Nice story dear. Ride on, i will be here till the end. Let's see what becomes of Michael the foolish.

Happy Sunday PamelB.
Thanks for the update. I see things are getting twisted gradually for all involved both positively and negatively. Its good .

Good writing though. But please can we get a double dosage for today. Thanks and have a lovely week.

Jsaviour:


you said what michael did was a mistake. hope you are still following the story. He is a man LovePeddler who shld be dumped like tissue paper. Abi you wan find another excuse for him.

no excuse we all deserve secound chance but not for the same mistake

micheal a love-vendor

Hmm
This is getting hotter than I envisaged...
More ink to your pen and more megabytes to your phone.

uminem02:
U knw na

I know no ooh

Jsaviour:


God forbid ooo, but hope if your wife eventually cheats on you, you will come up with all this sermon. Somethings are easier said than done. Hope you will say same thing to a man whose wife cheats on with her Secretary, brother and house help.

Hahahaha... Abeg ooo, bt i hope it never gets 2 dat, i pray i luv my wife 2 d extent of 4giving her of every transgression she makes, i pray also dat she luvs me enough nt 2 do dat 2 me... and more profoundly i pray dat all of us should av a happy home

This is one of the best stories I have read so far on nairaland, very very very educative and entertaining. Keep the good work going the sky is your starting point, Weldon keep it up

mehn! I so much hate KARMA,the bitch always has a way of haunting you,especially when you least expected it..




Sarah bear with her(karma).....

I like d way dis story iz goin, great work pamelb

Jsaviour:


God forbid ooo, but hope if your wife eventually cheats on you, you will come up with all this sermon. Somethings are easier said than done. Hope you will say same thing to a man whose wife cheats on with her Secretary, brother and house help.

Even the bible gives unfaithfulness as one of the conditions for divorce... Should Clair continue to 'work' on her marriage till the randy he-goat Michael infects her with venereal diseases?

Thanks very much for the update.
I also wish to plead with you to demarcate the various scene with anything possible, either with dotted lines or asterisk to reduce our distress of trying to place it.
......Inferiority complex should not make Gertrude reject the proposal. I keep my fingers crossed

chai..... it hurts.. it hurts a lot that we don't value things until we loose them.. Micheal is a he goat,a disgrace to manhood. If I were in his shoes I will go seek for spiritual help.. the dude has no brain.... Micheal is my favourite character,the guy fall my hands jor... I feel like crying for him...na so e go allow one yeye Phil come carry our Claire...

Hmmmmmmmmmmm Somemen Ar He Goat PamelB We Ar Waiting For U

Is that all? Pls don't say it is

Oh! How I luv dis movie...oh sorry story weldone Pamelb! More ink 2 ur pen and more wisdom 2 ur brain..pls I gat a request ma'am pls let Claire divorce dat he-goat Mike nd get married 2 Phillips. Na beg I dey beg oooo... Watching in 5-d.....

she paced the entire length of her sitting room, admiring her long artificial nails. Things were going the way she planned it. They won't know what hit them and whatever it is would hit them so hard that they won't know where or who to run to. She dialed a number on her phone and settled on a setee;

"take pictures, as many as possible, i need a clean job."
she hung up and smiled to herself. Claire will beg but she won't give a fork about her, sister or not.


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They stepped into the hotel that housed the best night club in the whole of ABJ.
The bouncers hailed him and complimented his babe. He tipped them handsomely and promised to send them bottles of wine afterwards. Out of loyalty, one of the bouncers went in first to get a VIP table for them.
They were led inside like royalty and the DJ dedicated a hit song for them.

"you're gonna throw caution to the wind tonight. have fun yea?" kelvin shouted amidst the loud music.

"i know. just watch while i show you." she replied with a smirk.

He returned her smirk with a surprised look and looked at the waitress that had come to attend to them. Knowing his usual way of ordering, she handed him a paper and a pen and left. His buddies who were in the club already began to come to the table and they exchanged pleasantries. Just as he was the lady's man, he was also a man of the people so he urged them to share his table with his babes who were already getting acquaintained with pretty Claire. He filled in his order and dropped it on the table. Tonight's gonna be a good night.


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He looked at the text message and smiled. the club was a famous one. He stepped out of the hotel just as the uber car he had called stopped in front of it.
He was dressed in a white trouser, a white calvin claire polo, topping it with a denim blazer and denim boot. The female workers had shamelessly drooled over him as soon as he had stepped out of the room but he had no time for them lots. He was going to have fun tonight and at least for once, forget the woman who had robbed him of his sleep.

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A multimedia message came into his phone while he was viewing his wife's recent pictures on instagram. He was proud of her online because she had gained a lot of attentions online. She had over 9000 followers on IG and they always had reasons to gush about her pictures. They were now talking about her new endorsement and he was priding himself as her husband when the mmm came into his phone. He looked at the sleeping Ebere who had her right hand on his chest.
He minimized the IG app and opened the message to get the shock of his life; his wife was straddling that sick head. Anger and hate fueled inside him and he sat up, waking the sleeping beauty.
She rubbed her eyes and looked at him unconsciously;

"is there a problem honey?"

"get out." he barked

she looked at him in shock but didn't stand up. He angrily stood up, held her hair and dragged her out of the room, banging the door after her.
He yelled at no one in particular, regretting the past few days. She had used him and she won't get away with it. NEVER


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Her head throbbed in pain. she checked her phone, wondering how long she had been out.
She picked her weak frame from the floor and walked tiredly to her room. She stepped into the shower, allowing the water run down, wishing it could wash away her past, the possibility of her being a carrier. She wept as the water ran down. It was all over. Not only had her past come to hunt her, it had come back with consequences.
She wished for a lot of things to happen; if she had not gone after her boss, if she had learnt her lesson after Kelvin, but no. She was a slayqueen, she wanted money, sex, attention, and it had landed her a heavy medal.
If only she had learnt her lessons.

Nice development. Micheal keeps shooting at his feet. Karma is yet to visit him like it has visited Sarah.
Nice work OP.
Though it seems short. But its spicy

Nice 1, Cnt wait to read wat happens next, phil should stop playing gentleman nd grab claire by d skirt

Awwww...why now? D update is too short.. But weldone and thanks all d same...

This is an amazing story cause it really really really riles me up and just gets me angry but thats how you know it's an awesome work of fiction.



On that note, men are not children and should be held responsible, nobody from outside a marriage "destroys" a marriage, also I believe Micheal has to serve time for raping someone. It is only right. God forgives but man has to maintain stability in society hence the existence of law and order. If I start, i won't end lol.


Keep going PamelB. You are doing amazing.

Wow pamelb! You are da bomb! Tuale for you jare...... I love the the way you update your stories timely and on point you no dey dull chic you too much. God bless you jare

How Can Sarah Heal Her Sister Like DIs

Update too short yet it comes once in a blue Moon,just worried for myself that I might scream if I don't get enough please help

front-page again

Another blockbuster, mind blowing thread for my reading pleasure.

This one z got my attention.

I want to commend the writer PamelB for this wonderful child of her brain and the materialisation of her inventive thinking.

God bless u for this.


I will come back to comment once i catch up with u guys.

*runs back to page 2 with my popcorn*

Chumzypinky:
Are u serious? They couldnt wait till they get home?

Nawa to you o..
Na this kind rush hour and vulnerable environment dey sweet pass na.

This is serious.

jukoo331:
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I've heard about it but not sure of how authentic it is....... How is it done?

This story has refused to finish. From page 1 - 27.. Nice work Pamela.