, you are super good. But do you know that 2much suspense is bad for human health?

Mobecs:
where is Pastor Bartholomew in all this?

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He is the devil.
P for pastor
O for his other name.

Whoever said true love exist in this couple home do not know the true meaning of love.
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Why is it that James always sought for forgiveness whenever he is Hot? (That is lust not love)
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Why would Jane, a wife and mother went into swimming pool with another man and changed her dress in his BEDROOM, (with all those dirty touching) and still claimed she trully love her husband? (Love ko, lust ni)
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In reality, how many maid would saw her madam in the condition Aisha saw her madam in another man's house and kept mute? (99% maids in 9ja, no matter how good and kind the madam maybe would turn to Radio Lagos with free broadcasting of how Oga madam was saw pant down with another. What kind of reputation was that wife and mother building for herself?)
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LOVE is different from LUST. Know the difference before going into relationship.
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Kudos OP, ride on, we are taking the journey with you.