Omg! Cnt Seem To Get Enof Of Ds 1derful Story,keep It Up And Holla Me Ur Update

mercyymai:
nice story that got me glue to my fone for hours....... can't wait for more update.

I know that Dave just want to use amaka becos she is from the village and amaka too no try at all. she shu have take her time before giving in to Dave.

thumb up sis

Lets nur conclude yet.. bcoz he greeted hz ex doesn't mean they r still lovers.. Let wait till marianneada updates the story then we can say whether he iz cheating on amaka or nt

Marianneada, ayam enjoying diz, biko give us more updates

I don't know if it is a crime to come from a village..! stupid

CONTINUATION.................................

I moved towards their direction, immediately they saw me coming, they stopped their discuss, but Nelson wasn't Happy.
"what are you doing here all alone, my love" Dave asked me,
I'm actually searching for Chy, "i lied to him.Nelson walked passed us with anger written all over him.i didnt bother over his countenance, because i'm getting used to his attitudes. Dave hugged me and kissed me on the lips, he started caressing my back, i pulled away from him,i have made it clear to him that there will be no sex until we get married, and he accepted it wholeheartedly,
" What's wrong with you?, you've not even noticed my presence since i came, you didnt even compliment my look,all you're after is my body," i told him angrily.
"ooh, i'm sorry baby, it's just that i've been so busy, dont worry i'll soon have time for you, just sit now there," he pointed at an empty seat, i'll soon be done, i need to attend to some guests, "he zoomed off again, i turned and saw Chy coming my direction,
" madam, where have you been?, you just abandoned me, "
" it's not that, mum called me, we won't spend much time here, i need to do something for her before she returns tomorrow, "
" hmmm, this must be really serious, "
......... The party started, the chief celebrant was called up to cut his birthday.
" pls it's my honour to invite the celebrant 's heartthrob, to join him in cutting the cake"the MC announced, i looked at Chy to encourage me to walk to the stage, but she was busy with her phone,
i made to stand up when the same girl i saw Dave hugging came to the stage, they were all smiles, i thought i was dreaming, they cut the cake, the girl even fed him cake, i couldn't take the insult anymore, i called Chy,
" Chy, pls can we leave now, "i told her,
" why the shdden change of mind?",she looked at me closely, "since you dont want to stay, let me search for Nelson and tell him of our departure, "she stood up and left.
Dave walked up to me and pretended nothing happened,
"baby hope you're having fun?,"
"thank you so much for inviting me to your party to introduce your girlfriend to me, i've been a fool thinking i made the right choice, you just want to use and dump me, thank God my eyes are now opened" i told him almost crying,
"baby please don't talk like that, that girl is my ex girlfriend, we broke up some months ago, she called begging me to attend my party, she has always cherished cutting my birthday cakes, this was her last wish, there's nothing more in that," he explained
I looked at him, i saw sincerity in what he said,
"let me just believe you, "he smiled then pecked me on the chic, dont allow my ex to spoil our wonderful night. Let's drink na"
" waiter, pls get us our special drink, "he ordered
They served us our drinks and we toasted to our relationshi,
I was enjoying my conversation with him when i started feeling started dizzy after sometime, i don't know what was happening to me,
" pls dear, i want to use the toilet, "i told him
He led the way, i was almost falling while walking, he held me, we went to his bedroom where i eased myself, when i came out i called him,
" Dave pls take me downstairs, Chy will be looking for me",
"dont worry nobody will look for you, i'll take care of you," he assured me, i saw him taking off his clothes, my sight was blurred, i couldn't see clearly,
"Baby you need to lay down and rest"
He carried me to the bed, he placed me on his bed, then started kissing my neck and face, i wanted to stop him but i had no strength, i tried fighting him but i dnt have any strength, i was begging him to leave me alone, then he pulled down his boxers and was completely unclad,
immediately i saw the size of his penis i passed out...................

Hahahaaa I most definitely saw this coming like a Mile away Naivety just

Hope some one will come to rescue!!!! Am feeling for village girl indeed

Dave is such a jerk! And as for Amaka, being a village girl doesn't make you naive or stupid! I just hope Nelson will save her.
Keep it coming Marianneada

since morning u just abandons us for here ave open ur thread more than 50times today please I am begging u no let DAT tin happen to her plsss more update biko

I woke the next morning and saw myself in Chy 's room, i tried to get up but my head was heavy, i was having serious headache,
"What happened to me?," my head was pounding, i held my head and called out to Chy, no one answered me, i checked the time, it was 11am,
"Jesus, what is going on?, i' ve never slept like this, and i'm supposed to be in class by now, i jumped out of bed and searched for a pain relief in Chy's cabinet, i saw it and drank it, i decided to bathe, it was when i was in the bathroom that i remembered all that happened,
"Oooh my God!, Dave has killed me, what have i done?, i've been a fool, "i cried so much in the bathroom, i spent more than 1hour in the bathroom crying, i came out and wore a short gown, i dont feel like talking or seeing anyone except my mother or mummy Amanda,,
......


" She's supposed to be back by now, i told myself
I ran to her room, i flung the door open and saw her watching television, i rushed to her and hugged her, i held her so tightly, i didnt want to release her,
" my baby, why are you crying?, i came back and met you asleep, i was told you're ill, i've called the doctor, he's on his way, calm down, you'll be ok" my mummy told me to sit down
"mummy, they lied to you, they lied to you!, i..... was..... dru... gged...... a... n.. d... ra.... ped!,," i stammered, my nose was running freely as i sobbed uncontrollably .
"calm down dear, tell me who raped you?, i've never seen mummy so angry, she was already boiling with anger,
" the idiot that raped you must be jailed, i'll deal with that peron, does the he goat know who you are?, does he know where you're from?, he's playing with fire" she thundered,
"Who is the he goat that raped you?!,
" Dave, he fooled me"
" I knew it," i swear i'll involve the press in this, i must ruin his father's political ambition, he'll never know peace in his life,"she caused him,
"Dont worry my baby, i'll take you to the hospital right away," she instructed me, someone spoke from the door
"mummy he didnt succeed in raping her" , that was Chy's voice, she entered the room,then continued,
"Amy, God loves you, Dave nearly raped you,he was about pulling your clothes when his girlfriend walked in,she saw what he was about to do, then ran out and called Nelson, when we came in, you were unconscious, we carried you into the car and left, Nelson wanted to strangle him to death but he escaped, that boy is shameless, i despise him, "
I hugged her and cried the more,this time it was tears of joy, thank God i wasn't raped.
" there's no need thanking me, just thank Nelson, he was the one that carried you to the car, "
" Pls, where's he?, i need to thank him, "
" He resumed work at the office today, he'll be back in the evening, there's no need mourning over nothing, we've missed our lectures today, "
" i'm so sorry a about that, it's my stupidity that caused that, i'll never forgive Dave,what if Lizzy had seen them in that condition, this is an eye opener, i've learnt alot in this, i need to shine my eyes, village girl attitude must stop. I'm a changed person now.

ope o

Kip 'em comin, kip 'em rolling

thank God ooooooo

Oh Tnk God She Was Nt Raped, Bless U Dear More Ink To Ur Pen..... ;DOh Tnk God She Was Nt Raped, Bless U Dear More Ink To Ur Pen.....

*heaves a sigh of relief* Thank God!
Thanks for the update.

keep it up,more updates pls.keep it up,more updates pls.keep it up,more updates pls.

Nice story. Keep it up admin. I so much love it. More ink to your pen

Good morning my lovely followers, thank you all for your lovely comments, i really appreciate, luv you all

we love u too I tot is new update biko give us breakfast

Nice one Marian, please keep updating

abefe99:
we love u too I tot is new update biko give us breakfast

lols, don't worry i'll update later in the day.

We hungry for more. Getting impatient after visiting more than 20ce with no updates. But I most commend dear...Nice write up

marianneada:
lols, don't worry i'll update later in the day.

"i prepared luch for us,let's go and eat" Chy announced,..... i was so hungry that i could swallow a human, we all went to the dining and ate. After eating, I called my course rep to know what's happening in school, he informed me of the quiz we would write the nexf day ,i informed him that i was indisposed, hefelt sorry for me,, immediately i ended the call, i started reading my books,...... i was engrossed in my reading that i didnt know when Nelson returned.
Chy ran into the room to announce his presence, as if his presence is a jackpot., "He's back oooo," Chy announced, my skipped immediately she said that, i pretended not to know who she was talking about,
"Who are you talking about" i asked her feigning ignorance of who she was talking about,
"ask me again, i think you need a good slap to reset your brain" she told me, i laughed at what she said.she stood up and was coming to where i sat, i spoke up immediately.
"Ok, i now remember, when did he returned"?
" Some hours ago,"
"am i supposed to go to his room, let me wait for him downstairs,and pls i cant even talk to him alone"
"No wahala, take one of the maids with you, at least they will help you talk,"
"U no well, you want him to send us out of his room," i asked her
"so you know, and you're asking me,you're on your own oo, i'm not going anywhere with you".
.... Her phone rang, she went downstairs to talk to her boyfriend, i was left alone,the thought of all that happened to me came back again, i was really hurt, the first man i tried to start a relationship with hurt me so much, i didnt know when tears starting dropping from eyes, i regret ever rushing into the relationship, mummy warned me, she said i should listen to my heart, but i listened to my head,a guy i dont feel anything for, loving him is not what i'm sure of,i prayed inwardly asking God to always direct me in all i do, i was now crying, feeling bad for what happened to me, imagine what Dave's girlfriend will think of me, i dont even know how many people saw me lying unconscious on the bed, i was still in my thoughts when someone spoke up.
"take and wipe your face," a voice said to me, i looked up and saw Nelson standing before me,he gave me his white handkerchief,
"Eeem...., i didnt know you were here, good evening, "i didnt know what to say,
" There's no need crying, you should be thankful that he didn't rape you, "
This guy is so cute, he just had his bath, God!, this boy is handsome,i'm beginning to feel somehow around him, anytime i see him, my heart skips,
" So tell me, how're you feeling now?, he asked me
"yeah, i'm fine, "i couldn't look straight into his eyes," thank you for helping me last night, i'll forever be indebted to you ", he asked me a question that got me confused
" Are you sure about that,? "
I looked at him and only nodded,
" i know i've been rude to you, i tried warning you, but i guess i warned you the wrong way, i think it's time to correct my wrongs,i promise to be a better brother to you, i'll always be there for you, ".
I looked at him,i wont trust any guy again,i dont know what this one wants from me, Dave is his friend,and like they say, birds of a feather.........,
" thank you"that was all i could say, "i want to go and check on mummy," i told him,
"You're free to go," he replied me.
I went downstairs to nowhere, i just wanted to leave his presence.


CONTINUATION
My life changed for the better,Our first Semester exam has started, i read my books like i never did, i put everything that happened behind me, Dave has been calling me but i refused picking his calls, he sends me messages everyday.
" I dont really know what this guy wants from me,why is he disturbing me when he has Michelle, guys never fail to amaze me," i thought to myself.
I went to a supermarket to buy my toiletries, i was busy shopping when a young lady walked up to me.
"Hello, do you still remember me" she asked me, i looked at her closely and remembered her, i wanted the ground to open and swallow me,
"Yeah, i remember you, how have you been?, "i asked her
" i'm good,i can see you're doing good, anyway i'm Michelle, nice meeting you once again, what's your name?,
"i'm Amaka, nice to me you again too,.... Pls i'm in a hurry,i need to get home on time, i beg to take my leave,", i told her, i excused myself and went to the cashier to clear my bill, she followed me,
"pls can you give me your number, i need to talk to you" she pleaded,
"pls pick where we would meet, i need to discuss something with you," she continued
I gave her my number and headed home, i boarded a taxi and went home.




*******I was walking out of the library after the day's reading for the next day's paper, i heard someone shouting my name and running towards me, "Amaka!, Amaka," my classmate was calling me
"haba, why are you shouting my name like that na,do you want the whole school to know my name" i asked him angrily
"Abeg no vex, i don look for you everywhere but i no see you, thank God say i saw you" he said in pidgin,
"What is it?,did i steal your fowl?,"i asked him jokingly
" Noooo, it's just that one fine bobo dey find you, he dey infront of department Admin block, "he pointed at the admin block, I looked there to know if i could recognize the person, but i couldn't see clearly, i walked towards the direction, i don't know anyone who drives such car,i did the sign of the cross. I called Chy and informed her of the stranger that came to visit me in school,
"hello, Chy, pls where're you, a stranger came looking for me in school, i'm scared of going to him alone, can you come and join me" i begged her on the phone
"Calm down Amy, he wont harm you, it must be one of your admirers, but if you're scared of meeting him alone, then i'll join you right away, remember i have exams in 1hour time,i'll leave immediately ooo," she said
"Oook dear, i'm waiting for you ooo" i informed her, i cut the phone.
I walked slowly to where the car was parked, the glasses were all tinted, so i couldn't see person, before i could knock, the person opened the came and came out, then i saw who i least expected to see in my school, What a shock!,
He just stood looking at me, i was still in shock and confusion when i saw Chy parked her car beside his and alighted from her car.

Hmm. Kept me in suspense at the near rape episode. Still following... Will give full reviews at the end

Ur story is quite interestin bt Dnt be kipin us in suspense like ds now... u ll make ppl tired of visitin ur thread nd readin oda stories..It may nt matter to u bt an innocent advise

AmiJoy:
Ur story is quite interestin bt Dnt be kipin us in suspense like ds now... u ll make ppl tired of visitin ur thread nd readin oda stories..It may nt matter to u bt an innocent advise

Suspense spices up stories, don't worry dear , i'll always update.

Nice story line sweetie pls more update kkk

Wow Am So Much In Love Wif Ds Story,*captivated* Pls Dnt Keep Us In Suspense For Long,update Soon. #heartyoumuch

Kimkardashain:
Wow Am So Much In Love Wif Ds Story,*captivated*
Pls Dnt Keep Us In Suspense For Long,update Soon.
#heartyoumuch

thanks dear

.. ...... She rushed to him.
"Oooh, Nelson, what a surprise?, you didnt inform me of your surprise visit, it's not fair o" she said to him playfully,
"i wanted to surprise you two, i came to take you out for lunch, come on, i'm famished, i've been searching for you all over your school ,"
" You really did surprised us, you almost gave me a heart attack , and i've never seen this car in our compound,what's going on?,
" It's one of our company's car, i'm sorry i scared you,
"I've never seen him smile like that, he was looking so happy, i'm glad he has changed.
" bro, i'm sorry i have exams, i need to return to my block, i only came see the stranger that came to steal my sweetheart "we both laughed,
" Amaka, i'll take you out then,let's get going or do you have exams too?, "he asked me,
" Nooo, i'm done for today, "i didnt know when i told him that.
Chy bade us goodbye and left for her block, while i entered Nelson 's car, and we drove out.

He took me to one of the best eateries in town, i was really happy i went out with him, we entered holding hands, everyone' s gaze was at us, we went to a quiet corner and sat down, the waiter came immediately to take our orders,
"Sir, what will i serve you," he asked Nelson, he looked at me
"Anything she wants, i'll eat too," he replied
I dont even know what to order,
"i'll help her, get us sauce and rice, with chicken" he ordered, the waiter left immediately to get our order,

...... .... without wasting time, our food arrived, we devoured the food like hungry lions.
"so how has your exams been, and when are finishing?"
"It's awesome, though my first University exam, i thank God sha,
" You'll make A's"he wished me
"Amen ooo", we will finish next week Wednesday, i responded
"So tell me, hope you're free with me",
"I dont understand" i asked looking confused
"I mean, after what happened between you and Dave, i know you dont trust guys again,
" not really, "i replied him
" have you ever been in love? "he threw the question at me, i smiled
" i don't even know what it means to be inlove,i dont know how those in love feels"i told him
"i'll explain everything,....... Is there someone you cherish, someone that makes your heartbeat, someone that when you close your eyes you could see his face?"
Immediately i closed my eyes,
"there's only one person i see when i close my eyes, only one person makes my heart beat," i thought to myself,i smiled sheepishly
"Amaaakaaaaaa, dont tell me you're inlove with Dave ooo," i only smiled,
Then my phone rang, i checked my caller Id, talk of the devil, it was Dave. I didn't pick, it rang four times before Nelson spoke
"Just pick his call and know what he has to say....... Put the phone on speaker, i want to hear what he has to say," i gave him a stern look, then picked the call. "Thank God you finally picked , pls forgive me for all i did to you but you must believe what i'm about to tell you, i know Nelson is crushing on you, but he's doing that just to sleep with you, remember he's my childhood friend, i know him more than you, don't forget he's not your brother, he's being kind to you to achieve his aim, we even had a bet on who will sleep with you first, i tried but i failed, now he's trying, dont allow him deceive you, he loves Lizzy so much, he's close to you now because Lizzy travelled out of the country, dont be a fool to fall for him,I saw him drive passed me with you in his car, be wise girl. He cut the call,i tried calling him back, but his phone was switched off, maybe he has a flat battery.
i was already crying,i stood up and meant to leave, but Nelson held my hand.
"Dont ever believe what that idiot said about me," he tried to explain but i slapped him hard on the face, everyone turned to our seat,
"i swear, i'll castrate you if you touch me again" i fired at him, i left the eatery and boardered a taxi and went home in tears.
What a horrible day for me!!!

Hmmmm na wa for this boys o. interesting story dear, just try and take your time when typing to avoid typographical errors, I know it's not easy but more strength to u.

Lol.. E don dey red o Thumbs Up OP, u doing a nice job.

Lol.. E don dey red o
Thumbs Up OP, u doing a nice job.
Am sure she will end up with Nelson.
And Nelson is already falling for her, with the way he reacts anytime she's with dave b4 they quarrel.