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My rating 4\10. Gaskiya i could'nt make it that eveing. The football elapsed more than the given deadline, moreso i saw it late. Any work today divepen? |
Ermh... Lemme use this opportunity to acknowledge the presence of my oga vantee, and also for him to mention me in such a nice story like this. That aside, my dear you are not doing bad in the work, its just superb for an amateur. About the comment, when you were tagging i notive you invite only the writers association of lit section not the readers. Anyways, it going to be a good thing if you try to know the readers and also acknowledge them. Me i don enter last bullet, skimpledawg onemansquad come and read |
Divepen:just go the info now and am watchinq football. I can't work on it before the deadline. It came late. |
My bro fear not, all this your fetish believe's are now history, by the coming of his son, Our Lord Jesus Christ he has given us life, in abundance without any but... Its been long i wanted to see a writer working on one the tribes of Nigeria, its really good that you know the culture and way of life in the village. All this our writers na just insurgence, love, family, vengence, crime, et cetera na him them dey write. ( my guy chop knuckle for this). My observations so far, Tautology is in this work. Have came across words just that am not good in maping them out. Your preference of words and grammer- In Nigeria bah, we recognise on British english and in your story its based on 9ja so i don't understand your usage of the word 'gonna'. We know that you have been to the US just understand that you are back in 9ja (pigin is allowed because its our official language ).So see to my observation and tell me what you think about it. |
Wona mentions de too much o and the story never ready. Fatalevi has said everything that is needed to be spoke, the more you create thread without completing the one you are doing, the risk of getting confused, making your work look unplanned and ruining your chance of pulling crowd in here. I no know how many brain you get, how many phone/ battery you get, how occupied you are but i know you are deprieving yourself many things and responsibilies just to be able to update here and there. Why not take time and compile and complete one before jumping to another so that it can give you more time and motivation needed. NB: i may sound rude in my words, its not as if i don't want you to post or against it, but am being considerate on your well being. It takes a lot out of you. Ps: i go still follow if you post o |
physics teacher- pay attention ( with his igbo accent pa'ttention) Economics- Ghost rider ( he is just like a robot) Principal- Morgana Mathematic- All ma ladies ( he likes the word) English- Linguistic ifa continue listinq aswea na die. Almost all teacher both proprietor. Secondary schoo was fun |
Divepen:i de wait for group |
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suxxman: ![]() |
Bad girl |
Skimpledawg: is well, thank God yu are back |
Skimpledawg:Na text message abi na call? Abeg pocket that yur motorola razor. *Brings out ma iphone 6 and calls onemansquad, alberto2k,suxxman. |
Skimpledawg: yu sure the man no de jazz?I come de pity yu |
onuwaje:dunce ![]() |
Skimpledawg:were the beast de? Which side? I tot i killed with the beast? Were have yu been ma self? |
Skimpledawg:i thouqht i have killed you ![]() what are you still doing here in the land of the livinq? |
Cybershow:just to follow the thread, havent read the thread |
LarrySun:you did'nt come out with your dictionary today? Its like he did not remember to add his suffix today, and tho you have remembered it. He is one of his kind. My guy, the story did not potray the title with these tho buh it was awesome. Work on puntuation and sentence construction as my oga said and maybe try re-edittinq before posting like your tosin's diary to make it clean and error free. With this i think your next story would be captivating like this one. Just stick to writing rules, always strive to give the best in you. ![]() |
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[quote author=onuwaje post=30457135][/quote]are yu hiqh on lipton? Why quottinq the whole thing? |
go on |
She sopose never off the phone if she Wan play that kind game na. Onemansquad, techno4life, lilyomi and co. Come hia updates don show |
Fatalveli:dnt really get the mention cause of the 46 buh iam here Btw who be twomansquad? And hope the story never end? |
How sure are we that dis won't be borrowed to boko haram and later recovered with the headline *Arms and amunitions recovered from bokoharam Nice one gej and his goverment |
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is well, thank God yu are back