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LiteratureRe: Writers' Checkmate by stuff46(m): 8:55am On Feb 09, 2015
My rating 4\10.
Gaskiya i could'nt make it that eveing. The football elapsed more than the given deadline, moreso i saw it late.

Any work today divepen?
LiteratureRe: Eothen-Our losses by stuff46(m): 8:45am On Feb 09, 2015
Ermh...

Lemme use this opportunity to acknowledge the presence of my oga vantee, and also for him to mention me in such a nice story like this.

That aside, my dear you are not doing bad in the work, its just superb for an amateur.

About the comment, when you were tagging i notive you invite only the writers association of lit section not the readers. Anyways, it going to be a good thing if you try to know the readers and also acknowledge them. Me i don enter

last bullet, skimpledawg onemansquad come and read
LiteratureRe: Writers' Checkmate by stuff46(m): 9:18pm On Feb 08, 2015
Divepen:
Group 2


Deadline is 10:30 pm today..
just go the info now and am watchinq football. I can't work on it before the deadline. It came late.
LiteratureRe: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by stuff46(m): 9:05pm On Feb 08, 2015
My bro fear not, all this your fetish believe's are now history, by the coming of his son, Our Lord Jesus Christ he has given us life, in abundance without any but...

Its been long i wanted to see a writer working on one the tribes of Nigeria, its really good that you know the culture and way of life in the village. All this our writers na just insurgence, love, family, vengence, crime, et cetera na him them dey write. ( my guy chop knuckle for this).

My observations so far,

Tautology is in this work. Have came across words just that am not good in maping them out.

Your preference of words and grammer- In Nigeria bah, we recognise on British english and in your story its based on 9ja so i don't understand your usage of the word 'gonna'. We know that you have been to the US just understand that you are back in 9ja (pigin is allowed because its our official language grin ).

So see to my observation and tell me what you think about it.
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LiteratureRe: Paradise On Earth... by stuff46(m): 8:09pm On Feb 08, 2015
Wona mentions de too much o and the story never ready.
Fatalevi has said everything that is needed to be spoke, the more you create thread without completing the one you are doing, the risk of getting confused, making your work look unplanned and ruining your chance of pulling crowd in here.

I no know how many brain you get, how many phone/ battery you get, how occupied you are but i know you are deprieving yourself many things and responsibilies just to be able to update here and there.

Why not take time and compile and complete one before jumping to another so that it can give you more time and motivation needed.

NB: i may sound rude in my words, its not as if i don't want you to post or against it, but am being considerate on your well being. It takes a lot out of you.

Ps: i go still follow if you post o
EducationRe: Hilarious Nicknames Given To Your Teachers When You're In Secondary School... by stuff46(m): 7:55pm On Feb 08, 2015
physics teacher- pay attention ( with his igbo accent pa'ttention)

Economics- Ghost rider ( he is just like a robot)

Principal- Morgana

Mathematic- All ma ladies ( he likes the word)

English- Linguistic

ifa continue listinq aswea na die. Almost all teacher both proprietor.
Secondary schoo was fun
LiteratureRe: Writers' Checkmate by stuff46(m): 8:29pm On Feb 07, 2015
Divepen:
3. Stuff46


This is where we are
..you have to register to show your readiness.
i de wait for group
LiteratureRe: Writers' Checkmate by stuff46(m): 7:51pm On Feb 07, 2015
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LiteratureRe: Speed Kings- Nemesis by stuff46(m): 2:08pm On Feb 06, 2015
suxxman:
No mind Skimpledawg....... Calling me with Motorola Razor huh huh
Don't u know my phone is allergic to inferiors? grin
grin
LiteratureRe: The Thomas....(a Family) by stuff46(m): 10:52am On Feb 06, 2015
Bad girl
LiteratureRe: Sweeter As The Days Goes By...... by stuff46(m): 10:38am On Feb 06, 2015
Skimpledawg:
cwiosly, ai cry eh! ai missed mah pings, chats, mails n cals! inshrt, i wz cut off 4rm d world
embarassed is well, thank God yu are back
LiteratureRe: Speed Kings- Nemesis by stuff46(m): 10:35am On Feb 06, 2015
Skimpledawg:
mehn! dz story is badt gan. ova badt dey wori am! niqqa shadowbean, u tyt man!

*picks fone....suxxman, stuff46, onemansquad, make una show!
Na text message abi na call?
Abeg pocket that yur motorola razor.
*Brings out ma iphone 6 and calls onemansquad, alberto2k,suxxman.
LiteratureRe: Sweeter As The Days Goes By...... by stuff46(m): 10:05am On Feb 06, 2015
Skimpledawg:
mah oga bn treaten me o nt 2 chat yl on duty n devil con ansa em prayas as ma 2 fones spoil d nxt day! i cry eh
grin yu sure the man no de jazz?
I come de pity yu
LiteratureRe: Me, The Girls, And My Guys Dem by stuff46(m): 7:11am On Feb 06, 2015
onuwaje:
u wen water dey high hw market
dunce embarassed
LiteratureRe: Sweeter As The Days Goes By...... by stuff46(m): 6:59am On Feb 06, 2015
Skimpledawg:
av alwz warned u nt to provoke d beast in me! kiaful niqqa.
were the beast de? Which side? I tot i killed with the beast?
Were have yu been ma self?
LiteratureRe: Sweeter As The Days Goes By...... by stuff46(m): 10:26pm On Feb 05, 2015
Skimpledawg:
niqqa, am wit u! Flow on
i thouqht i have killed you grin
what are you still doing here in the land of the livinq?
LiteratureRe: Sweeter As The Days Goes By...... by stuff46(m): 10:22pm On Feb 05, 2015
Cybershow:
Stuff46 bt y d ful stop..
just to follow the thread, havent read the thread
LiteratureRe: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by stuff46(m): 10:11pm On Feb 05, 2015
LarrySun:
A very nice story; but you need to do something about those punctuations and some of the sentence constructions.

Truly a nice job. Well done, sir.

#Ayamlarrysun cheesy
you did'nt come out with your dictionary today?

Its like he did not remember to add his suffix today, and tho you have remembered it. He is one of his kind.

My guy, the story did not potray the title with these tho buh it was awesome.
Work on puntuation and sentence construction as my oga said and maybe try re-edittinq before posting like your tosin's diary to make it clean and error free. With this i think your next story would be captivating like this one. Just stick to writing rules, always strive to give the best in you. cheesy
LiteratureRe: Sweeter As The Days Goes By...... by stuff46(m): 6:40pm On Feb 05, 2015
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LiteratureRe: Me, The Girls, And My Guys Dem by stuff46(m): 6:37pm On Feb 05, 2015
[quote author=onuwaje post=30457135][/quote]are yu hiqh on lipton? Why quottinq the whole thing?
LiteratureRe: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by stuff46(m): 6:29pm On Feb 05, 2015
go on
LiteratureRe: The Thomas....(a Family) by stuff46(m): 6:26pm On Feb 05, 2015
She sopose never off the phone if she Wan play that kind game na.
Onemansquad, techno4life, lilyomi and co. Come hia updates don show
LiteratureRe: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by stuff46(m): 6:12pm On Feb 05, 2015
Fatalveli:
welcome.

Tags. twomansquad stuff,


I'll update once I've charged my cell.
dnt really get the mention cause of the 46 buh iam here
Btw who be twomansquad? And hope the story never end?
PoliticsRe: T-72 Tanks Used By The Military To Destroy Boko Haram (Photos) by stuff46(m): 11:40am On Feb 05, 2015
How sure are we that dis won't be borrowed to boko haram and later recovered with the headline

*Arms and amunitions recovered from bokoharam

Nice one gej and his goverment

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