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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by WHOcarex: 1:29pm On Feb 17, 2018
Why Ezinne and Soma? Why not Ezinne and Ononche?
Anyway sha, Weldon

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by pweetymhi(f): 1:36pm On Feb 17, 2018
lonesome501:
hahahahahahaha!! can't stop laughing..imagine who @pweetymhi z praying to is it d lord jesus christ or lord rachealfst
to both ni o,it until Jesus touch rachealfst's heart DT she will not type "and d trigger was pulled".......
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Holluwaphlexy(m): 1:55am On Feb 18, 2018
started from the bottom now i'm here i just two days...........you are doing a great job ma'am btw i sent u a message on fb ma'am
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by olatex25(m): 3:45pm On Feb 18, 2018
where's rachealfst self... cum and continue dis story jor
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by teel123(f): 4:35pm On Feb 18, 2018
we no go gree, rachealfst we no go gree,no update since on Thursday. #carrying placard # abeg we follow.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 10:49am On Feb 19, 2018
AFAM
I was confused, I can't even think straight for some seconds. I don't have any security details as I'm still new here, I only have such contacts in Enugu. I decided to call the Enugu police command just to give it a trial.

The ASP promised to help me to radio Lagos police headquarters. Then from there they'll contact the nearest police station.
He asked for the address and I gave him. I ended the call but was convinced that the plan is a futile one already.
"Oba!" I said aloud. I checked the time it was 1:15am. I dialed his number instantly.
"Oba, please pick up" I said into the phone. Finally I heard his sleepy voice.
"Daddy Afam! Hope all is well”
"Oba! Amara and Crystal are in danger. Thieves are in their house as we speak"
"What?"
"Amara just called now. I've called the Enugu police..
"Enugu what! That we take long. We have a vigilante group in my area. I'll go talk to them now. In no time we’ll be there"
"What about me?"
"Just stay put"
"No, I can't. I'll come in my car"
Ok, please be careful" he said and hung up.

____________________Toyin Taiwo




OBA
I only picked my phone and rushed out of my apartment. I ran as fast as possible to the head vigilante's house.

One of the vigilante opened the door to me as he recognized me. He lead me to the head vigilante's. I explained my plight and he appointed eight of the vigilantes to go with me. We left in their van.
We got there in no time since the road was free. We parked few houses away from Crystals in order not to alert the thieves.

I sighted a car that just parked behind us. It was Daddy Afam's car. The vigilante wants to make a move towards him but I told them to lower their weapon that he’s with me.

The vigilantes placed themselves in strategic places while five of them sneak into the compound. Daddy Afam followed behind quietly.

We peeped from the window and saw nothing as the window was covered with bland. Then we heard voices, from the conversation going on inside we knew they were assassins because they just instructed Crystal and her mum to say their last prayer. The vigilante charged in immediately before they do the unthinkable as Crystal and her mum her already saying their last prayers.
"Drop your weapons. Now!" The guy who led the vigilante group ordered.

The two criminals obeyed. "On your knees, hands in the air" he commanded. I'm sure they already sized the vigilantes up and know they are not match with them.
Then we heard police sirens.
"The police are here. We'll hand them over to the police" The leader said and dragged the criminals out.
Daddy Afam rushed in but Crystal ran into my arms crying. She hugged Crystal's mum instead.

______________Toyin Taiwo
"It's ok, everything is fine now" I said.
"Oba we almost died" She cried more hugging me tight.
"It's over now. You and your mum are safe now"
Daddy Afam eyes was fixed on us as she watched Crystal in my arms.
"Crystal! I said and release her. She got my message and walked into her father's arm and hugged him. She started crying again as her father comforted her.

Crystal mum walked up to me and hugged me. Thanking me for coming to their rescue. She asked where I got the vigilantes from and I told her I'll explain everything to her later. Some residents were already in the compound to know what's going on.

Some landlords too came upstairs to congratulate Crystal and her mum as they heard that they almost got killed.
One of the police came in and told us that we have to come to the station in the morning to write statements.
I went downstairs and met with the vigilantes. I thanked them for their help and promised to come see them in the morning. I mean to give them something, they deserve it.
Some minutes later the whole compound was empty again. The police had gone with the alleged criminals and so also the vigilante group. The neighbours too left.

Around 3am, Crystal and her mum had calmed down. Daddy Afam and I waited for them in the sitting room while mother and daughter went to their various rooms to shower and change as the former clothing they had on was soaked with sweats and tears.
When they returned Daddy Afam explained all that happened to them as they we're curious to know how the vigilante and police came to their rescue. The police was the one who amazed us most as they we're been radioed from Enugu Police Headquarters.
By 4am we decided to take a little rest before the day break as we all had a long night. Daddy Afam and I slept in the guest room.


______________Toyin Taiwo
I woke up early the next morning and went to the living room. I met Crystal lying on the couch. I startled her a bit but she relaxed when she knew I was the one. She sat up and I sat beside her.
"On a lighter mood. I thought we agree on seeing each other on Saturday" I said
She just smiled and held my hands.
"I thought so too. Thanks for everything Oba”
Daddy Afam walked in us and coughed.
"Good morning sir" Crystal and I chorused.

____________________Toyin Taiwo



DADDY AFAM
I replied them and took a sit. "I think we should start preparing for the day"
"Yes sir... the police station" Oba said feeling a bit uncomfortable, maybe because of the way I walked in on them.
"Crystal is your mum awake?" I asked.
“Let me go check on her" she said. She was about to stand up when Amara showed up.
"Here she comes" I said.
"Good morning to you all" She said as she walked in with her Bible and a book, a devotional book I guessed. She sat on the couch I was sitting on.
" It's time for morning devotion" She announced and we start.

Thirty minutes later we were done. Mother and child went upstairs to wash up. Oba and I didn't bother to bath as we have no change of clothes. We only brushed, Amara gave us new tooth brushes.

Some neighbours showed up to greet them. And by 8am we left the house for the station. We got to the station. Amara and Crystal wrote a statement. Then a detective attended to us after wards. I requested to see the DPO and the detective took us to his office.
At the DPO's office, I introduced myself. We were told that the criminals had confessed after been tortured.
"Please, who sent them?" I asked.
He looked at the four of us. Then turn to face me.
"Who is Beatrice and what is her relationship with you? The DPO asked.

I closed my eyes and placed my right hand on my forehead. I couldn't believe what I just heard. Beatrice attempted to kill my daughter and her mother. Despite the fact that I actually came down to Lagos in order to protect them from her. She still got to them under my watch and I almost kill them.

______________Toyin Taiwo
Someone tapped me and I jolted out of reverie.
"Sir!”
"Beatrice is my ex-wife"
"What?" The three of them chorused.
"Do you know why she wanted them killed" He asked.
"Yes" I nodded and explain everything.
"We have ordered the immediate arrest of your ex- wife. By tomorrow she should be in our custody. We already radioed Enugu divisions, they are arresting her today and we will take it from there" He informed.
He gave the detective who was with us some instructions regarding the case.
We thank them for their hard work and left the police station.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by dissybling(f): 11:01am On Feb 19, 2018
oh tank God for that.. ...no body got hurt

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by temig(f): 11:33am On Feb 19, 2018
nice one thank God DAT evil woman will be arrested oba and crystal hmmmmmm

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Sojikhing: 12:30pm On Feb 19, 2018
Thank God they are safe

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by olatex25(m): 3:16pm On Feb 19, 2018
haaa, I cross my hrt... I almost catch fear oo, rachealfst won't kill me before my time. this ur suspense eh.... I know from d onset is d handwork of dat witch "Beatrice "... thank God dey survive it, that's is power of prayer, cos I wonder why an assassins will wait dat long to execute dere plan.. but when d miracle working God is at work, u won't expect less..
rachealfst u are d best

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Deckline(m): 4:18pm On Feb 19, 2018
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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Deckline(m): 4:18pm On Feb 19, 2018
...but for the fact that crystal hugged that keke napep driver before her father just explained her foolishness and confusion.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Ehmjay(m): 4:56pm On Feb 19, 2018
Nawa for diz beatrice ooo Nice update ma'am...keep em coming

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by nerd51(f): 5:11pm On Feb 19, 2018
This Beatrice sef eh. Nice one, Rachaelfst

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by marychommy(f): 8:06pm On Feb 19, 2018
Deckline:
...but for the fact that crystal hugged that keke napep driver before her father just explained her foolishness and confusion.
and u get sense. why calling him keke napep driver. never u look down on humble beinging

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Deckline(m): 8:21pm On Feb 19, 2018
marychommy:
and u get sense. why calling him keke napep driver. never u look down on humble beinging
and you get sense. why calling it "humble beinging". It's humble beginning. never u look down on the importance of education.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by vickyluvspices(f): 8:35pm On Feb 19, 2018
lemme jejely comment since i have been hiding onecorner for a while now.....indeed dere is power in prayer tank d god in op book dat crystal and her mum is safe.......my soma is in luv.why? tought was ezinne&onochie......i like oba personality so i will grudgingly shift to #oba&crystal...tanks rachealfst for d update.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by cyndy1000(f): 9:48pm On Feb 19, 2018
Oba is really a Savior and a blessing to n Afam his family.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by lonesome501(m): 9:49pm On Feb 19, 2018
help!! help!! help!!,,who knw hw to beat newly harvested rice,pls.. i swear to j.j dat i am goin to beat d wheat out of madam beatrice lyf...weldone jare,,rachealfst
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 12:19am On Feb 20, 2018
Thank God
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 7:13am On Feb 20, 2018
Deckline:
...but for the fact that crystal hugged that keke napep driver before her father just explained her foolishness and confusion.
But he is a graduate and he hasn't seen a real job moreover he is a cab man not a keke driver

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Dessydemmy: 10:45am On Feb 20, 2018
I thought has much. Thank God for His mercy over them.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 5:04pm On Feb 20, 2018
Dedication:
marychommy, Goldstar24, olatex25, Holluwaphlexy, quenitee, ndy87, nanadeeva01, Holar995, lonesome501


MUMMY EJIOFOR
We left the police station and went back to the house while Afam and Oba just drop us off and left as they haven't freshen up. Crystal and I couldn't go to work that very day, we came back late from the police station. We both called our place of work.

Afam and Oba came back in the afternoon and I had to give Afam the piece of my mind.

"Afam! I'm very sorry but I don't want you around me and my daughter anymore" I poured out..

"You can't say that Amara. I left Enugu just to protect you from her"
"Yes and you almost have us killed by your so called protections. Is it not obvious that she followed you down here"
"I never knew she was stalking me. I thought since I wasn't in Enugu. She would have given up her search for me"
"Afam that is your business not mine. Just leave my daughter and I alone. We were doing well before you came back into our lives"

"So you are saying....

"I'm saying, I don't want you to bring your problems and dump them on us" I snapped.

"Take it easy ma. Please!"

"I won't Oba. We were doing fine before now and we almost got killed because of his psychopath wife"

"Ex-wife" Afam corrected.

"Whatever, do I look like I care about who she is to you!"

"Ma, I…..” I cut Oba short.

"Oba, I think I've tried. I allowed Father and daughter reunite. People even talked me out of it but still I chose to allow him into my daughter's life. And please what do I get in return? Death sentence!"

"Mum! Please take it easy. Daddy meant no harm" Crystal pleaded.

"Please Amara, once Beatrice is arrested then you will all be safe" Afam’s statement upset me the more.
"Oh! You think so. What happens when you throw her into prison. You think her sons will fold their hands and applaud you for throwing their mother in jail because of another child and the mother. All this is still coming back to us by the time they plan taking their revenge on you.

"Daddy, My mum is right on this. We are still not safe. Giving the kind of children...you....have" she said avoiding her father’s eyes.

Afam was looking so devastated after Crystal said those words.
"Dad I'm sorry that came out wrong"
He didn't say anything still.
"Dad you are not talking"

"Daddy Afam!" Oba called out and he looked up this time.
"You sure know I won't allow anyone hurt you two. Even if it means protecting you two with my life. I'm ready to do it but please don't push me away" He pleaded with his eyes as he continued.

"Don't worry about my sons. If by any means they pose to be a threats. I'll report to the police....

"And have them locked up too!" I cut in.

"That's not what I meant. I'll just make sure you are protected from them" he explained.

"I think that's a good idea" Oba said in support.
Afam announced they were leaving. He came and sat beside me.

"Amara, you're breaking my heart a million times with this attitude you're putting up with me. Please don't be hostile to me. I can't stand seeing you like this not after everything I've caused you in the past"

I didn't say a word, I just sat with my back rested on the chair, my arms folded on my chest and legs crossed.

"Daddy Afam, please let's leave. She'll come around. It's normal for her to act this way" Oba said.

"Amara you have to come around. You can't shut me out of your life. We have a house warming party to plan and you already gave me your word that you'll take care of it"

I kept quiet still. He kissed me on the forehead and I melted,, I can't remember the last time I got that gesture from a man. He stood up, hugged his daughter and left with Oba

"Aww.... Mummy I saw that" Crystal teased acting like an over pampered Child.

"Saw what?" I feigned ignorance. It was now obvious she saw the way I reacted earlier.

"Nothing" She grinned and went upstairs.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 5:06pm On Feb 20, 2018
To everyone who just join the thread, I'm sorry if I can't mention names but I say Welcome on board.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Sojikhing: 5:49pm On Feb 20, 2018
its normal for her to be pissed but she will surely come around.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 6:25pm On Feb 20, 2018
Aunty writer, this story is on fire o, chai! May God continue to bless and enrich your life in Jesus name.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 7:03pm On Feb 20, 2018
Hehehe
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by kunleis4u(m): 7:32pm On Feb 20, 2018
rachaelfst i know your pen can judge exactly the way you want it, can you just judge afam sons and ex-wife death by hanging so that everyone will be in peace once and for all. may God continue to bless you and your family

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Horlar995(m): 7:34pm On Feb 20, 2018
Thanks so much ma'am for the mention....... Loving this story more and more

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by marychommy(f): 8:33pm On Feb 20, 2018
thanks for d mention and another double thank u for dis update.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Adesina12: 8:34pm On Feb 20, 2018
rachealfst:
To everyone who just join the thread, I'm sorry if I can't mention names but I say Welcome on board.

Thank you
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by marychommy(f): 8:37pm On Feb 20, 2018
Deckline:

and you get sense. why calling it "humble beinging". It's humble beginning. never u look down on the importance of education.
am too old to be exchanging words with u as u r Englishmaster dat knows it all. invite me to ur wedding I promise u I will be Der live and direct

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