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tushwitch: nice story, the only fault with this is that it's always one or two story per page... the ejo don pass the story, kai!

lol! It's because I reppy every comment. I don't feel happy if a writer don't reply my comment(s) too, so I have to do it.

HOW ARE YOU?

GodofGrace: I love your story very inspired to me ,and I just decided not to make comment all this while because I really hate it when people's ate in problems. sad for christiana but love the way her live end, its not easy at all to see your love one in pain because I personally I get frustrated, bitter and anger at the same time. being a year now that I lost my dad to a 12 months of pain and agony. enough said before I started boiling again, T Dan continue to do what you know I how to do best the lord is your strength

Wao! I feel sad. May God uphold him.

I've always prayed for ur comment, I'll say a prayer for u everyday.

seunviju: Nawa o,weeping may endureth for a night but joy cometh in the morning.I feel for Richard and I hope Lawrence won't get pemi o.Thanks for all the update sir

Thanks youfor reading, ma.

Nancydearie: Nice update,keep it up T-Dan!! Still following!

Thanks Nancy.

snowprince07: Mehn e b like say casala don burst oo
see as Helen de do her mumu.
TDan I hope Richard is not gonna kill himself oo
Nice update boss keep em coming

Thanks oga snow.. Don't mind Helen jare she dey vex mi!

Trypa: Temmi u no where we dey met ba i just reserve my comment

Lol! Lol! lol ooh!!!!!

Orlolahdey: So sad...keep rocking t-dan

Thanks Olorlardey.

Onemansquad: chai ah jst pray ntin shuld hapen 2 dix galx or else t.dan wil create anoda characta nd dat wil b me

Lol oh!!! Onemansquad no kill me oh!

Cindydearie: Nawa o helen y nah! God bless u tdan

Don't mind that silly girl, drm don fall her hand.

Eniqurl: U jez made me cry....so sad.
#followinq.

Dis you really cry? I'm sorry Eniqurl.. all z well!

heywhykum: Weldone T.dan. I know it's her own destiny, U are d best!.

Thanks sis, u 're d best too!

I dropped 5 long updates today naw oh, de note am oh! Dey note oh!

I appreciate u guys for ur time and MB, you're d best. don't forget to like, comment and share. It's in us, we can make It!


TEMITOPE DANIEL.

Tipiflexy: HMMMMMMMMMM!SO SAD AFTER READING D LATEST UPDATE,CNT STOP FEELING D HEAT DEEP DOWN INSIDE OF ME EVEN THOUGH IT JUST A STORY.RIP TO CHRISTIANA.I HOPE N PRAY RICHARD WONT TURN OUT TO B A LUNATIC PERSON.

Same ere... that's if he doesn't kill himself!

samsondavid: Right Now. Tee Dan has made me Sad

#Mourning Christiana RIP

#Sobing

I'm sorey d story has made u sad, no b me oh!


RIP Christie.

Babetolux: Hmmmmmmm so sad......... Following

Babetolux... God will make u happy!

Beckytee: we still want another update oooo, we will use dat to mourn her...... Her death is soooo painful, but wot can we do dan to say RIP to her

Lol! The thread has been updated!

BTW, dis s tin really pain u?? I believe all z well!

CONTINUATION.

What else could be so heartbreaking like what just happened? When Jay and Uche walked into the hospital with the money for the operation, they almost fainted on hearing of her death. "God's will, A man's destiny." Pemisire kept repeating as she held on to Richard as if they've known each other for a while.

Richard jumped up suddenly and rushed ouside. Jay and Uche were still down, weeping when he rushed out. "Where's he going to?" She asked herself, wondering.

She wiped her own tears and rushed after him. It seemed something had gone wrong completely. "Richard!" She kept calling him as she got outside and saw him pick a motorcycle.

She stood and watched for a while, questioning herself of where he might be heading to. "She picked another motorcycle and started trailing him.

****

"This is Michael." The voice told Helen.

"Michael?" She sat quickly on hearing this. She just concluded her lunch, which Michael could that be? She kept wondering.

"God! Babe, don't tell me you've forgotten me? Helen!" The voice said again.

Helen smiled. "Wao! Michael, what's up?" She stood up.

"I'm good, it's been a while. How are you?"

"I'm good, how's everything?" She asked.

The voice laughed. "You and these words of yours, I'm good sha. How's this your friend that said I inspired her into singing?"

Helen noded, still smiling. "Wao! So it's been a while you heard from Pemisire too right?" She asked.

"Don't mind me, I've been busy with Dad's business." He replied.

Helen cleared her throat and began wondering. "Your voice has changed a lot, and besides which Dad? You told us your Dad has died."

"Urh.... em.. Don't mind me, I call my uncle my Dad now. I'm releasing an album soon." The guy informed her.

Helen was happy. "I must get that album! Oh! You're talented!" She jumped happily.

"I wish to see you and your friend, there's a particular song I wish to feature you guys in." The guys told her.

"Really? I'll tell Pemisire. She's here with me in Ibadan, she came... she just came to greet me." She replied.

"Really? Pemisire is in Ibadan too? Send me the address to your house, I must come and see you guys!" He said.

"I'll do that right away, take care." She jumped happily and ended the call.

Michael was the one who lead an inspirational music when they were still in school and inspired Pemisire into singing and playing instruments until they became friends on campus and later lost their contacts.

Helen sent the address instantly, she couldn't wait to tell Pemisire that Michael called her. She never knew it was Lawrence and his guys that were at work.

****

Richard slammed the gate as he entered into the house. "I won't forget my words, if she dies, I die!" He muttered as he stepped into the house.

Pemisire paid the motorcyclist and stood at the front of the house. She shook the gate softly but it was locked already. "What do I do? I'm sure he has gone in to harm himself." She said, looking around to get someone to help her out but none.

Richard on the other hand had entered into the house and went straight to his room. He picked Christina's picture on the Sony Television and started weeping bitterly until he thought of the best idea to end his journey too.

...Story continues.

Beckytee: Hmmmm!

Hmmn! Breathtaking!

samsondavid: Noooooo!!!!! This Murder.

Tee Dan you will hear from my lawyer.


#Sobbing!!!

I no b Anaemia na...

tmamuda: Captain, U re doing great. Bt pls allow us to rock dat mart wealth

Lol!

d4real890: Sobbing RIP christie

May her soul rest in peace. Thanks bro.

RIP christie! Do u want anoda update today? People dey vex! No b me na... na d story dey write itself...

hayurmidey: Nyc one. Let dem kip cumin.. Followin 99.9%

Thanks, Ay.

samsondavid: Hmmmm.... I am seeing tfinx, suspense ain't ma thing because I know how the Tory dey go..

#Team Richard&Pemisire getting married, Christiana hale and hearty, Lawrence & co jailed.......

Abeg bros Tee another update..


More strength to Ur Elbow.

Lol! U better close those that mouth,

Flakeey: quote author=TemitopeDaniel]Flakkkkkkkkky!!!!

yessssss
you know what i need
moreeeeee

Updated!

I'm sorry if u 're disappointed but I really write according to my inspiration. It may look sad but believe me, that's d main purpose of this story when I was inspired on August 27th. Now, facing PEMISIRE and LAWRENCE. I pray she survives.

Yours,

TEE'DAN.

STORY CONTINUATION.

CHRISTINA

Wish to see you, wish to hear from you, wish to see you for the last time... Richard. There's no friend like the lady you brought, you better cling on to her. As for our parents, I don't think they are biological.



JUST AFTER, Doctor Kate walked out of the ward, crying already. She could see other Doctors coming out of the ward too, with sad faces as they returned back to their various posts. She became frightened as she moved closer to Doctor Kate. "Don't tell... me!" She looked serious, her eyes already squeezing out tears.

"Let's... let's me in my.. my office." She snorted as she walked to her office and Pemisire's mouth was wide open, in the waiting room. "Doctor.." She called as she rushed after her. "Please talk, you're crying already, Doctor what's it?" She was shivering already.

"We.. we los.. we lost her." She finally said as she held Pemisire's two hands, weeping like a baby.

"No!" Pemisire shouted, pouring out tears as if she had known her for a while. Her mouth was moving so fast as she shivered and was sweating profusely within seconds she heard the news. "Tell me this is a lie... tell me.. tell me!" She shouted again.

"Please, don't be like this. The next thing to do is just to know how Richard will be informed. You should know it's not going to be funny."

"Christiana... eventually." Pemisire couldn't stop crying and shivering along. What would be of Richard? How would he be informed? "Richard was involved in a ghastly accident." She informed.

"Really? Was he the one that was brought in? Don't tell him anything, don't be sad." She tried to pet her, wiping her tears.

"Is this a dream or what? Christi.. no!"

"Just take it easy, we have to be very careful or else!" Doctor said, weeping too.

******

Richard rushed up from his bed and ran to the waiting room to check what was going on. He just felt better after the thirty minutes he had spent on the bed, in pain and as well thinking of his sister.

To hell with drip! He said as he flung away the tube and rushed outside only to meet Pemisire seated on the brown chair in the living room, weeping. "What is it!" He shouted as he saw her.

Pemisire was frightened. She rushed to her feet shivering, silent until Richard ran into his sister's ward and met her covered up. "No!" He said softly as he approached the corpse and shivered as he touched it.

He removed the cloth from her face and saw that she was dead already. Pemisire had gotten to the door then, watching him as he displayed. "Christina, talk to me." He tapped her cheeks as he stared at her. "Christie!" He shouted.

Pemisire rushed in and held his left hand. "Rich, you have to stop this!" She said.

Richard was blinking already as he started crying, shivering along, he put his head on her chest and was weeping so hard. "Christina!" He shouted again, wriggling out his hand from Pemisire and went on his kneels.

Seems like yesterday we used to rock the show
I laced the track, you locked the flow
So far from hangin on the block for dough
Notorious, they got to know that
Life ain't always what it seem to be
Words can't express what you mean to me
Even though you're gone, we still a team
Through your family, I'll fulfill your dream (that's right)
In the future, can't wait to see
If you open up the gates for me
Reminisce some time, the night they took my friend
Try to black it out, but it plays again
When it's real, feelings hard to conceal
Can't imagine all the pain I feel
Give anything to hear half your breath
I know you still living your life, after death
Every step I take, every move I make
Every single day, every time I pray
I'll be missing you
Thinkin of the days, when you went away
What a life to take, what a bond to break
I'll be missing you

"Christie!" He kept shouting until Doctor Kate ran inside. "Take it easy, please." She said as she held him.

It seemed Richard was going crazy already. He ignored the deep cut he had by his arm during the accident and stood to his feet. He shook Christina continuously and keot shouting her name. All was still like a dream, all was still like a play, he felt it wasn't the reality.

"Please wake me up from my sleep, I don't want to dream any longer." He shouted as he held Pemisire firmly, throwing himself jnto the air and crying.

"Richard." Pemisire called his name, trying to calm him down but all was up to no avail. He was just spluttering.

"He doesn't exist! Yeah, he doesn't!"

Pemisire hung her head in sadness. She couldn't get things right too, why on earth is everything like this? She knew how he'd feel to lost his sister even after several years of sicknesses of various types.

"God is wicked! Heartless! No... Christie.

CHRISTINA.

Goldenbasil: nice story. more update please

Thanks Goldenbasil, u 're welcome here and plz do comment!

arabaribiti: I just dey gbadun you cos u too much

U sef too much! Thanks arabaribiti...

dammygoody: *Brings out an arrest warrant * *

Sir TeeDan, you are under arrest for the creation of this amount of suspense. You have the right to remain silent because anything you say or do....

You know the rest...

More updates please

mummy come and warn Oga Dammy oh Lool! Bro!

Abbey2580: Ghostmode deactivated*

TEE, WETIN HAPPEN? That babe must not die oh, I don dey cry for her.

ABEG COME UPDATE, PLZ!

BTW, great story line, you've never disappointed and I know you won't. But, if she dies.... and Richie too!

Argh... What' my own business? Na d tory dey write itself oh