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| Re: Red Ashes by dahmine(f): 10:04pm On Jan 05, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:chai, good evening ma thank you for the update |
| Re: Red Ashes by iwakacome: 10:13pm On Jan 05, 2017 |
Chumzypinky, great work, nice updates. I really appreciate the fact that even from your schedules you take time to update regularly and interact with NLers, esp the kids and hubby which are number 1 priority. you're wonderful. |
| Re: Red Ashes by OviaInChambers(m): 1:10am On Jan 06, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:ah ahn aunty....GhostMode Detector. you are savvy tho. keep it up |
| Re: Red Ashes by EmmahO(m): 6:03am On Jan 06, 2017 |
[i][/i]Ghost mode deactivated......Nice work chumzy
Mummy yo!! ![]() |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 8:50am On Jan 06, 2017 |
teel123:eyaaa....wat caused d ban. Ds NL eh...dia mata aff tire me |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 8:51am On Jan 06, 2017 |
iwakacome:ohhhh....ds is d best compliment i've recieved ds yr. Thanks for understanding. U jst made me smile ds mrnin. I luv it wen my wrk is appreciated |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 8:52am On Jan 06, 2017 |
dahmine:u is welicome |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 9:26am On Jan 06, 2017 |
CHIOMA. My gaze was on the television but it was very obvious that my mind was not there. I kept thinking. I couldnt help but imagine if my daughter would ever come back to me. What if she hates me forever? Onome had promised to talk to her on my behalf...but i knew how stubborn my daughter could be. I could only hope for a miracle. My phone rang and without picking it up, i knew who was calling. The loser! It rang several times without me picking. By the time it rang for the seventh time, i decided to pick. 'what is all this rubbish for eh?' i barked. 'Chichi...' his voice was calm and remorseful 'i'm really sorry for everything. All those happened in the past and i thought i apologised for all the mistakes i made?' 'Chuks, stay away from me! Leave me alone! Is it by force to come back to you? Please leave me. You've brought nothing but pains to me! Because of you, my daughter hates me, she wants nothing to do with me any longer' 'she's not just your daughter but my daughter as well Chichi. I made so many mistakes in the past. How many times will i apologise for them?' 'even if you apologise a hundred times, a thousand times, it will never make up for all the pains and agonies you've caused me, period!' i hung up immediately. I was devastated. I was tired of life. Why was i ill-lucked? Why was i destined to live with pain for the rest of my life? I wondered. Someone walked into the sitting room. At first, i thought it was Shalewa. But when noticed the person was still standing by the door without moving, i raised my head up. 'Kainene!' i gasped. I stood up and practically ran to my daughter. I hugged her tightly and wept 'Kainene, i'm sorry. I'm sorry for everything. I should never have chosen that bastard over you. I love you dear. Please forgive me' 'its okay mummy...' she looked at me 'you look so lean...' she led me to the cushion 'have you been feeding fine at all?' I forced a smile 'of course i've been feeding fine' She gave me a doubtful look 'you're lying. Should i ask Shalewa?' 'no dont. I've not been feeling too well thats why... But, where is your luggage?' 'erm.... I've asked Kaka to drop them over for me. I'll spend the night here. But i need to go now. I just wanted to stop by to see how you're doing...' she stood up. I stood up as well 'Kainenechukwu, promise me you'll come back home' 'i will mum. I promise' 'where are you going to?' 'the mother of a friend of mine was involved in an accident and she's currently at the hospital. I want to go see her' 'which friend of yours? I thought your only friends are Moses and Kaka. Or is Moses back?' 'eh..no. That reminds me, i should even call him. He was supposed to be in Nigeria last week. Mummy, i have to go. No time' 'okay dear...' i hugged her again 'the lord bless you' 'amen' *** KAINENE. 'baby, where are you?' 'i'm on my way to the hospital now. I went to see my mum. Where are you?' 'i'm at home' 'doing what? Nathan, dont you know that this is an opportunity to renew your relationship with your mum? You should be with her at all times. You're the only one that can help her regain her memory right now' I heard him sigh 'okay. I'm coming over to the hospital right now. We'll meet there' 'alright Sugar' 'i love you Nene' 'i love you too dear' I hung up. I felt contented and happy. Who could have ever thought i was ever going to fall in love? I drove into ITC Hospital, parked my red Honda Element and got down. As i walked into the hospital, my phone rang. It was an unknown number 'hello?' 'hey babe!' 'sorry, who is this?' 'MozB hon. I'm in Niger now' I screamed in excitement 'are you serious?! Oh my geez! When did you enter the country?' 'na yesterday i ball in oo. Make you and Kaka come make we hang out na' 'i no go dull for that one abeg. Na you go call Kaka oo. Me and her get small clash' 'you and Kaka sef. Una own dey una body. Anyhow levels be, we go hang out 1974, no lele' 'dont dull. I dey show sharpaly' 'now now oo. I cant wait to see your beautiful face and your sexy ass, damn!' I laughed hard 'Bleep you dude!' i hung up and raced back to the car. I was going to come back to the hospital later. But i just had to see my friend. Its been over six years!!! TBC.... |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 9:46am On Jan 06, 2017 |
Sommyqueency Grazyblace |
| Re: Red Ashes by gracyblaze(f): 9:57am On Jan 06, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:Keep it up dear. Just inquisitive.... |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 10:33am On Jan 06, 2017 |
JOLADE. The doctor handed the test results to me and i read it with shaky hands. And then i saw it. I was six weeks pregnant! 'oh my goodness!' i gasped. I looked at the doctor who looked at me with so many questions in his old eyes. I picked my bag and left the office. I sat in my car pondering and pondering. I could never remember Nathan pouring his sperm inside of me. He never poured inside me. Most times he used a condom and the days he didnt, he made sure he smeared his cum all over my ass. I tried recalling. Qasa could never impregnate me, so who was responsible? Then it dawned on me. The rape incident! Fvck! Tears poured from my eyes. Nathan has ruined my life! He was the one who dropped in front of that lonely cementry that night. And it was then, those hoodlums had taken advantage of me. I was raped! Tears poured. More tears fell. Hatred formed in my heart. And i made up my mind. I wasnt going to go through this alone. I didnt care about the consequences. But Nathan was going to marry me whether he liked it or not. *** KAINENE. 'sexiest girl ever liveth!' MozB hailed. I jumped on him 'MozB, sexiest guy ever liveth!' he was sitting in a table with friends around the table, some i knew from way back, some i couldnt recognise 'i missed you' 'i missed you too sexy ass...' he winked. I hissed and lowered myself on his laps. He was my friend...not just my friend, my very bestfriend. We grew up together, thats me, Kaka and him. We were classmates, attended the same nursery school, primary school and even secondary. He was more like a brother to me. Our families knew each other very well. But then he lost his mother about a year after he left for the states to study. Mrs Veronica, a very strong and nice woman died of cancer. She, my mum and Mummy O had been very good friends as at that time. So to me, MozB was a brother and a friend and i loved him as a sister would love her brother. When we were in SS2 as at that time, he and Kaka started dating. I didnt get to know on time. It was when they were six months into the relationship and when he already deflowered her that they told me. I was mad at them. They were supposed to be brother and sisters for Christ sake! Not lovers. And i was also angry that they didnt even let me know on time. I stopped talking to them and even though they tried getting back with me, i refused talking to them. But i later forgot all about it when Kaka became pregnant! The two of them had come running to me with tears in their eyes and even though i felt like laughing at them, i couldnt. They were still my friends, no matter what. I advised Kaka to keep the baby when she suggested abortion but she refused. And i didnt even know the time she terminated the pregnancy. It was after the deed, she told me. After the abortion, she broke up with MozB. Though we still remained friends.. 'na my crotch you position this your hot Ikebe oo' MozB joked. I jokingly grinded on him 'if your like die!' 'junior go wake oo. And if Junior wake, he must chop oo' his friends around the table laughed. 'hi guys...' i greeted all of them. 'hi...' they all responded. 'have you called Kaka?' i asked MozB. 'i don call her, she say...ah! See the mumu!' i looked up to see Kaka jogging towards us. She was on a hot bumshort, one that barely covered her ass with a white sleeveless crop top and white trainers. 'carry your heavy nyash up jhor! Make i greet my love!' he gently pulled me up, then ran to Kaka. 'my boyfriend from another mother!!' Kaka shouted as they embraced. 'my love from another planet!' he pecked both her cheeks. Then he placed a simple kiss on her lips. I cleared my throat. 'na person wife you dey kiss so oo..' i said opening a bottle of snapp. 'she complain?' he led her to his sit and gently placed her on his laps 'jealousy!' he stuck out his tongue. 'see you ugly face!' Kaka looked at me, then looked away. Obviously, she was still mad. 'Nene talk sey una dey quarel...' MozB said to Kaka 'una no dey tire to quarel sef?' 'Kainene dey fvck up abeg. I don tire for her matter' Kaka said slowly rubbing his chest. MozB's hand stylishly went to her chest and i noticed he was stylishly brushing his thumb on her nipples occasionally. And it was when i saw Kaka's hardening tips through her top that i realised she wasnt wearing a bra! What were this two up to? She relaxed herself on his chest pushing her breasts towards his hand. By this time, his hand had fully covered her breast and he was squeezing. He looked at me and winked. I was irritated. This was a bar for crying out loud! His friends were around and they were smirking. And yet Kaka was doing this? I hissed loudly when i noticed she was grinding on his crotch and i angrily dragged her out of the bar. TBC |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 11:03am On Jan 06, 2017 |
Mirob make sure u comment oo |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 11:09am On Jan 06, 2017 |
Pureheart91:papa mi, wetin i do?? |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 11:10am On Jan 06, 2017 |
Twinkiet Emmadiva Ibullem |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 12:03pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Yorhmienerd |
| Re: Red Ashes by ladyverere(f): 12:20pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:Dat 1 easy na. Hilarious: Her use of words funny die even though she's serious. She knows how to put a person at ease despite d gravity of the situation. Down to earth: Mummy Onome no dey form high and mighty, no dey form I too know, or busy body. She no b hypocrite. Sensible: in the way she handles Nene and Kaka's petty fight. Same way she handled Choima. Satisfied Madam? |
| Re: Red Ashes by gtin(m): 12:23pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Hmmmm Nene and Nathan there first quarrel is arnd d corner, for going to see Mozb instead of meeting Nathan in the hospital ![]() |
| Re: Red Ashes by rachealfst(f): 12:39pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Kaka and Moz.b- pls get a room.
Jolade -bring it on....
More strength to you Chumzy. |
| Re: Red Ashes by yorhmienerd(m): 12:41pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:[color=coral]Someone cannor read in silence again ni [/color] |
| Re: Red Ashes by ladyverere(f): 12:46pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Eya. Poor Jolade. See wetin U don allow man in the person of Nathan do to U. Pregnancy from rape. I just pity Jolade. If na me na better revenge I go plan! I no go suffer am alone lia lia. |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 1:18pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
yorhmienerd:Never! U mst read and comment |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 1:19pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
ladyverere:satisfied. So Kaka and Mummy O, who's ur fav character?? |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 1:20pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
rachealfst: |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 1:21pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
iOluwaMichael |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 1:22pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Tonye72 |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 1:22pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Kayceerilyn |
| Re: Red Ashes by iOluwaMichael(m): 1:26pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:Caught in the act the second time. Ma'am, my apologies for not commenting. From now henceforth, I will try as much as possible to comment after reading every update. Hope my apology is accepted. |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 1:51pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
KAKA. 'what is all this? Why did you drag me out of there like that?' 'what is wrong with you?' Kainene fumed 'are you so shameless that you cant even tell where and when to allow a guy touch you?' 'whats that supposed to mean?' 'did you see the way MozB was touching your bust? In public? And you fully relaxed like sey una dey inside room. Have you also forgotten that you've got a fiance? Make i use that one slap you for head?' 'wetin concern you?' 'eh?' 'yes! What is your business? What is your business with who touches me and who does not? And so what if i have a fiance? I cant have fun anymore?' 'fun? Did you just say fun?' 'yes, fun! See Kainene, forget say me and you na friends, i go break your head one day. Time don dey come when i go treat your fvck up. And i go so deal with you wey be sey, by the time i'm through with you, you no go recognise yourself!' 'Kaka, na me you dey talk to like that? You? You wey be like trash for where i dey?' 'i've had enough of your nonsense! Learn to mind your business! Learn your business Kainene. Whether i fvck MozB or not, even when i'm getting married to Xaviercasmir is none of your fvcking biz. I'm not gonna use your pvssy in fvcking him. I'm gonna fvck him with ma own pvssy. And be lest assured that i'm going to do just that!' 'do what?' 'i'm gonna fvck MozB. Now he's around, i'm gonna fvck him! If you're Hot, of course you know where to get your fill. You blood-convenant partner, whatever his name is, Nathan fvcking Imore! Rubbish!' i hissed and walked away. I felt bad speaking to my friend that way. I loved Kainene yes, but she was always too full of herself. And she's always ruining people's lives with it. If you truly love a guy and you're lest assured that he loves you, why do a blood convenant. I rolled my eyes. I walked to where MozB was. He winked and squeezed my bum. I lowered myself and whispered in his ears 'gat a condom?' He looked surprised at first, then he nodded. 'lets get room. I want you fvcking my brains out like those days' He smiled 'with all pleasure ma'am' We passed Kainene and i eyed her. I was going to sleep with him and i wasnt going to give a fvck about Xaviercasmir. *** He pulled off my panties and lowered his tongue on it. I moaned in ecstacy 'oh Moses...ah!! Oh!! Yesss....down there...my clit...yeah, fvck!!' I shook as my third orgasm for the day. Then he entered me....without a condom. 'Oh Kainene, you're so sweet!' he moaned as he pulled in and pulled out slowly. It rang in my memory. At first, i thought he either made a mistake or i was the one who didnt hear right. He pulled out and went in again, this time harder 'oh Kainene, i love you. You're the one i love....' and then he was jerking 'i love youuuuuu Nene....i love you.....so....much......ah! Ah!' He grunted and i pushed him away. I quickly wore my clothes and left the room even before he regained himself. TBC |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 1:59pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
iOluwaMichael:its nt acceptd until i c ur comments henceforth.. |
| Re: Red Ashes by berhdo: 2:06pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Nice update. Itz becoming more more interesting. More ink to ur pen |
| Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(op): 2:16pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Melodyogonna Chara019 Boldndbeautiful... I is saw u guys |
| Re: Red Ashes by melodyogonna(m): 2:31pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
i is following bumber to bumber |
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