OK what just happened If u had told me Maxwell will die, I wouldn't av read this chapter. I can't stop crying

@chistar01, abeg person don ever tell you how good you be? Bruh you're an awesome writer! Really enjoyed reading this story.. Abeg when you the start your next story? When you start, mention me ghon..

@Bobbybube I was hoping no one would notice it. The pressure to end the story was getting too much as it was dividing my fan base so I had to rush the end a bit even though I initially planned on elaborating more on how deeply in love Maxwell and Funmi were in love but decided to just cut it short using just a few chapters to do that to the best of my ability. Anyway thanks for your input and I would try to make sure the edited book would surely hint more on their feelings for each other.

As for the critics, I'm not one to complain over criticism because ask for it always as it makes me better, however, I always remind myself its the internet and people with different opinions are all over here so I read all the criticisms and pick the constructive ones while I ignore the others. Granted, this piece took a long time to complete but the way some of you guys put it was quite offensive like I'm being paid here or I owe anyone here so thank you mzchistar for standing up for me once again. Nevertheless, do keep the criticisms coming but try to be constructive.

The secondary moral of this story is simple, no matter how we try, like really try, some stories don't just have a happy end, that's just life. I'll let you decide what the primary moral is.

My vote of thanks would come after chapter 40.

Weldone bro @chista (tumbs up), i must admit i never predicted it to end like this, i predicted henry dyin or gettn caught, and max prolly getting injured or something then a happy ending, and you just wowed me, anywaiz sorry if the way i spoke was offensive, I dint even see it as criticism i just spoke on wat i felt (i hate suspense ). Jah bless

this is the best story i've ever read so far on nairaland. big ups chistar01 abeg i want that b*tch called mary-anne gone..i dey vex gan

definitely you schooled in uniport

ericanex:
definitely you schooled in uniport

Dandeson1:
Weldone bro @chista (tumbs up), i must admit i never predicted it to end like this, i predicted henry dyin or gettn caught, and max prolly getting injured or something then a happy ending, and you just wowed me, anywaiz sorry if the way i spoke was offensive, I dint even see it as criticism i just spoke on wat i felt (i hate suspense ). Jah bless

lol... we cool. Suspense is what keeps you coming back for more, glad I wowed you

wat a sad ending........cry......maxwell did not deserve to die...

Another story na.

from d beginning of dis story am ghost reader but @ dis place of junction i must voice out oooo, u didnt do well @ all. Y maxwell as 2 die nw? Y nt d prsn dat spill d beans out

I HATE MARYANNE

Chistar,raise up your hand
Knock yourself
Raise it up again
Knock yourself
Why maxwell go die naa
Chaiiii.....
Make sure Mary Anne mouth is chopped off too
Thumbs up bro
For the first time i have follwed a story to the end

IMO, it was a good ending. If Henry had died, it could have been less emotional. Maxwell death made it more emotional.

bummybummy:
from d beginning of dis story am ghost reader but @ dis place of junction i must voice out oooo, u didnt do well @ all. Y maxwell as 2 die nw? Y nt d prsn dat spill d beans out

Realities of life, doesn't go the way we want it

It's unfair tho

For me I feel the end was too sudden.

OK we didn't expect it to end this way. but I must say dude, u nailed it. kudos

chistar01:
@Bobbybube I was hoping no one would notice it. The pressure to end the story was getting too much as it was dividing my fan base so I had to rush the end a bit even though I initially planned on elaborating more on how deeply in love Maxwell and Funmi were in love but decided to just cut it short using just a few chapters to do that to the best of my ability. Anyway thanks for your input and I would try to make sure the edited book would surely hint more on their feelings for each other.

As for the critics, I'm not one to complain over criticism because ask for it always as it makes me better, however, I always remind myself its the internet and people with different opinions are all over here so I read all the criticisms and pick the constructive ones while I ignore the others. Granted, this piece took a long time to complete but the way some of you guys put it was quite offensive like I'm being paid here or I owe anyone here so thank you mzchistar for standing up for me once again. Nevertheless, do keep the criticisms coming but try to be constructive.

The secondary moral of this story is simple, no matter how we try, like really try, some stories don't just have a happy end, that's just life. I'll let you decide what the primary moral is.

My vote of thanks would come after chapter 40.

Your story certainly tops my list of nl literature, and now you explained the pressure on you, i'm more understanding .
Readers should know your an amateur writer not been paid and have personal responsibilities. I stand for more encouragement and constructive criticism.
As for the ending I agree with it 100%. No great work ends " happily ever after " apart from flimsy romance novels. Ask okonkwo in things fall apart.

Anyhow, i'm following bumper to bumper. lets see what other masterpiece awaits us.

chistar01:
@Bobbybube I was hoping no one would notice it. The pressure to end the story was getting too much as it was dividing my fan base so I had to rush the end a bit even though I initially planned on elaborating more on how deeply in love Maxwell and Funmi were in love but decided to just cut it short using just a few chapters to do that to the best of my ability. Anyway thanks for your input and I would try to make sure the edited book would surely hint more on their feelings for each other.

I noticed that too. Pls don't let pressure get to u next time. I understand d feelin.


My overall rating of this story 98/100.

fam24:
Maxwell died? Nooooo
Mary-Anne must die, a slow painful sweet death.
Amaka must see the brother of death.
Funmi and Henry with Ayo must team up and revenge Maxwell's death.

Christar, well done. thumb up

babe u dey dere

Why nah?... It's so painful. It shouldn't have been Maxwell. Mary-anne was just too forward. Nice work Chistar, u're a good writer.

Lessons

Maxwel's death was as a result of keeping bad company, having a cultist as a friend is dangerous..preventn is so better than cure..chistar love ur work nd i wish u didnt end d story so sudden because of these criticts, as if to write a story is child'splay..

Bro, nice story.. it really touched my heart, death can come at any time. We just have to live a meaningful life at least Henry won't forget Maxwell for being a good friend....Nyc piece bro....#RESPECT

segsbenks:

she doesn't even know ao to quote sumone, novice, just try and yield by d little corrections dats if you want to last here! thank me later!.

mtcheeew if u know how long av been on nl u won't kip beating around d bush with dis ur "novice" of a word ..anyway seems am more matured so I will play d elderly nd let d sleeping dog lie pls try not to wake it... winks****

Morning guys, as you wait for the epilogue of this story, I'll like you check out this story I stumbled on last night after I got a mention from the writer. I read the story so far and I felt it was a great story in the making. Anyway, don't take my word for it, the title is Memoirs of a Hustler and this the link https://www.nairaland.com/3142969/memoirs-hustler
If you like what you see, do drop a comment to encourage the writer.

This is not a paid advert :/

PEACe.

Finally, we've come to the end of this lovely series.... it's such a pity maxwell had to die *sobs* in such a painful way for that matter *sobs* no, I'm not crying, something entered my eyes....




great story by the way... kudos to chistar01... jah keep u and take u higher... come and kneel down let me pray for you...



*speaking in tongues* because of how much you've entertained us for free with this your story **speak in tongues and shakes vigorously as holy spirit descends upon me** Stephen Osaji, I decree today that anything u lay ur hands upon shall prosper, this act that you've done, entertaining us with your story free of charge, by this act, I decree that this your talent shall expose you to the world... great men will read your books and invite you over... TV stations like CNN, BBC, Al Jazera, and a host of of international TV stations sill interview you... your name will spread around the world like the wind *speaking in tongues and shakes as holy spirit leaves*


can somebody shout hallelujah??

hfinest1:
Finally, we've come to the end of this lovely series.... it's such a pity maxwell had to die *sobs* in such a painful way for that matter *sobs* no, I'm not crying, something entered my eyes....




great story by the way... kudos to chistar01... jah keep u and take u higher... come and kneel down let me pray for you...



*speaking in tongues* because of how much you've entertained us for free with this your story **speak in tongues and shakes vigorously as holy spirit descends upon me** Stephen Osaji, I decree today that anything u lay ur hands upon shall prosper, this act that you've done, entertaining us with your story free of charge, by this act, I decree that this your talent shall expose you to the world... great men will read your books and invite you over... TV stations like CNN, BBC, Al Jazera, and a host of of international TV stations sill interview you... your name will spread around the world like the wind *speaking in tongues and shakes as holy spirit leaves*


can somebody shout hallelujah??

halleluyahh..

Unique setting bro Chistar. More still ti come from this, Fummi and Henry need to settle for Max loss.

Godsgal:
I was here...waiting patiently for chistar.
And to MZCHIZTAR, in as much as i admire ur loyalty 2 chistar, i earnestly think u shud take a chill pill on ur 'attacks' on people who decide to air their opinion on this thread. For chrissake, even Chistar welcomes criticisms & gats no problem wit it. And if i can remember vividly, u once 'threatened' to unfollow d thread if he does not update soon enuf. So why d fuss now? Pls stop givin us the impression that u're trying so hard 2 get Chistar's attention cos its so obvious he seems not 2 notice. PEACE

you nailed it

OMG!!! This is tooooooo good. The plot, theme and charcters were frigging great. As touching as it is, Maxwell had to die. He had to. Christar, thanks a bunch for this 'over wonderful' piece.

chistar I swore u are d best dis is about the best story I Eva read....posterity will remember u for dis.my high point of d moment was d appearance of skinny I couldn't help but shout in excitement n as for Mary Anne am coming for u,u have just made d worst mistake of ur generation cos am taking did party to ur family DAT henry slap small sef...oh my Max u r indeed a friend..sobs