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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 3:11pm On Jan 05, 2015
Yipee !!!!!!!!! Dancing shoki ...........Deoye got d right sentence
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 3:15pm On Jan 05, 2015
Deoye.. Rest In Hell... DON.. Bye Bye...

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by loabb2(m): 3:19pm On Jan 05, 2015
D9ty7:
Hey guys, I decided to add the court session for reasons best known to me. There might not me any more court sessions as we progress, only mentions of what happened in the court and the fianl judgement, that's all.
We are a few steps away from the end of the story. Together we'll get there.
I'll finish this story by God's grace before the end of this week provided we go with the pace we currently are going in.
Thanks for reading.

Are we getting more updates today ? Please I dey gbadun you Jare my guy. Are u on whatsapp ??
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by jorghor(m): 3:22pm On Jan 05, 2015
Hope we r getting more updates 2day o...
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 3:23pm On Jan 05, 2015
loabb2:


Are we getting more updates today ? Please I dey gbadun you Jare my guy. Are u on whatsapp ??
Definitely bro. More updates will drop even before 6pm. Now that aside, I am on whatsapp.
For security purpose, send your number to my mail; durodolad9ty7@gmail.com. Or add the number on my signature.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 3:23pm On Jan 05, 2015
More updates to drop.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by loabb2(m): 3:35pm On Jan 05, 2015
Thank bro.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 4:32pm On Jan 05, 2015
Deoye and Don...o di gbere o di gbaaaa
rest in pieces

my belle dey sweet me...

D9ty7..i dey feel uuuuuuu
waiting for more updates
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by mariamferanmi(f): 5:04pm On Jan 05, 2015
Wow!!! Mr d9ty7 I doff my cap sorry gele abeg all join o jare 4 u, u are truly a writer!!!!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:26pm On Jan 05, 2015
--continuation--
After the news of Deoye's death sentence reached Clement and other policemen who were concerned with the case, as well as other eminent personalities in the state.
The lawyers who stood against Deoye were appreciated by the Speaker house of assembly Lagos state who when speaking with the reporters in the assembly premises after the court verdict claimed he had already written a petition to the Senate should the court verdict favour Deoye, then the judge deserved to be sanctioned on grounds of compromise.
Clement drove into the Federal school of Aviation in Lagos state just beside the Murtala international airport Ikeja. He headed straight for the Director General's office.
Clement who all through the night was busy with his colleague Amaka, a computer analyst who hacked into chief Obi Patrick's computer and got all of his assets and their locations, most importantly, his houses within Lagos state.
He acted based on the firsthand knowledge he had about his father when many years ago when they were still young, he drove them including Victoria to one of his houses, which was loacted in a village on the outskirt of Lagos majorly dominated by fulani herdsmen, they did a tour around the house which was small compared to the house which they live in. The kids asked their father questions about the owner of the house and during the course of the questioning, he told them this is his hiding place which he uses once in a while, maybe in two years or more. Clement was able to hold on to the fact and the moment Chief Obi Patrick went missing, he knew he surely had to be there which was what prompted him to invite Amaka after the close of work for some map searches. He believed Amaka who said it won't take her up to an hour before she finishes, so Clement thought that by 9pm she should be done, then he'll drive her to her apartment. But to their suprise, it was already 10:30pm before they realised how far they had gone into the night with no significant success recorded.
As a computer analyst, Amaka tried everything she could before she suggested the idea of hacking into Chief Obi's computer. And since every computer that belonged to either Chief Obi or his sons have something in common, this they knew themselves. Amaka was able to do some sort of magic before Clement's eyes and a page opened displaying every content of his father's computer. He saw the icon, 'assets' and clicked on it, he saw the house around the number ten spot and after much check, he was sure that it was really the house he had in mind.
"Are you set to go?" The director General asked.
"I think I am. Or is there something I ought to have brought along?" Clement asked.
"Well, there is nothing. Everything would be provided inside the chopper." The director general replied.
"Okay, lets go then." Clement said.
"Drop everything on you including your phones and even pens and pencils, keys inclusive."
clement obliged and dropped everything that was on him that moment. The reason for which he didn't know, but he had a feeling it is for the good that comes with it.
And so the Director General of the school of aviation took Clement to the field where he entered an helicopter and off it took off with its usual loud noise.
Ten minutes later, with his binoculars, Clement could see his father's hidden house from a million miles above the ground.
"Can we go down a little?" He asked.
"Its unsafe, going down and revealing ourselves to them would create a kind of awareness and they could decide to blow us off." The pilot, a white man replied.
"Its unsafe for them to blow us off considering the fact that were a directly above them. Meaning we'll both be affected in anyways." Clement argued.
"You have a point, but I still stand on not going low to the last. I'll take a hundred miles down, then begin to circle the building. I believe that's all you need for now. Just know the security level of the house, then on your own you can think of how to take them out." The man said as he took the aircraft downwards.

--to be continued--
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by afamjb: 5:29pm On Jan 05, 2015
... cheesy... cheesy... cheesy... cheesy... cheesy...
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by donPhill(m): 5:34pm On Jan 05, 2015
mehn see as d tory de sweet me for belle...
Obi patrick's time is near oo...
#team kelvin even he is caught
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 5:42pm On Jan 05, 2015
Ride on!!!

i'm still here
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:13pm On Jan 05, 2015
I have seen comments of some people around here talking about PREDICTABILITY of the story. If I may ask, when a story is predictable, what does it mean? Does it mean the readers can predict the next line of action, the next chapter or the end part?
I saw a comment like Clement shouldn't be successful in his fight against his father, khal corp and his brother. Do you think this story was written to promote terrorism or the things that comes with it? I don't want to call this story a SATIRE, but somehow somehow it is criticising those things that affects our society.
And have you ever thought that if you bought a book and was reading it, can you tell the writer not to do something or influence the next chapter? No.
As a matter of fact, this story is not written or posted to satisfy anybody or do anybody's bidding, I wrote this and posted it because I want to see where I stand, and so far the comments are encouraging.
Going back to the predicted end of the story, you could have predicted that in the end Clement would die, if he does, it is part of the story and I am not a writer who changes his story line because the readers are guessing right what the next line of action would be.
So far, I have not seen anybody who predicted right which shows how unpredictable the story has been. And I think if you are able to get the right prediction for the end of story, it simply shows that everyday for the thief and one day for the owner. I have been springing suprises and if at the end you got the prediction, then know that predictions are not forthcoming anymore.
Please please and please, don't tell me what to do. Its my story. The only person that can tell me what to do is my editor or publisher and as far as this story is concerned, it is not meant for publishing. Lets just read and comment.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by loabb2(m): 6:20pm On Jan 05, 2015
D9ty7:
I have seen comments of some people around here talking about PREDICTABILITY of the story. If I may ask, when a story is predictable, what does it mean? Does it mean the readers can predict the next line of action, the next chapter or the end part?
I saw a comment like Clement shouldn't be successful in his fight against his father, khal corp and his brother. Do you think this story was written to promote terrorism or the things that comes with it? I don't want to call this story a SATIRE, but somehow somehow it is criticising those things that affects our society.
And have you ever thought that if you bought a book and was reading it, can you tell the writer not to do something or influence the next chapter? No.
As a matter of fact, this story is not written or posted to satisfy anybody or do anybody's bidding, I wrote this and posted it because I want to see where I stand, and so far the comments are encouraging.
Going back to the predicted end of the story, you could have predicted that in the end Clement would die, if he does, it is part of the story and I am not a writer who changes his story line because the readers are guessing right what the next line of action would be.
So far, I have not seen anybody who predicted right which shows how unpredictable the story has been. And I think if you are able to get the right prediction for the end of story, it simply shows that everyday for the thief and one day for the owner. I have been springing suprises and if at the end you got the prediction, then know that predictions are not forthcoming anymore.
Please please and please, don't tell me what to do. Its my story. The only person that can tell me what to do is my editor or publisher and as far as this story is concerned, it is not meant for publishing. Lets just read and comment.

Ride on bro


Ride on bro... We dey your back.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by labaski(f): 6:51pm On Jan 05, 2015
and d truth is no story is predictable/unpredictable cos we all v different views on issues and about 2 or 3 pple will definitely reason along wt d writer even if it is not been shared..

and btw, its been a yl i commented here d9ty7..shey u miss me abi u don forget labaski ni?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 7:00pm On Jan 05, 2015
D9ty7 don't mind those who says the story is predictable..... Clement thave to gain something @ the end of the Day....

Clement and. Amaka.... Hmmmmm I smell love!!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Tobilastik(m): 7:53pm On Jan 05, 2015
D9ty7 ....abeq publish dz story oooo.....I ll like to have d book

more power to ur elbow bro
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by seunviju(f): 8:59pm On Jan 05, 2015
Wow,am really loving this story the more.Welldone dee
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:00pm On Jan 05, 2015
I'll see if I can update tonight, but if it happens that I am unable to update then tomorrow is another day.
Big shout out to;
Labaski who thought I had forgotten her, but hell no, she is still on my mind like our able super moderator MYND.
Tobilastik who wanted me to publish this story. Lets see how things goes.
Adewealth027, Flakeey, macpetrus, loabb2, donPhill, afamjb, mariamferanmi, jorghor, Beckytee, kocvalour, Emmanuel1997, teamplayey and a host of others who had commented so far today. Your comments are well appreciated.
To be sincere, I'll miss you guys when I finish this story, but hey, its for more ideas to come.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:01pm On Jan 05, 2015
And seunviju just commented and I happened to be the first to see it. I love viju milk lyk anything.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tfabu: 9:15pm On Jan 05, 2015
D9ty7,this story is just so so interesting,I'm just short for words,may God bless u for entertaining us with such a wonderful story
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:30pm On Jan 05, 2015
D9ty7:
The only person that can tell me what to do is my editor or publisher and as far as this story is concerned, it is not meant for publishing. Lets just read and comment.
haha why the story is super enough for publishing....D9ty7 u really can publish it.....
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emanuel1997: 9:37pm On Jan 05, 2015
suspense is on
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by donPhill(m): 9:41pm On Jan 05, 2015
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by chistar01(m): 10:52pm On Jan 05, 2015
Okay, we are here now... Let's get reading.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 11:09pm On Jan 05, 2015
D9ty7:
And seunviju just commented and I happened to be the first to see it. I love viju milk lyk anything.
@dis age *smh 4 old man like u*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:09pm On Jan 05, 2015
--continuation--
A few hours after Clement returned from the School of Aviation after his investigative search with an helicopter, he had met with the police commissioner who he briefed his next line of action and they both reached a unitary conclusion, with no one disagreeing with the other. This is the kind of partner Clement has always craved for but the heirachy within the force seemed to enjoy giving him the wrong set of people. Ngozi looked promising at first, but a few months later after he refused to help his brother out of police custody, she saw him as her greatest enemy. Sylvester was the best when he first came, very supportive, submissive and above all, ready to learn from Clement. But a few days of Clement's absence gave Sylvester the chance to lead a police team to Mr Ayo Okorie's residence which resulted into Mr Ayo fleeing for the fear of being caught. This success alone added a feather to Sylvester's wing and he felt he could handle the case his own way which convinced the former police commissioner to handle the case to Sylvester who didn't spend up to a week before he broke the duties in bit between himself, Clement and some other tops officers in the field. And shortly afterwards, all powers returned to Clement. How God works, a mystery.
So far so good, Mike is the onlt officer who had worked with him until lately when he started misbehaving. Because the Mike who became a force to reckon with was all thanks to the fact that he(Clement) took him under his tetulage, but at some point, an apprentice becomes better than his teacher, but not to the extent of disobeying your teacher. If he continued thinking about his colleagues, then he certainly would spend the whole day doing that.
He cleared his throat to gain the attentions of his colleagues.
"Oh! You are back? How was your trip?" Ngozi asked as if she was just noticing him for the first time.
Clement only smiled.
"I have a plan." He said.
Sylvester readjusted his sitting position just to listen to the plan of the 'great Clement.'
"I have decided to go in against my dad, while I live you two to battle Khal corp. Not to worry, I'll be out in a day or two, then together we'll do it." Clement explained.
Sylvester loved the idea.
"So how do you want to do that? Is there a plan in place?" Sylvester asked.
Clement loved the response.
"You guys will have to return to Mr Ayo's residence, then from there I believe you could get something that'll lead you guys to the khal corp." Clement explained.
Ngozi froze in fear.
"There is nothing in Mr Ayo's residence, we can try a better approach. And I think the release of Kelvin should be our number one priority." She replied.
"Well, by getting Khal corp, we have Mike. And I think Mr Ayo's residence has a lot to offer, and by the way, Mike said you told him about a map while you were in the hospital. What's it all about? Can I have it?" Clement asked.
"Its nothing and No, you can't have it." She replied.
"Okay, so are we in?" He asked.
"Yeah." Sylvester replied.
"Good." Clement enthused and turned to face a rather quiet Ngozi who was not like this twenty five seconds ago.
"Ngo, are you in?" He asked.
Did he just call he 'Ngo'? Does that mean that all her cold, hot and silent treatment does not in any way affect him? She must have been wasting her time all these while.
THE MAP

--to be continued--

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 11:10pm On Jan 05, 2015
D9ty7:
And seunviju just commented and I happened to be the first to see it. I love viju milk lyk anything.
@dis age *smh 4 old man like u*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:13pm On Jan 05, 2015
chistar01:
Okay, we are here now... Let's get reading.
The great CHISTAR in the building. Three gbosa for the boss himself.
'gbosa!' 'gbosa!' 'gbosa!!!'
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 11:14pm On Jan 05, 2015
Oga d9ty7 i jst dy watch u in HD Asumin deoye and co won dat case ehn wetin hapen 4 1975 go hapen 4 hia
#still loyal

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by seunviju(f): 11:15pm On Jan 05, 2015
This Ngozi self,huh.Thanks for the update dee nd goodnight

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