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Royver: All is well o bro, thanks for asking. Settling to write update now.Hey bro! Please may I have your contact? Maybe ur Mobile number. Please, I have something to ask YOU. you can mail me via danniedeekonsepts@gmail.com Please, thanks. |
Mention, I'm here. Following. |
Onemansquad: Kip dm flowin in #stil folowingThanks boss. ![]() |
morsadh: I've heard things -good things- about you, but I hadn't the time until an hour ago, when I saw your work on The Front Page and I must say that you do a great job. Your story is lovely and leaves me seeking for more of it, just like the work of my Aunt, AudreyTimms. Also the interchange between the first-person and the omnipotent styles are lovely. With this I say... More power to your elbow. P.S: I see that you date the story back to 2010. Would be nice to maintain consistency on technology and development around that time *although I know that you would be very cautious about this, without anybody telling you*.Lol! Yeah, very cautious. I've been careful with that. BTW, Audrey Timms na d boss oh she b my aunt too Thanks for d comment, God bless. |
almacherish: Cool story, abeg mk richard no die oI pray so. |
Morning guys! How was the night? I just hope you slept well like i did too? Thank you all for your support so far, God will bless you oh. To Mynd44, I also say thanks. HAPPY SUNDAY. Cares, TEMITOPE DANIEL. |
ZUBY77: Nice work.Thanks Zubby, ain't easy oh. |
myndd: T DAN shea u b medical student ni,love d research u put into ur workMEDICAL? I just dey try my best oh, i no b medical student oh.. THANKS bro. |
Trypa: Ore mi nice update bt it was sure too short bt twale for u oo ;DOre mi nice update bt it was sure too short bt twale for u oolol... Thanks dearest |
Eniqurl: chai! Everitin z complicated.....followinq.Thanks eni. ![]() |
olamidey3: the story is full of suspense... I'm concern about Pemisire safetyI am too.. Morning bro. |
uchebest2006: Discombobulated means disconcert or confuse; upset; frustrate.hmmn... lol! |
Onemansquad: Bros jst go and open hospital u 2 mch I be Engineering student oh. How na? |
pricelesslove: Finally i have caught up with you guys. but Oga Temetope why nah... why u make me cry like this. btw well done the lord is ur strength .I'm sorry, na the story no b me oh. BTW, where have you been. |
horlah1: So sorry abt christie n richy's caseThanks dear, I appreciate. |
Continuation. The anaesthesia has been done on Richard already, so, the Doctor had started planning on the exploratory surgery laprotomy. He had discussed with his friends and Pemisire already about the internal bleeding he had. "Just pay sixty thousand for the surgery. The earlier the batter because it's a punctured wound and his anterior fascia is penetrated already." "Anterior? Anyways, we'll go pay the money right now, but please take care of him." Uche stood up. "Sure, he will be well taken care of. But, I don't want you to be afraid and you guys, he's going to need blood." He giggled. "Blood? We aren't in the same blood group. Has he lost so much blood?" Jay asked. "The one he will loose during the course of the operation and the one he has lost earlier is enough for him to need. So, you people aren't fit to donate then." He said. "What's his blood group? I think I can be of help there." Pemisire chimed in. ****** "Richard bleeped up! I never knew he had gone, why would he stab himself? He wanted to die too, will that bring back his sister?" Jay complained. "I can't blame that guy. You aren't going through a quater of what he is, are you?" Uche questioned. "Please Jay, spare me all that. After leaving the office, don't I get bothered about him and his sister?" Jay hissed. "What is this one saying? Were you neglected by your parents or were you sacked at your place of work? Come! Have you ever tried carrying it as a burden and see if you wouldn't drown? Guy! When frustration gets to a stage, you have no choice than to cross over." Jay sighed. "Anyways, I have heard you. But come to think of it, are their parents for real?" Jay asked. Uche sniggered. "How would I know? Na me born am?" "Real parents can't do what they've done, I'm really sure!" He hissed. "Anyhow, but they are really insane, i mean really crazy! I can't imagine my parents doing that to me, even if they aren't their parents, they shouldn't turn their backs at them!" "Oooh! Now you can feel a little of what Richard's feeling too right? That is just itty-bitty to what he feels or should better be said as what he felt during his sister's health. Guy, e no easy ooh." Jay sighed. **** The operation would start by evening and Pemisire had donated her blood to be used immediately after the operation. She was tired already and still felt she had to stay to know how far with Richard. She had been brewing on how to contact Helen until it dropped in her mind that she could use Uche or Jay's mobile phone to call her and get her informed about the problems. She was a strong lady. Surviving that way after loosing her father and twin sister wasn't an easy thing but she had to shoulder all the pains and tribulations up to that stage. She also been cogitating on how Lawrence could get her, she had no idea, none on th way except the diary. Her own believe had been that she had nothing that could be used to trace her in the dairy, so she had no problem. The operation soon started by 8pm, Pemisire was with Richard's friends, all seated, praying to hear a good news. |
holyboss: T.dan wch kind level na? Why u go start anoda tory (a man's destiny) wen u av a yet to complete one? I tot this post was suspended till u get back on ur writing feetThis is my work of art, my sweat, treasured work. I can't leave any of my stories! I'm coming back to it after bi complete that, na d situations make everythingb dz way. Btw, I haven't seen u on d thread. U dey fight me? |
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Joshuadon: am confused, wat happening here................dis just bounced into frontpageA story, just keep reading sir. |
wolexino: yay! T.dan on FP congratz bro Thanks Wole. |
AdeniyiA: hope u're *wenting* well sha?LOL! Hey bro..! |
Story continuation. PEMISIRE. This same day, he lost his sister, he had an accident and even his job. He hasn't recovered from the shock of the accident when he got to know his sister has kicked the bucket too. I am quite sure he was discombobulated by the sadness, loosing a sister, hopeless. I believe when there is life, there is hope.But, no matter what happens, you must give thanks. Anaemia is baleful, kidney failure is very revolting too! He's the awesome one, isn't he? I pray you uphold the one you sent me to, I'm sure you sent me to this guy, I am sure!" **** Pemisire tilted her head, thinking as she sat at the waiting room. She remembered the little time she spent with Christiana before he sudden death. It was still like a shock to her too, wondering how she could just die when a donor showed up. Her head was aching her already, she couldn't tell if her stomach was aching her or if she was hungry. Doctor Martins who had been attending to Richard walked out and called them into his own office to tell them about the latest development. "Did you say he stabbed himself?" He asked them. "Yes, he did." Jay replied. "His situation is not really a challenging one but i pray nothing has happened to his Vasculature, solid organs and hollow viscus." He rested his back and swiveled the chair a bit. "What's all these about? Doctor, don't tell me Richard won't.." "No!" Doctor cut in instantly. "He's going to be fine but we have to get him operated. At first, this can lead to a term called peritonitis where stomach acids and bile will poison the system. ...continues. |
Mynd44: What's the title of the story?A man's destiny by Temitope Daniel |
Abbey2580: Strongly recommend bosses! oga Mynd44, Obinnau and many more.Huh? Here I come. Quoted, Supported ![]() Oga Mynd, this way? |
Continuation. What would Richard do? She didn't know him really but she could read it in him that he was about to do something annoying. Richard on the other hand didn't know how to start with himself. He had been thinking if he should stab himself or maybe drink something poisonous. "Christie! Oh no!" He wept more as he stared at her picture and made up his mind. "Why would I fear death? That man they call God too is a wicked man, even if I kill myself or he kills me, I'll still surely die. Christie, wait, we are going to see that man together." He said as he rushed to his feet and ran to the kitchen. "Stabbing myself is the quickest way." He nodded as he picked up the knife as stared at it for a while. He didn't know how to apply it, death too isn't that easy, is it? He placed it on his neck and shook his head continuously, that would be a very bad place to die. He remembered the smiles on her sister's face, the tears, the affable characters and words of advice. "Christie!" He shouted and stabbed his belly and went down instantly. **** "Boss, it's done already." Lawrence's guys approached him, smiling. Lawrence's eyes widened as he stared at them. That wasn't enough, he had to stand up from the exhilaration reclining sofa in the living room. "Are you serious? Are you guys real?" He asked as fast as he could to express his utmost surprise and happiness. "Yes sir, she has sent her address." "That can't be real, I don't... just like that? Thank God for this diary!" He grinned. "It seems they were so close when they were in school, she was fluent with us. But one thing is about the voice, she didn't recognize the voice but I think her ecstasy has caused this." "That's her own business, the only thing is just that mission accomplished! Then, we move to stage two." He grinned for a while and ended the grin with a frown. "We have to get to the study, I have some plans to work out. The work must start as early as possible." He shook his head continuously. "But Boss, that girl... she must not live too." One of them said. "None of them will live, by the time I'm through with them." He laughed monstrously. **** "I see trouble." Pemisire said as she peeped through the gate. She didn't know what to do, she was short of ideas at that time. "God, why?" She hissed dryly and sighed. She rushed back to the junction and mounted on a motorcycle as quick as she could. She wasn't familiar with that place but knew the motorcyclist would locate the hospital again. Immediately she rushed down from the motorcycle and paid he driver, she ran inside the hospital to check on the Doctor if she could be of help. She hadn't met Uche and Jay so she didn't know how to approach them until the Doctor got the guys and took her along to get Richard from the house. Pemisire was sweating. She was wondering how it happened, it was just like twenty four hours that she met Richard already and now she was running around to save him. **** Jay and Uche rushed inside the house as Pemisire stood by the gate and watched until she heard the guys shout. She was filled with tension instantly, what was going on? She was still wondering until the guys brought Richard out of the house, all panting and crying along. "What?" She asked them, the rate of her pulse was on a very high speed. "He stabbed himself.. just get that gate opened." "Stabbed?" Pemisire rushed to the gate but couldn't get how it was being opened. Uche joined her and opened the gate. They flew to the hospital. |
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Tipiflexy: NOBODY WISH TO FEEL WT U FELT DURING DAT PERIOD.I HOPE U AR DONE WIT SUCH FRUSTRATING LIFE COS IT NT WORTH IT?My bro... no b easy thing oh! He just have to b strong... God will uphold him IJNA |
tushwitch: lol, that's ok sha....I'm fine but will be better with the next update (don't reply biko, so there'll be space for another story on the page ).heheheAs you so wish. ![]() |
Phikom: Finally Christie is gone....m gutted sad and unhappy...anyway nothing must happen to Pemisire or else Tdan I go scatter dis place...u ve my words Tdan...welldone God bless uLawrence should be told ![]() |
hassan85: I really feel for RichardSame ere... I pray he doesn't kill himself.. |
Aliyuozioma: hmmmmmm so sadGod will make u api... |
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she b my aunt too
Thanks for d comment, God bless.
boh nw, it look more like uve abandon it.
