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PamelB:
Girl,you've got talent joor. Being a ghost reader for a while now but it'll be unfair if I don't comment. You're good. More data to your smartphone joor.

I CONCUR!!!
YOUR STORY FINE - i concur
U TRY 2 MUCH - i concur

PamelB:
Girl,you've got talent joor. Being a ghost reader for a while now but it'll be unfair if I don't comment. You're good. More data to your smartphone joor.

I CONCUR!!!
YOUR STORY FINE - i concur
U TRY 2 MUCH - i concur

PamelB:
Girl,you've got talent joor. Being a ghost reader for a while now but it'll be unfair if I don't comment. You're good. More data to your smartphone joor.

I CONCUR!!!
YOUR STORY FINE - i concur
U TRY 2 MUCH - i concur

SmartestPopQUEEN:
[color=#440000] I appreciate all mha faithful reader. Well, i need, every readers, irrespective of yhur opinions to tell me, what yhu think i need to Improve on..... Atleast to be a little better in writing.... Thanks all, in advance.... As i await yhur response...
Oladim001, T.gold, Rex1, Olufemiwhit, Ellagold, Aeonikt, Oye9ja, Elmogaji, Topeluvu, Greatsound, RealLORDzeus, Yasdon, Fidelismaria... Mickeymouse, Drfrey95 And many of yhu i couldnt mention......[/color]

only response? No worry since nah only response u need u go receive am but just make sure Say ur bluetooth dey on 2 receive my in coming response o.

SmartestPopQUEEN:
oh! This where yhu are.... Been looking for yhu on my thread..,...

hahaha abeg no fear cos i still dey surplus 4 naira land

Phrankher:
[b][/b][color=#990000][/color]To say am disappointed is any understatement. Spent several hours reading dis fabulous story only to find out it s nt completed since 3yrs ago. If u really wanna sell dis story u could av converted it to PDF n send it to whosoever send d #200 either wif recharge card or bank transfer jst d way onihaxy does nt uploading it to a goddamn okadabooks.com which is really fuckin up in d aspect or refilling. Kindly find sometin to do bout it cos we are hungry for the conclusion of dis story.

More ink to your pen.!

i second dat notion

Omor c gbege, inter family clash on board. Nice update oga NevetsIbot, expecting more updates from u though

NevetsIbot:
Thank you for reading bruh. How are ya

Am doing ok boss all thanks 2 Papa God

Happy Sunday NevetsIbot n thanks 4 2days update

Oboy com c party under rain. But then, while the babe(Hera) the dance shoki with a mix of galala the guy(Acheon) the dance skelewu for im mind now him 1 find the solution 2 the bossy attitude of Hera.
Oga NevetsIbot, dis work of art of yours whether it be a story or a novel, nah EPIC.

Arh! Finally i done fall in line with the rest. Well since the portal get mind of It's own, i just the imagine say it fit drop Acheon for ontop of Kashi or in front of that im 1 yr ago friend by the name Peruses. Nice update NevetsIbot n i the expect plenty plenty more of such thrilling, action pack n breath taking Scene from u o.

Nice work NevetsIbot, am enjoying dis ur stori like mad! N right nw am really anxious 2 know of what's gonna happen 2 acheon in other words, am expecting more updates from u like, nowww!!! But seriously, at ur own convenience. Have a nice day though.

Wow! This 1 nah world war 3 AKA hideous creatures versus warewolfs versus vampires. Looking 4ward 2 the unfolding of this great saga

Well the fact that i walked into an apartment i wasn't invited into doesn't mean i cann't get myself a stool n nyash down, so oga NevetsIbot, nw dat u have offered us appetizer(sumptuous updates) were our breakfast(extra updates)

Thumbs up EpiphANUS20 4 a job well done n since nah small small person take the learn, am however looking 4ward 2 more updates n a reduction in suspense. Have a blissful day bro.

Wow! This story is really intriguing, looking 4ward 2 more updates from the writer of dis beautiful piece of fiction

Which week? What day? And by what time? Cos nah 4 bus stop i go stand wait u.

Happy weekend to u too miss smartestpopqueen

SmartestPopQUEEN:
am not sure if Nick will pass up that chance, if tha opportunity presents itself.

so in other words, Nick is a cheerful giver right?
(Nah rhetorically question b dat o so no ansa needed)

Still following ur updates diligently, keep the tempo up miss cos am having a hell of alot fun riding with u

Kudos 2 our youngest sci-fictionist miss smartestpopqueen 4 making us want "SOME-MORE" From every little piece of creativity she drop's every day

Happy birthday miss smartestpopqueen, i wish u all the best n much more dat life has 2 offer, have a wonderful time celebrating.

Weirdman:
Nice....



Moorreee!!!!

I AGREE AND DISAGREE
I 4 once agree with u dat we need MOORREEE UPDATES!!!! But i also disagree with u because dis story is not just nice but also terribly SUPERB... Omhor come c collision of words hahaha, gudnite jahray 2 all the bad belle's in the house.

Wow! Thanks 4 the update

Wow! Don't know what 2 say but thanks anyway 4 the updates

Happy Sunday 2 u too @ SmartestPopQUEEN n am also wishing u a quick recovery

I would like 2 use this medium 2 say a big thank you n congratulation 2 the writer of dis story for being able 2 catch my attention with this scientific fictional story of yours because to be sincere, this story is truly epic. But then, "For every right there's a wrong ", n in naija pertaining 2 writers, we however refer 2 dis wrong side "BAD BELLE " aKa "CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISMS" as a means 2 help a writer improve on his or her mistakes. And so my take on the matter is thus; While reading through ur story, i kind of imagine a scene of a white dude in any of those prestigious universities in Europe then his life on campus that kind of affects not only him but the world at large. But then, ur continuous mentioning of my country Nigeria as the plot of the story is however irking me 2 ask u dis questions;
1) Since when did snow started falling in Nigeria? Hey i gerrit, dis story is but a fiction but atleast u could try 2 put in some facts in other 2 make it xtremely lively 4 the matured minds.
2) nah which Nigerian woman get blond or brunette hair other dan the color black or nah albhino them be? No offence intended though but then, if after reading my writeup u feel the need 2 spank my head, although 4 dat 2 happen, u would wanna meet me 1 n 1 so am deciding 2 help u out n written below is my address :
No. 101 Bad Belle Str. U won't get lost i assure u.
Still looking 4ward 2 more updates from u cos am loving dis story like mad!!!

Wow! What a thrilling episode, keep on keeping-up bro

The fact that i don't have a phone capable of downloading any pdf file makes me extremely honored n grateful to having u post quite a large volume of dis magnificent story of urs 2day, n i pray dat God grants u strength, prosperity n consistency in whatever u do; AMEN!

Well me self no follow nobody o, i just the waka past nah im i come sight u Say make i hail o. Baba solo! U 3much o, oyah chop knuckle jarray......... But if u still haven't received the knuckle pls endeavor 2 send me ur Bluetooth account no.

Sincerely ur 4ever loyal reader, abeg carry on cos i still dey ur side .

nekanzee:
Oga solo thanks for the update WE GO MANAGE AM

I CONCUR!

ChizzyMaris:
Interesting

I CONCUR

Carry on oga solo cos am really enjoying dis epic work of urs n ur continuous update