I don't finally land for we area, so nah watin I miss

sinister affection in deed. Nice work oga NevetsIbot am really loving ur write-up, keep it up.

I don land! watin I miss?

Hmm! Interesting, I have finally gotten to were u guys are and I must say, this story is really beginning to heat up. Nice work oga NevetsIbot, keep it up.

NevetsIbot:
lol. Coolbreezybaba... How far na?

Where's Rex1?

He suddenly went missing but don't worry cos we just found him n by 'we' I mean ( me, myself n I ).

No brobs, am already looking 4ward to reading ur work once more

well if it was up to me I would say that half bread is better than none but hey, I would only be speaking for my self. But then, u r the writer n whatever work's for u we go with. N once again I would like to say KUDO$ to u for this wonderful piece of story u started and am hopeful that by God grace u would be able to complete it n good night to u although it's just 4:29 pm here in Nigeria.

Nice work dear, still following religiously.

NevetsIbot, u never c something! shebi u say u want criticisms, no worry lectures go soon join am or maybe it already has. O yes, pls guys, oga nevetsibot would really appreciate it if u guys keep the comments either in criticism format or lecture format coming in, thanks by the way.

DzTzl:
Best of luck with your exams, success is yours!

I CONCUR

pabon:


Bros afar na... what I do? What does you want from me?

Bros I want u to go n finish DAT story of urs cos the fact that u hav let that story hanging since the month of March is tiring, annoying, uncalled for, unwarranted, despicable,.... abeg help me out, which other adjectives I fit use take qualify u fuckup?

Hmm! nice work. B4 I forget, Miss SmartestPopqueen, repogirl, slimsue, babtuna1. u all are highly invited to come check this piece out.

blair01:
thanks alot Rex

your welcome

Wow!!! I don't know if I am loving the writeup or the writer more but hey, I'm loving every bit's of ur work miss blair01. N to my other colleagues: NevetsIbot, ironkurtain, solomonbrown64,darkid, cdstar, jomagibs n pabon wey don over fall my hands not even 1 hand, u are all hereby invited to come n enjoy a romantic piece by miss blair01 titled: NOTHING lIKE LOVE

kie!!! C action film wey don seize my voice in other words, I dey mode SPEECHLESS........

Nice work u got here blair01. This story tell's a great deal about the writer because it's a beautiful piece. Ride on miss blair01 cos am solidly behind u

wow! So intriguing, well done oga solo am really loving ur work

Arh! oga ironkurtain welcome from ur unannounced leave of absent

Oboy dis place the buzz o. oga Solomon I hail o, wishing u more boxer for ur yansh, more singlet for ur six pack, more groundnut for ur bread, more akara for ur oghi but all in all, wishing u well though.

[quote author=NevetsIbot post=49375817] [b]
NevetsIbot: But man! Very very constructive criticism you brought my way. Wasn't expecting it. Rex1, you go find trouble for me abi?

Rex1: well yes cos ur wish is my command so "Be careful what u wish for".

NevetsIbot:
I go soon delete that feeling now. How far na?

my oga I dey o all thanks to Papa God o, well about that feeling I had earlier n like I said, that was then because right now my mouth don loose onto say u don shock me with surprise by posting twice in one day. kudos for a work well done. N as for my other ogas them: skipedawson, jomagibs, darkid1, cdstar, solomonbrown64, ironkurtain abeg make unah ball in here come assess this story were my boss NevetsIbot the work on n besides, him talk say him need very strong critism n I belief say unah opinions go really go a long way to boosting the flow of this story.

wow !!! speechless that's just how I fill right now

Bros wey come back empty handed nah floggings we the take welcome am. so oga Jomagibs just come lie down here now now cos ur lashes nah a 101 strokes n ur Cain nah specially made from Aba

jomagibs:


So I got a call from Rex1
"Nah now I call u"

Good write up .
just take note of your Actions and scenes

Do try adding more punctuations and conjunctions to make a sentence longer.

Just my one kobo advice

"Arh! What a million dollar advice which is equivalent to more sentence less action. y u come the find my trouble so"

speechless. C come!!! all the pioneers of this arena were unah dey n by the way, sallah celebration don't finish o so I don't know which extra holiday u all r still observing because from the look of things new comers r now hijacking the flow of this arena

Hmm! just passing by

Nice! Still following, abeg my ogas them: spikedawson, jomagibs, darkid1, cdstars make unah come help me analyze this story were my boss NevetsIbot the work on

wow !!! what a wonderful piece dis is turning out to be n 4 dat reason I couldn't stop smiling stupidly. kudos to our two future comedian's Lt General Henry n Sergeant Shindara who nearly crack my rib's with laughter but my God pass.
ATTENDANCE: if u hear ur name answer; MoriYanu, vickydgreat, Eniola07, Coolbreezy01 Babtuna, Slimsue, dytla, Shegss2009, ashatoda, Vickorkay, Fijumukesayo n the rest of our absentee's, were the f**k r u guys.

first to land for dis arena. oga NevertsIbot I hail o, hw ur short break nao? c as class quiet, were everybody go hide?

nice work u got here although from the way things r heading I have a feeling that dis might b a short story. However, kudos to u 4 a job well done.

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You forget they are immortal , your can't kill my precious cloak breakers [/quote
kill them ni! I would chop them raw, crush them like chin-chin, fry them like akara, fold them like wrapper... n much more just name it, u know hw we roll naoh.

Cdstars:
Plz, is the story making sense

SERIOUSLY! is such a question necessary, this story of yours is captivating, motivating n fantastic but convulsively, the stori make over sense. So bros carry on cos am solidly behind u.