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|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Hawlahscho(m): 10:54am On Jan 07, 2018|
A long complicated story like this will always be questionable in d end, since it's just a fiction.
If you ask d writer, he can ALWAYS fix the holes as he wants, but it is not necessary I suppose.
It's not easy to merge pieces of cloths together to make clothes.
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Hawlahscho(m): 10:55am On Jan 07, 2018|
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by light4life(f): 11:41am On Jan 07, 2018|
OmG!!!!!!! Soul! I just kept dying and resurrecting while reading this end!
But its not fair naw, I begged you to add a little 'liplocking' for the lovers but you no gree!
Souloho19 why are you anti-romance na?...haba!
Reading the story was an amazing experience tho, thank you for the ride Mr Souloho19.
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Hawlahscho(m): 12:08pm On Jan 07, 2018|
Finally I'm done.
To be simple, you've done a nice job. Keep it up.
Link to the Delayed Diagnosis pls
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by kingphilip(m): 2:45pm On Jan 07, 2018|
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|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by kunmisola(f): 6:16pm On Jan 07, 2018|
Wow, this is actually a job well done. A big thumb up to you @ soulhoho.
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by majoie: 2:37am On Jan 08, 2018|
thank you for this story.someone should please suggest other stories.
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Ebydarling: 10:57am On Jan 08, 2018|
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Austinsamekpo(m): 1:30pm On Jan 08, 2018|
.. Great story..nice.. So when is ya next story coming up?? souloho19
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Oluwakemi65(f): 4:11pm On Jan 08, 2018|
Hei! just when we tot d story has ended. Souloho19 Weldone. U deserve a hug.
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Pratiba(f): 9:41pm On Jan 08, 2018|
Wow! Really interesting and suspence filled story. I enjoyed every bit of it. More grease to your elbow SOULOHO, motivation and abundant inspirations. Kudos!!!
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by WHOcarex: 10:50pm On Jan 08, 2018|
You are the best souloho19 and I mean that. Pls, let me know when the devil starts wearing Prada
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|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by phemocheee(m): 10:51pm On Jan 08, 2018|
God bless you souloho19. I thought Paul would confess to Police and offer himself up for trial, it never crossed my mind we would later grow to build on his Father's legacy.
This story is the bomb, you delivered well bro
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by marvin902(m): 12:20pm On Jan 09, 2018|
is there a sequel
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Oroolorun(m): 10:45pm On Jan 09, 2018|
Good job Mr Soul, but it's very glaring that you alter the original ending for reason best know to you. Well done, at least you give it a suspense lace ending.
you should have say a word or two about the white guy.
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by emmyN(m): 3:43pm On Jan 10, 2018|
Doff my hat souloho19. Mention me in your next story
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Biggysmolz: 6:32pm On Jan 10, 2018|
Great piece bro....duff my hat for u......awesome read
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Magicmeemee(f): 9:14am On Jan 11, 2018|
wow! wow!! wow!!! this is just awesome,I enjoyed every bit of this story, thank you so much for this wonderful piece.
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by rachealfst(f): 5:00pm On Jan 11, 2018|
God bless you for this wonderful, great, mind blowing, suspense filled story. This was one of my best 2017 stories on NL.
Souloho19, I only pray one prayer for you, that this gift of yours will open great doors of opportunities to you. The Lord will connect you to destiny helpers. You shall sit among Kings and not mean men in Jesus name.
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by jacoik(m): 1:08pm On Jan 12, 2018|
marvwhite:I swear, with all your theories I enjoy you the more. Love you bro lolllll
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by stephmiracle: 9:23am On Jan 13, 2018|
Wowwwww. So I finally finished this story. You are too much and you are such a good writer @souloho19 but are you trying to say that Paul is the son of Pa Kenneth and will be a revised version of his father?. Hmmmmmm . Odikwa very risky
@FloraEC, thanks for the referral sis. You won't believe I've not had time to even visit our thread since I commenced reading this story
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by jacoik(m): 10:55am On Jan 13, 2018|
marvwhite:honestly, after soul you d next person I enjoyed more on this story because your analysis is sooooo sweet as well
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by odyx: 10:54pm On Jan 15, 2018|
Let me be the last to say Weldon for creative writing. I encourage you to write movie this year
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by dview001(m): 1:38pm On Jan 18, 2018|
brilliant piece as always ...tho I got frustrated in between and almost abandoned d story due to delayed updates but I got over it ..thank *GOD*
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Lorlahlizzy(f): 8:12pm On Jan 19, 2018|
thanks for this master piece soul.pls mention me in your next story.
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by BlackEl(m): 10:19pm On Jan 19, 2018|
I literally had to join nairaland so I can comment on this amazing work of art..
although some points in the story seemed abstract,
like the fact that Pa Kenneth's Family was hidden from the villagers under their noses...
in all, the twists made it an amazing ride...
I've been reading on nairaland since 2015 . this one made me comment .
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by vickyluvspices(f): 11:26pm On Jan 20, 2018|
this piece got me glued to my phone for the past 3days and i wasnt disappionted...i so much respect this writer...u deserve a standing ovaition and i can envision u going 2 higher places and i pray u get there...more ideas @soluho19
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by trendymiss(f): 6:07pm On Jan 22, 2018|
Big ups to you...
Had a really nice time reading this..more grease to you.
Kindly mention me when the sequel starts..
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Johnsown1(m): 4:46pm On Jan 23, 2018|
That's a very good story though but I doubt the people drinking palm wine in the market. That part didn't connect at all. I know my tribe A MAN THAT HIS HOUSE IS ON FIRE; DOSE NOT CHASE RAT
Kudos to u bro. More ink to ur paper
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Queensiju: 9:18pm On Jan 24, 2018|
Nice work bro, this is what I call THRILLER! Looking forward to your next story.
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by nuelzy: 7:45am On Jan 25, 2018|
Soul.. Am in on the next one..
|Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(m): 1:29pm On Jan 27, 2018|
Thank y'all for your comments and criticism. Its been a cool experience so far, but take a second to reflect on the just concluded story.
The devil wears okrika. The devil was a wolf, a wolf in sheep clothing. If we take it literally from the title alone, the devil was able to mix with the masses and successfully gain their trust because he was one of them. He was in a respectable position, he was a man of high moral standard and dignity. But it was all a disguise.
Look at our society, we have so many devils(wolf) in our midst putting on okrika (sheep clothing) but most times we are unaware just like the people of Amaife. We don't pay much attention and let our guard down that's why you hear painful stories of child abuse, murder, ritual killings, kidnapping etc.
The root problem or should I say one of the root problems is the mistake of 'assumption'. You assume okay, he/she is my sibling they can't abuse my child, he/she is my best friend they can't hurt me, he/she is my pastor they can't do this......
Bartholomew was a pastor. His father was 'the' elder, the father of the village and ironically he was 'the father of the village'
What is the takeaway from all these big grammar and the 70+ pages so far?
Trust no man, Follow no man but Trust in the Lord your God and follow Christ.
Being a Christian means what it means. Christ like, not your pastor like, not your celebrity like, not like anybody. Its a daily journey and with time you'd be able to discern the devils in our midst. Don't assume someone is as pure hearted as you and don't trust blindly.
Stay blessed FAM.
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