jagugu88li:
Ok, I like happy endings but hey, Tosin's father deserves no mercy. One, for deliberately hurting his wife and mother of his kids. Jesu! At least spare her/him just because there's kids between you. Two, stupid pride. Knowing this revelation for three years and still feel proud instead of asking fir forgiveness, there and then.

Good job m'Lady.......and you need to ask for forgiveness from your husband Veekid for doing him wrong. Otherwise yours will be like this Twine here

#Forgiveness #TeamVeekid #LoveConquersAll

yorhmienerd:
All of uma wey dey form 'team veekid' missuniverse, johncasey1 and co. What you don't know is that: there is love in sharing. God is love, so we should try to reciprocate the same love also

johncasey1:
Thanks Bibi for the mention o
Add me to your mentions for any new story oo
#TeamVeekid
No vex bro..Forgive am na

maggilove:
oh, i'm feeling high and above because i got a 2nd mention. so bibijay123 we have a deal the name is abosede, next story and let me know when u start.shalom
in another news, why did u cheating on ur nairaland/literature/ veekid husband? after 5kids with him, bibi u are weekend.

God has vindicated me #TeamVeekid everywhere

Thank y'all for the concern #1love

veekid:






God has vindicated me #TeamVeekid everywhere
Thank y'all for the concern #1love

Ooor oniyeye

What a great story.I still wished Victoria ends with Tosin.... I no just like dis Dantata with her. Bibi nyc job. If i get dedication I go bring down d price of dollar ma.

Thanks bibi for this piece. Its coming 2 an end and we all know that so what's next after twine now and lest I forget do make make peace with ur husby veekid...

yorhmienerd:
Ooor oniyeye

Somebody should help me ask this guy wetin I do am; what's my offence now?

Dedicated to Kajiang02, mirapee,annieC,Riog, barag.



* Continues*


Victoria



The two elderly lawyers stood up and we did same too. Linda and i shook hands with them and we saw them out before coming back inside our living room.


" So dad willed everything equally amongst the three of us." I said.


" Yea" Linda said, with laughter." I miss him"


" Me too" i said.



She sighed and dropped on the sofa." I have a lot of work on my hands now. Do you think Auntie Maggie's lawyer did well for her? is five years not too much?She asked, the trial was yesterday. She had gotten five years as a result of the circumstances surrounding the murder and her age at the time of the murder. Onyinye' s death and the attempt on Chief was treated as an accident.



" I think that is fair since she was a minor when....when...."



" When she poisoined my mother. My heart went to her when she broke down in tears after she heard her sentence. Five years is such a long time to be locked up" Linda said.



" I can't believe you feel sorry for her. You were out for blood when you thought dad was the murderer but you have taken it so calm with her and you even got her a lawyer."



" I thought dad murdered my mother out of greed.....but Auntie Maggie was only fighting for herself. That's two different things.I still think she could have gotten a lesser term......maybe after six months we can appeal. " Linda said. " What do you think?".




The door opened and Chief Adediwura came in.



" You are welcome sir" Linda said. " Please sit down"



" Thank you. How are you my dear?" He said, sitting down heavily with a loud groan.


" I am fine sir. Oops! Vicky! i forgot i have to be somewhere by five!" She said, " please see that Chief is comfortable" She walked out of the room.



" Victoria, how are you?" He asked.



" Very well. Thank you" i replied in a clipped tone.



" I set up a trust fund for you. Which is to be handed over to you on your twenty_fifth birthday" He said, not one to beat about the bush.


" Why are you telling me sir?"



" I want you to know i had you in mind. I just didn't write you off completely."



" OK"


" I know you must have heard Maggie's part of the story. I am not here to dispute whatever she might have told you. The truth is i regret my actions and i acted cowardly all these years. I should have come out with the truth a long time ago and acknowledge you. I am also not here to tell you to accept me as your father. No." He said. " I only came to beg you to give your siblings a chance to get to know you."


" I have heard you sir" i replied.


" Thank you. I will be on my way now".



" Alright. How's .....how's your arm now sir?"


" It feels much better. Thank you" he said.




I stood up and saw him to the door.



TBC

veekid:


Somebody should help me ask this guy wetin I do am; what's my offence now?

I hate when people are stingy. You look stingy to me lol

no comments on new update
just keep it up with the story*thumps up*(and the sequel too ).

dominique:


Abi. As one drama is about to end, another one is brewing. Twine:The love triangle

Lol i also tot Dante and Vick shld ve a spin off

Alright Bibi people haf been getting dediction more than 20 times now. Kai ayam a jealous pesin try and remember me in your ministry na. Pls, EDAKUN

skarlett:
Thanks for the dedication bibi, you too much

Ps:
One of my new characters is named after you

Thank u. I saw it in my ghost mode. Blessing, the nanny oshey

skarlett:



As in eh, bibi should open another thread for this one oh

A sequel? i just might.

veekid:

I just realised you said you could help; sorry if I may ask, how?

yorhmienerd:
Alright Bibi people haf been getting dediction more than 20 times now. Kai ayam a jealous pesin try and remember me in your ministry na. Pls, EDAKUN

Awww, mabinu

Bibijay this one didn't bellefull me na, add jara

jagugu88li:
Ok, I like happy endings but hey, Tosin's father deserves no mercy. One, for deliberately hurting his wife and mother of his kids. Jesu! At least spare her/him just because there's kids between you. Two, stupid pride. Knowing this revelation for three years and still feel proud instead of asking fir forgiveness, there and then.

Good job m'Lady.......and you need to ask for forgiveness from your husband Veekid for doing him wrong. Otherwise yours will be like this Twine here

#Forgiveness #TeamVeekid #LoveConquersAll

Thank you dear. Ask for forgiveness? ok

RIOg:
What a great story.I still wished Victoria ends with Tosin.... I no just like dis Dantata with her. Bibi nyc job. If i get dedication I go bring down d price of dollar ma.

Lol Dante is not so bad nau. U got ur mention oya fulfill ya promise

maggilove:
oh, i'm feeling high and above because i got a 2nd mention. so bibijay123 we have a deal the name is abosede, next story and let me know when u start.shalom
in another news, why did u cheating on ur nairaland/literature/ veekid husband? after 5kids with him, bibi u are weekend.

Abosede? Nice. i was born on a Sunday too so mine is Akosua as for the sheeting aspect no comment

yorhmienerd:
I hate when people are stingy. You look stingy to me lol

Hate is a big word to use bro; buh how am I stingy now?

Eniqurl:
Bibijay123 God bless you

Bless u too sis

shigo20:
Thanks bibi for this piece. Its coming 2 an end and we all know that so what's next after twine now and lest I forget do make make peace with ur husby veekid...

After Twine.....? Seriously i don't know yet but will give u a mention wen i decide to post another story. As for Veekid....well December is almost here so i will make peace with him

Chirolechick:
Bibijay this one didn't bellefull me na, add jara

Will post the Epilogue wen light comes.

bibijay123:


After Twine.....? Seriously i don't know yet but will give u a mention wen i decide to post another story. As for Veekid....well December is almost here so i will make peace with him

Ayaf diiiiiieeeeeeee

Well Linda just proved to me that everyone deserves a second chance and don't be quick to judge peoples actions because you don't know there reason

sexfabregas:
i finally have to comment, been following the story on a low all this while .
its an excellent thriller though i think the suspense and ermmm spice has kinda died down, maybe its cause the story is drawing to an end, well lets see how it turns out.

i rate the story 9/10 naah fvck that 10/10

well done sis

i'm arrahia mehn


bibijay123

Hey bro...long time. Thank you for reading and commenting

bibijay123:


Thank u. I saw it in my ghost mode. Blessing, the nanny oshey

Lol, I noticed too .

veekid:

Hate is a big word to use bro; buh how am I stingy now?

okay man, just felt like pulling your legs. BED is calling, I gotta go. Goodnight

dominique:


Lol, I noticed too .

Lol i can only hope she's a good nanny

So Tosin father can till ask for forgiveness after all ds while.*anyway sha Tosin got no choice. Thn 2 accept him bck
I am happy 4 linda & Vicky @ least they could conquer their emotional problem.
I feel 4 Maggie.she was fighting d right battle in a wrong way..

bibijay123:


A sequel? i just might.

*rubs hand in glee, i can't wait

Ghost mode deactivated... I just finished reading Allen Avenue.
You rock girl
Keep it up