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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 6:40am On Jun 18, 2015
tecno4life:
D9ty7 thumbs up and by the way I'm thirsty for blood, someone needs to die in this story grin
Kill somebody anybody. Although the characters seem too few for deaths to occur, probably Grace should go first followed by emmmm anybody. In fact na u be Boss.
You are also free to kill Kim then make Tina marry Mark.
I greet everybody ooh. Onemansquad bring one bottle of malt and fried snails.
Seconded
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Pukka36(f): 7:01am On Jun 18, 2015
D9ty7:

I laugh in Swahili.
Lemme ask you, who is Chris' father?
There is nothing like denial in court. The judge won't ask you to tell the story of how you survived during nd after pregnancy. The verdict will be, since you both have admitted to be responsible for the birth of this child....
Tina is answerable to Daniel as a babymama and not a wife.
Forget about not being there while Tina handled the whole situation, Chris could decide to move over to his father's house.
And on Tina nt implanting the bomb, I never said she did, but when you drove your son to work when you shouldn't have.
I can't do this anymore.
Kingphilip, onemansquad, stuff46, take it from here.
well,I dnt really know the power of the law as regards cases like this but blaming Tina for any mishap to Chris is one of the unfairest things to do.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by stuff46(m): 7:21am On Jun 18, 2015
@ Pukka36, It's one thing to be a worker and another thing to follow the code of conduct of the organisation you are working in. If NATU security were to be tight, Chris shouldnt have been granted access into the office environment. And also, as a thinking mother, Tina should have place Chris in someones custody before going to work or rather, not joupadise her chances in work. In a court of law, if anything happens to Chris, she will surely be answerable to Daniel as the brain to the giving conception of chris (No matter the circumstances). Tina is even lucky that he came back now, what if it were to be when the boy had turned to be the richest man in the country and the father poor? Or when the boy is a normal working class citizen after all wasted resources? The boy will surely want to be with his father naturally. So forget, both physically, spiritually, in a law- court, in a family judging, all said and done, they will agree that the father should have custody of the son.

As for me, I think Daniel should be the one to die. To stair up disaster in that family and lets see if Tina's concience and actions will be justified.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Pukka36(f): 7:25am On Jun 18, 2015
@stuff46,U've got a cool analysis of the whole issue! Buh dnt be surprised when Chris rejects His father when He's come of agelipsrsealed
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by tecno4life(m): 7:33am On Jun 18, 2015
Onemansquad:

skimpledawg bring 2plates of beans and monkey tail 4 dis man

All na same lol grin
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by stuff46(m): 7:37am On Jun 18, 2015
Pukka36:
@stuff46,U've got a cool analysis of the whole issue! Buh dnt be surprised when Chris rejects His father when He's come of agelipsrsealed

It doesnt show that he will do that even in the nearest future. The one problem that have got is for her refusing to narate the ordeal of how she separated with his father and not telling him who he was when he demanded to know. She rebuffed him, and that will surely haunt her in the nearest future.

Chris will never to to be with a 'lie' like her. She should just open up with the little time she's got, if not, i see him moving with his father and if care is not taken, forgetting her for good.

Children love to be answered in there demands, if you dont, you end up givng yourself a bad impression about yourself.

Shalom.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by tecno4life(m): 7:44am On Jun 18, 2015
nikky42:
nobody should pray for Chris death too at least he needs to know d circumstances surrounding his birth..



I think Clara is Mark's long lost sister....

I think so too, D9ty7 this thread is now gaining life like AIAC so give 'em what they deserve. By the way who thinks Clara sglhould die like this post grin
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Skimpledawg(m): 7:46am On Jun 18, 2015
Onemansquad:

skimpledawg bring 2plates of beans and monkey tail 4 dis man
Tel dt man say we dnt take malt n soft drinks around here...... *bringing d moneytail mixed wt alomo n a plate of beans


Doz arguing bout Chris's death n paternity shuld leave it for married men like me n stuff46. I fink Clara n Grace shuld b d 1st victims of dee smoking gun

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by yemiisaac: 8:44am On Jun 18, 2015
tecno4life:
D9ty7 thumbs up and by the way I'm thirsty for blood, someone needs to die in this story grin
Kill somebody anybody. Although the characters seem too few for deaths to occur, probably Grace should go first followed by emmmm anybody. In fact na u be Boss.
You are also free to kill Kim then make Tina marry Mark.
I greet everybody ooh. Onemansquad bring one bottle of malt and fried snails.
What..pls send me ur location I nid to use my whip dis morning....grace ke..mi no greee oooooooooooooooooooo
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 8:49am On Jun 18, 2015
shankies215:
D9ty7, i ve a wish o, since tony nd kim likes each other, tina and mark also does, abeg help me du anything authorly possible to join dem togeda.....tenchyhu!
join dem 2geda bawo *are dy bread and butter undecided*
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 8:59am On Jun 18, 2015
stuff46:
@ Pukka36, It's one thing to be a worker and another thing to follow the code of conduct of the organisation you are working in. If NATU security were to be tight, Chris shouldnt have been granted access into the office environment. And also, as a thinking mother, Tina should have place Chris in someones custody before going to work or rather, not joupadise her chances in work. In a court of law, if anything happens to Chris, she will surely be answerable to Daniel as the brain to the giving conception of chris (No matter the circumstances). Tina is even lucky that he came back now, what if it were to be when the boy had turned to be the richest man in the country and the father poor? Or when the boy is a normal working class citizen after all wasted resources? The boy will surely want to be with his father naturally. So forget, both physically, spiritually, in a law- court, in a family judging, all said and done, they will agree that the father should have custody of the son.

As for me, I think Daniel should be the one to die. To stair up disaster in that family and lets see if Tina's concience and actions will be justified.
@ last God don answer our prayer *u ar nw well grin grin

mba!! I dnt want daniel to die
or else chris wil neva 4gv tina nd out of frustration tina myt lipsrsealed u knw d rest
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 9:08am On Jun 18, 2015
for those of you dat tinks grace will go first hehehe *i dnt see her dying anytym soon oo*
mark anthony will like to use her to look for her long lost daughter which is _______!
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 9:28am On Jun 18, 2015
Pukka36:
well,I dnt really know the power of the law as regards cases like this but blaming Tina for any mishap to Chris is one of the unfairest things to do.
same ya..its a good tin Chris was even dere cos if he wasn't der all of dem would v died... tina should just take dis boy to a place far away from harm
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by malonephill(m): 9:40am On Jun 18, 2015
D9ty7:

My point still remains, Daniel is Chris father, so, Tina is answerable to Dan if anything happens to Chris.
this is just a story, if tina had married and the husband happened father and nurtured chris, tina can deny he never have any baby for him, if eventually he knew she had a baby atleast they both lost contact with short period chris raised, daniel has no evidence whether he has son or not bruv, dunno maybe I miss somthing?
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by macpetrus(m): 10:02am On Jun 18, 2015
let the drama begins......
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by shankies215(f): 10:10am On Jun 18, 2015
Onemansquad:

join dem 2geda bawo *are dy bread and butter undecided*
of course dey are
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 10:19am On Jun 18, 2015
shankies215:
of course dey are
hehehe lyk me nd u abi grin
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 10:22am On Jun 18, 2015
malonephill:
this is just a story, if tina had married and the husband happened father and nurtured chris, tina can deny he never have any baby for him, if eventually he knew she had a baby atleast they both lost contact with short period chris raised, daniel has no evidence whether he has son or not bruv, dunno maybe I miss somthing?
You have a point and no, you didn't miss anything.
But, when we take into consideration, the people who knew about the pregnancy then, what do we have? Remember, the pregnancy news rocked the whole school then. There are a lot of people against Tina if you ask me.
And a simple DNA test will settle the issue, and remember, Daniel is very influential, so with a snap of his finger, Tina is in court and the judge even if he failed to believe any of the witnesses will suggest a DNA.
I hope you understand.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 10:24am On Jun 18, 2015
Here is the morning dose
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 10:24am On Jun 18, 2015
--continuation--
Clara walked into the large hall serving as restaurant in the hotel where she was lodged.
There she was, the reason why she left the confines of her room. Chichi Martins waved from her table and Clara hurriedly walked up to her.
"Hello Chi girl." Clara greeted as she eased herself into the chair opposite Chichi's.
"This is the longest journey I ever made without been driven. I had to take public transport from Lagos down here. We are almost in Ibadan." Chichi said.
"We are just an hour drive away from Ibadan." Clara replied. "So, you were not driven here or rather, you didn't come with a car, what happened to the fleet owned by Daniel and his wife? The last time I checked, Daniel has two cars, same with Adeola, not to mention the new cars locked inside the garage."
"Is that the reason why I am here? To discuss my brother's life?" Chichi asked.
"Step brother." Clara corrected.
"Whatever." Chichi waved off. "And just in case, I don't have all day, tell me why I am here so I can return to Lagos before 2pm." She added.
"Why don't have something to drink?" Clara asked as she beckoned on a waiter who came over immediately to take their orders.
"Get me a glass of seven seven, and my dear friend here will be satisfied with one or two glasses of scotch." Clara ordered.
"When did you start taking orders for me?"
"I am your host." Clara smiled.
"So, why am I here?" Chichi asked.
"I'll tell you when am ready, right now, we have to drink." Clara replied.
It was obvious that one of the duo is afraid, while the other is enjoying the torment she is making the other go through.
"Seriously, Clara..... Senior Clara." Chichi began.
"Call me Clara, the days of seniority is over." Clara corrected.
"What do you want from me?" Chichi asked.
"You owe me remember? I have been keeping secret for you since as far back as possible. Secondary school days to be precise. Now, its high time you paid me back." Clara explained.
"Anything."
"It is time you used your influence to get to Daniel who will subsequently connect you to his his father in law. One million US Dollars is all am asking for." Clara explained.
"What?" Chichi exclaimed. "There is no way I am going to do that. I can't even do it. I mean, it doesn't make sense."
"Consider your secret in the open then." Clara replied.
"I don't know why you are doing this to me. It seems you enjoy seeing me in a state like this. Remember the number of time I slept with guys so you can keep the secret. Haven't you had enough?" Chichi cried.
"Don't cry." Clara consoled. "You know what? You have the option of remaining seated and let us negotiate the asking price to around five hundred thousand US Dollars." She added with a smile. "The second option is walking out through that door, and the next time you see me, I'll be testifying against you in court."
Chichi gasped. "You can't do that to me."
"Watch me do it to you. You have five minutes to decide. Suit 13B is where you'll find me. Enjoy yourself." With this, Clara eased herself out of her chair and made for the counter where she spoke for a few seconds with the attendant, after which they bursted into laughter and Clara made for the elevator.
"God! Am done for." Chichi thought.
---------NOW IN HER ROOM
clara picked up her phone and dialled a number.
"Hello Spencer, you did a good job at blowing up that hell hole called N.A.T.U." She said.
"Thanks Clara. All thanks to the tips you gave." Spencer replied.
"I have a job for you. This is outside Lovato's power, are you in?" She asked.
"Of course. Say it."
"Good! Remember I gave my N.A.T.U keycard to Danny Lovato days ago and I want to believe you guys duplicated the keycard which was how you made a new one which you used in gaining entrance into N.A.T.U today, right?"
"Of course." Spencer replied.
"I need my keycard back." Clara said.
"What? Impossible."
"Make it possible man." Clara urged.
"Its with Lovato, you know its impossible to get it off him."
"Your balls are in my hand Spence, I can crush them. Save your balls, by getting my keycard out of Lovato's grasp within the next seventy two hours." Clara said.
"This isn't happening. I can't risk facing Lovato's wrath. Am sure you don't want that either."
"I warned you." Clara said before hanging up.
Her phone rang almost immediately.
"Hello dear, is my guest still there?" She asked on picking up.
"She left."
"Smart Chichi." Clara muttered.

--to be continued--

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 10:25am On Jun 18, 2015
D9ty7:

You have a point and no, you didn't miss anything.
But, when we take into consideration, the people who knew about the pregnancy then, what do we have? Remember, the pregnancy news rocked the whole school then. There are a lot of people against Tina if you ask me.
And a simple DNA test will settle the issue, and remember, Daniel is very influential, so with a snap of his finger, Tina is in court and the judge even if he failed to believe any of the witnesses will suggest a DNA.
I hope you understand.

serzly dis kind of law is not fair at all...
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 10:28am On Jun 18, 2015
--continuation--
"Chris, where were you?" Tina asked as she led Chris to her car. "Are you sure you weren't hit?" She asked for the upteenth time.
"Mum, am good. Just a few cuts and I have been treated." Chris replied.
"So, tell me. What happened? Why did you leave the common room?"
"Mum, lets talk about this at home. Am tired." Chris replied.
"I will have none of that from you. Now talk." Tina said angrily.
"Fine! I was in the common room as agreed and I got pressed. I left for the restroom to ease myself and on coming out, I saw this tall light compexioned man with a coporate suitcase heading for the gas exchange system. He greeted me and I replied." Chris began.
"Have you met the man before? I mean, is he a worker here?" Tina asked.
"There are almost a hundred workers here, I can't tell if he is a staff here, but I have never seen him before. Actually, there are a lot of people I have never met and they work here, but this man looked totally lost."
"How do you mean?" Tina asked.
"he kind of didn't know his way around, but was just guessing on which is the right way. He had a digital device on him though. I think its.... What's it called sef?" Chris continued. "You have it too. GPS or thereabout."
"Okay?" Tina urged him to continue.
"So, it was there on his face that he clearly didn't know his way, coupled with the fact that he had a communication device on, the type that you use when going on missions. So, I was left wondering why he would be using that inside the building when quick link intercoms were on the wall everywhere, but that was not why I took off."
"Why did you take off?"
"The fact that he entered the gas exhcnage system. I mean, the place is out of bounds, except one is on the maintenance team, the internal security team or a top official like you told me, so I just left for the maintenance office and spoke to some guys. By the time they got there, he was done setting the bomb and the alarm sounded immediately, so I just took off with th maintenance guys who said there is an emergency exit from the exchange system into one place like that filled with metals which was ressponsible for the cuts on my body and my shirt." Chris concluded and raised his face to look at his mother.
"Am sorry mum. I made you go through this." He said hugging his mother.
"I should be the one to apologise." Tina replied. "You know what? Remain seated in the car, I'll get you a new shirt down the street. If anybody approaches you for questioning, tell them you know nothing. If Mark comes around, tell him how it happened. He knows how to handle the case without you being invited for questioning. I can't let you go through the rigours and the trauma." Tina advised while Chris nodded his head.
"Remember, mum love you." She said.
"Except that I almost died when she left me alone, but I love her regardless."
"That's my darling." Tina kissed his forehead before getting out of the car.
"Hey Christina." A familiar voice called.
"Collins!" Tina smiled.
"I was wondering why you didn't show up for the short meeting I just had with the departmental heads." He said.
"Mark represented the field operatives. He will fill me in."
"Are you delegating your duties to Mark?" Collins asked.
"Collins, spare me. Please." With this Tina walked away leaving a embarrassed Collins on the spot.
"Hey Chris! Can we talk?" He smiled at Chris who was watching the drama from inside his mother's car.
"Not today. Mum said so." Chris replied.
"Funny you." Collins said before walking over to a group of journalists.

--to be continued--
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 10:29am On Jun 18, 2015
na lovato go kee dis Clara gal
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 10:32am On Jun 18, 2015
Two updates dropped, that's the morning dose. There ought to be an afternoon dose at 2pm and evening dose at 10pm. But I can't drop the afternoon dose cos God no dey joke with Ramadan. I can't be fasting and at the same time be potraying how someone is kissing or sm**ching someone else. No! I can't risk it.
Abi, Hajia Shankies215, am right on track na?
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by handie(m): 10:32am On Jun 18, 2015
Another twist. Which Secret of Chichi does Clara have again na? Me love this Clara girl sha....... D kinda wife I want
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by hadease(m): 10:34am On Jun 18, 2015
Shebarh:
serzly dis kind of law is not fair at all...


to d ladies it not fair but guyz* its fair ooo!

tanks 4 d update dee.....
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 10:37am On Jun 18, 2015
D9ty7:
Two updates dropped, that's the morning dose. There ought to be an afternoon dose at 2pm and evening dose at 10pm. But I can't drop the afternoon dose cos God no dey joke with Ramadan. I can't be fasting and at the same time be potraying how someone is kissing or sm**ching someone else. No! I can't risk it.
Abi, Hajia Shankies215, am right on track na?
so wat will yhu be doing from now till 10? praying? or reading d Quran?
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by malonephill(m): 10:50am On Jun 18, 2015
D9ty7:

You have a point and no, you didn't miss anything.
But, when we take into consideration, the people who knew about the pregnancy then, what do we have? Remember, the pregnancy news rocked the whole school then. There are a lot of people against Tina if you ask me.
And a simple DNA test will settle the issue, and remember, Daniel is very influential, so with a snap of his finger, Tina is in court and the judge even if he failed to believe any of the witnesses will suggest a DNA.
I hope you understand.

so true, considering the DNA, and its only work for rich people like dan,which an average person won't go for, and tina might win if DNA is not done in the case
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 10:55am On Jun 18, 2015
Ramadan Mubarak to you and all other muslim faithfuls! Hope fasting won't keep this thread on hold? Av a nice day! Is Clara planning another hit on NATU building or why will she want her card back plus the romance side can be shut out for a while and the detective cum Mark Anthony revenge mission will take the centre stage! Jez my own thought tho
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by malonephill(m): 10:55am On Jun 18, 2015
Shebarh:
so wat will yhu be doing from now till 10? praying? or reading d Quran?
this babe nor dey tire
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 11:16am On Jun 18, 2015
malonephill:
this babe nor dey tire
no offence oga dee am not asking for anoder update.. just wanted to know

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Slimzjoe(m): 11:35am On Jun 18, 2015
Shebarh:
serzly dis kind of law is not fair at all...

It happens mostly in africa.....in Europe and America, the wife would retain custody with the man contributing towards the child upbringing and also visiting From time to time.......Except the Mother has Medical conditions

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