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The two have their moments, as for the GUS the passion is enveloped in the adrenaline that illuminates the game, the brain tasking and psychological imbalance that the ambience provides, sandwhiched with the physically draining runs, this boils down toi the individual and at times luck to win the game. NB......no matter how the viewers love you, once you cant brace the challenges your out, so pressure to impress isnt that much. As for the BBA, Here are different individuals put in a room to entertain the VIEWERS, like Denzel said in his diary session today, he confessed that it was really a paradox that you had to smile everyday with the same people who will eventually put you up for eviction, so how do you live with people you dnt trust, itz crazy that u also have to impress nt just a country but a CONTINENT so that you get saved, itz really not an easy task people.....so u choose....BBA YOU HAVE TO THRILL PEOPLE TO LIKE AND VOTE FOR YOU, MEHN THATZ WORK |
Not until the last one i prefferd the ultimate search, bba is good too. |
Just finished a whooping 86 grueling pages, mehn mazi ur dope, wish i cud read my SAGAY with so much verstehen, my unmentionable was delighted @times, u write well, ur fanz are amazing, dint know how much i missed after u wrecked my 2nd home cali.....,,in ur sex addict ish,,,,,,just wanna say thanks man, dunno if theres any story on nl that av wanted to read up so bad lyk dis and repoz gurl 'one who awaits', you ignitd passion,,,,more power man......enjoyed you guys bickering tho,,it was worth the stress..... |
Just finished a whooping 86 grueling pages, mehn mazi ur dope, my unmentionable was delighted @times, u write well, ur fanz are amazing, dint know how much i missed after u wrecked my 2nd home cali.....,,in ur sex addict ish,,,,,,just wanna say thanks man, dunno if theres any story on nl that av wanted to read up so bad lyk dis and repoz gurl 'one who awaits', you ignitd passion,,,,more power man......enjoyed you guys bickering tho,,it was worth the stress..... |
I watched him live spill that gibberish, he can no longer deny that he first spoilt our democracy, when he made the statement, his commandos were laughing sheepishly, dnt blame the old man, abeokuta is becoming hotter and hotter eryday, his looking for where he wiilll spend his political exile come2015 guess jigawa will be safe or i hope so.., |
Please am having probs wiv my main nl mail...so please send it to topazgr8@ymail.com |
Will u update already ma'am... |
Ah ah princesa is it our fault?? Wetin man wan do! Thanks repo...... U too much |
Please i hope i made the cut, besides my format wil b for phne o! |
@repo...please except u want an ambush,,dnt make me plan one, have been posting @ova the world for the continuation of no one waitz, please how do i get that thanks..... |
The gurl collect digitz jus lyk that, means ur an on point hunky dude.... Am on board...this ship... |
Mazi u b king o! 86 pages how i wan start,,,baba i bow 4 ur powerewssss |
Op that romance part shud be elaborated na... |
kofsy: [color=#9900ff]being that just where headache would have been used, u go all patrick obiahagbon on em'..lol am gr8ful to be here lyk seriously... Howz ur reading pal...jus hope itz just books that is discussed...u knw,,,,jus checking.. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
kofsy: [color=#9900ff]being that just where headache would have been used, u go all patrick obiahagbon on em'..lol |
Chapter 3 happiness..... Please i had my eyes locked... |
First i love ur name Beclina.....now on to the matter @hand, some issues punctured my reading flow...here there are, i noticed the struggle for supremacy between ur tenses.. My observations.... Even though nothing can 'could' change the fact... Maybe it 'wasnt' for maybe it isnt.. His parents 'were' the exact definition of 'poverty'....for his parent are the exact definition of poor she could repay them 'was' for is.... His toubles were just beginning she 'would' have to drop she 'heard' for had a knock at the door..... I think u meant 'a week ago' My humble observations...... |
Mynd_44: Everyone makes mistakes ma'am it is okay just try to be bettermyndd...abeg use ur oga @ de top powers allow her modify her work there are few places that needs will work....merci.. |
You killed me wiv this line..........she knew she was in hell even though there was no fire around her..... Word gurl |
There was a story that i was reading and it just stopped, heard a certain princesa put my pulse on hold, can she make my blood flow...please!!! |
princesa: bet on what too?mynd just beat me to it, Princesa, putting ur work up here u prayed to be critiqed in ur first pages, yea he may have come out harsh and all that, but that dnt mean ur not gud... It means u can do better, try to see it in that light. |
Br3nd4: Who wants a bet?on wetin? If na daisy, my BIG J, go handle am, break influence make i hear. |
Finally something away just a lil bit from our romance matters, tho i smell romance big time...hadiza and lance...nice..... Guy make sure the hook up o!! Good work brov, tho am also an habitual offender, this will help discipline u, by writin in full...makes it look formal... All the same am on board.. |
double zero: As I intentionally mentioned above, Africa is acould not have said better, this part annoys me... |
Been tryin to post since,, mehn it was really interesting! See ghana dey struggle title wiv us all in the name of BET, ANA SO DEM INSULT 2BABA AND DBANJ giv them title make them share dbanj do like say na grammy....de shout ,,,,chai finally BET...av@gotten u, mtchewwwww abegi, hope the letter gets to them.. Once again bigups |
really entertaining! |
HumbledbYGrace: hahaha...I will ask Malaika to help a brother out.wiilll love her u knw....can u pass her on? |
HumbledbYGrace: Kama nilivyosema, mimi si kufanya hivyo nzuri lakini m kupata bora kila dakika.okay....ermmm!! I think i just 4got my swahili.....k to help? |
HumbledbYGrace: you know what? Great minds think alike.make i hear.....lol |
HumbledbYGrace: did you take a trip to the moon? Missed you so much....thanks and I will be ok, one day @ a time.sisi, mimi ni faini shukurani, na habari gani? |
HumbledbYGrace: so your saying Malaika and Ati have something in common? Oh boy! My work has mary-sue in it.....anywayooohhhhh!!!!!!! R u serrrrious!? She misssed me,,, missed u too jare.. As for the tori nilikuwa tu kuangalia and u knw thats wat it got me thinking.... HG' u just spurred me to put down sumfin, love the tori jare, as for this yarn, i fink am teamless this gurl malaika just vex me pass level...as for femi this one wey u and princesa b BFF'S hope u guys are nt sharing his character wiv BIG J OF princesa novel, where he seems hard and vexin....... |
Now back to the tori, i have come to terms with the characters and it reminds me of your last work, your gurl character seem inwardsly weak and have this i dunno if it is their way or your perspective on love cos i guess at times a writerz work reflects the main person views on something, ......coming |
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i don't even have your time 
