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Small but mighty,tankx blair01,more mb to ur phone

just came across this handsome piece,kip it cuming,more ink to your pen.

Madam,cum and update nw.

Waiting patiently for it dear.

just came across dis mind blowing piece,the intro alone is mouth watery,plzzzzz proceed,the Lord is ur strenght.

wlcm,plzz bribe us with plenty updates so that we wont report u to seun ooooo,lolz

kip it cuming dearie,enjoying it all

Tankx 4 d update dear,gud am.av a grt day ahead.

plzzzz add chicken and vegetables to the jollof rice dear

Sosa where are u,cum update now,this break don long ooo,plzzz

Happy birrhday dear,long life and prosperity,HIP HIP HIP!!!! HURRAY!!!!!!!!!!!.may God bless ur new age.

nice one,tankx for that dearie,the suspence is kiling now,i wish to know richard mother's action when she gets to know that yare is her rival's daughter.

They are nt, bt were both born by ex-lovers.am i right blair01?

One must always be paid back in his or her coin.thats law of life.tankx dear,kip it cuming.

tankx for the update,following wholeheartedly

tankx for the update,av a gud nyt rext

let me second Rex1,u write really good,kip it cuming,plz dont starve us ma'am.

fiyah,plssss,giv us morr

i dont understand this lola anymore ooo,maybe she want to be amoge herself,wanting all amoge has.

wlcm ma'am,hope u are feeling beta ma,more strenght by His grace

Ogodlovely1:
Sorry oh! I have been so busy. Will update soon

where is d update now,biko

Dis one too short o.nyt write-up

Gud write up,kip it cumin

The enjoyment is just geting intensed.tankx for d update.plz dnt stay long b4 giving us anoda one ma

theorbiters:
Hey pamelB, please indulge me for a moment.

So, I am trying so hard to reconcile the title of your story with the content you developed. See, the story is titled "ALONE" and not "NOT ALONE". Forgive me, but the theme the title present is that of tragedy and not happily ever after, which I am guessing the latter is actually what you want to convey. This is a beautiful piece, no doubt, with all the tragic sub plots used to interweave this piece, but I believe that the title of a piece should not just be the idea and heart of it, it should also convey, in true sense, the message of the piece. Except maybe you still have plans to make everyone die in some mysterious way, leaving Amanda alone, aside that, I don't think the title is doing a enough justice to the story.

But hey, don't mind me. I probably don't know what I am saying.

In all, it was nice. Please don't be offended by my review.

.actually,d title was made d refrence point in d story if u read it very well.av u read d unfulfilled promises by audreytimm?,sumtin of this nature was wat hapend there too.if u view stories very well d title is always d opposite of d content at the end.

A job welldone dearie,from d genesis to revelation.am always wowing,lolz.tankx alot

I hate it wen pple pretends.amy just be urself,dont try to please others.

Dere is a conspiracy sumwhr,kip it cumin dear

The dream is too real to be called one.tankx dear,i just hope gospel ll leave her alone

Welcm bak dear,tankx 4 d update.kip it cumin.