rachealfst:
So who am I if you are his biggest fan. Mr runaway husband.lol

Then you'd be his second biggest fan... Mrs run away wife


ASIDES; how have you been?

I finally get to read this. Great suspense filled piece.

o boy see confam story

Op afta dis story eh jus halla me make I buy u one bottle of burukutu biko u deserve am...lol

SleekHoyeen:
Lool. I need a mixture of ogogoro and refnol, please, I need to know the devil even before Souloho reveals him

oya take. But be careful oh, lest you see hell instead of the devil.

souloho19:
Pastor Batholomew came in just as Osi was contemplating leaving the house. He had been holding onto the the house key and thinking if he should leave it in the flowerpot as usual.

°•°•°•°•

Maybe she wasn't that bad after all because she studied hi. for some seconds and led the way without saying anything. Osi followed her.
They ascended a flight of steps and Osi couldn't help but wonder how injured Joy would be. Pastor Bartholomew had contradicted himself, first indicating the bruising was horrible but later he had said she looked okay and wasn't really hurt .
Osi decided the pastor didn't want him to worry but he prayed that indeed the injury would be minor.
He thought about Dé Nwachukwu and Amara and wondered how they were holding up.

°•°•°•°•

Might be wrong

Hehehehehehehe....

Toying with your audience emotion with an undeniable and devastating accuracy.

Leaving clues here and there...

Then flowing with the audiences comments(just like some comedians) .. making it possible for you to twist who the killer might be as easily as you left the clues... *smiles* a captivating talent indeed...

The possibility of what that head of yours could come with is endless. hehehehe..
However, Credit should go to your audience whose extraordinary comments, ideas,debate,argument,opinion, spurs you on and contributed in an unspeakable way to make you an extraordinary writer.


Well, well, back to the story at hand... the clues left were many to nail the European.
And moreover the activities of the European is not helping his cause either..
That brutal rape and murder of his wife NAILED him completely. it is not a coincidence and neither was there a copy cat.

A copy cat?? how did the said copy cat knew about the European secret?? Doesn't make sense...

Pastor Bath.?
How could he have murder okudili when he himself was at the vigil too... and I am guessing at the high table while Osi ministered.. But the wine incident makes him a suspect too. He could easily locate where the wine is but what rules him out concerning that clues was that, he too would have drank from that wine... unless ....well your guess is as good as mine.

The butcher
He is just one of the decoy or should I say a pawn threw in by the writer to make the debate of who the devil is longer and even more interesting and undoubtedly captivating.
I wonder how educated the butcher might be to be able to have perfect knowledge of that poison. How did he know where the wine was?? Remember the devil easily located that wine.

Paul??
I have effect evilly ruled out the wanna be kidnapper. He is just another pawn in this game. His incident with Amara doesn't in anyway portray him the devil... he did what he did to Amara publicly while Joy was inside... something the devil would never do.


Well, our best bet is the white man but pastor Bath. can't be ruled out totally.

But as things stand now, all directions point to the WHITE MAN.

An interesting story..
Like I said before, With souloho19 on the wheel, you are in for and an intriguing adventure.

Who has not entertained so far??
You??
I doubt.

Excellent.

meneski:
oya take. But be careful oh, lest you see hell instead of the devil.

Lol. I will be careful.

honourable356:
Hehehehehehehe....

Toying with your audience emotion with an undeniable and devastating accuracy.

Leaving clues here and there...

Then flowing with the audiences comments(just like some comedians) .. making it possible for you to twist who the killer might be as easily as you left the clues... *smiles* a captivating talent indeed...

The possibility of what that head of yours could come with is endless. hehehehe..
However, Credit should go to your audience whose extraordinary comments, ideas,debate,argument,opinion, spurs you on and contributed in an unspeakable way to make you an extraordinary writer.


Well, well, back to the story at hand... the clues left were many to nail the European.
And moreover the activities of the European is not helping his cause either..
That brutal rape and murder of his wife NAILED him completely. it is not a coincidence and neither was there a copy cat.

A copy cat?? how did the said copy cat knew about the European secret?? Doesn't make sense...

Pastor Bath.?
How could he have murder okudili when he himself was at the vigil too... and I am guessing at the high table while Osi ministered.. But the wine incident makes him a suspect too. He could easily locate where the wine is but what rules him out concerning that clues was that, he too would have drank from that wine... unless ....well your guess is as good as mine.

The butcher
He is just one of the decoy or should I say a pawn threw in by the writer to make the debate of who the devil is longer and even more interesting and undoubtedly captivating.
I wonder how educated the butcher might be to be able to have perfect knowledge of that poison. How did he know where the wine was?? Remember the devil easily located that wine.

Paul??
I have effect evilly ruled out the wanna be kidnapper. He is just another pawn in this game. His incident with Amara doesn't in anyway portray him the devil... he did what he did to Amara publicly while Joy was inside... something the devil would never do.


Well, our best bet is the white man but pastor Bath. can't be ruled out totally.

But as things stand now, all directions point to the WHITE MAN.

An interesting story..
Like I said before, With souloho19 on the wheel, you are in for and an intriguing adventure.

Who has not entertained so far??
You??
I doubt.

Excellent.

To add to your findings: Remember that after the communion, the European asked Osi if the had taken communion at home before the service.Osi's reply made him angry. It means Steve was the one that exchange the wine.

Wow this has kept me glue to my phone since today.... Souloho19 this is what we call master piss..... Great work man... Bless

GODSMILEFOREVER:
To add to your findings: Remember that after the communion, the European asked Osi if the had taken communion at home before the service.Osi's reply made him angry. It means Steve was the one that exchange the wine.

see I support u nd Honourable.... I've been sayin it, nd I'll continue to say dat Stevenson is d Killer...

Oga Souloho19 if u want to put twist as u've earlier said...... Sha dont lie dat Stevenson is not d killer, so as to please some people dat are stil a 'douting Thomas' after u've made it obvious dat d devil is STEVENSON!!!

Weldone my crush....

The devil has a small feet. He wears size 39-40, which doesnt in any way match the Europeans' physical build. And that sole reason is all the alibi he needs for me acquit him.

honourable356:
Hehehehehehehe....

Toying with your audience emotion with an undeniable and devastating accuracy.

Leaving clues here and there...

Then flowing with the audiences comments(just like some comedians) .. making it possible for you to twist who the killer might be as easily as you left the clues... *smiles* a captivating talent indeed...

The possibility of what that head of yours could come with is endless. hehehehe..
However, Credit should go to your audience whose extraordinary comments, ideas,debate,argument,opinion, spurs you on and contributed in an unspeakable way to make you an extraordinary writer.


Well, well, back to the story at hand... the clues left were many to nail the European.
And moreover the activities of the European is not helping his cause either..
That brutal rape and murder of his wife NAILED him completely. it is not a coincidence and neither was there a copy cat.

A copy cat?? how did the said copy cat knew about the European secret?? Doesn't make sense...

Pastor Bath.?
How could he have murder okudili when he himself was at the vigil too... and I am guessing at the high table while Osi ministered.. But the wine incident makes him a suspect too. He could easily locate where the wine is but what rules him out concerning that clues was that, he too would have drank from that wine... unless ....well your guess is as good as mine.

The butcher
He is just one of the decoy or should I say a pawn threw in by the writer to make the debate of who the devil is longer and even more interesting and undoubtedly captivating.
I wonder how educated the butcher might be to be able to have perfect knowledge of that poison. How did he know where the wine was?? Remember the devil easily located that wine.

Paul??
I have effect evilly ruled out the wanna be kidnapper. He is just another pawn in this game. His incident with Amara doesn't in anyway portray him the devil... he did what he did to Amara publicly while Joy was inside... something the devil would never do.


Well, our best bet is the white man but pastor Bath. can't be ruled out totally.

But as things stand now, all directions point to the WHITE MAN.

An interesting story..
Like I said before, With souloho19 on the wheel, you are in for and an intriguing adventure.

Who has not entertained so far??
You??
I doubt.

Excellent.

TUba69:
The devil has a small feet. He wears size 39-40, which doesnt in any way match the Europeans' physical build. And that sole reason is all the alibi he needs for me acquit him.

This evaluation is excellent!

marvwhite:
i think you are wrong. When Okudili and Stevenson as a character was introduced,they had the below conversation ....
"This drink is for real men! Your type should
drink ribena and leave this for men" Okudili
replied him rudely. The only thing that had
kept him from beating the man to a pulp
was because he knew he would be in
trouble with the community.
"Ah..I'd bring by a bottle of SCOTCH later,
you'd enjoy it" Stevenson said"

scoth is an ACHOLIC drink...or is it not?

Who would keep a scotch in his house and claims he doesnt drink? Huh?

He doesn't carry it about to a point of dropping the bottle or flask at the crime scene

marvwhite:
Then you'd be his second biggest fan... Mrs run away wife


ASIDES; how have you been?

I'm doing great,thanks.

marvwhite:
Then you'd be his second biggest fan... Mrs run away wife


ASIDES; how have you been?

I'm doing great,thanks.

subtlemee:



He doesn't carry it about to a point of dropping the bottle or flask at the crime scene

what about he took it out dat particular time in a disclosed place to chill out dats also possible u know? After highing out he pounced on d prey leaving the bottle dere to point it to some1 else which is okwudili dats always been knw with d bottles this is all the plan of the writer to just get us tinking mr souloho wehdone again o

Gracias!

De John on my mind.

OluwabuqqyYOLO:

This evaluation is excellent!

souloho19:


https://www.nairaland.com/3571801/delayed-diagnosis


thanks dear...that's the link (above) to my first story. God bless

And you too. Thanks Mon Ami...

to me you're the best male writer on nairaland. Your story is suspense filled, intriguing, action packed and romantic as well. It's as if I'm watching it on TV. Abeg keep up the good work you'll definitely go places. Nice one jare and God bless u

the suspense is getting too much..

I don't think Stevenson is the rapist. How can he be in Amara's house tutoring her and still get to know where OSI hid behind a tree? I'm just guessing it's a coincidence. Well...Fingers crossed tho.

HelenBee:
I don't think Stevenson is the rapist. How can he be in Amara's house tutoring her and still get to know where OSI hid behind a tree? I'm just guessing it's a coincidence. Well...Fingers crossed tho.

Well am not saying his d rapist buh according to d writer... d rapist saw osi hiding at dat spot nd dat gave him a better idea of where to hide... so I fink maybe Stevenson saw him but pretended not to.. dat explains why he decided to carry his briefcase along the second tym he went to amara house, if not den tell me why he didn't carry it d first tym he went to amara's house

Nmaglit:
i can't wait for the day the monster will b caught. Lovely update

thanks bro..I can hardly wait also but I feel very soon his luck would run out.

jagugu88li:
Let me get my Dolce & Gabbana coz I am angel .

Someone please brew me some tradition beer or wine.......I will need it.

Thanks ma.......make I see what we have here
Chai....page 31......I have die

welcome, I believe you'd catch up don't worry. as for the drink we have excess palmwine so just help yourself

Oroolorun:
Oga Souloho19, u really deserve to be arrest & prosecute since u know d devil who had been committing all this evil crimes & u refused to name him so that he can receive part of the 49.4 million stones satan received in Mecca this year. Ride on.

lol..don't worry better rock would fall on the devil when his time is up

iamloyalty:



Pastor Batholomew had
contradicted himself, first
indicating the bruising was
horrible but later he had said she
looked okay and wasn't really
hurt.
Osi decided the pastor didn't
want him to worry but he prayed
that indeed the injury would be
minor.

This and the wine incident makes the me to suspectios of the pastor and his brother.

Paul: Of all the girls the devil has lusted after oluchi was not among and no attempt has been on her yet. The devil cannot rape or kill his own sister. So I wont rule paul out yet.

The butcher: He his good in using the knife, he never liked okudili, he his always at the market making him to see everything going on.

Steve: The word bitches and the açt of bestiality is common with Europeans.

My #1000 bet is still on steve although am still waiting to be surprised.

nice analysis...by the way where is mobecs? I remember she bet her Christmas chicken that the devil is Paul.
just in case I would need that drumstick.

Observer3:
o boy see confam story

Op afta dis story eh jus halla me make I buy u one bottle of burukutu biko u deserve am...lol

lol thanks boss..a bottle of ammunition from delayed diagnosis or a litre of Dé John's palmwine would do the trick

souloho19:


lol thanks boss..a bottle of ammunition from delayed diagnosis or a litre of Dé John's palmwine would do the trick

u no won update today

honourable356:
Hehehehehehehe....

Toying with your audience emotion with an undeniable and devastating accuracy.

Leaving clues here and there...

Then flowing with the audiences comments(just like some comedians) .. making it possible for you to twist who the killer might be as easily as you left the clues... *smiles* a captivating talent indeed...

The possibility of what that head of yours could come with is endless. hehehehe..
However, Credit should go to your audience whose extraordinary comments, ideas,debate,argument,opinion, spurs you on and contributed in an unspeakable way to make you an extraordinary writer.


Well, well, back to the story at hand... the clues left were many to nail the European.
And moreover the activities of the European is not helping his cause either..
That brutal rape and murder of his wife NAILED him completely. it is not a coincidence and neither was there a copy cat.

A copy cat?? how did the said copy cat knew about the European secret?? Doesn't make sense...

Pastor Bath.?
How could he have murder okudili when he himself was at the vigil too... and I am guessing at the high table while Osi ministered.. But the wine incident makes him a suspect too. He could easily locate where the wine is but what rules him out concerning that clues was that, he too would have drank from that wine... unless ....well your guess is as good as mine.

The butcher
He is just one of the decoy or should I say a pawn threw in by the writer to make the debate of who the devil is longer and even more interesting and undoubtedly captivating.
I wonder how educated the butcher might be to be able to have perfect knowledge of that poison. How did he know where the wine was?? Remember the devil easily located that wine.

Paul??
I have effect evilly ruled out the wanna be kidnapper. He is just another pawn in this game. His incident with Amara doesn't in anyway portray him the devil... he did what he did to Amara publicly while Joy was inside... something the devil would never do.


Well, our best bet is the white man but pastor Bath. can't be ruled out totally.

But as things stand now, all directions point to the WHITE MAN.

An interesting story..
Like I said before, With souloho19 on the wheel, you are in for and an intriguing adventure.

Who has not entertained so far??
You??
I doubt.

Excellent.

honourable I greet you sir, you're right the readers have been 100% helpful and responsible for the progress of this story. I never knew we had so many detectives on nairaland o.. thanks for your comment it is indeed honourable
As for the killer..........

Honeydawealth:
see I support u nd Honourable.... I've been sayin it, nd I'll continue to say dat Stevenson is d Killer...

Oga Souloho19 if u want to put twist as u've earlier said...... Sha dont lie dat Stevenson is not d killer, so as to please some people dat are stil a 'douting Thomas' after u've made it obvious dat d devil is STEVENSON!!!

Weldone my crush....

lol..nothing is certain yet o, don't worry everything would be explained in due time and the dots would connect. but Steve is really looking like the devil. I'd bet the Christmas chicken I'd win from Mobecs on the european

DeadRat:
u no won update today

I go update very soon, lemme just cross the T's and dot the I's.. gracias bro

souloho19:


lol..nothing is certain yet o, don't worry everything would be explained in due time and the dots would connect. but Steve is really looking like the devil. I'd bet the Christmas chicken I'd win from Mobecs on the european

oh! Okay, I believe u........ Still I'll say weldone!