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Gud work kaye. As i said b4, do smting reasonable wit it.

Kayemaye, seriously reading dis story has sky-rocketd my respect 4 u. Chai! Am seeing a writer of the future. I am pleased by the way u wrote dat colonel manoveur part. That shows d class of a gud writer. I write as well,though i jst started my thread this week( crimson is d name.), so i knw its nt easy. Thumbs up and i must see d seasom premiere on ABC or those international stations where 24 was shown ASAP. This work is nt 2 be messd up by any stu.pid director.
4 dos criticising him, i wil jst say softly o. If its easy lyke dat, write ur own.
Finally, kaye, copyright this!

Chinedu followed the figure, watching the ground for any traps. The figure then entered another room which was quite airy. Chinedu noticed that his intercom had dropped dead, he did not bother however as the focus was on the figure. he then entered the room.

The figure now turned round and finally said

' One of you has finally found me'


CHAPTER TWO

Chinedu stood motionless, his head swelling and his hands shaking. In front of him was the man made legend, Michael Nwosu, aka Michael Scofield of Africa. The man whose face and name goes before him, his reputation, everything he was and is flew in front of Chinedu's mind's eye in a few seconds. Chinedu was dazed, if not a little baffled that such a man should be left alone without security.

As Chinedu looked on, Michael raised one of his fingers up.
'Freeze!' 'Do not move unless you want me to blow your brains away!'
'You won't do that, because i am an important source of information for you and your country, which is incidentally, mine own country,

'Don't move', Chinedu retorted.When Michael obeyed, Chinedu then continued. 'You are under arrest and you have the rights to remain silent' he said while removing hand-cuff from his back pocket with one hand, using the other hand to hold his gun.

He approached Michael cautiously, as Michael stretched his hands out. As Chinedu placed the gun in his pocket( as he thought Michael will offer no resistance) he clumsily locked the hand-cuff around Michael wrists. The next thing that happened shocked Chinedu, the hand-cuff fell diagonally off his wrists and fell to the ground.

Wow, tnx kaycee and emmy.

Dawodu's team had climbed to the top of the stairway and now felt complacent, which made them walk straight into the room at the end of the stairway, not noticing the floor of the room, which was poorly done. The result was disastrous,as the floor gave way, sending them some floors down.

'Commando unit indeed', Chinedu thought. 'They should know better than been clumsy'. Chinedu moved on,knowing that Dawodu's team was out for at least some hours. There of a room ahead of him and he moved towards it, been watchful of the floor so that he won't fall victim of amateur building.

His search proved futile as he saw nothing of significance. As he left the room he saw a strange shadowy figure walk into another room.

'Sir, i have found them!' Timilehin's voice crackled through the intercom. Chinedu realised that the intercom was not as sharp as usual,as voice were becoming less audible. He could tell however that Kayode's team was seriously injured and they will take some time to recover.


Chinedu,after receiving the information,thought it wise to move ahead. As he took a step forward, he heard a crash.

ReineViolet: lol. u dont need to beg for comments, they will always come.


WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE

Am sorry 4 d delay and thanks 4 d comment.

Sorry 4 d delay in today's post. Am stuck in d rain and i have 2 get smwia safely. I wil update it b4 12 am at most.

ReineViolet: hey there rapmike. id love. to check it out and give u feedback.

welcome

Tnx Violet.

hello eveybody, i have started a thread on one of mine upcoming works(it is actually my first thread here). i would not mind comments and criticisms(constructive ones). the name of the thread is Crimson.

Comments please

Dawodu summoned the squad to the entrance of the building and after passing certain instructions, he divided the squad into two, with Commando officer Kayode leading a team while Dawodu leads the rest. Chinedu fell into Dawodu's group after the selection and the two teams entered the building together before moving swiftly in different directions. Dawodu's team took a staircase while kayode's team went straight into a room.

Kayode's team had not spent up to a minute in the room when the ground gave way, landing the team on an area filled with terrible sharp objects like nails, cutlasses and the likes.

The noise from the crash was picked up by Dawodu's team through the intercom. Dawodu tried to make contact with them, but there was no answer as the team just seemed to be groaning. Dawodu, now genuinely worried, asked one of his squad members,Timilehin to check was happening to Kayode's group. 'Yes sir' Timilehin replied before he moved stealthily to the area. Dawodu motioned for the rest of the team to move forward. The group moved from room to room, meeting empty spaces along the way. They finally got to a room that led to a long stairway

Chinedu had however, broke off from Dawodu's team and was moving independently. His gut feeling had awakened when he heard the crash in Kayode's team. He now sensed that they may be moving in the wrong direction and broke off, not minding if Dawodu wanted him to do so. His intercom buzzed all of a sudden.