Angelinastto:
Hi Bibi.... Never give up honey, i see the potential. Its in you!

True..I just read thru ur updates and I agree its in you like peak
Ure gonna reach ur peak

lecheM Dapo97 segzy17 sunshine46 Angelinastto.... Thanks all for following this piece of art.... I sight y'all. thanks 4 d dedication bae..nice update..#magic fingers .

Thanks for the dedication. Really grateful.

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lecheM
Dapo97
segzy17
sunshine46
Angelinastto....
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I was sitting on the long bench outside my room that fateful night when Caro came, at first, I thought Magic fingers was in Sheyi's not until Caro passed Sheyi door and knocked at Onome's door, she knocked softly that no one could smell the danger lurking around until Sheyi came outside his room.
"Babe, how far?" He said grinning"Magic fingers no dey here na" he said smiling sheepishly.
"Do I tell you I'm looking for Magic fingers, e don't dey house na, I wan borrow comb from Onome"
"Okay" Sheyi said and knocked. "Onome, come out o, na me" it was later we knew Sheyi knew Caro's plan but decided to watch free match between Onome' Pacquiao' and Caro eyan mayweather.. He was seeing Onome and was jealous magic fingers enjoyed Onome more than him. Onome opened the door and before she could look up, Caro dragged her out letting her towel fell and believe me, she was stark naked, Mama Susan handed a readily prepared water and garri to Caro who bathed with it, they fought and Onome who was already naked tore Caro's top revealing some fresh flesh, the fight was so interesting that everybody in the street including the Okada riders were all watching free porn movie. Even though, most of them had tasted Onome, Caro's visible upper body was the center of attraction. Caro sighted Magic fingers who was almost escaping and they started another round of argument, Magic fingers exposed his girlfriend claiming he was not in love with her again because after spending his money onher, she still drew sex timetable for him and Onome, the animashaun was there to service him. They argued and fought for over 45minutes when we heard a shout... Onome ran outside in paining shouting on the top of her voice, she was followed by a man who was in boxers who ran speedily out of our compound , everyone was confused and lost, even Caro and Magic fingers had to step outside for the new episode of the seasonal movie. A womancame out of Onome's room with a bucket half filled with pepper, to cut the story short, when onome saw that Magic fingers and Caro were arguing and fighting, everyone was engrossed that no one knew when Mr. Hammed, the banker entered into her room, Mama Susan on seeing her rushed to call Mrs. Hammed who hurriedly brought along a bucket of pepper anddud justice to Onome and her husband. No one knew when Caro and magic fingers left our compound and the next morning, they were together, Magic fingers drove Caro to school, I SMH,

Dear readers, would you be in a relationship suffering domestic violence? What's your take on this before I move on

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Dear readers, would you be in a relationship suffering domestic violence? What's your take on this before I move on[/quote]
i cnt tolerate such so neva, ure rili tryin sis am enjoyin d story,waitin for next episode

Bibi294:


claiming he was not in love with her again because after spending his money onher, she still drew sex timetable for him

A thumbs up emoticon is highly needed!..head bursting


Dear readers, would you be in a relationship suffering domestic violence? What's your take on this before I move on

I might compromise on other things but not domestic violence.

P.s: keep it up!

Bibi love,i'm glad u were able to update ds evening and thanks for d dedication...and talking about domestic violence,it's a NO NO for me o,I'd rathr become a reverend sister bfr I dream of finding myself in such...btw,make d next update ASAP,okay?...**thumbs up dear**

Dear readers, would you be in a relationship suffering domestic violence? What's your take on this before I move on
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thanks 4 d dedication bae..i don't fink i can tolerate DAT oo...I will rather let it go!mi o lemi e

Lemme call my friends please, op(Bibi294) this your moniker get as he be o:

Bibijay123
Veekid
Yhormienerd
Twaci
Skarlett
Cinderellashoes
Sotozo
Uanda
Chipappii
Hibiscus
Ishilove
Come and saw what I'm sawing

maggilove:
Lemme call my friends please, op(Bibi294) this your moniker get as he be o:

Bibijay123
Veekid
Yhormienerd
Twaci
Skarlett
Cinderellashoes
Sotozo
Uanda
Chipappii
Hibiscus
Ishilove
Come and saw what I'm sawing

here we go

Waiting for the next episode Don't forget to mention me

Bibi294:
Walking aimlessly through the street of Ado Ekiti has become my hobby, I woke up like every other tenants in my lodge, got dressed and hurry to catch a cab in pretence of going to work was my everyday routine. I am Aderinola, a 24- year old graduate of Psychology from Ekiti State. I grew up in Ekiti but was lucky to have schooled in UNILAG. I served in Kebbi State and if there is a profession I hated, twas teaching.... I had gotten a job to teach at a standard secondary school in Odo- Ado but being a big Unilag graduate, I could not stoop so low to teaching a group of readymade spoilt brat who were coming to school to get a WAEC certificate....
My parents were based in Ilawe Ekiti, father was a reknown and " rich farmer" and mother was a trader... But to my friends except Fiwasaye, my father was a retired "rich" soldier and my mother, a businesswoman who was based on clothing's... Yes l! My mother was a businesswoman or is there any difference between businesswoman and trader... Both r selling stuffs! And she was into clothing's too because she was selling inner wears to some local market woman in Ilawe Ekiti. I hate to admit my parents r illiterates, but they were... Stark illiterates!! My dad could speak Yoruba fluently and he could communicate in English a little but my weird mother was prone tour native dialect, she could not speak fluent Yoruba and she was never afraid to speak it not even when she came to Lagos to visit me while I was in school.
After my graduation, being their only surviving and educated daughter, my parents wanted me home but I bluntly refused., not after tasting the sweet life of Lagos but after much pleas from within and without, I agreed to settle down in Ado Ekiti, the state capital of Ekiti State, the fountain of knowledge and the state with the highest number of professors... Of the greatest "ule uyi,ule eye". My parents rented a "self-con" for me in Falegan, a serene street along Ilawe road. I lived a double life, to my co- tenants, they believed I'm a lucky rich girl who worked in ACCESSBANK but truthfully, I dressed to kill. I took my time taking my bath and wearing makeup. Bet with me, I can name 10perfumes under #200 which had sweet scents... I use Dallas perfume and pocket perf and a couple of sprays. I possessed one thousand and one suits, suits were my favourite ranging from skirt to trouser suits... While in the uni,I was being mistskened for a banking and finance student and it went on till my graduation. Fiwasaye knew much about my second life, the pauper village girl, she was fond of calling me corporate omo oko or corporate ashewo

Ilawe.... My maternal home... Okepa quaters Falana house to be precise... Home of yeye ilawe mama Anjorin... All is well my dearest sister... You can actually make a fortune from writing... I am sure the deals will come in... All the best...

Bibi294:
I will stop here since people are not finding it interesting

I have to stop reading at this point. why? Your grammar is poor. Most people read to improve their grammar. This work will make it worse.

Thanks 4d dedication,kindly and patiently waiting 4d next episode.....God is ur strength

Bibi dearie, comman finish the story naaa.. I've been following, observing and reading each update with zealous interest. Nice everything, and kudos

NICE one BiBi, comma complete the story nau, i am following bumper to bumper

ireneidiva:

I have to stop reading at this point. why? Your grammar is poor. Most people read to improve their grammar. This work will make it worse.

it was written in the beginning that she will defy literary laws in her story and people still liked it.... Don't be the odd one

You started well..it seems like u are deviating from the previous story...nice work, keep it up

KaBabs1:
Hello bibi294,

I like your story. I wonder if you're free, I would like you to write for me at a fee. The story is a children fiction and it's just 5k words. I can provide you with samples to guide you in case you've never written anything like it. If interested contact me at adeyinkaa9 @ g mail. com

Hi, I'm a writer as well. You can check my stories too, here is the recently concluded one https://www.nairaland.com/3515477/religion-jingoism-how-three-friends#51870475, glance through maybe you'll like it.
I wont mind working with you.

If you like it/them, you can contact me on geniusdewriterAT gmail dot com.

Thanks.

dingbang:
it was written in the beginning that she will defy literary laws in her story and people still liked it.... Don't be the odd one

Odd one? You want me to like a badly written work?

ireneidiva:

Odd one? You want me to like a badly written work?

but it was clearly written in the first place .... And the content of the story is interesting and captivating. I know a lot of grammatically correct literature that are just boring ... So whether it is a good or badly written work, as long as the story is interesting, any other thing does not matter.. Mind you she can also come up with a good written work.. Its just like one being able to speak pidjin English and plain English at d same time..

Bibi294:
Dear readers, pls I've aqueston for u guys esp.old members of this forum... I'm relatively new and I hardly know how things r done here....
My question
Abeg, been seeing something like "**** has emailed u... Check ur mail now and when I do, I'm told I'm not connected... Abeg wetin this message mean and wetin I go do? No blame me if this question sounded dumb... No blame me... I b poor Ekiti babe

Chai!!! Guys sha!!!


They don dey bombard you with mails... No wahala

Bibi294:

Omo, I'm fed up... I could imagine and trust me, I've loads of stories in my room but the pro is laziness... Moreso, people here r not encouraging making me feel the story is less interesting... Nice meeting u dearie

. That's how we roll here. They will make you feel your story is not interesting, meanwhile, check the number views.

Besides, all they wanna read is sex scenes not knowing it's not everyone writer such.

To comment is just their wahala, they almost killed my morale too back then but trust me, your story is interesting though there are things you need to correct.

No time to go into that now, as I'm enjoying every bit of the tale.

Ride on jare, I got your Barca... Oh sorry, Shina got that one..

dingbang:
but it was clearly written in the first place .... And the content of the story is interesting and captivating. I know a lot of grammatically correct literature that are just boring ... So whether it is a good or badly written work, as long as the story is interesting, any other thing does not matter.. Mind you she can also come up with a good written work.. Its just like one being able to speak pidjin English and plain English at d same time..

op please edit your work. case closed.

really interesting story you gat Bibi...patiently awaiting your update o. As per staying in a home where I am being abused, hmmmnnn God forbid. Still wanna enjoy life before one useless idiot kill me n move on to the next woman.

ireneidiva:

op please edit your work. case closed.

hian... Easy nA .. Sha ur opinion doesn't matter.

I can see you live a fake life

ireneidiva:

I have to stop reading at this point. why? Your grammar is poor. Most people read to improve their grammar. This work will make it worse.

I'm reading for the sake of the gist, not the English this time around.

Endure or dont.

You've tried. Bye

ireneidiva:

Odd one? You want me to like a badly written work?

Sister, I fear you o. You dey kill morale faster than insecticide

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