Rapfrick:
Tina or clara na mark sister

I'll love it if It's Tina. Kimberly will just die! Lol

Orlolahdey:
Oh goodness!! I don miss a lot..let me quickly rush back to read those lovely updates from Dee

At last chris wil get to meet his dad *mark should be very careful oo wetn dy wory am sef

No mind dah babe jor her own don 2much

JojoBlue:
I'll love it if It's Tina. Kimberly will just die! Lol

and if u are the tina what will u do *i guess u wil repay her in 100folds all what she has done to u

D9ty7:

I won't tell you anything. Rather, tell me where you have been for the past X years and Y months.

For X years and Y months, i have been touring the streets of my ruling planet . Believe me bro, your story was the first i read as soon as i got back. Does that answer your question, bro of life?

Oya, put me in the know nah. Wisper if you want bt let me hear you.

Modified:
Hmmmm....... Read the updates and all i could say is OMG! These goons didnt take the life style of a parrot. They are just a replical of a "he devil".

I presume Daniel martins is the sweet surprise.

I presume Tina and Mark are siblings. This one that Mark is always boiling when it comes to Tina and her baby father. The chemistry is there and too obvious..... Blood they say is thicker than water.

By the way, who bore clara? Please, dnt tell me she is mark's sister? Tell me Tina was kindda adopted. BTW, if clara and Mark r siblings, that means that mark is tailing his sis. And then Tina's bro is also a criminal who is wanted at the moment. Hmmmm......

Sapphire06:
Been a while here...Thanks for the updates dee..#TeamMarkandTina..


In my opinion,nt to derail the thread,I think the words dee said to shebarh is slightly too much....We are following your story and as a writer,mostimes you know when you'd be occupied with your personal stuffs,you can tell us before hand that you'd be absent for days not after..You are not under an obligation to tell us why you were absent though but you can just tell us you'd be absent..


To Shebarh: compliment/comment both when there are updates and when der are none..Peace!

The words are too much? Jeez!

Do you think my being absent is preplanned? No.

All of my absences are unexpected. If I tell you update drops in an hour and I fail to update. what will you call that?

As far as I am concerned, every time I fail to update, I come here and give reasons why I was absent.

I don't know your schedule and you don't know mine. I spend 15minutes typing each updates and to get that fifteen minutes is like digging the ground for oil.

To say my words are too much is something I don't understand. What did I say? I merely said things as they are. You don't expect me to fold my arms and watch someone tell me things that are not.

kenwins:

For X years and Y months, i have been touring the streets of my ruling planet . Believe me bro, [b]your story was the first i read as soon as i got back.[\b] Does that answer your question, bro of life?

Oya, put me in the know nah. Wisper if you want bt let me hear you.

Modified:
Hmmmm....... Read the updates and all i could say is OMG! These goons didnt take the life style of a parrot. They are just a replical of a "he devil".

I presume Daniel martins is the sweet surprise.

I presume Tina and Mark are siblings. This one that Mark is always boiling when it comes to Tina and her baby father. The chemistry is there and too obvious..... Blood they say is thicker than water.

By the way, who bore clara? Please, dnt tell me she is mark's sister? Tell me Tina was kindda adopted. BTW, if clara and Mark r siblings, that means that mark is tailing his sis. And then Tina's bro is also a criminal who is wanted at the moment. Hmmmm......

The bolded got me. Am honoured.

D9ty7:
The bolded got me. Am honoured.

Did you get my mail?

kenwins:
Did you get my mail?

Yes ma'am. Will hit you up before the day runs out

Shebarh:
Thanks so much dear.. at least i will v a good day with the things u said to me. .

......



Kenwins i just siddon hia dey look u o....

Skimpledawg:


Kenwins i just siddon hia dey look u o....

Ee darl, i'm here for you. Remember that first ride we had together? Twas awesome. Btw, what's up with standd and olashas? I don't sight them together. And those dudes, alberto2k and suxxman... Are they still in this planet?.... Miss u both. How about that niccur that put writters in the know of their mistakes? Stuff46?

kenwins:

Ee darl, i'm here for you. Remember that first ride we had together? Twas awesome. Btw, what's up with standd and olashas? I don't sight them together. And those dudes, alberto2k and suxxman... Are they still in this planet?.... Miss u both. How about that niccur that put writters in the know of their mistakes? Stuff46?

Hey Sweet!
How u doing? Been busy offline..... Exams and all.
How's you?

--continuation--
Mark walked into the room but stopped abruptly at the sight of a male figure standing a few steps away from Tina.
"What's going on here?" He asked.
Daniel Martin turned and gave him a blank stare.
"Good afternoon, I'm Daniel." He said extending his hand for a handshake which Mark stared at with contempt. "Daniel Martin." He added for clarity sake.
"Mark." Mark muttered almost inaudibly.
"Just Mark?" Daniel asked, probably expecting Mark to introduce himself with his full name.
"No. Mark and Psalm." Mark replied coldly.
Daniel turned to Tina who had a frightened look on her face. The reason behind the look, no one could fathom, even though a critical thinker or someone who is a bit close to the trio and particularly, Christina would conclude that, she was scared by the presence of Daniel.
Daniel as a person represent a huge scar in her life or was responsible for a huge scar in her life, which was impregnating her very early, and while he was able to move on and make something out of his life, Tina found it difficult to get her shattered life back in one piece. Therefore, seeing him once again could mean a return to finish what he started over a decade ago.
From another perspective, one could not but conclude that Tina, aware of the existing bad blood between two men was afraid of them facing off.
"Excuse us Mister." Daniel said to Mark who remained defiantly, staring murderously into space. "Tina, tell him to excuse us."
"Mark...." Tina called but was cut short by a visibly enraged Mark.
"Like seriously? You are asking me to excuse you two? Who is he to boss you around?" Mark asked.
"Mark, please am sorry." She pleaded. "You know he is Christopher's dad." She added.
"So? Where was he when you took full responsibility of the boy for over thirteen years? Now that the boy is matured enough, he reappreared from wherever he was hiding and you embraced him as if he is a hero." Mark poured out angrily.
Daniel smiled, guilt written all over him.
"Mark, please don't talk to him like that. He is my guest, my problem and not yours. So, let him be." Tina replied.
"Fine. I will just get out of here." Mark said and made for the door.
"And please, don't bother checking back on me, because, as soon as he leaves." she said pointing at Daniel. "I will head home."
Mark scoffed and exited the ward.
Now alone with the mother of his child, Daniel took a bold step towards Tina's bed. Afterall, she just called him her guest and her problem. And most importantly, she walked out her best friend and colleague at work because of him.
"I wonder what's always wrong with that dude. He feels overly important." He broke the silence.
"Hey Mister. The fact that I walked out Mark doesn't mean you are spending the next minute here. So, if you will please excuse me, I want to sleep."
"Sleeping will do you no good. But first, you should know why am here." Daniel replied.
"The reason why you are here is as unimportant as you yourself. Get out now or I call the security." She threatened.
"You can call the men of the Nigerian army, but be rest assured that nothing can take me away from here." He bragged.
Tina hissed and laid back on the bed, turning her back on him.
"I thought we could talk like matured and educated beings, but you disappointed me. Anyways, this is a court warrant, I am seeking the custody of my son. So, get prepared and get your lawyer." He dropped the paper on her bed and made for the door.
"Mark!" She called.
He stopped with a smile on his face.
"You are dragging me to court?" She asked.
"Yeah." He replied.
"Good! But you took this step very late. I am five steps ahead of you." She explained.
"What do you mean?" He asked.
"You don't need to know what I mean. But, you can meet your lawyer, he is in the best position to explain the steps I have taken." She replied.
"Don't blackmail my lawyer. Lets meet in court."
"How sure are you that the boy in question is your son?" Tina dropped the bombshell.
"What?" Daniel asked with clenched fists.
That moment, the door opened and Mark walked in with a small handbag.
"Here, change into your clothes. Your time is up here." He threw the bag at Tina who got off the bed at once and made for the bathroom.
"Sorry boss! You lost this case. Now bounce." Mark mocked pointing to the door.
"On the other hand, money wins for me." He adjusted his shirt and bounced out of the room.

--tbc--

--continuation--
The time was 7pm when Tina walked into her parent's residence in Lekki.
"Good evening mum." She greeted her mother who sat in the dinning area reading the bible and other christian magazines.
"Good evening dear." Her mother replied standing up to go meet her halfway into the living room. "How are you feeling now?" she asked. "Sorry, we couldn't come to the hospital. One of the elders in our church died this morning, plus your colleague who called us said it was nothing serious." Her mother explained. "Have you eaten?"
"Mummy!" Tina bursted into laughter. "Am not a kid."
"To me, you are still a kid." Her mother replied.
Tina laughed. "Where's my son?" she asked.
"He is inside with Mayowa and his friends."
Tina felt her insides burn at the mention of her younger brother's friends. "Mayowa and those friends of his are here?" She asked alarmed.
"Yes. Any problem?" Her mother replied.
"Just a minute. Which room are the staying?" She asked.
"Downstairs."
At once, Tina rose up and made for the exit.
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On getting to the entrance into the apartment downstairs, she knocked and the door was opened moments later by Chris who jumped on her excitedly. But his excitement was cut short when a knock came down hard on his head.
Angrily, she dragged him away not minding his cries?
"Chris, what's the matter? Who is at the door?" Different masculine voices asked from within.
"Tina." Mayor called from the door. "Good evening." He greeted.
"Good evening." Tina replied. "Chris, go upstairs."
"why did you hit him?" He asked.
"He is my son. Tell me what your friends are doing here?" she asked.
"They are my friends. And I don't think you have the right to question their staying here, as long as dad and mum agreed to house them for a while." Mayor replied.
"Fine, then your friends should stay clear of my son." With this, she walked away.
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Kimberly walked out of the room into the living room where Mark sat watching a movie on his laptop.
"Darling, when did you return? I never heard you come in. Not even the sound of your car." She asked.
Mark ignored her and increased the volume of the movie he was watching.
"Mark." She called angrily but still got no response.
This singular act infuriated her as she angrily pressed the laptop's power button and the screen went blank.
Mark gave her one last look, stood up with his bottle of water and walked out of the living room. Kim, being someone who doesn't give up immediately followed him.
"What the hell is your problem? Is it because I came to visit Tony in the hospital? Just say that you don't like him, because I remembered doing dinners with your colleagues back home, why should it be different in Nigeria?" She poured out.
"Will you let it slide please?" Mark spoke for the first time.
"No, I won't. Its not as if I cheated on you. And as long as you are still seeing that Christina or whatever her name is, I won't cut friendship ties with Tony."
"Fine, and you can as well move in with Tony or return to the states." He replied.
"You are wrong. I am here to stay, as long as you are here."
"Lets wait and see." With this, Mark walked out on her.

END OF CHAPTER 16

hummm, hands folded and watching how things will unfold Team Tina

#TeamMarkTina#

Tina and Mark are siblings #OrSoIThink

Pukka36:
#TeamMarkTina#

#TeamMark&Clara....

Skimpledawg:

#TeamMark&Clara....

No!

Pukka36:

No!

Calm down bae.... Tina is too soft compared to Clara dt is sexy n cute. Beta join our team so as to join Mark(brains) and Clara (beauty) togeda...

Skimpledawg:

Calm down bae.... Tina is too soft compared to Clara dt is sexy n cute. Beta join our team so as to join Mark(brains) and Clara (beauty) togeda...

No Dear
Tina has got both the looks and brains too
Clara is a traitor,she's not loyal and that's a very bad thing.

chain,have missed a lot sha..
D9ty7 well done oo,but you know now that am back,you have to triple the rate you update

Ghen-ghen its getting more interesting


Tina should just be careful, as for Mark he is on his own.

D9ty7:

Is this really you? Welcome back.

yes oooo
missed you loads

nice job

What is wrng wit daniel sef Posing wit wealth dat dosnT belong to him
#teamtina

Well done Dee.. but I wanna ask if Tina is not aware of who her brother is? I mean the work mayor does?

saaedlee:
Tina and Mark are siblings #OrSoIThink

I don't think so. The brief history of Tina given in this story doesn't portray her as being adopted. I think Clara should be mark's sister. That Daniel would soon get the shocker of his life when jaye and his side chic are done with him.

kwencypresh:
What is wrng wit daniel sef Posing wit wealth dat dosnT belong to him
#teamtina

is it your money

It's getting hotter and hotter. more ink to ur pen sir.

Flakeey:


yes oooo missed you loads
nice job

iya folake hmmm

Flakeey:


yes oooo missed you loads
nice job

iya folake hmmm

creamy1990:
It's getting hotter and hotter. more ink to ur pen sir.

hope you are in the same team wit me
#TeamDaniel

Hmmmmmm, o ma ga o. What s all dis. I hate family feud. But Kim is not a Nigerian. She is not applying rules to win a man over. Thanks Dee for the updates.