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Re: Red Ashes by yorhmienerd(m): 9:07pm On Feb 10, 2017
Chumzypinky:
he needs it like seriously
LOL. I just weak for the guy
This kind rule David rule go hard small o sad
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 9:09pm On Feb 10, 2017
lol @ man must change oil, when will this Kaka learn, anyways I'm not in support of premarital sex o, but I must check and confirm the functionality of the goods before buying, u get it na. mummy pinky, I doff my hat for you. Hope baby is kicking. God is your muscle
Re: Red Ashes by harunablezin(f): 9:10pm On Feb 10, 2017
nawa 4 sum ladies oooo......weldone ma, gud work
Re: Red Ashes by comelyJummy(f): 9:14pm On Feb 10, 2017
Dave my main man. Kaka just endure till wedding night you hear. The place no go rust so no need to change oil.

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 9:17pm On Feb 10, 2017
Lol.................this Dave guy wan sha spoil work for kamsy.
Re: Red Ashes by chara019: 10:10pm On Feb 10, 2017
words can't explain how much I love this story....it is wonderfully written ma'am ...abeg chop kiss,*no homo o*

I love that the story ,usually come up with subject matters to talk bout,like blood covenant, early sex exposure, ritual things (chioma mum),premarital sex....ma'am chumzy..you are simply the best..


I sha want a verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry looooooooooooooooooong update..Thanks.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:14pm On Feb 10, 2017
chara019:
words can't explain how much I love this story....it is wonderfully written ma'am ...abeg chop kiss,*no homo o*

I love that the story ,usually come up with subject matters to talk bout,like blood covenant, early sex exposure, ritual things (chioma mum),premarital sex....ma'am chumzy..you are simply the best..


I sha want a verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry looooooooooooooooooong update..Thanks.
looooonnnngggg indeed. Abeg bring ur mouth closer 4 d kiss
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 10:19pm On Feb 10, 2017
Chumzypinky:

looooonnnngggg indeed. Abeg bring ur mouth closer 4 d kiss
pls wetin do OI
Re: Red Ashes by deewhydoski(m): 11:02pm On Feb 10, 2017
Dis kaka self like toto...she will never learn. Na food?
People use to say na women dey enjoy sex pass....na true?
Mama story teller i gbadun ur story die na because of u i registered on dis platform. I'm a ghost reader before.
Wait ooo dis story for don reach season 5 episode 12 for nollywood oooi...chimpinky u go make money frm dis story one day. I doff my hat 4 u.

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Re: Red Ashes by Gideonzino(m): 11:28pm On Feb 10, 2017
Good turn!
Re: Red Ashes by ladyverere(f): 8:20am On Feb 11, 2017
deewhydoski:
Dis kaka self like toto...she will never learn. Na food?
People use to say na women dey enjoy sex pass....na true?
Mama story teller i gbadun ur story die na because of u i registered on dis platform. I'm a ghost reader before.
Wait ooo dis story for don reach season 5 episode 12 for nollywood oooi...chimpinky u go make money frm dis story one day. I doff my hat 4 u.

E pass food sef.
Re: Red Ashes by Queengolden(f): 10:37am On Feb 11, 2017
laughing in spanish.......................................... Mummy pinky i need my meal oh wen full the plate wella
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 11:25am On Feb 11, 2017
deewhydoski:
Dis kaka self like toto...she will never learn. Na food?
People use to say na women dey enjoy sex pass....na true?
Mama story teller i gbadun ur story die na because of u i registered on dis platform. I'm a ghost reader before.
Wait ooo dis story for don reach season 5 episode 12 for nollywood oooi...chimpinky u go make money frm dis story one day. I doff my hat 4 u.
hmm
Re: Red Ashes by hatchetman(m): 11:39am On Feb 11, 2017
Chumzypinky:
hmm
ansa d queshon...wetin b hmm?
Re: Red Ashes by deewhydoski(m): 12:28pm On Feb 11, 2017
Anybody fit answer d question..i dont know it dats y i dey ask. I'm a novice in it. Dose that ave done it should share dere experience either male or female.
Abeg more update mama pinky
Re: Red Ashes by Stellamariss(f): 2:01pm On Feb 11, 2017
I love dis story ,pls op update am not happy now, I need something dat will motivate me
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:20pm On Feb 11, 2017
KAINENE.
I was surprised when MummyM called me and requested i meet her at her company. At first, i wondered if she was perhaps trying to reconcile Nathan and i. I was so excited at that thought that i hurriedly put on a yellow knee-length chiffon gown. And funny enough, the gown was bought for me by Nathan. The gown was simple but i loved it. Maybe it was because it was bought for me by someone i loved. Or maybe it was because i loved yellow naturally.

And as i drove my late mum's brown venzer, i decided there were some things i needed to do with my life. I wasnt working or earning money at the moment. The money i spent on feeding and other expenses were both from my mum's account and mine. In no time, i knew if i kept spending without depositing, the money would be exhausted, though it may actually take more than five years for the money to be completely exhausted without making heaving expenses like buying a car or building a house.

Mother had several houses and landed properties all over the state and at her demise, they automatically became mine to handle.

I thought of what to do with them. I thought of selling one or two of them and starting up a business. I've always wanted to dive into make-up, decoration and catering business and this was the opportunity.

I had a baby coming already. And so time was coming when i had to plan my life and that of my baby's. At least, i had a house, several houses which i might just put on rent. Mother had three estates. Since i had a house, i knew that rent was out of the way. I had a car so buying a car was completely out of it. I knew that if i plan my life well, i would never suffer. It all depends on planning.

I made up my mind that after my meeting with MummyM, i was going to speak with Attorney Marybeth, an English woman that was mother's attorney. I was going to sell a landed property and use the proceeds to start up my dream business. I smiled inwardly.

'good day, i'm here to see Mabel Imore' i said to the friendly-looking secretary.

'do you have an appointment with her?'

'uhm, not really official but she asked me to come. Just tell her Kainene Igho...i mean Kainenechukwu Claire Chioma is here to see her'

I saw the wierd look on the secretary or rather receptionist's face. Maybe she had never seen someone bearing a female name as a surname. I just smiled. She pressed the intercom, spoke with who i guessed was MummyM, then she asked me to go in 'the fourth door by the left' I shrugged, that wasnt MummyM's office. But then, maybe she moved.

The moment i stepped into the office, my eyes locked with Nathan's. He was seating with his mom opposite him and i could tell this was his office, and not his mom's.

MummyM was dressed in a black pencilled skirt that fully hugged her figure with a dark pink packet shirt with black peeptoes, she looked official.

She turned to me when she obviously noticed my presence 'come here' she said. She wasnt smiling neither was she frowning.

I moved closer to her not understanding why i was suddenly feeling nervous.

'sit' she said. And i did.

I heard Nathan sigh 'mom, i have an appointment now, see you later' he gathered som documents and stood up.

'Nathan, your ass back on that seat' MummyM said not smiling.

'mum, i said...'

'are you deaf?! I said your ass down'

Our eyes met then he grudgingly sat down after muttering something that sounded like 'so annoying'

'maybe its time the both of you started explaining all thats been screwing both your heads for sometime now. Because i've been made to understand that the both of you has been busy fooling both yourselves and your lives' MummyM spoke with so much venom and i knew she was angry 'you both better tell me about the blood convenant you both made before i lose it!'

I was surprised. How did she know? Nathan!

'mum, there's nothing to talk about. We made a blood oath and it has been annulled, what is there to tell you about now?' Nathan grumbled.

'are you talking to me?'

'mum, you dont have to do this seriously. I dont really know what your aim for holding this meeting here in my office but i advice that you quit. Seriously quit! Because i wont let you butt into my life affairs, i'm very serious. I know the blood oath was bad but then i'm glad it didnt work. You can see Nene, she's totally fine, does she look like a mentally deranged person to you? Do i also look like a mad person to you? Nothing's gonna happen mum. I understand that you're worried and concerned, but there's really nothing for you to be worried about. We were both in our sane minds when we both made that oath. The oath isnt working mum'

'shut up!' MummyM barked startling me 'shut up before i do something thats going to land me in jail for the rest of my life you fool! Not even a word from you. You're not allowed to speak until you're asked, is that clear?'

'mum, stop...'

'Nathan be quiet' i said 'cant you see she's angry? Cant you just be quiet for once?'

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:52pm On Feb 11, 2017
He sent me an icy stare 'just mind your business will you? Because i never really spoke to you since you foolishly walked in here'

'what?! Did you just say i foolishly walked in here?' i was pissed.

'yes i did, what you gonna do?'

I banged my fist on the table really tempted to use strong language. But i respected myself knowing that MummyM was present.

And before i could even get a grip on myself, papers were flying over the office. MummyM was throwing whatever she could towards Nathan's direction and he tried dodging. The air conditioner wasnt helping matters either and soon, the office floor was a complete mess.

I almost laughed at the funny look on Nathan's face when his mother finally controlled herself.

'have you seen the mess you've made?' he said to his mum.

I rolled my eyes until i saw a picture on the floor just beside my left foot. Out of curiousity, i picked up the picture but before i could take a closer look at it, he snatched it from my hands 'dont! Dont touch anuthing here that belongs to me'

'Nathan, go back to your seat' MummyM said firmly. Then he went back to his seat after tucking the picture back into his pockets.

'i'm sorry i overreacted' MummyM said 'after this meeting, i'll send for a cleaner to wipe out this mess. But then Nathan, next time when i tell you to stop talking, please obey, because today, i managed to get a grip on myself. Next time, things would or rather might be different' then she looked at me 'i had a terrible dream last night, i...'

'oh mum!' Nathan sighed 'i've told you to stop talking about this dream, it isnt going to come to pass'

MummyM ignored him and continued talking 'in that dream, you both ran mad. And after forcing words from Nathan's mouth, i came to realise there was a blood convenant between you two. Kainene, why?' For the first time, mummyM actually called me Kainene 'that was unnecessary. If truly you both claimed to love each other, why the oath? Was it insecurity or what?'

Nathan and i looked at each other.

I didnt know what to say.

'it was obviously insecurity because plus the oath minus the oath, Kainene never trusted me. She was always insecured, always suspecting i'm cheating on her. Very disrespectful with a very saucy mouth, very spoilt! I cannot tolerate her any longer mum. Its better we go our separate ways else i might be forced to go back to my old ways of beating women' Tears stung my eyes.

'Nathan shut up' his mother barked.

'mum, you requested to know what went wrong. Yes, she went wrong. Kainene is very saucy. At every little opportunity or misunderstanding, she doesnt misuse the opportunity of actually insulting me, degrading my personality. Can i count the number of times she has even slapped me?' i heard MummyM gasped 'you think if she isnt given the opportunity she wont beat me up? Do you think that i would like to spend the rest of my life with a woman that doesnt trust me not to talk of one who's so disrespectful to the extent she slaps and insults me in public? Mum, please, you would never understand whats going on between Kainene and i. You'll never know the type of woman she is because you aint the one dating her. Kainene is very saucy and rude. I cant stand her anymore. No guy can even tolerate half of even what i tolerated. I love her, yes i do. But she can go to hell now because i found a better woman. A woman thats going to respect me and treat me as her hero. Even when i'm going wrong, she wont insult me rather, she'd correct me. Not the one thats going to make me feel worthless. See mum, whether blood conevant or no blood convenant, its over between Kainene and i. If we're both destined to run mad, then so be it! Because i prefer being a mad man that being with such a woman! Sometimes, i actually wonder what made me fall in love with her in the first place because she doesnt deserve it. I dont want to ever set my eyes on her again because her mere presence disgusts me, i cant stand the sight of her! So irritating' he looked at me, then to his mum, then picked some files that was unscattered, then stored out of the office.

My heart shattered. I was heartbroken. I'd lost him.

TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by yorhmienerd(m): 2:59pm On Feb 11, 2017
Speechless!
Re: Red Ashes by mizchoc(f): 3:07pm On Feb 11, 2017
kainene Don Bleep up jor
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 3:07pm On Feb 11, 2017
deewhydoski:
Dis kaka self like toto...she will never learn. Na food?
People use to say na women dey enjoy sex pass....na true?
Mama story teller i gbadun ur story die na because of u i registered on dis platform. I'm a ghost reader before.
Wait ooo dis story for don reach season 5 episode 12 for nollywood oooi...chimpinky u go make money frm dis story one day. I doff my hat 4 u.

Is sweeter than food.
Re: Red Ashes by deewhydoski(m): 3:08pm On Feb 11, 2017
Nathan don vex big time....is better for both of u to come back to ur senses because d blood oath is not a joke
Re: Red Ashes by spiceybae(f): 3:12pm On Feb 11, 2017
walahi dz kainene na fish brain she get.....choi abeg who.get common sense fr his or her closet nene can make do wit sum....
Re: Red Ashes by deewhydoski(m): 3:12pm On Feb 11, 2017
[b][/b]mama pinky nice updtae...i love it.....being a writer is a talent i dnt think is something u can force urself into
Re: Red Ashes by adebriana(f): 3:13pm On Feb 11, 2017
Wow.... Kainene really deserves this, she crossed her boundaries so many times, Nathan tolerated too much cos of love. He should have set her straight from the start, he really tried tho. Only few men will tolerate her. Now I wish she isn't pregnant cos that and the blood covenant will make Nathan go back to her. Perhaps she has learnt her lesson now, Nathan should just torture her a bit more before reconciling.

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Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 3:15pm On Feb 11, 2017
(that's it! man must change oil....not road side oil ooo A-Z Oil grin) if i say i dont love kaka then ayam mad

if keke like make she run mad na she sabi undecided
Re: Red Ashes by Queengolden(f): 3:16pm On Feb 11, 2017
pls kianene shouldnt give up on nathan oh
Re: Red Ashes by Queenbee123: 3:40pm On Feb 11, 2017
Stop blaming Kainene. To start with, she doesn't have any manly feature in her life except Mozb. When the story started, we were told that she hate MEN with passion. It's her first guy and the best way to keep her guy is by slapping and insulting him for love. #LMAO

All Nathan need to do is punish her for a while and make them come together.
And it seems she has learnt her lesson now cos she never saw what she did wrong and she has fallen and refused to rise in LOVE with her Darling Nathan.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 4:32pm On Feb 11, 2017
wizsolzy:
(that's it! man must change oil....not road side oil ooo A-Z Oil grin) if i say i dont love kaka then ayam mad

if keke like make she run mad na she sabi undecided
man mst 2 change oil, no be small
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 4:33pm On Feb 11, 2017
Lemme try something

hello
wow, i've learnt something new
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 5:05pm On Feb 11, 2017
Chumzypinky:

man mst 2 change oil, no be small

mummy chumzy dey game... cheesy cheesy cheesy

i no form gentle man reach dat side i must change re-change over-change oil before i marry any gal grin grin grin grin
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:47pm On Feb 11, 2017
wizsolzy:


mummy chumzy dey game... cheesy cheesy cheesy

i no form gentle man reach dat side i must change re-change over-change oil before i marry any gal grin grin grin grin
yeye son

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