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Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 7:40pm On Apr 26, 2017
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The beginning

16 august 1994

Legends says that we are from the ancient clans of sango god of thunder, so control your anger, don't be quick to anger warned baba dayo' yes baba we all shouted in unision together.










Present day 24 April 2017

My name is ade, I was born into a poor family of 2 siblings apart from me. We were so poor that the poor called us poor but we had something in common ,determination to success, my dad was a carpenter who nobody patronize while my mum was a woodseller, ten years ago both of them fight over anything and nothing , until the day grandpa dayo whom was tired of his usual quote , made them promise on his death bed to stay strong and courageous, after the promise grandpa gave up the ghost. Since then mum and dad united but because of the legend of our ancestors, nobody patronize baba ade, we feed from mum sales and she smuggled to put us in school on credit,we were nicknamed the firewood students becos our mum uses firewood to pay for our school fees , all the teachers and headmaster stores never run dries as mum fills it with firewood.


My elder ones hates me because the day I was born, the high priest screamed and sent a deadly message to the whole village that Sango has recarnated into its decendants, he clearly warned that nobody should have anything to do with them and this only worsen our situation, my dad was a good carpenter but none of his chair and table were ever sold, I could vividly remember when we were so hungry we broke down some of his table into firewood and attempted to sell it but nobody bought it and we finally had to use it, when the suffering was too much dad reported to the oba about the blasphemy but the oba could not risk the anger of the high priest so he blessed my mother trade instead and people started buying her firewood............ but power was about to change hands as my destiny started haunting me..........episode 1 loading........ comments pls ..........


both negative and positive comments are being appreciated

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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 8:23pm On Apr 26, 2017
Episode 1

Ade you bastard son of sango , I should have killed you the day you were born, you are nothing but evil to me... these were the words that my dad always use to start my day anytime he sees me early in the morning.... most of the times I would cry myself but today I felt different, I looked at my dad in the eye and I told him that you should have not giving birth to me, dad angrily landed a hot slap to my face , and my anger was unleashed, my eyes turned white and thunder started rumbling in the sky, and my dad shivered in fear, my mom quickly ran into the room, she hold my face and called my name, ade my love .. come back to me


I was in another realm , I saw a man in black , he was surrounded with lightening and thunder , he stretch out his hand for me but as I was about to stretch my hand to him , my mother voice rang in my hears , ade my love come back to me, I rememberher despite in my anger state , I drew my hand back, the man smiled back and told me the following words-------- I have lay asleep in you for too long ade.m,,, accept my hands and fulfill my destiny, we have to merge into one body and heart..... no i screamed at him, I shall not become as evil as you, I will be back and with that my mission blurred and I saw myself in my mum hands, she was shedding tears , then I asked her the most dreaded question of my life. Mum what happened She look at me and told me that her worst nightmare is coming to reality..... dad watched from a distance, he could take it no more, he thanked the gods for if not for his wife he would have been dead by now, all his borrowed livestock were dead due to the strange power. It was then that papa ade finally gave up, he has giving birth to a demon and only him shall get rid of it.........

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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by t1976(f): 9:16pm On Apr 26, 2017
Ride on op,it seems it will be interesting
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by stephenGee12(m): 9:57pm On Apr 26, 2017
Ride on I dey ur back. No worry I go dey help u to dey catch ghost readers. So be warned that dis topic is protected by me anD lightening so u can meet both of us wen u view and don't comment. Lemme call ur elder brother darous and TheBlessedMan, apollux, princeofprince, Royh, chumzy, hadamson and others a new story is here oooo
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Apollux(m): 10:29pm On Apr 26, 2017
stephenGee12:
Ride on I dey ur back. No worry I go dey help u to dey catch ghost readers. So be warned that dis topic is protected by me anD lightening so u can meet both of us wen u view and don't comment. Lemme call ur elder brother darous and TheBlessedMan, apollux, princeofprince, Royh, chumzy, hadamson and others a new story is here oooo
I'm here. A good story with lots of potentials. But some contributions. To the op, johnfa466 try to make events tell the story rather dan just narrate everything your self. It kind of give ur writing style a matured out look. Lol don't take dat too seriously, just me rambling grin

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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 10:35pm On Apr 26, 2017
Episode 2

Crush your enemy totally---48 laws of power,

Baba ade has made up his mind to get rid of his son so he went straight to the high priest, meanwhile the news of the clash of thunder and drooping dead of all livestock a kilometres close to ade home spread through the village like wild fire, even the oba palace was the centre of gossip.

In the palace the chief were deliberating on how they should tackle this matter, kehinde the only daughter of the oba was spying on them ,when she heard the world 'ayo' she ran dazly to her mother whom sent messengers to warn her bestie friend(ade mum) to escape his son away before the beginning of the dreaded spell, even oduduwa himself cannot withstand the power of ayo, it is a creation spell that involves ten virgins, after their death / the girls spirits combine and take an eartly form then they would do what they were summoned for.

Baba ade wandered in the forest, he has lost his way but he was determined to end his misery, jide! Jide! Jide! __baba ade turn around, for more than twenty years nobody has called him by his real name then he saw the inevitable his grandpa was standing 15 feets from him

Go back and protect your son jide he needs you more than ever , your son is the key to your lives and destiny, he must be protected by your love and wisdom... with that jide dad disappears and baba ade found his way back home.

Meanwhile the message from the palace has been delivered to ade mum and they were already packing their bags to escaped.

I looked at my mum tearfuly, I can't make her suffer more because of me so I lied to her that I want to use the toilet in the backyard so once I was outside I ran and ran and ran, then I saw a figure coming from afar, the shape looks more like my dad , when it was more closer I realized it was my dad , he was soloquolising my name, oh ade forgive me I know I have been a bad father , bye dad I murmured silently and I ran and ran until I saw a wood lorry passing by then it slowed down and I jumped into it , then I saw two guys in the lorry , they exclaimed thief theif but I beg them to please accommodate me and this is how my journey to lagos began, my first step starts from here

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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 11:35pm On Apr 26, 2017
Episode 3

Talent without fame is like a candle without flame


Early in the morning I woke up to yaba yaba yaba screams from bus condutors, I yawned and stretch my body only to discover that am lying beside berger bridge , I only wondered how I got there, unknowingly to ade the bus driver dropped him off after they offloaded the loads, he knew ade too well and could not risk taking him back to the village.

Bus driver --- yaba yaba yaba
Ade walked up to the conductor and begged him for money to eat due to his stomach rumbling

Conductor--(laughs) do I look like father Christmas or tb joshua to you, get out off here jare, you slowpoke

Ade walked out of there and wondered what his life was turning into three days now and he has not eaten anything so he silenty prayed to God to see him through , he did not finished the prayer before he saw a vacancy (HOUSE BOY NEEDED APPLY WITH IN) ade ran to the gate and knocked, a gate man open the gate and ade simply told him of his application , the man ushered him in and ade was called into the house for interview

Ade was surprised at the lady he saw whom was going to interview him, she was so beautiful,

Lady-- my name is Lara

Ade---ma my name is ade

Lara---can you really do this work,

Ade---yes ma

Lady---can I know more about you

Ade---my name is ade, many people refer me as son of shango

Lara--(laughs) if you are the son of shango then am the daughter of oduduwa, but I like you shall, you a comedian or something

Ade---(stretch his hands) no am just a normal guy whom must work to chop

Lara---okay, so when will you resume

Ade---now if you don't mind

Lara---of course I don't

Ade resume duties in the house but little did he knows that Lara was a vampire who suck on guys blood and meat,

Lara ---( speaks to herself ) oh tony blood was so sweet , after five months finally I can have fresh blood all to my self,

Lara was seventythree this year but due to her powers she lookes like she
Is in her early twenties...




More updates coming up tomorrow

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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by smemud(m): 11:57pm On Apr 26, 2017
keep it up.
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by PrinceOFprince(m): 1:07pm On Apr 27, 2017
stephenGee12:
Ride on I dey ur back. No worry I go dey help u to dey catch ghost readers. So be warned that dis topic is protected by me anD lightening so u can meet both of us wen u view and don't comment. Lemme call ur elder brother darous and TheBlessedMan, apollux, princeofprince, Royh, chumzy, hadamson and others a new story is here oooo
ah am here o. I comment my reserve
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by xaviercasmir(m): 2:44pm On Apr 27, 2017
INTRESTING. KEEP IT UP
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 12:56am On Apr 28, 2017
It was past 12pm Lara turn into a giantic mosquito and flew into ade room, she stood beside his ear and whispers the rituals words into his ears but unknowingly to her ade had other plans

Lara---(speaks in her tiny little voice) ade you belong to me , your blood will make me more younger and beautiful, (Lara starts to cast an ancient spell )( two uninvited mosquito,bimbo and Jane buzzed in)

bimbo--(sighs) so you have a new blood bank and you left us out ba

Lara----(speaks to herself) who invite this fool self (speak aloud) dear am just beginning the ritual joor, you know I don't cheat na

Jane--- abeg finish with the spell make I suck blood o, my throat don dry finish

Lara continues with the spell but suddenly ade work up ,stood up and walk up to his bag, he removed ota na pia pia and sprinkled it in the room, a large dose fell on bimbo and Jane mistakly and they both start screaming in tongues

Bimbo----(cries violently) I don die o , chai see watin free tin wan do to me now ,

Jane---- (screaming) pepper oh , pepper enter my eyes oh

Both of them disappears leaving Lara to her meal, but luckily the dose of insecticide did not spray on Lara but she was dizzy due to the chemical reaction so she also disappears


Ade awoke early and clean the house and did his chores, only to discover that Lara room door was still closed, ade thought about the funny dream he had in which mosquito was deliberating to suck his blood, he laugh for the stupidity of the dream but he also recall that at that same time a mosquito buzzing awoke him, and he sleepy sprayed ota na pia,pia to kill them,

Ade---- (speaks aloud) mosquito get mind disturb my dream, I no talk yet he still wan spoil my sleep,mosquito killing things (he sings)

Meanwhile Lara was listening to ade , and she promised to pay back ,

Lara----(soloquolising) ade whether you like it or not I will use you just as I have used many others before you, yesterday you were lucky but I think your luck will run out today

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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 5:52pm On Apr 28, 2017
More updates loading....:..........:...........:.....
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 9:55pm On Apr 28, 2017
Even if you are immortal, when I cut your head , you die



Many of us are ignorant of the myth of shango, god of thunder. Many years ago ,there lived a man whom became so much powerful to the extent that the thunder obeys It's command, up till now many songs are being sang in honour of him , many refer to him as god of anger while others call him god of thunder.

Sango powers are being linked through his anger to thunder, and that is the same case with ade...........................(back to Lara house)


Lara was summoned to the underworld(coven) to answer for failing to bring her sacrificial blood as promised..

Queen mother----(angrily speaks out) Lara your time is running out, I gave you wealth, immortality and knowledge and this is how you pay me back

Lara------ (kneeling) am sorry ma, the new lamb woke during the ritual, which is a bad omen but am going to bring his soul to you today

Queen mother-----you better do that, or you shall be chained for all eternity, till the coming of yeshua

Queen mother disappears followed by Lara, meanwhile ade is being tormented to accept his fate ,

I look around, the scene looks just like the same thing but the only difference is I was floating in the sky with a man.

Man----(flies around) my son, you may have been wondering about this strange visitation of mine

Ade-----(shrieks in fear)sir please don't hurt me

Man------ don't worry dear, I am your past, present and future, I am shango god of thunder

Ade______(bows head in customary obvilion) may shango be praise, may my days be multiplied by your grace, oh god of my clan

Immediately ade prayed the prayers shango turn into a pillar of smoke and enter into ade, ,,,,,, in the real world thunderstorm clashed in the sky celebrating the return of their immortality being .


Ade awoke to the knocks on the door, ade forgot to check through the peephole because he thought it was Lara but as he opens the door, a big huge man steps in and blow him on the face and before he could pronuce jack Robinson, a chloroform handkerchief was placed on his nose and ade was being taken hostage by the kidnappers.


Meanwhile shango laughs at the foolish sons of Adam, capable of taken his incarnate hostage

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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by oppsyij: 1:33pm On May 01, 2017
nice piece here takin d first row den make sure u really investigate wath sango really do nd ways his power manifest way ma popcorn nd zobo
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Speedstar09: 9:54pm On May 01, 2017
Bia wher dis op sef coman kwantinu o,guys dn enta cinema... king hadampson,almiendagesh coman encourage dis guy cool
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Hadampson(m): 5:05pm On May 05, 2017
Speedstar09:
Bia wher dis op sef coman kwantinu o,guys dn enta cinema... king hadampson,almiendagesh coman encourage dis guy cool
Johnfa466, where art thou??
b4 i count up to 10, coman update diz story kiakia
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Hadampson(m): 5:06pm On May 05, 2017
stephenGee12:
Ride on I dey ur back. No worry I go dey help u to dey catch ghost readers. So be warned that dis topic is protected by me anD lightening so u can meet both of us wen u view and don't comment. Lemme call ur elder brother darous and TheBlessedMan, apollux, princeofprince, Royh, chumzy, hadamson and others a new story is here oooo
I don land like Air-plane.. Btw tanx 4 d mention, ah preciate
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by stephenGee12(m): 5:22pm On May 05, 2017
Hadampson:
I don land like Air-plane.. Btw tanx 4 d mention, ah preciate

We no get tarmac for here o. Anyways I go send benin witch con transport u from the plane come here
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 10:45pm On May 06, 2017
Sango voice in background


SANGO gOD OF THUNDER---- I AM SANGO THE ALMIGHTY gOD OF THUNDER, I WAS ONCE A MORTAL YET I CHANGED INTO IMMORTALITY, WHENEVER THUNDERSTORMS ARISES PRAISE ME AND I SHALL SPARE YOU



Ade awoke to see his hands and legs tied up, he wonders where he was, but due to the heavy darkness ,he could not guess, the doors opens and a giantic man walks in with Lara

Ade----(happily tries to stand up) thank god you are here ma, please loose thus rope

Lara----(laughs)you stupid son of Adam, I am here to kill you but before I send your soul to eternal doom I need you to see my real self (cast an ancient spell and all her youthful figure vanishes hereby been replaced with an old fragile woman body

Lara----(In old voice) to be young and powerful, there is a price, I will have to send you to suffer for me to remain young and power in the underworld


Ade----(shrink in fright but remains courageous) never will I serve u

Lara-----(laughs) many said the exactly same words but once u are dead, you will do my will

Lara cast a spell and brought out a sharp knife and he stab ade with it but as the knife went into ade, a wild wind started blowing with thunderstorm which strikes Lara bodyguards outside and they all died instantly, Lara was being floated around like a bird and ade eyes opened, sango looked around and saw nothing but mere mortal and a mermaid who does age renewal


Ade(in sango deep voice) how dare you fight a god,(waves his hand and a light thunder pieces one of the bodyguards to bits upon bits

Lara---(call on her queen mother) mother help

Queen mother appears instantly but on seeing ade eyes, she screams and tries to disappear, but she could not

Ade------(shango) all you do is to imprison lost souls till the coming of yeshua, but today I here by free all those souls

Lara and queen mothers screams both in unision as sango frees the lost souls, and they both turned into a pillar of sand ,

Sango speaks to ade innermost self

Sango-----whenever you need me just call in me, and we got a lot of ancients power to extinct

With that ade fell down and awoke with a knife in his heart, he suprisly removes it and the wound heals instantly tbc.......................... more update loading..........

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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by nastynic(m): 10:58pm On May 06, 2017
nice Work Bruh....
I Finna Feel Like Ade Lols More Cash to ur Account
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by nastynic(m): 10:58pm On May 06, 2017
nice Work Bruh....
I Finna Feel Like Ade Lols More Cash to ur Account
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 11:03pm On May 06, 2017
nastynic:
nice Work Bruh....

I Finna Feel Like Ade Lols
More Cash to ur Account

THANKS
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by guruxxy(m): 7:56am On May 07, 2017
[i][/i]they are really the foolish sons of Adam
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by priestchurch(m): 9:05am On May 07, 2017
smiley Gud job, I'm loving every update...
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by devilmaycry: 2:02pm On May 07, 2017
Bros behave urself cme update us o....cos iffa vex ehn
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Nobody: 2:13pm On May 07, 2017
devilmaycry:
Bros behave urself cme update us o....cos iffa vex ehn
Baba howfar you done resume.
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by devilmaycry: 5:46pm On May 07, 2017
olihilistic:

Baba howfar you done resume.
nope...vex jst d worry me... man u. na nyash sha...
u done resume ni
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Nobody: 9:53pm On May 07, 2017
devilmaycry:
nope...vex jst d worry me... man u. na nyash sha...
u done resume ni
I never resume.
E suppose be tomorrow if ground level.
Man U d cost problems I swear.
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 12:31am On May 10, 2017
Ade stares at his chest, he had become something beyond the ordinary

Ade later found his way out of the bush and he luckily sees a car which drops him at berger bridge

Ade___ ( soloquolising) back to back, na wa o(as ade was lamenting, his spiritual hears opens and he starts to hear a lady crying from afar... please don't rape me, please don't rape me kept on ringing in his ears

Ade ran and ran to the house and was surprised to hear blast of music coming from the speakers,a normal being would not hear the screams but ade being a supernatural being hears it perfectly, so he broke open the door and saw a guy on a girl trying to clothe her unclothedness by force, ade was so angry at him, so he unleashed all his previous frustration on the guy and kicked him in the groins and beat the hell out of him, people gathered and the young girl which identifies herself as Amanda explains to everyone how her boyfriend tried to rape her, people sympathies with her while some blames her for giving him the privacy he desires,,,,, a man call sola tells Amanda that if it was him he would have drugged her and use her but nonetheless they thanked ade for his bravely and they warned Amanda boyfriend never to repeat such trash or he would answer to the vigilante


Amanda thanks ade

Amanda___you are really a God sent, thanks for saving my dignity

Ade______no prob

Amanda___but how did you hear my screams despite the noise

Ade------let just say am gifted and can hear a lot of things from afar

Amanda____(laughs) just like spiderman, u really got me there

Ade_______ya

Amanda_____can I have ur number, to call u later

Ade________am sorry, I don't have a phone

Amanda______what of your address

Ade______I don't have a house for now


Ade told Amanda abt all that happen to him leaving out the sango part

Amanda____(in tears) my dad is a nice man , am very sure that he will help you

Ade refuses but Amanda reminds him that she owes him and together they walk to a sport car and Amanda ushers him in and they drove to her place

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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 4:15pm On May 10, 2017
More updates loading...........
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by xaviercasmir(m): 4:40pm On May 10, 2017
Keep it coming
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Missmossy(f): 4:58pm On May 10, 2017
Interesting, following cheesy

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