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 Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 3:56am On Dec 20, 2014 |
Uthman51:Longest time!!!! Howdy, sir? |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 3:55am On Dec 20, 2014 |
Ciela:Lot of misakes... at the bolded. By the way, missed ur absence. The story would still be properly edited later. M sorry about d errors. Honestly missed u even on ma blog  would watch out for my erros too  |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 3:52am On Dec 20, 2014 |
aprilwise:Slow and steady wins the race. If you rush into things it wouldn't be right, Sir. That's what I love about this Philippines, they analyze their storylines gradually that you won't have any doubt when something u aren't even expecting happens. Just keep reading... |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 3:48am On Dec 20, 2014 |
Conclusion of EP27 Thereafter, he jumped inside the house and his phone rang aloud, drawing attentions closer. Nicholas hated himself for that. He quickly brought the phone out as he ended the call and his eyes, darting round the house if no one had heard that the phone just rang. He quickly left the same spot in case someone had heard that a phone just rang, they might just think it was outside the house. ** ** ** "Can't you hear? It seems a mobile phone rang now." One of Jerry's guys said as he brought out his tucked-in gun. Jerry looked at him. "I heard, but it's definitely not here." He smiled as he picked a meat from the plate before him. "Boss, are you sure?" Another accused as he dimmed his eyes. "The Unknown doesn't know this place, so, no one can know this place, guys. By the way, did you bring all the roasted chickens from our other house?" He asked. "Yes, Sir. We got it from the other house since we still had it there, I thought there was no point in getting another and letting this one waste." He replied. "Alright, that's cool." Jerry smiled. "Call those guarding that guy to come around to eat too, at least The Unknown can't get here, I'm sure of It." He laughed. "Alright, boss." One of the guys said as he hurried on to get the two men guarding Henry for their food. ** ** ** Nicholas was relieved as he noticed that none of the guys came around to check if someone had jumped inside the house. He had been thinking that they must have heard the ringing tone but didn't just pay attention. "Where on earth is Henry, oh God!" He sighed as he began to proceed till he got to the back of the house if there was any small building where Henry could have been locked up but he couldn't find any. Nicholas stood by the side of the building as he peeped inside the room he stood with but it was void. He thought that was another good was of getting Henry real quick. He turned back and peeped through the next room but there was no one inside that place too. Or, Henry isn't here? He had thought as he squinted his face as breathed heavily. He turned to the other side of the house and saw an opening that lead inside the house. It wasn't locked and there was a sliding door adjacent to the opening; where he could pass into the main living room of the house. He just sighed as he moved backward and looked at the house without blinking the eyes. He returned back to the backyard and to the other side of the house where he saw a locked opening that lead to the kitchen. He was still short of ideas until he got back to the sliding door he first saw and tried his best to peep into the house. He saw no one inside the living room but he could hear voices not far from the living room. It was the guys that were eating and gisting at the small living room he could hear well. He began to open the sliding door gently till he opened it to a size that would contain him. Then, he entered into the main living room and began to tip toe till he got to the staircase that lead upstairs and tiptoed there, vigilant with his gun, standby. He had made up his mind that he wouldn't spare any of them that might try to obstruct him. Luckily, he made his way into the the living room at the upstairs of the house and began to check rooms but didn't see him at all. "Where's Henry?" He breathed heavily as began to fear if Henry was still safe and sound. He opened the door to the last confinement and met Henry, tied to the pole. It didn't look like a room at all, he had thought as he looked round and rushed towards Henry. Is this guy mad? How did he get here? Henry had watched him with surprise as he saw him step into the store to save his life. As soon as he untied him, he pulled him by the hand. "Let's go." He said quietly. "What of the evidences?" Henry quickly asked too. "Leave that out of the issue, Henry." He said as he pulled him and both tiptoed back to the living room upstairs, then to the staircas and the main living room downstairs, till the got out and climbed the fence as usual. Luckily, no one saw them till they left. But, Nicholas' cherished glasses dropped upstairs while he was hurrying and he didn't pay attention. He sped off immediately he entered into the car with Henry. He passed his mobile phone to Henry and told him to remove the sim in there and insert the one at the back of his mobile phone as quick as possible. Immediately he was done, he grabbed the mobile phone and called Officer Craig. ** ** ** |
| Literature › Re: Twisted Fortune. by TemitopeDaniel(m): 2:08am On Dec 20, 2014 |
Hey ma'am! weren't u the one who commented on my 'PEMISIRE'? Glad you've started the story but unfortunately didn't get a mention. Now that I know, #Following ma'am Weldone. |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 7:37pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Story continues tomorrow. goodnight my people! |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 7:37pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
EPISODE TWENTY-SEVEN Nicholas hated himself. Why on earth would he have allowed Henry to visit Area-F station? But, he had deflated the tyres of Jerry's car, how did he get another car as soon as possible? He had thought deflating two tyres would make them remain at the same spot for a while because they had just a single spare tyre to change one of the deflated tyres. He was totally down as he heard all that. He finished tying the two evil men to the tree and rushed to his car and plopped down. He shut the door and began to think of ways he could use to get Henry out of the big problem he had gotten into. He was sure Jerry and his men would never take him to the previous house because they know he knew the place already. He sighed, placing his head on the steering and breathing heavily. He raised his head again and yawned as he looked outside. "I know what to do." He said and pulled out of the forest. ** ** ** "That was perfect, guys!" Prince Edward grinned as he shook hands with the guys he sent to get Vivian. "I told you, Edward, didn't I?" Edward smiled. "It's now simple now. There's no problem any longer because I'm not going to release her until she accepts my proposal and we go off to the King, immediately." He said with confidence. "But she's still fast asleep and are you sure she will concur, Edward?" Edward laughed. "A beggar has no choice, Osmond. By the time I'm through with her, she'd have no choice but to follow the master." The two laughed. "Guys, I have dropped your balance with your boss, we'll see later." Osmond dismissed the guys and faced the Prince. ** ** ** The diary. The whole event continued as King Dennis continued living with his beautiful wife- Margaret for months until the good news let loose. It was several months after the wedding the new King had with his wife Margaret conceived. This had made Harry's brain turn upside down. He had always thought that he would get Margaret back, no matters what, but, the plan was falling through already as he heatd about her conception. "Impossible!" He muttered at first as he left the dining set when he was about to take his lunch. He walked to his room, deep inside the thought, wondering if Margaret was gone forever. "This can't be! Even with this foolish pregnancy of yours, if you don't be mine, you must die!" He said, parading his room around and still thinking of what to do. Just then, an idea came in and he smiled. ** ** ** Nicholas drove like he had never driven before. He didn't take things easy even with the motorcyclists on the way as he drove recklessly. He had to save Henry. If anyone was meant to die, that would be him, not Henry, he thought as he parked some distance away from Jerry's building. He knew no reasonable human would bring Henry back to that house, but he believed he could get to wherever Henry was taken to, through that house. He had waited for twenty minutes, just by the bush where he was sure vehicles wouldn't be able to see his own parked vehicle and himself. He just kept praying for God's assistance for that mission. He had thought Chief Sam's case would be the most difficult of all the cases he would treat, but Engineer Ashley and Bennie's cases too had been breathtaking! Soon, he saw a green jeep that sped off and halted at the front of Jerry's building. He rose up from where he had hidden and peeped at what would happen. He saw two guys that came down from the vehicle and looked around before going into the house. Where did they get this Jeep? He had thought as he yawned again. He didn't even know what was making him yawn, probably because he hadn't taken much breakfast. He swooshed out a long breath as he saw the guys come out of the building and hop into the vehicle as quick as they could and the vehicle took off again. That was what he really pictured and loved, he hopped into his own vehicle and drove after them slowly. They should know where Henry is. ** ** ** Henry was tied to a pole to inside a small store of the house. The evidences he had with him had been snatched from him by Jerry and his men. It was as he had suspected, Nicholas and Henry worked together. "It's today I'll get The Unknown." He muttered as he smiled. He had put two guys at the front of the store of the house, expecting the Messiah that would come to take away his sins without suffering too. Henry really wished he had a way he could use to tell Nicholas not to come nd rescue him. He knew himself that Nicholas walk uld definitely think of a way to save his life and would come to do that. He knew the security around the house he was brought was very tight. Perhaps, because he had been gotten before and he escaped. He hung his head in fear, expecting a miracle to happen through someone else but not Nicholas because he knew how dangerous it would be for him to come. He didn't even know, he wasn't sure if Nicholas wouldn't reveal the truth to Jerry about where he had hidden Ashley and Bennie. His heart that was beating so fast kept praying continuously. The guys that were at the door hadn't left the place since he was locked up. What exactly is happening! What will happen! He breathed heavily as he tried to move his body, bu it was tied to the pole already. If a miracle would happen, God let be soon. ** ** ** Vickie rushed inside the house. She was in total shock and had been in it since Anthony called her and told her about what had happened. Anthony had woken up and wasn't himself for a while before he finally came alive and reached for Vivian's phone that had dropped on the floor. He had punched Victoria's mobile number and told her about all that had happened. He was told to remain in the house as Victoria rushed over with some officers who were already outside and around the house. "Are you okay?" She quickly asked as she met Anthony on the floor, crying profusely. Anthony couldn't respond and she never expected the response. "The young boy is in shock, let's get out of here first." One of the officers around said. Victoria looked at the tall officer. He was holding a gun and was in his uniform. He had also been turning around like a binatone fan, if he could see any criminal to shoot at, but unfortunately he found none. "Did you see their faces? Who were they?" Victoria asked Anthony. "I don't know... I.. " Anthony began to stutter. "Let's go, you'll have to tell me later." Victoria said as she wiped his tears and hers too. "We've got to go." She said and pulled him up as they all evacuated the house and rushed to the station to start the investigation and the search. ** ** ** Nicholas was so patient that kept following the guys inside the vehicle without letting them suspect. He had followed them for a while and had doubted himself if the guys in the vehicle were really connected to Jerry and with Henry's case. They had just been driving for a while. He had thought within himself that if Henry had been taken to somewhere that far, to succeed with his plans may not be as easy as he had thought. He kept muttering some words till he saw that the car drove into a comound from where he had stopped his own car. "Is this the house?" He wondered as he parked his car almost inside the bush. It was a distance away from the building. He didn't know how to start, but he just looked around and saw uncompleted buildings and bushes around. "Why are these guys always around these areas?" He wondered as he sighed. "How sure am I that the guys are here?" He wondered again and got inside the car to pick his mask and gun. He quickly fast-tracked to the side of the building to get his business started. It was a relief that the fence was not rounded with fence wires that could hurt him and it wasn't a tall one for him. He placed his hands on the fence and pulled his heavy self up to peep inside the house slightly. Thereafter, he jumped inside the house and his phone rang aloud, drawing attentions.... |
| Literature › Re: Nairaland Detection Club 2 - 2014. For Nairaland Writers Collaboration 2014. by TemitopeDaniel(m): 5:12pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
D9ty7:Thanks D9ty7, nice working with everyone here. God bless u! |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:10pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Nancydearie:Coming soon na.... PHCN no bring light anf fone almost dead. Wpuld update at night. |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 10:44am On Dec 18, 2014 |
Akinpelumi01:Lol! Kingzpen is my big brother na.... so u no sabi b4 |
| Literature › Re: What Should This Be Called? by TemitopeDaniel(m): 7:42pm On Dec 17, 2014 |
HumbledbYGrace:Sure  Btw, It's Daniel not Daniels  |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 7:05pm On Dec 17, 2014 |
Nancydearie:By God's grace, tomorrow! There will be an update tomorrow. Thanks for dropping by ma... |
| Literature › Re: What Should This Be Called? by TemitopeDaniel(m): 4:08am On Dec 17, 2014 |
I'm in. nice innovation, HBG. |
| Literature › Re: On The Run (A Blockbuster Series) by TemitopeDaniel(m): 4:03am On Dec 17, 2014 |
Gosh! The disk! Ireti rushed to the shelf, nervous, knelt before the dusty heap of journals and novels, and with her fast moving eyes and ever speedy hands, she searched for a maroon paper-back novel titled ‘The Unknown’. She had chosen to hide the CD in this novel because of its ideal title, it matched perfectly with the content of the CD – the known left unknown. Lol! Oga KingzPen! Thanks sir...  |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:30pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
stuff46:Lol. |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:27pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
Flakeey:loool!!!!! Ese ma. |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:26pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
ifeprecious:M good oh... Thanks a bunch ifeprecious. missed u! |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 7:13am On Dec 16, 2014 |
Nancydearie:Lol.... Amen. I wrote d exam yesterday already na... Just traveling back to sch. My night was awesome.. urz? |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:07am On Dec 16, 2014 |
I came to pick one or two things and to write and exam in Ibadan... I've gat to travel back to school today..so, please read the complete EPISODE TWENTY-SIX on my blog via... ↓↓↓↓↓↓ www.temitopedaniel./2014/12/16/the-unknown-episode-twenty-six/ www.temitopedaniel./2014/12/16/the-unknown-episode-twenty-six/ www.temitopedaniel./2014/12/16/the-unknown-episode-twenty-six/ I'll update it on NL as soon as I settle down again. With Love, T.Dan. |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:04am On Dec 16, 2014 |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:03am On Dec 16, 2014 |
Tholuwani:Thanks so much ma'am, God bless u! |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:02am On Dec 16, 2014 |
seunviju:Aunty Seun! Lol... thanks ma'am |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:02am On Dec 16, 2014 |
stuff46:Do I look like Prince Edward... Mhen! This story still long ooh.. |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:00pm On Dec 15, 2014 |
To be continued later please.... had to read for an exam so, concluding it today, av gat to rest. Till then.... manage that short update while I continue later. Goodnight! |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 7:58pm On Dec 15, 2014 |
EPISODE TWENTY-SIX The moon had disappeared and the sun had taken it's place in the sky. It was already nine am in the morning when Nicholas took a glimpse at his wristwatch and another at Henry who had been playing the acoustic guitar for a while. He cleared his throat to gain his attention. The previous day was indeed stressful but the two had to wake up as early as possible to prepare breakfast, freshen up and prepare for that day. He had made sure he left Vivian's vicinity yesterday only when he saw the Prince and his friend drive away from the front of the Vivian's compound. Though, he slept very well because it was a very busy day he had the previous day, but he woke up into the mystery of thoughts that morning, wondering what Prince had came for and why he had said he would go by a plan. What plan? He kept thinking till he got Henry's attention and sighed. "We got to prepare a schedule for today's operation, Henry." He said as he bit his fingernails. Henry looked at him too. "Yes, Nicholas. Yesterday wasn't an easy day at all." He smiled. Nicholas chuckled. "That's true, but our enemies aren't on their various seats right now, they are exploring everywhere, in search of us to devour." Henry sighed. "How do we go about today? What do you have in stock?" He enquired. Nichlas stopped biting his nails and looked at Henry again. "I want you to just get closer to Vivian to know more about her, her lifestyle and about the Prince who wants to go by a plan." He said. "But Nicholas, are you sure ou heard about any plan yesteday?" Henry asked. Nicholas frowned. "I really did. I heard that Prince, he actually said it. By the way, we have to know everything becase now that I have found her, even if she is no longer mine, I have to protect her well." Nicholas said. Henry swooshed out a long breath as he swallowed. "Alright, I'll start by doing that. So, what are you going to be busy with today?" "I'm just going to find my way because you'll have to take my car along with you. But, make sure you recharge your mobile phone in case I just we have to discuss." "Alright, Nicholas." "I still want to continue trailing and listening to Engineer Ashley's voice note well." He added. "Just be careful, you know they don't wish us well." Henry said as he stood up. "But wait, why's it that you're putting on my shirt today?" Nicholas asked. "I want to have your scent too, so Vivian wouldn't suspect anything." Henry replied him. "But you should have used the perfume on your own shirt instead of wearing mine. Anyways, don't take too long there." Nicholas smiled. "Alright, I'll call you." Henry smiled too and waved as he stepped out. ** ** ** Beatrice swiveled her chair angrily. She looked into Lizzy's eyes and hissed as she breathed heavily. "I feel like crushing that Vivian, Lizzy." She said as she sviweled the chair around again. No one was needed to be told how much umbrageous she was before knowing she was really cheesed off. "Just keep calm, Beatrice." Lizzy said with a smile. "But actually you know how I'm feeling! After many years, how come? Answer me! A Prince for that matter, no one can steal him away, I'm saying that." She hissed again. "But, you mean the Prince really never called since yesterday, Bibi." Lizzy said. Beatrice shrugged. "He didn't! I'm sure he must have followed tha bitch and I'm sure he fell for her." She said. Lizzy smiled again. "What do a do now? Do we visit the Prince then?" Lizzy asked. "No, Lizzy. Our first mission is to get that Vivian. I have been wondering on something." She said. "What?" Lizzy asked. "Don't you know only living souls can only try to snatch one's love? Dead bones can't move." She laughed. Like father, like daughter. ** ** ** Edward wiped his face with handkerchief as he moved closer to Osmond. He had not been able to concentrate on his work that morning so, he felt Osmond might be a source of help to him and beckoned on him. "Prince Edward, what's wrong?" Edward enquired. "I'm not fine at all. I just don't know why that Vivian of a girl has filled the both the void and occupied spaces of my heart since I saw her again last night." He said. Osmond cleared his throat and picked up a seat. "Prince, just calm down. I don't know what's really wrong with you, but I think you're just being paranoid." Edward laughed. "What do you mean by being paranoid?" He enquired. "Sure, you never felt this way for Beatrice and I'm sure you haven't even called her for reconciliation. That's partiality!" He laughed. Edward chuckled. "Anyways, please what do I do? I really need you to help me." "We have no choice than to keep pressuring this lady. I wouldn't know if you have the time now, can't we check on her at home?" Osmond asked. "We should be. At least, Beatrice sacked her already, she should be at home." He replied. "Anyways, lets go." The two stood up and walked out. ** ** ** "You mean you want to end her story?" Lizzy asked Beatrice. Beatrice nodded. "I wish to send her to a journey she would never return from. Who knows who will come next if Prince Edward leaves me? I can't marry a razz guy, God knows." Lizzy chuckled. "But, wouldn't it be dangerous to waste her life like that? What if we just throw her into a big trouble? Or if possible just pour a concentrated Hydrochloric acid on her face s that her beauty would turn to ugliness and would chase Prince away." "Wao! Nice one, Lizzy. We can just pour that on her. At least we've not killed her, just to teach her a big lesson and to chase Prince away from her." "Off we go, Bibie." The two stood up and walked out. ** ** ** |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 6:51pm On Dec 15, 2014 |
I promised an update but left d exam hall some minutes back... KiP cOnNeCtEd, update drops tonight as promised. I am a dude who hates breaking promises. T.Dan. |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 7:50pm On Dec 14, 2014 |
Mogenerous:Hmmn.... m wowed! Thanks a bunch Mogenerous.... God favour u and make his face shine upon u. Success in life ma'am! |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 7:48pm On Dec 14, 2014 |
Lordseyad:Thanks so much lordseyad... God bless u! |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 7:47pm On Dec 14, 2014 |
Nancydearie:Lol! Ma'am. I've jex been afraid of showing my face again. I read ds when I was in church in the morning but my battery has been flat since den... all I could do since then is to chat on whatsapp... if I dare to type, my battery would run out and everything typed would wipe off. On a good day, I ought not to update tomorrow.... BUT for this sake.... I'm gonna endeavor, try all my best to make up yo everyone tomorrow. Thanks. |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:14am On Dec 14, 2014 |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:30am On Dec 14, 2014 |
EPISODE TWENTY-FIVE Her eyes darted round the vehicle. She returned a gaze at Henry, making her feelings known to him. She looked at Anthony and back at Henry again. “Please, what’s the name of the deodorant you wear?” She enquired, squinting her eyes. Henry’s eyes popped more open than usual. She had just taken in Nicholas’ scent, he had thought within himself. What’s even the name of this one’s perfume? He had thought as he looked away from her for a while and cleared his throat after few seconds. He had forgotten. Wouldn’t she suspect? Henry giggled as he tweaked his nose and looked at her again. “But you use the same type, you know it already.” He smiled. →CONTINUE READING Full Episode drops on NL after church service today KiP cOnNeCtEd |
| Literature › Re: THE UNKNOWN: The Mega-hit Series by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:24am On Dec 14, 2014 |
Samneer:Okies.... I'll tell him. Thabks Samneer. |
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