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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Stormisova(m): 10:02am On Mar 16, 2018
ghost mode deactivated... what a nice write up..thumps up

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by wizsolzy(m): 11:47am On Mar 16, 2018
skubido:



guy uno maybe broz imself dey watch u so. Lolzzz,


me do waka pass oo. Incase if kasala wan burst.



Good morning to u all. Hope d night make sense?

So u Kant even help a brother in times of trouble

Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by cbella(f): 11:58am On Mar 16, 2018
unpredictedone:
people who patronize native doctors wouldn't like this update.

Toyin Toma, well come oooh

how your P.A (Cbella)? lol


Lol! Funny
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 1:08pm On Mar 16, 2018
wizsolzy:


So u Kant even help a brother in times of trouble



tank God uno say na trouble... Nd u say make i con help, abi moti help ni.. Don run 4 my life oo


Shebi trouble sit 4 one corner jelely, na u go disturb ham na. Lolzzz
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 2:57pm On Mar 16, 2018
Dedication:
Cbella, TEMMYtopeadex, Funstel, superjaks, Stormisova, dissbling, wizsolzy, Whocarex, WarriFirstBorn, Jane1234f, nerd51, yetejide, ewawunmi




CRYSTAL
My love for Oba grew on a daily basis to the extent that my day was never complete without setting my eyes on him and that was same for him.
He had already relocated to a two bedroom apartment since we were already planning for our wedding. He apologized he couldn't give me a bigger house like that of my parents but I don't care.

Oba used up almost all his savings to pay for the accommodation. I told him to allow me assist but he didn't let me. I had to take up the interior decoration upon myself without seeking his consent because he won't agree. And I don't want him to spend everything he has on him since I also work and earn my own money.

Daddy also offered to help but Oba never like living off people. All he wants from me is to believe in him 100%. Of a truth, he's plan is so great that I draw inspiration from him myself. He's a man with dreams and vision and a hard working fellow at that.

He just came back from work one day and met everything fixed. He called and thanked me for my support.
I took Oba with me to the last picnic we had in the circle. I introduced him to all my friends and he was gladly welcome into our midst. One of the things I love about Oba is his Charisma and how he package himself. One look at him, you'll think he works in a corporate firm and when he speaks you will have no choice than to give him audience.

Oba applied for the Exxon mobil online recruitment. At first I thought, they will only recruit based on connection. But to my amazement, Oba made to the very last screening. And the last will soon hold the following month with very few candidates left.

Aside Exxon mobil, three of my male friends and myself are also pressing buttons here and there just to make sure he secure a job, I don't want him to put all his eggs in one basket. Luckily, companies have been calling him for interviews. All we are waiting for is for him to be call up to resume his official assignment.

__________Toyin Taiwo
We already had a plan since we have many options before us including the Exxon mobil offer. And our plan was to sit and pray over it in order to choose the best when the job offers rolls in.
Oba gave me a spare key so I had access to the house. Ever since Mum got married we had moved in with Dad. We rented our former house out, mum said she'll rather rent it out than to sell it, because that was her sweat. We still run both the Supermarket and pharmacy. Mum only visits on Saturdays.

Oba called me on Friday morning at work. He told me he had good news for me. I told him to tell me but he said I had to come over. I told him I have a 7pm meeting in the office and only God knows when I'll leave the office. Since we already had plans for Saturday, I told him I'll be in his house first thing on Saturday morning. I stylishly tease him so he could tell me but all he said was 'see you tomorrow my precious jewel'
I gave up, I had to just wait till the next day to find out what the good news was.
I got back home some minutes to 10pm. Dad and Mum were in the sitting room watching network news.
I greeted them and went upstairs to my room. I showered and join them later.
"Your food is in the microwave, the house helps had already retired to their quarters" Mum said.
"We were served fried rice and chicken during the meeting. I'm ok"
"You didn't give your secretary the food this time" Mum asked while Dad was engrossed in what he's watching.
"She already left. Mum the food was so tasty. No wonder Silver always wait behind just to get the food" I said and we both laughed.
I informed them I'm going to Oba's place the next day to spend the weekend.
My dad shifted his gaze from the TV screen back to me. When he heard me mention the name 'Oba'
“Crystal!”
“Yes Daddy”
"When will you two pick a date or do you want us to do it for you, because that's the normal norm it’s just that but things have changed this days so we allow you choose. But if you don’t, then I'll summon Oba’s parents so we can fix a wedding date" he said.

______________Toyin Taiwo
"Daddy....
"Don't Daddy my husband young woman! I've told you and Oba same thing. Be fast about it so you won't give room for temptations" says my mum.
"Mum! Dad! We'll fix a date once Oba gets his appointment letter. And that will be settled in few weeks by God's grace"
"Must you wait till he gets a job! You alone can sponsor your wedding not to talk of you having parents who will gladly take up the responsibility without any of you spending a dime" Mum tackled.
"Exactly my point, but Oba will never allow that. To even work for me is a problem for him" Dad added.
"Don't worry, we'll give you grandchildren very soon"
"Eh miss! This is not about grandchildren. Crystal, don't just give the devil a chance. I know what I'm saying o. Infact stop going to his house. The two of you should meet in open space henceforth till you get married" She said authoritatively.
"Mum!"
"What! That's not a suggestion, it's an instruction and it's effective from now"
"Honey! Take it easy on her. Remember she's not a little girl anymore, she's a grown woman. Though I'm surprised that both of them never get physical despite their closeness which is very impressive in this day and age. I think you should just let them be since they know what their doing" Dad said trying to make mum ease up a bit.
All mothers are the same. Oba's mum summoned Oba and I last week, telling us to avoid pre-marital sex for some reasons.
“Mum, as much as I hate to discuss my sex life in front of you, Dad and Oba's parents, I still have to say this. There's nothing like that going on between us. As for mum you know there's nothing like sex between Oba and I. So why the sudden insecurity?"
"Crystal! If you are careful before, you have to be extra careful this time around I beg you in God's name" Mum pleaded with me.
"Ok ma. Thanks, I understand you are looking out for me"
"And as for you tell that stubborn son of mine, that I give you both one week to come up with a date or we'll do it for you" Dad instructed.
"Ok Daddy, we'll address the issue tomorrow"
I thanked my parents. We had our night prayer and we all left the sitting room.
____________________Toyin Taiwo

******
I was at Oba's apartment the next day. The first thing I did was to raise the issue.
"Oba, dad gave us one week ultimatum to pick a wedding date or they'll pick one for us. And by 'they' I mean both parents” I said while watching him arranging his washed clothes into the wardrobe.
He left what he was doing and took my hand. He led me to the bed to sit while he sat next to me.
"Then we have no other choice, let's pick a date then" He said.
"Really! You want us to do that now?"
"Yes, we’ve been dating for more than six months now. I proposed three months ago, so let's go ahead and have the wedding"
"So let's pick a date and start praying on it"
"Will you pick for us?" He asked me.
"No o, you are the man, so go ahead and pick a date. If it's not okay by me I'll let you know"
"Can we have it in two months time?"
"Did I hear you right! Next two month! You want it that fast too!"
"Yeah! Can't wait to spend the rest of my life with you. Now you pick the day" he said.
"Okay.... let's see" I checked the calendar on my phone and he brought out his phone too. "Today is third Saturday in July right?"
"Yes" he nodded.
Let's make it third Saturday in September" I said.
"That makes it exactly two months from now"
"Yes, so let the planning begin……" I said happily.
"And tell Daddy not to bother with the financial aspect. The two of us we cover it ourselves"
"Ok I will. But we both know that is not possible”
“Its possible sweetheart”

____________________Toyin Taiwo
“Dream on” I said and hit him playfully.
“Ouch!” He exclaimed feigning pain. I started laughing. He begged me to support him. I told him to cater for his personal things, handle his personal stuff and leave the rest to Daddy. I told him I will do the same too Oba insisted. I had to agree with him.
“Let’s call our parents now and inform them” I said trying to reach for my phone.
“No don’t tell them over the phone. We will both go home and inform them” He said.
“You've kept me in suspense for too long. Now what’s the good news” I demanded.
"You just remembered the good news abi now that the wedding date has been fixed"
"It's not like that you need to see mum acting up last night. So I had to deal with the issue first when I got here"
"I understand, just joking anyway"
"So what's the good news?" I asked.
"You guess"
"Oba stop, after waiting till now! I can't guess, just tell me"
"Just try sweetheart. Think my love, what good news do you think we need right now?"
"Jesus! Oba you got the job! And please tell me I'm right" I said closing my eyes tightly.
"I got a job with Exonn mobil and I'm resuming Monday morning"
I jumped on him and we both fell on the bed.
"You are such a favored man, you got a job in Exon mobil without any connections. I love you...."
"I love you more. He replied and kissed me and I responded. I got hold of myself and stood up immediately.
"Let's celebrate this" I said we left the room and went into the kitchen to get a bottle of wine and glasses. We had few wine. We agreed not to tell our parents the good news over the phone. Now we have two good news to share, the job and the wedding.

After our light celebration, we were still very much excited. We resolved to play games. We played scrabble. He won the first, the second and was about to win the third round again so I scattered all the tiles and on the board. I did that and ran far from him. He started chasing me round the sitting room playfully.

____________________Toyin Taiwo
"Ojoro" he shouted.
"Why can't you be a gentleman and let me win the third round” I said as he chased me round the sitting room. I ran into the room with the hope of locking the door from behind once I get in but my calculations failed as Oba cut up with me before I could lock the door.

He carried me and threw me on the bed. I was already panting. Next thing he was on top of me.
"Leave me" I giggled and he was laughing too.
"I won't. Why did you scatter the game? Hun!” He asked as he held me down with his two hands.
"Why didn't you allow me win" I said giggling.
"That's why it's call a game. Ehn!" He tickles me and we both started laughing.
He kissed me, I kissed him back. And before we knew it, we lost it. Passion took over, we took off the clothing we had on and we were lying on the bed unclad. I tried to resist but I couldn't. One it's been long I had sex and two I'm in the arms of the man I love with my whole being. I made no effort to stop me as he rode me with passion.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Warfibabe(f): 3:13pm On Mar 16, 2018
ahhhhh!

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by tillaman(m): 3:28pm On Mar 16, 2018
Oba, why you sef ride her with passion, this isn't good at all, TT please tell me it's only just a dream abeg, crystal doesn't deserve to go through what her mom passed through embarassed

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Funstel: 3:35pm On Mar 16, 2018
thanks for the update. thumb up �....

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by mercyymai(f): 3:37pm On Mar 16, 2018
Oh My God !!!

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Adesina12: 3:40pm On Mar 16, 2018
I said it
He has been given the forbidden fruit
This is the BROKEN HEDGE......curse here and there
Chiiisusssssssss.....where is the sangotic TheBlessedMAn?
Countless in the process.....OMG
The die is cast and they both are useless......Oba glory in the stream.....Oooooomyoooo
Rachealfst for the first time you are writing a SATIRE story
Sweet popcorn for you

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Pearl05(f): 3:42pm On Mar 16, 2018
cry cry cry cry

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by laraemi(f): 3:54pm On Mar 16, 2018
Why now
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Pricelessangel0(f): 4:01pm On Mar 16, 2018
cry Not Funny

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 4:10pm On Mar 16, 2018
Haaaaaaaa, Omo ologo, lobafetan, wahala day oo.

So na so den wan take get Oba password.
Kilatimasayeyisi oo koyemi. Ayetoto Ayetoto Ayemale..


Tanks a lot 4d update... Headache tinz

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 4:14pm On Mar 16, 2018
Abeg oooo, prayer warriors whr una dey oooo. We nid serious prayer 4 Oba ooooo

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by yvesboss(m): 4:14pm On Mar 16, 2018
Gbese deeeeeeeeee

Sangba fooo

Awo ya

Beatrice and Ayo don open way.

Hedge has been broken...choiiiiii

But in all..Our God is Merciful.



God bless you Rachaelfst

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by pweetyoge(f): 4:16pm On Mar 16, 2018
i must comment..
your story is amazing dear Op...� God bless u yafu yafu

crystalllll....Obaaaaa Haaaa���...some of us dnt know,but the truth is most times we take away our blessings when we sin against the body...u are passing a deep message to thousands of person(s) dear writer and i must say well done and more grease.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by peejaylemmy(f): 4:19pm On Mar 16, 2018
lipsrsealed lipsrsealed

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 4:24pm On Mar 16, 2018
yvesboss:
Gbese deeeeeeeeee
Sangba fooo
Awo ya
Beatrice and Ayo don open way.
Hedge has been broken...choiiiiii
But in all..Our God is Merciful.


God bless you Rachaelfst



na so, we serve a Merciful GOD
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by charytea(f): 4:35pm On Mar 16, 2018
Haaa! E don happen....

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by charytea(f): 4:35pm On Mar 16, 2018
Haaa! E don happen....

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by JMK9600(f): 4:38pm On Mar 16, 2018
I can't finish reading this. God please don't allow the enemy triumph over them. ���

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Tife101(m): 4:40pm On Mar 16, 2018
The hedge has been broken oooo! Chai!!!! Well done, Madam Rachael
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 4:48pm On Mar 16, 2018
Jesu!!!! Ah ah, morogo

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by cyndy1000(f): 4:55pm On Mar 16, 2018
Oh my God!!!! i just hope she is dreaming. oh no not just Beatrice curse even Ayo baba God please help them oooo ah that's the Hedge

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Treasurewamiri(f): 5:02pm On Mar 16, 2018
Aiye O! Asise NLA GBA!

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rchilee: 5:31pm On Mar 16, 2018
I am disappointed in this couple, no medical tests, notjinh

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Twinkle004(f): 5:32pm On Mar 16, 2018
The Broken Hedge has taken place. I just hope it is a dream ooooo

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by afolabiwunmi: 6:32pm On Mar 16, 2018
Aye le o ibosi oooooooooooooooooooooo

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 6:37pm On Mar 16, 2018
Jesus Christ. Chai

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by yvesboss(m): 6:40pm On Mar 16, 2018
skubido:





na so, we serve a Merciful GOD

Yes ooo

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Mcweber(m): 6:45pm On Mar 16, 2018
The major line I saw in the last update must be "he rode me with passion"


Please don't call me a pervert, I'm still entitled to my own opinion

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