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Re: United In Betrayal by Toyin223(f): 2:25pm On Jun 20, 2017
PamelB Where Ar U Come And Update
Re: United In Betrayal by Donmos(m): 2:30pm On Jun 20, 2017
Interesting....
Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 5:19pm On Jun 20, 2017
"work work work work work work"
Claire quickly dropped her red rubber cup and stood up. she began to twerk to the song to the astonishment of Kelvin while the rest of the crew cheered her on. Kelvin's jaw dropped as he watched her. He had never imagined that she could possess such moves. She danced to him, pulled him up and began to grind into him. He responded without hesitation, matching her moves. She was dancing erotically so he knew without been told that she was drunk, the drink was getting to her. He pulled her to himself, allowing her fall back to him while they swayed to the music together.

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He stepped into the club, impressed by it already. This was the happening people's club of ABJ. He looked around for Kelvin and spotted him at the VIP spot, being rocked vigorously by a lady. He smiled and started walking to them. He was stopped by a bouncer, who asked him for his pass. He pointed at Kelvin and the bouncer walked to kelvin to verify. he looked up to phil and nodded to the bouncer who allowed him to the pass. Phil walked to the crew and just as he was about shaking hands with kelvin, he looked closely to the woman and got the shock of his life.

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Another picture came in, followed by another, and another. He looked at them all with fury and hate. Now it was clear, the jiji thing was just an excuse to visit Abuja and have a nice time with Kelvin. On a second thought, maybe the endorsement was real but after he couldn't go with her, they both planned their get away. Or she had planned all this to get back at him for everything she had been through. He hated her for all this and he would make her pay. He reached for the intercom and asked Ebere in immediately. Everything he had stopped for her happiness, he would get back to it without batting eyelids.

Ebere walked into the room after a soft knock. She stood by the door, refusing to walk into the room to meet him;

"my wife is cheating on me Ebere."

she gasped in shock, her boss won't do that, not the woman who had hired her. she would vouch for her, anytime, anywhere and any place but right now, she needed to be by Micheal's good books.

"she is cheating on me, with my own best friend, with Kelvin. What should i do?"

she walked to him and sat down close to him on the king sized bed.

"uhm, you shouldn't be bothered about it. she doesn't deserve you." she paused to see his reaction and when he said nothing, she continued;

"i'll tell you what to do but right now, i need to get you back to that man that was hitting me hard few hours ago." she said, removing the little piece of clothing she called a nightwear.

He looked at her. she had a nice body, perky b00bs, flat stomach, tiny waist and a wide hip. his john thomas jerked in anticipation as she crawled to him.
she pulled off the bedspread he was using to cover his body and admired his d1ck. It wasn't big but it was enough to get a woman crazy and worked up. Tonight, that woman would be her.

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she dialed his number and he picked up immediately;

"why would you do this to me Greg? There were other ways to teach me a lesson. You could have used another means and believe me, i would have learnt, i would have learnt Greg." she cried

"no baby. I chose this way because this was how you treated my sister. people who didn't know her story isolated her, they insulted her, they judged her and tell you what? T took her life, she killed herself. Her traditional marriage was two weeks away, you knew that right? so baby, this is the best way to get back to you for it all."

"what should i do? Greg?" she cried audibly

"i'm sorry, i'm sorry Greg. what should i do? forgive me for everything." she finished

"i think it's late baby. T is gone and she won't be coming back so you can save the apology. But i'll tell you what, T made it simple for you to choose. commit suicide or go ahead bearing it mind that you'll remain sick till you die." he hung up without waiting for her response.

she broke down authomatically. she will end it all right now.
she settled in front of her laptop and began to write her resignation letter.

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Re: United In Betrayal by obivictor(m): 6:03pm On Jun 20, 2017
Wow! Can't believe I followed this thread from page one till here
Nnnne your are so good
Keep it up
Re: United In Betrayal by vickyviolet(f): 8:02pm On Jun 20, 2017
Pamela u re d best, wow I can't believe I HV been reading dis story for 2hours now God bless u and more mb 2 ur phone
Re: United In Betrayal by bimberry1307(f): 8:44pm On Jun 20, 2017
wow! this is beautiful, PamelB, thank you. I appreciate you. more oil to your head.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Daisyben(f): 8:47pm On Jun 20, 2017
Tnks for d update pam....

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Re: United In Betrayal by xdos(m): 9:07pm On Jun 20, 2017
Wow... this story isnt ending anytime soon. I need anoda popcorn pack.
Mr Michael has serious trust issues. PamelB has to tell us what went wrong with him after the encounter with Sarah.
Someone with strong moral principles and just after one night with Sarah, first didnt feel guilty and then couldnt control himself anymore. bleeps not just Sarah but anything that looks like a girl.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Toyin223(f): 9:15pm On Jun 20, 2017
WONDERFUL STORY

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Re: United In Betrayal by queenitee(f): 11:08pm On Jun 20, 2017
Who took a picture of them? Phil? It can't be
Re: United In Betrayal by gtin(m): 2:28am On Jun 21, 2017
[quote author=queenitee post=57708191]Who took a picture of them? Phil? It can't be[/quotie]
Definitely not Phil maybe some other person
Re: United In Betrayal by heemah(f): 4:46am On Jun 21, 2017
queenitee:
Who took a picture of them? Phil? It can't be
Who else if not Amara? Claire's sister.
Re: United In Betrayal by olatunyemi(m): 5:48am On Jun 21, 2017
this pamelB again , always intrude my exam with a nice story
I was reading alone last semester and I needed to choose between the story and the exam, same thing here, I have a test to write today
nice work op

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Re: United In Betrayal by Stevedison(m): 6:55am On Jun 21, 2017
Finally caught up.

The story is becoming more intense.

I love this piece of artwork.
Cant wait for the next episode.

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Re: United In Betrayal by prodekul(f): 7:58am On Jun 21, 2017
how will Claire know wat Michael is doing with Ebere,cos Dats enough reason to divorce him,but make Claire no go fall hand ooo for Abuja with Kelvin
Re: United In Betrayal by Gynah33(f): 8:29am On Jun 21, 2017
Wow this is so intensed, more power to your elbow dear .
Re: United In Betrayal by Gynah33(f): 8:33am On Jun 21, 2017
prodekul:
how will Claire know wat Michael is doing with Ebere,cos Dats enough reason to divorce him,but make Claire no go fall hand ooo for Abuja with Kelvin

I don't think she will, I want Michael to get caught red handed. The man matter tire person jare.
Re: United In Betrayal by Tgold1(m): 9:08am On Jun 21, 2017
prodekul:
how will Claire know wat Michael is doing with Ebere,cos Dats enough reason to divorce him,but make Claire no go fall hand ooo for Abuja with Kelvin


Na Phil she go jonze with..... but I pray Sarah give that Mumu Micheal , The virus..... and he can infect Amara Too.
Re: United In Betrayal by Lyndollarz(f): 9:54am On Jun 21, 2017
wow... the story has taken another turn... amazing
what's that Clair sister name self,... I don' forget..... but am wondering how someone can do that to her sister..na real wa..... aye le ooooo.

no matter how much I dislike Sarah, I feel pity for her though... she got served, hot.

PamelB.... u are just so amazing.. your write up is bomb, the spontaneity is killing, the suspense and all...... abeg who don be writer don be writer.... I salute your office

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Re: United In Betrayal by pweetypearls(f): 9:55am On Jun 21, 2017
WOW!this is getting more and more interesting,great wrk#pamelB,cnt wait for d nxt episode,nxt plssssssss

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Re: United In Betrayal by queenitee(f): 10:29am On Jun 21, 2017
heemah:

Who else if not Amara? Claire's sister.
That fool?
Re: United In Betrayal by queenitee(f): 10:29am On Jun 21, 2017
prodekul:
how will Claire know wat Michael is doing with Ebere,cos Dats enough reason to divorce him,but make Claire no go fall hand ooo for Abuja with Kelvin

Kelvin isn't that kinda person
Re: United In Betrayal by oluwafemi1993: 10:35am On Jun 21, 2017
PamelB if you are a lady, please be my Claire
I will never be like Micheal, that bast*rd
I will take care of you PamelB-Claire
This story is intoxicating
Next episode!!!
Pls

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Re: United In Betrayal by otabuko(m): 11:55am On Jun 21, 2017
Bae, your writing skill must be encouraged, seriously I didn't see a flaw from the page one to page 22,the critiques I saw in some pages might be sick to say the least. Whatever the story turns out to be, just know that this piece needs recognition. Thought I was lazy about reading but I read from page beginning to end. Much love Pamela. More grace.

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Re: United In Betrayal by berryPee(m): 1:02pm On Jun 21, 2017
more sweat to your armpit PamellB. your story line have revived my reading culture.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Gynah33(f): 2:08pm On Jun 21, 2017
xdos:
Wow... this story isnt ending anytime soon. I need anoda popcorn pack.
Mr Michael has serious trust issues. PamelB has to tell us what went wrong with him after the encounter with Sarah.
Someone with strong moral principles and just after one night with Sarah, first didnt feel guilty and then couldnt control himself anymore. bleeps not just Sarah but anything that looks like a girl.

Lol yeah I bet even a female mannequin.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Dessydemmy: 2:20pm On Jun 21, 2017
WHAO!!!THIA IS TOO MUCH .THE WRITER IS ONE OF THE BEST .

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Re: United In Betrayal by Zenas212(m): 2:22pm On Jun 21, 2017
Did claire sleep with Kelvin at Abuja?
Re: United In Betrayal by xdos(m): 2:43pm On Jun 21, 2017
Hahahaha... Even if his mother crosses his path... I pity her
Gynah33:


Lol yeah I bet even a female mannequin.
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 4:03pm On Jun 21, 2017
heemah:
Who else if not Amara? Claire's sister.
But someone is in the club sending Amara information of what's going on.

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