@ Enoquin: you write well.
Although the story's end was kind of dissapointing. I realise they're short stories but their endings appear similar #(just saying)

Happy Birthday, Chinweblinkz.
Many Happy Returns!

I vote Chinweblinks as best newcomer of the month.

Please continue

Thanks, Enoquin for the share. I appreciate

I vote Fantasy Island for the best writer of the month

* still following

@ Cybershow: I'm not really into editing because I did'nt major in literature.
However, I think you should write words in full (e.g. Welcome not wlcm, thanks not tenx).
For me, it is mainly about understanding

@ Cybershow: thanks a bunch!
Nairaland Huggs

First to comment;
. . . True Love!

. . .Looks like Lereby is a cry-baby!

. . . #following

Thanks Losprince for the update.
Gracias

...But Alfred did not speak well to his mother.

Thanks for the dedication, Cybershow!
God bless you real good

Thanks,
...(But it's kind of very short. #just saying* )

Cybershow:
Oh that nyc u mak me api...d nyc story wil b dedicated 2 u o..

. . . Waiting patiently

First to comment:
Thanks for the update

. . .Still I read

@ Kinwayne:
You give the impression like you did not prepare this story. Like u are writing from ur head. That makes for a lot of distractions and sincerely, it won't take you far.
You need to focus and get your act right. Having mentors also helps.
#just my two-cents*

kinwayne:


More funny scenes loading

*waiting for the scenes!

Kind of dry;
Buckle up Kinwayne
#seriously!

I noticed:
But it appears even more difficult for me. I figure it has something to do with some sort of registration. I'll still be trying though

Pamela!