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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)
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Re: Red Ashes by BurnaKing21: 8:17am On Jan 04, 2017 |
U don change ur name 2 BOLDndBEAUTIFUL??......miztake dey frontpage oo |
Re: Red Ashes by Pureheart91(m): 8:22am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Chuka better play ur cards right oo...I think its high time Mabel enjoys a bit of a Family care courtesy Husband and Son; she have suffered enough sha R.U.O.N greets all the house with a happy and better new year |
Re: Red Ashes by mujybee(f): 8:51am On Jan 04, 2017 |
we finally made it to frontpage av bin wowing since morny God bless u chumzypinky n those dat av bin commenting relentless All dose ghost readers too hmmm i wunt tlk |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:32am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Dedicated to Boldndbeautiful whose birthday was yesterday..sorry its coming too later dear, happy birthday 2 uuuuu... KAINENE. 'we should go back to the hospital' i said to Nathan as i dressed up 'we left there in a hurry and without telling your mum, she should be worried by now' I was shaken and i knew it was obvious. Of course, i just lost something i never thought i'd lose, at least not now. He hugged my from behind and kissed my neck, i shivered. What was it about Nathan that made me shiver at the slightest shiver. 'Nene...' he spoke softly then turned me to face him 'are you scared?' I shook my head. He kissed my nose lightly 'you are' 'i'm not' 'i'm sorry if you feel i took advantage of you. I love you Nene. I'll never leave you' I sighed 'isnt that the same thing every other guy will promise every girl they sleep with?' i searched his face. If there was anything more than love, then that was what i felt for this guy. I wondered when and how my feelings for him grew to this extent. I barely knew him. He shook his head 'Nene, i've never disvirgined any girl in my 26yrs of existence, 12yrs of sexual experience. You gave me your treasure and i promise to keep it in my heart forever. Trust me Nene, i love you. I fell in love with you at first sight. I've never fallen in love with anyone before...' 'what of that girl at the hotel?' 'Jolade?' he sighed 'yes, she's my fiancee, but i didnt propose to her. Its my mum and her mum arranging the marriage stuff, but you know no one can force me into doing what i dont want to. You're the woman i want to spend the rest of my life with...no one else' I lowered my head. Men were jerks! I knew, but Nathan, was...was he different? 'i need you to promise me something Nath...' 'what?' 'promise me...that you wont go back to your reckless life. You wont smoke...promise me that' 'i promise you honey. If you dont like me smoking then i'm going to stop...for your sake' 'i need us to do something else....' 'what is that?' 'a blood convenant' He withdrew back a bit 'is that necessary?' I stood up and walked to the window 'if we are going to be together, then i have to be sure about what i'm getting myself into' He was behind me in an instant...his hand wrapped around my shoulders. I closed my eyes. 'i love you Nene...and if its a blood convenant you want, then so be it' I turned to him with my eyes open. Then i went into his arms 'i love you too Nath' He looked at me with love-filled eyes. I walked to the bed where my purse was, i opened it and searched for a razor blade. I opened the mini refridgerator and brought out a bottled water and a glass cup, i poured water into the cup. Then i walked to him. He looked at me with nervous eyes. I took his hand and pierced it with the razor blade. He didnt winced. I dipped his thumb into the glass cup, his blood dropped. Then i pierced mine, i winced and dipped it in the glass cup, then i held his hands, we both held the glass cup. 'with this blood of mine floathing in this water, i promise you Nathan, that i'll never leave you. No one will be able to separate us. As i've given you my virginity, you alone shall have access to my body. I shall not have an affair with another man, i shall not sleep with another man. I'll love you till eternity. Only death can do us part, if i ever leave you, if i ever cheat on you or harbour feelings for another man, then i shall run mad. This convenant can only be annulled if one of us dies' He cleared his throat 'with this blood of mine flowing in this water, i also promise you Kainene, that i'll never break your heart. I'll love you till eternity, i'll never have sex with another woman neither shall i harbour any feelings whatsoever for another woman apart from you. If i do so, i shall run mad and rot to death. This convenant can only be annulled by the death of any of us. I love you Kainene' He drank the water first. Then i drank the remaining. I dropped the glass cup on the shelf beside us and we kissed. TBC 14 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:33am On Jan 04, 2017 |
mujybee:Wow, thanks dear. We've made FP oo, tank God. U seem 2 b 4gettin dat u were once a ghost reader as well... Lol |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:34am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Oviainchambers Anaselizzy Skimarvel Ztarlord Kayceerilyn i'm seeing u guys oo |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:35am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Pple wey dey view reach 15 oo, bt pple wey go comment no go reach five...lol |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:36am On Jan 04, 2017 |
BurnaKing21:I dnt knw 4 dem oo..and d worst being, i dnt knw hw 2 contact d mods. Dis birthday gal jst dey take my victory, iffa catch her eh... 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by heemah(f): 9:46am On Jan 04, 2017 |
No matter how much I love u, I'd neva go into any covenant with you. Abeggy!! 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by mujybee(f): 9:48am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: shhh no shout am no allow pple hear u at least am beta dan dose dat ar stl ghost reader...... #winks |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:54am On Jan 04, 2017 |
heemah:Abi?? Me too... Even if i luv u 2 d moon and back, no blood convenant...dat tin is very powerful oo...i guess Kainenechukwu was just insecure na...knowing how much of a playboy Nathan was(is) |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:56am On Jan 04, 2017 |
mujybee:C ur bend bend mouth... |
Re: Red Ashes by xaviercasmir(m): 9:57am On Jan 04, 2017 |
To the extent of blood convenant;"yucks". Anyway i just dey luk dem with one eye |
Re: Red Ashes by empress101(f): 9:58am On Jan 04, 2017 |
I dnt knw why diz blood convenant is scaring me.. chumzypinky, I hop none of dem is gng to run mad oo.. |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:58am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Toyfat Empress101 Adebriana IamLukas Xaviercasmir |
Re: Red Ashes by boldndbeautiful(f): 9:59am On Jan 04, 2017 |
BurnaKing21: No be small thing oh, sotey nairaland turn me to author by force by fire , sorry chumzypinky, pls try ND rectify it 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:59am On Jan 04, 2017 |
empress101:If dem run mad, dem run mad na, i send dem msg? Na me tel dem make dey do blood convenant... 2 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:00am On Jan 04, 2017 |
boldndbeautiful:Lol....author mi |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:02am On Jan 04, 2017 |
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Re: Red Ashes by mujybee(f): 10:03am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:like dis |
Re: Red Ashes by boldndbeautiful(f): 10:07am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: Thanks 4 d dedication darling, u r truly blessed pls don't allow anyway take ur glory oh, not even me, rectify the issue @ fp |
Re: Red Ashes by Tochyno1995(m): 10:09am On Jan 04, 2017 |
[color=#000099][/color] Chumzypinky: Beautiful constructed.keep it up dear |
Re: Red Ashes by BurnaKing21: 10:12am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: lolzz.....BOLDndBEAUTIFUL run oo....no let Chumzy catch u...me no sabi share fight |
Re: Red Ashes by Tochyno1995(m): 10:19am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: I'm powerfully following this. I like the connection... Thumbs up dear |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:25am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Tochyno1995:tanx dear...bt u ddnt have 2 quote d whole update... |
Re: Red Ashes by iiru: 10:32am On Jan 04, 2017 |
well done chumzpinky . blood convanant kwa, very dangerous oo.hope they remain faithful if not nigerian movie part two go follow. |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 10:37am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Hmmmm, Blood Convenant Na wah o. Am just speechless... |
Re: Red Ashes by bolubennie(m): 10:41am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Dz tori dey sweet me ehhh, all thanks to Chumzypinky. BTW I wan marry one of ya angel xef |
Re: Red Ashes by Creeza(m): 10:47am On Jan 04, 2017 |
He cleared his throat '' ...this convenant can will be annulled if any of us dies'' @boldened, Got me laughing real hard here, yawa will gas for Nene head.. Jagu88li, yorhmienerd, xaviercasmir , and our author chumzypinky you should mark this as a prophesy '' Nathan will break this promise and its very simple to break'' anyways , congrats my dear, Fp feels so good, I cant start to explain. I sign out |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:58am On Jan 04, 2017 |
JOLADE. 'mummy Mab....' i called excitedly as i entered the house. I was holding a humper pack. It'd been a while. I percieved an aroma from the kitchen and i knew Mummy Mab was at it again. I decided to surprise her, by tiptoeing to the kitchen and tickling her. She would be scared. I giggled at the thought of that. And so i tiptoed to the kitchen, grateful for my flat shoes. The smell of food wafted through my nostrils again and i instantly became hungry. But getting to the kitchen, i saw an unfamiliar figure facing the cooker, stirring something that looked like jellof rice backing the entrance of the kitchen. This wasnt mummy Mabel. This one was dressed in a yellow sleeveless top and a short high way pleated skirt. Who was this? 'hello' i said. She turned and i instantly frowned 'what the hell are you doing in this house?!' 'i should be asking you that question...what are you doing here?' she eyed me. Her dreads were packed in a bun and her make up was light. She was beautiful. 'where is Nathan?' 'Nathan? Oh my darling sugarpie, he's upstairs in his room. Probably exhaused after what we just had. He's tired and hungry...Jolade' 'who told you my name you cheap disgusting slut?!!' i felt like tearing her apart, how dare she? 'first thing first, i am not a slut! If there's any slut here, that should be you. And about your name, who doesnt know that my fiance's ex-intimacy gadget was Jolade Akande? Mtcheew' 'did you just call me a sex-toy? Do you think you're any different? Nathan is only with you for the fvck, when he's done fvcking you, he comes back to his original fuckhole, which is me' 'thank God you know you're nothing but a fuckhole. Thats what you are a fuckslut! Abegee..whether original or fake, a fuckhole is always a fuckhole' 'you bitch! You....' 'whats happening here?' I turned to see Nathan standing by the door. 'Nath honey, will you please do me the favour of sending this trash outta here...she's gonna make me puke...' she walked to him and he wrapped his hand around her. 'Nathan, please tell her to leave! I know you're done fvcking her, she should go already!' i barked. 'on the contrary, i think you should be the one to leave. I'm done fvcking you, i'm done having sex with you Jolade...its enough! There's never been any engagement between us from the start but i'm calling whatever we had in the past quits right now...i need you to fuvck out right now! And forever, dont you ever step foot in this house anymore!' 'Nathan? You're telling me to leave because of this ugly thing?' 'get out Jolade! Now!!' 'i'm not going anywhere!' i fought the tears 'where's mummy? Why are you treating me this way? Do you know all i went through because of you? Did you know that i was raped by over three boys that night at the cementry..do you...' i suddenly felt nauseous again and i ran to the restroom and threw up. I coughed. This throwing up of a thing was getting worse by the day. At first, i thought it was because of a stomach upset...but this has gone on for over three weeks now. Coupled with the increase of my bust, tiredness and fatigue. Could it be..... No! TBC 7 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 11:01am On Jan 04, 2017 |
iiru:Lol...Nadia Buhari and Van Vicker... |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 11:02am On Jan 04, 2017 |
Creeza:as in eh...d tin dey totori 4 my body |
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