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Re: Temptation by royalguy123(m): 12:41pm On Oct 19, 2022 |
Wow,I can't but smile while I was reading this episode ,you're good But fola's actions can chioma forgive her may God help us so that we are not boxed in a very tight situations !;;; |
Re: Temptation by Chibuking1402(m): 2:01pm On Oct 19, 2022 |
Shocking!!! Absolute shocking episode My heart in my hand!! Weldon ma'am |
Re: Temptation by Ann2012(f): 3:33am On Oct 20, 2022 |
Na real wa oooo Thanks for the update ma’am |
Re: Temptation by Tblaqblog(m): 1:32pm On Oct 22, 2022 |
Hello Rose, Can you contact me on WhatsApp 08090642385 let’s work? 1 Like |
Re: Temptation by favch(f): 11:35pm On Oct 23, 2022 |
I suspected George from the start so I'm not surprised, it's fola's involvement that's shocking me I just hope fola doesn't tell George where Chioma is 1 Like |
Re: Temptation by Rosemary33: 7:08am On Oct 26, 2022 |
James. 14 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Temptation by Treasurewamiri(f): 8:06am On Oct 26, 2022 |
Ghen ghen............ Nice story Rosemary, we want more |
Re: Temptation by Royalty189(f): 8:11am On Oct 26, 2022 |
George is a full blown maniac, while Fola is an upcoming serial killer. So the only innocent persons here are James and Chioma. 1 Like |
Re: Temptation by iamdynamite(m): 4:45pm On Oct 26, 2022 |
I love this story, that george is a devil, even lucifer will be scared of him |
Re: Temptation by Nuhskhut: 5:03pm On Oct 26, 2022 |
This George is making me spat in disgust. |
Re: Temptation by bimberry1307(f): 7:46pm On Oct 27, 2022 |
George killed his mom!? Arrrrggggghhh! This story is getting more complicated. |
Re: Temptation by osuolale95(m): 8:20pm On Oct 27, 2022 |
Wtf |
Re: Temptation by Debbieadewumi09(f): 10:38pm On Oct 27, 2022 |
George is one sick mf psycho... Cos wtf with all his past, his mom?, the dad too? |
Re: Temptation by aprilwise(m): 5:33pm On Oct 28, 2022 |
I pray James will save her |
Re: Temptation by Rosemary33: 10:58pm On Nov 01, 2022 |
9 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Temptation by Samamerc(f): 11:20pm On Nov 01, 2022 |
George na devil's incarnate. Thanks for the update madam Rosemary 1 Like |
Re: Temptation by prisomic(f): 11:21pm On Nov 01, 2022 |
Chineke meeeeeeee,wat a story!!! Nne welldone 1 Like |
Re: Temptation by gal10(f): 11:28pm On Nov 01, 2022 |
Wow nice 1 Like |
Re: Temptation by bimberry1307(f): 5:04am On Nov 02, 2022 |
Splendid!!! Thank God! Finally!. Thanks Rosemary33 1 Like |
Re: Temptation by Ann2012(f): 5:14am On Nov 02, 2022 |
Thank God, at last….. The criminals have been arrested. Thanks for the update ma’am 1 Like |
Re: Temptation by osuolale95(m): 7:05am On Nov 02, 2022 |
This story sweet me. Wait is this the end of the literature? 1 Like |
Re: Temptation by queenemelda: 7:18am On Nov 02, 2022 |
George, Fola and even James are all psychos. 2 Likes |
Re: Temptation by Rosemary33: 8:58am On Nov 02, 2022 |
osuolale95:Sure say we no go end am here? If I run, una go catch me? 1 Like |
Re: Temptation by osuolale95(m): 9:07am On Nov 02, 2022 |
Rosemary33:remember i be dss inside this story, we will definitely catch you |
Re: Temptation by royalguy123(m): 11:47am On Nov 04, 2022 |
Rosee you're a talented and gifted writer more grease to your elbow , But truth be told you twisted every part and every one of your audience with suspence and thriller from beginning to the end Kudos I Duff my hat for you But the title of the story line wouldn't have been temptation it would have been something different But all the same whom am I to question your skills and gifted hand and your gifts Once more thanks for this master piece !!! |
Re: Temptation by Rosemary33: 6:26pm On Nov 04, 2022 |
royalguy123:The title is already changed o , I changed the title as I saw the angle the story is going. So When I'm done rewriting, editing, and getting it ready for publishing, it will come out with a new title definitely. Thank you so much for your observation. |
Re: Temptation by Rosemary33: 6:35pm On Nov 04, 2022 |
While we are here, please let us know that this is a raw draft. As usual, every chapter of this story was written the day it was posted. And you know how first drafts are– always raw and full of holes. So if and when I will decide to professionally publish this work, it will come out rewritten, polished, and oiled. Please, if you are posting this story on another platform or website (I don't want this to happen, but I know humans will be humans) Please give me the credit as this is my brainchild. It takes a lot to write an original story. And bearing in mind that I will publish this work someday, don't take my glory. For movie directors and producers, please don't see this work as your movie script and take the glory. I have seen one of my works "His neighbor's wife," on ROK TV (In fact it was my sister who even called my attention to it.) and That story is about to be officially published this December as "Akwaugo" I knew I haven't shared the emitted script with anyone but the raw is on Nairaland. Please don't deprive an author of the opportunity to make money with his or her work. If you love a story, contact the author and strike a deal. 9 Likes |
Re: Temptation by Rosemary33: 6:43pm On Nov 04, 2022 |
Let me not forget to thank you my co-writers you all are my co-writers because as you read and make comments, you indirectly give me ideas. As such, you are navigating this story. So, thank you. And you. And you... 4 Likes |
Re: Temptation by Nuhskhut: 8:27pm On Nov 04, 2022 |
This tori no be only temptation.Let's just call it the devil's mate.Or do you think it's too deep. |
Re: Temptation by Rosemary33: 9:48pm On Nov 04, 2022 |
Nuhskhut:"The Devils mate," hmm. Nice. I will write it down and make a comparison. I already have "Hidden." I don't mind more suggestions too. 1 Like |
Re: Temptation by Blesstar(f): 10:29pm On Nov 04, 2022 |
Rosemary33:TWISTED |
Re: Temptation by Blesstar(f): 10:32pm On Nov 04, 2022 |
Nuhskhut:"The devil's mate" makes the storyline too obvious |
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