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Re: United In Betrayal by Essyprity(f): 3:40am On Jul 09, 2017
I see a grown man acting like a teenager with overwhelming hormones. Micheal is a deliberate unrepentant cheat. the height of which is sleeping with the wife's sister while she's lying half dead in the hospital from his punches. he needs some time away from his wife and women. his anger n ego r even worse than his libido. when r we getting more?

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Re: United In Betrayal by iamnicer: 5:12am On Jul 09, 2017
People's comments just getting longer than episodes , have seen like 4 comments that looks like an episodes lol , patiently waiting for pamelB

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Re: United In Betrayal by iamlynn(f): 7:49am On Jul 09, 2017
all these bastards blaming claire for Michael's stupidity, I spit on you all. dogs will always be dogs.
Re: United In Betrayal by Fijumokesayo(f): 7:58am On Jul 09, 2017
Y'all should pls safe us all these long comments, its boring.
Re: United In Betrayal by Kimkardashain(f): 8:00am On Jul 09, 2017
iamlynn:
all these bastards blaming claire for Michael's stupidity, I spit on you all. dogs will always be dogs.
sis let me help u and spit together..DOGS

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Re: United In Betrayal by olaoreofe(f): 8:14am On Jul 09, 2017
Queensiju:
Waaaoh! This is a great piece. Welldone PamelB. I love this story just the way I love 'letting go by audrey Timms.
please can you help me out with the link to letting go by audrey timms
Re: United In Betrayal by emee21: 8:53am On Jul 09, 2017
sweetdude001:
First PamelB good work,
Lemme 1st tlk abt Kelvin I think he is worse Dan Micheal BT pple d ignore that coz they think he cares 4 claire, but d guy didn't do anything tangible to safe their marriage, forget him calling mike bro n all i mean check he called Phil over to abuja even wen he knew mike n Claire are starting to get on d right path broda indeed, am sure everybody tinks he is gud coz he said he wantd to c Claire happy no p BT he shud stop calling mike broda.
If you really followed the story well, Kelvin never called Phil to abuja, it was a mere coincidence. Phil came to abuja for a court case. Kelvin is really good friend and a good brother. Do you remember how he got rid of the Secretary?. Micheal is not just it at all

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Re: United In Betrayal by Chommieblaq(f): 9:38am On Jul 09, 2017
SMH for some people with their comments.
There's a limit to what one can take, let Claire divorce his sorry ass biko.
Slept with the Secretary, 2 maids, and her blood sister. Even if she forgives him and continue, the marriage will only be a sham because she will never forget.

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Re: United In Betrayal by CecyAdrian(f): 9:48am On Jul 09, 2017
iamnicer:
People's comments just getting longer than episodes , have seen like 4 comments that looks like an episodes lol , patiently waiting for pamelB

That's the power of a good creative writer cheesy it keeps the reader glued, engaged and anxious! Have you seen and read any of 'Game of Thrones' fan page or reviews

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Re: United In Betrayal by iamnicer: 10:03am On Jul 09, 2017
CecyAdrian:


That's the power of a good creative writer cheesy it keeps the reader glued, engaged and anxious! Have you seen and read any of 'Game of Thrones' fan page or reviews


cheesy cheesy cheesy cheesy cheesy cheesy cheesy cheesy cheesy

AUNTY PAMELB SHOW ABEG
Re: United In Betrayal by pweetymhi(f): 10:58am On Jul 09, 2017
Though am kinda new here, i will still air my opinion, once a cheat, always a cheat, Micheal has nothing to offer claire again, where should she start from? He slept with her younger sis and her maids, abeg which man in his correct state of mind does that

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Re: United In Betrayal by pweetymhi(f): 10:59am On Jul 09, 2017
Though am kinda new here, i will still air my opinion, once a cheat, always a cheat, Micheal has nothing to offer claire again, where should she start from? He slept with her younger sis and her maids, abeg which man in his correct state of mind does that.
Welcome mhe on board o

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Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 12:00pm On Jul 09, 2017
"Welcome to my house dear." Claire said, giving Chantel a warm hug.

"Wow. Your house is beautiful." Chantel walked in, looking around the house.
The sitting room alone spoke volumes of how wealthy the Njamas' were.

"Make yourself comfortable please."
They sat opposite to each other while Chantel kept on looking around.

"Who's your interior decorator?"

"Linda Adams. My husband contacted her though."

"Wow. This is a mini eden. I'm impressed."

"Thanks. What do I offer you?"

"Anything hot."

Claire chuckled.

"Yes, your hotship."

They laughed as Claire strode to the bar.
She got back with a bottle of vodka and two glasses.

"So you've seen the news right?" Chantel asked, pouring the wine into the glasses.

"Yea. I have."

"And?"
Chantel shot her a gist-me look.

"Nothing. Like, I'm getting divorced in some days so I'm not bothered."

"You're getting divorced?" Chantel asked in shock.

"Isn't it obvious?"

"I.... I mean, I thought you're just playing around. Seriously."

Claire sipped from the glass of hot liquid and breathed out.

"I'm getting divorced.'

"Then you shouldn't let social media run conclusions on your life. Speak out babe so the world won't judge you. Get an interview done so you can air your own opinion."

"My dear, I've never made my life a publicity stunt. Of it had occurred to me that with the jiji deal, my life would be an open book, I wouldn't be seen out with anybody. I prefer a quiet life, trust me."

"Welcome to the life honey. All these hungry bloggers looking for traffic would jump at anything."

"It's well though. I believe that with time, everything will take shape."

***********

She heard voices and she decided to take a peek. She leaned on the rail and was surprised to find her sister with another lady who looked familiar. Time to disgrace someone, she thought with a smile and headed to Michael's room.


***********

He was looking through papers, searching for anything that would move favour to his side when the door pushed open and Amara walked into the room.

"Don't you think you've stayed in here for long? Let's watch a movie downstairs."

"There's a television here and you can get any channel you want from up here so let's do it here." He said, not looking up to her.

"Can't you make me happy today Mike? You're not been fair to me." She nagged. "I'm pregnant for crying out loud."

He looked at her and closed the file in his hand.

"Okay. Let's go."

"One more thing, can you order pizza?"

"Alright. I'll do it right away."

**********

"There is a movie premiere this weekend. I was sent an email. I doubt if I'll be attending it." Claire said as she read a new notification from her phone.

"I got the mail too. Let's go please. It will be fun. I'm crushing on Ken Erics. I'm sure he'll be there."

"Chantel please. With all these recent happenings, I want to be on a low right now."

"Why? Listen girl, we live once. People that don't know your story will be the people to judge you. You've got to live up. That you're getting divorced foes not mean you should lock up. Mingle, make new friends, slay on red carpets and most importantly, tell the world that you don't care."

"Chantel, I care. I've always wanted a simple life. I know where I come from so I can't let fame a and wealth get into my head but don't stress, we'll attend the premiere together."

"Yipeee. Shopping shopping and shopping."

"What's that one? Let me send you the jiji app biko. You'll order your dresses from there."

They broke into laughter only to be interrupted by footsteps entering the sitting room.

*************

Now he knew what was happening. Amara wants to embarass Claire in front of her guest. If he had known that she was with someone, he would havr remained upstairs.

"Hello." The lady greeted with a smile.

"Hi. I'm......."

"Michael Njama, I know. All Claire's followers on Twitter and IG knows that."

He smiled and extended a hand for a handshake.

"Nice meeting you Miss?"

"Chantel. The pleasure is all mine."

He saw her shift her gaze to Amara, still maintaining her smile;

"Hi." Chantel said

"Hi. The name is Amara and.........."

"My younger sister and my husband's new wife." Claire completed

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Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 12:08pm On Jul 09, 2017
You guys are the best.
Your comments got me cracked up from church. I'm sorry I couldn't update yesterday as I had a script to work on and it kept me busy throughout.
Thanks you all for keeping this thread lively.

God bless you all.
To the newbies, welcome.
To the ghostreaders association, drop a comment
And to my very own people who've bin here from the very beginning, may God bless us all.

More updates coming

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Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 12:14pm On Jul 09, 2017
Been a ghostreader but can just help commending this beautiful story, more grease to your elbow ma'am. Lovely.
Re: United In Betrayal by Tgold1(m): 12:19pm On Jul 09, 2017
PamelB:
You guys are the best.
Your comments got me cracked up from church. I'm sorry I couldn't update yesterday as I had a script to work on and it kept me busy throughout.
Thanks you all for keeping this thread lively.

God bless you all.
To the newbies, welcome.
To the ghostreaders association, drop a comment
And to my very own people who've bin here from the very beginning, may God bless us all.

More updates coming


Keep up d good works babe.

But Claire never dissapoints

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Re: United In Betrayal by queenitee(f): 12:24pm On Jul 09, 2017
This Claire is smart, I give it to her
Re: United In Betrayal by fboonmy: 12:26pm On Jul 09, 2017
PamelB:
You guys are the best.
Your comments got me cracked up from church. I'm sorry I couldn't update yesterday as I had a script to work on and it kept me busy throughout.
Thanks you all for keeping this thread lively.

God bless you all.
To the newbies, welcome.
To the ghostreaders association, drop a comment
And to my very own people who've bin here from the very beginning, may God bless us all.

More updates coming
Re: United In Betrayal by ujuka(f): 12:36pm On Jul 09, 2017
U re doing a great job ma .
More data to ur phone.
Keep it up
Re: United In Betrayal by bummybummy(f): 12:43pm On Jul 09, 2017
I just love d way Claire z behaving. more update
Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 12:45pm On Jul 09, 2017
"We've spent this past few days together and it's enough to prove to me that I'm not making a mistake. I want you in my life Getry, to complete me, to be by my side forever. I want to wake up every morning by your side. Please, marry me."

Her face turned to different shades of pink.
They just finished breakfast and he had helped her with the dishes. They had settled to watch a movie when he suddenly got on his knees.

"I love you so much and I would be the happiest man on earth to have you by my side."

He fished out a little box from his back pocket and opened it.
There was a silver ring which glistered under the chandelier.

He looked at her face for answers but got streams of tears instead.
He was about to pull her into his arms when she stretched her left hand, nodding frantically.
He slipped the ring into her finger and they embraced each other.

"I love you." She whispered.

It was the first time she was saying it to him. She was shy and reserved but he loved her so.
He kissed her forehead and hugged her again.
This was it.
He had gotten it all.
He picked his phone from the table and sat up beside Gertrude. It was time to send a picture to Claire.


********

She opened her mouth but no word came out. How could she speak such without feeling bad or breaking down? Where did she cook her heart?
She looked at Claire again but the woman was busy with her phone and smiling sheepishly.

"Nice to meet you Amara."
Chantel shook her hand, swallowing a urge to punch her face.

"Seriously? Wow!" Claire screamed, looking at the faces of everyone in the room.

"Mike, Kelvin just proposed to Gertrude." She said excitedly.

"Wow. That's one hell of a news. I'll call him right away." Michael said, excused himself and left the sitting room.

"Who's Kelvin?" Chantel asked

"He's Michael's best friend and like a brother to me. But that's not the news. The girl in question was my employee. She quit working here just two or three months ago."

"Wow."

"You see, we had thought he was going to marry Amara here. How was I to know that she had other plans?" Claire shot her sister a look and went back to her phone. "I'm so happy for them. Look how happy they look."

She passed the picture to Chantel.

"Awww. He's cute." Chantel commented.

"Take your eyes off miss. He's taken."

They laughed happily.

Amara hissed and walked out angrily. The house was cursed, if not, why was the odds against her? Nothing she ever plans works out well. She hated it.


***********

This was the best news she'd heard in months. She would upload that picture on Instagram so people would know that her best friend was off bachelorhood.

"Babes." She heard Chantel call

"Yes?" She dropped the phone and picked her glads of wine

"How come you're so relaxed about all these? I'm not comfortable anymore just hearing what you just said but you feel so relaxed. What's happening?"

"You also think it's nollywood right? That's what I thought until she came back pregnant. Worst still, he asked for the divorce not me. I can't kill myself when I know that they will be happy after I die. I'm just going to make a diamond out of whatever life throws at me. I'll survive this. Don't stress it."

Chantel wiped the tears which were streaming down her face.

"But it's not fair." She cried

"Life itself is not fair."
Claire refilled her glass and downed it all in one gulp.
She won't cry, no, she won't.

**********

"I'm happy for you man. You owe me a drink." Michael said into the phone.

"Surely bro. Thanks."

"Anytime. Chief will be super excited."

"I informed him even before now. He's talking about children already."

They laughed happily.

"Congrats bro."

"Thanks man."

"Let me not distract you guys. Have fun."

"Alright."

He hung up. His best friend and brother had it all going well for him. Why was his own case different?
He heard the door push open and turned to see Amara walk in, looking angry.

"Michael, you disappoint me. I don't believe that I ended up with you. You listen to her insults and you did nothing about it."

"Because she didn't insult me. Come to think of it, why didn't you tell me there was someone in the house? I went there and disgraced myself in front of a guest. Do you think it's wise for us to be seen together before the divorce? Do you know what people will say about us? No, you don't."

He picked his phone and left the room

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Re: United In Betrayal by yewande1234(f): 12:51pm On Jul 09, 2017
I jz can't stop laughing, dis updates u drop are d best so far i love d way Claire did to d both of dem
Re: United In Betrayal by gtin(m): 1:17pm On Jul 09, 2017
I dedicate this song to Micheal *One Republic - it's too late to apologize*

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Re: United In Betrayal by bummybummy(f): 1:20pm On Jul 09, 2017
this is just d beginning of shame Amara, am happy for Kelvin and Gertrude

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Re: United In Betrayal by Kimkardashain(f): 1:35pm On Jul 09, 2017
amara u sure are cursed, weldne claire,PamelB weldne sis

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Re: United In Betrayal by Toyin223(f): 1:37pm On Jul 09, 2017
DIS Is Just D Beginning
Re: United In Betrayal by Babysuccess02(f): 1:50pm On Jul 09, 2017
yewande1234:
I jz can't stop laughing, dis updates u drop are d best so far i love d way Claire did to d both of dem
As in enh. I so much love her new boldness.
Re: United In Betrayal by LilySopi(f): 1:50pm On Jul 09, 2017
u r wonderful.. I CNT get enough of this story. thanks

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Re: United In Betrayal by OkoAnike(m): 1:52pm On Jul 09, 2017
PamelB:
You guys are the best.
Your comments got me cracked up from church. I'm sorry I couldn't update yesterday as I had a script to work on and it kept me busy throughout.
Thanks you all for keeping this thread lively.

God bless you all.
To the newbies, welcome.
To the ghostreaders association, drop a comment
And to my very own people who've bin here from the very beginning, may God bless us all.

More updates coming


PamelB, the waiting is worth it, thanks for the update.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 2:04pm On Jul 09, 2017
My love for Claire ehn.
Re: United In Betrayal by Jsaviour(f): 2:06pm On Jul 09, 2017
Destiny4fame:
I disagree wih you here. I believe it was love even Kelvin testified to that. Mike is a modafuckinf arse for all he made Claire go thru and should be punished foe that,still, I don't want them apart
#teammiclaire#

Like what type of punishment for mike?. I hope if calire gets pregnant for Kelvin and gives birth to a baby, get pregnant again from Phil and give birth to a 2nd baby and also get pregnant from maybe their gateman and give birth to a 3rd child, you will still say she should be punished and Michael forgive and they live happily ever after. Men always saying what they can't do if found in the same situation.

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Re: United In Betrayal by chisiudeh: 2:07pm On Jul 09, 2017
I dey church dey refresh my phone searching for updates. E remain small make pastor say brother remember you're in the house of God.

PamelB you too much.

As for you people Amara and Michael , the journey has only begun.

Soo happy for Kelvin and Gertrude . At least oga pregnancy Kezaya did not distribute pregnancy to her too.

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