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maria would die, Rhoda would live and peter would marry her

I feel Peter didn't put the diamond in the backpack....

Thanks

Maybe Yinka too the diamond or Peter gave it to him.....
Maria must not die ooooo
Thanks for the update

I said it dt Maria is still alive, at least am a bit relieved for now. Peter too smart abeg, where could d diamond be? Larry thanks so much

I had lost all hopes, I thought Maria was gone, how she survived that is still a miracle..

Peter Black, always one step ahead of everyone, he knows how to play his cards well..

Officer John Balewa, I just don't know what to say about you anymore, your mother has said it, you're emotionless, blinded by myopic and self centered ideology.. Nonsense and Ingredients..


BRAVO LARRYSUN..

I wish Larry would just post all the remaining chapters at once. This suspense is nerve-racking.

I've hated basky for a while now.
And all LarrySun has done about that passion is fuel it some more wt ds last chapter.


Peters child can die so maria should live and marry a better man. His own son should not die for something that was partly Rhodas fault. Afterall he can always marry another woman.

I don't understand how basky dey rationalise o?

It seems he wants maria for himself that would be d perfect revenge. Cold cold bastard

When you think that the story is ending, that's when it is beginning. Looking forward for more episodes. Thanks dear

chai larrysun with better episode

Maria may not survive this one. It's very difficult to survive a gun shot bullet to the neck. Lucky she didn't get hit in the aorta, that would have been instant death.

But the windpipe, very rare and still deadly.

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[quote author=LarrySun post=93135517][/quote]Larry, your pronouns in relation to Rhoda's child is a tad confusing. Towards the end, Rhoda referred to her child as a "she", while John's mom referred to the same child as a "he". Pls, clarify if Rhoda's child is a boy or a girl.

dejavuh0007:
Larry, your pronouns in relation to Rhoda's child is a tad confusing. Towards the end, Rhoda referred to her child as a "she", while John's mom referred to the same child as a "he". Pls, clarify if Rhoda's child is a boy or a girl.

Ohhhhhh! I'm so sorry about that. It's a he. They're both boys.

Thanks for the update

I just pray Blacky’s son doesn’t suffer

Thanks for the lovely update n more Ink to your pen

You are doing a good man. Keep it up

Thanks man for update

LarrySun:
Ohhhhhh! I'm so sorry about that. It's a he. They're both boys.

Good. You've been doing a good job so far.

It's well...
Basket is now a proud father of two

Nice one Larry

so emotional but I wish their plan don't work out. yinka and bros could appear in the scene, they should take the baby. peter would escape as usually . Pls oga Larry put them in the pics . thank youu

kalajina:
so emotional but I wish their plan don't work out. yinka and bros could appear in the scene, they should take the baby. peter would escape as usually . Pls oga Larry put them in the pics . thank youu

Who is 'bros'?

Oga larrysun I cried when Maria was wheeled in...you re good bro and thanks for the amendment

Damn. Basky ends up raising an alpha's offspring. WOMEN AND the SISTERHOOD!!!

Basket would have stayed a while longer but what did he do?
He allowed his anger get to him and NOPED the f out of there.

Larry sir, a quick one: you used 'in' twice instead of 'on' as prepositions. maybe a little bit of mistake but I felt urged to tell you like here '...they watched her play tennis in on the TELEVISION'
(English is crazy if you ask me :/ but we learn everyday dont we?)

EDIT: thats btw though and tbh you are a wonderful storyteller

Creeza:
Damn. Basky ends up raising an alpha's offspring. WOMEN AND the SISTERHOOD!!!

Basket would have stayed a while longer but what did he do?
He allowed his anger get to him and NOPED the f out of there.

Larry sir, a quick one: you used 'in' twice instead of 'on' as prepositions. maybe a little bit of mistake but I felt urged to tell you like here '...they watched her play tennis in on the TELEVISION'
(English is crazy if you ask me :/ but we learn everyday dont we?)

EDIT: thats btw though and tbh you are a wonderful storyteller

Can you kindly cite out the part? Thanks.

LarrySun:
Can you kindly cite out the part? Thanks.

1. As much as he wanted to return to the station and grab Peter in the neck.

2. They knew Maria was a girl who gave women hope; they had watched her tennis match in the televison. *this one is a bit like saying they entered the tv set but since we see movies most times on a screen even at a cinema its a bit off)

My little observation though, and i welcome a good criticism everytime, on that note i say all the best sir.

Creeza:
1. As much as he wanted to return to the station and grab Peter in the neck.

2. They knew Maria was a girl who gave women hope; they had watched her tennis match in the televison. *this one is a bit like saying they entered the tv set but since we see movies most times on a screen even at a cinema its a bit off)

My little observation though, and i welcome a good criticism everytime, on that note i say all the best sir.

Thanks.

The first should be by, not in or on.

You're right with the second.

Thanks again. I'm usually too lazy to reread what I've written.

Yeah. by the neck echoes better.

thanks for the correction too. Still i follow

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I don't really know the direction of this but you are wonderful I would say

Weldone Larry