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MissSlimbody: Well-done ...More inspiration

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Eniqurl: Followinq...weldne sir.

Thank you ma.

Trypa: Gosh.temi u are d boss u are really doing great bt temi u had some errors bt dat is story for d gods d suspence is Much ooo more battry to ur phone keep it up

Thanks Trypa but please point out d errors for me. Thanks.

seunviju: This Richard self,you meet person never reach a day and the first help is for her to donate her kidney.Orisirisi

Yes oh, shey u want Christie to die ni? She was his available help then, and remember JUST A WEEK.

dammygoody: Boss, break was spirit-filled ....Thanks.

lol! Spirit-filled indeed.

Onemansquad: Pemisire pls help save a soul 2da nd God wil bless u 4 me
T.dan ah dy troway salute o

I bow sir! How u dey boss?

Topsy42: waitin dear

Waiting? I slept off, was tired already.. 3 Updates yesterday..

Ormorlehwah: I dey kampe ooooo..... Weldone Sir, keep the work moving.

Where u c sir? Lol! Thanks ma'am, welcome back.

dammygoody: Waiting boss..

Oga me!! How was d break?

Ormorlehwah: *Waiting patiently*

Ma'am! Missed uuu! How u na longest tym!

ToriEmManson: Nooooo ...Its till you write your last will o and then you should be about 2009 years

lol! Funny lady!

Gamesound: Wow,,,, Still U rock T.Dan... I've missed this place

Welcome back sir, missed u!

Flakkydagirl: I no vex o bigboss....

Its been A̶̲̥̅ while i updated too,i've been quite busy...hope to see you come over one of D̶̲̥̅̊ɪ̣̝̇s˚˚˚° days sha..

I'm really loving D̶̲̥̅̊ɪ̣̝̇s˚˚˚° piece..i'm beginning to enjoy Pemisire's character-real and full of life.
And Richard too,cool guy.

I just hope they'll not be able to find Pemi to harm her..
Christana is suffering too much,all that suffer suffer for just one person.

D̶̲̥̅̊ɪ̣̝̇s˚˚˚° piece is captivating and your writing style is beautiful too.And your characters are all great.



I can't wait for the next update...
Flakkydagirl.

Lol! THANKS so much my sister! I appreciate oh.

STORY CONTINUATION.


Doctor Kate sat down as Uche and Jay sat too. She got them invited concerning the donor, it seemed she found one already as the guys could read in her expression. "What of Richard?" She asked them as she put the stethoscope on her table and rested her back.

"He went out, probably to drink as usual." Jay replied her.

"That's bad, you should have at least stopped him, anyways, I found one already but there's a problem."


"Problem? Is it concerning the donor or our girl?" Uche asked.


"Concerning the donor." She replied and kept quiet for some seconds before she spoke again. "He's demanding for a huge amount of money because of that." She added.

"Wao! Like how much is the guy collecting? Why are people thieves like this? Whenever they see you in a problem they tend to take advantage of you, it's not right." Uche hissed.

"Do you know I'd have volunteered if we had the same blood group? But, that's another problem on ground." She said.

"That's true." Jay scratched his head.

"But how much is the money on ground?" Uche asked.

"Three hundred thousand." She replied.

"What? Then Doctor, we have to go then, let's go and try our lucks outside there if someone better can be gotten."Jay stood up.

"That's also good, it's a nice idea. Who knows if the guy has contracted a deadly disease?" She laughed.


*******

JUNE 11.

Everywhere was busy already, a time for bars and joints to make money and sell even more than their satisfactions. Hexagon Club and Bar was full of both males and females ready to watch to watch the very first match of the World Cup that was held in South Africa. It was time for South Africa to face Mexico when Richard took a sip from his cup again.


It was just 4:00pm, the match was about to be started when the bar became full. Richard had been thinking that Pemisire would soon be through with all she was doing so that they would talk and know if she could donate kidney to her sister. From the look of things, it seemed she would be really busy that evening. Several people had started making their orders and she was occupied already.

He picked up his phone and called Uche to know what the latest development was when he heard that there was still no donor. He would have left the place if not for Pemisire that might be of help to him, he still had to wait, he needed something.

It was the end of the week already, he looked around and saw the people already ready to watch the game all in the name of buying a bottle of wine to chill and watch the two countries trash each other as the first to kick the ball after the four years of wait. He wondered when Pemisire would conclude her work, he needed to talk with her and share his story to make her pity him and donate her kidney for his sister. He was cursing Jay and Uche deep inside him, if not for them, he would be able to donate the kidney for his sister.

"Weldone, the unknown." He smiled faintly as she passed beside him to serve the guys next to him.

Pemisire grinned, exposing her beautiful and neat white set of teeth. She looked even more beautiful as the grin supplemented her beauty. "Thanks." She replied, rushing back to her duty post because an order might be placed very soon.

She's beautiful, is she from a poor background or what? Buit if not, would she be working in this kind of place that can make one lean like a cane? Anyways, I pray she closes soon so that i can know my fate. But wait, there is another match between Uruguay and France tonight, when will she be through? He wondered.

He sighed and sipped again as the match unfold and the players played on.

*****

7:45pm.

Pemisire waved at her colleague as she left the the duty post for the guy. She had concluded her own part that day, she was weak and tired. It was her first day, people could be really troublesome, ordering almost every time.

"Unknown, you through?" Richard asked Pemisire as she left her post.

Pemisire walked to him with a smile. "Yeah, I'm through for the day. Why have you decided to wait till now? You wanna watch the match by 8:30 too?" She asked him.

"Did i watch the previous one?" He stood to his feet. He had just taken like three glasses from the bottle of wine, just unlike him. On a good day, he'd have drank up to four or more bottles, and possibly be ranting nonsense then. "Are you going home now?"

"Y... yes but why the question? I think I have to leave now because it's getting late."

"Please wait, can't I take you home?" Richard asked her.

....please Pemisire, know the kind of person you put your trust in, if possible, trust no one... Her father's voice reechoed after Richard asked her the question. She swooshed out a long breath and shook her head. "I'm alright." She told him.

"You think so or what?" Richard asked.

"I'm sure, I think I have to leave now, it's dark already." She smiled.

"Wait... I need your help." She said stammering.

Pemisire stood akimbo as she stared at him. "Please let it be tomorrow, I'm really tired. Or is it urgent?" She asked.

"Yes, a matter of life and death." Richard replied sadly, already making up tears.

Pemisire tweaked her nose. "Let's go outside." She told him and headed outside.


*********

Flakkydagirl, abeg no vex at ur boy na, I'll create time to follow ur 'Siblings' no just come here, please do comment, Please


Anoda update drops tonight and besides I greet everyone!

ToriEmManson: And I get to eat all d goodies,do less chores,fetch water wid 5 litres til I'm 20 n den I graduate to 10 litres ...

lol..
till I'm 20 too...

Beckytee: Hmmmm! Mr Tope let me start by apologising for coming late. It wasn't my fault, its exam tingy just finished my exam. So now am fully wit you.......who said sometins can remain impossible, to me everytin is possible with God, determination and hard work. Have always believe in you and I will continue to, I call u d best cos I see it in you. Welcome back boss cos I can see great improvement in dis work and dat was because u have d believe dat u can do it and u are determined and with God by ur side d sky is your starting point. Keep going boss. Following u like kilode..... I gbadun d story. Still remain my main self BECKYTEE

On my kneels! Sorry namesake, I'd have beeped u through whatsapp and ask after ur papers but lost all contacts. Pleaee, just beep me through whatsapp tonight.

BTW, welcome back! Thanks, God bless!

seunviju: Pemisire and Richard hmmmmmm,well done Mr Temitope,may the Lord grant you more wisdom

Amen, Thanks so much Seunviju, u refused to give me Viju diring d last tory, I dey expect one naw

Ciela: Tanx 4 d follow back.
Nyc update. Still following

u welcome, thanks ciela.

snowprince07: tanks boss

uwc sir.

hayurmidey: mre grease to ur elbow, less i forget mre powerbar to ur battery

Thanks Hayurmidey, lol...

Another update coming soon.. Battery will determine tho!

Eniqurl: Now bouh Richard nd Pemisire....gonna b interestinq #followinq

I pray so oh... lol!

Aliyuozioma: chai cnt stp smilling Rich n pemi, oga T.dan still waitin 4more fud oo

Thanks for ur time and comment sis.

snowprince07: Chai chai Richard diarisssss God ooo mama peace no dey lie oo

Lol... I Love ur signature!

hayurmidey: waitin.. Patiently.. Followin

I've updated.

CONTINUATION.

"Will you please leave me alone?" Richard said.

"Alright, it seems you look unhappy. God will make you happy." She took some steps, walking away.

"God.. hmmn.." He chuckled and poured some wine into the cup.

Pemisire halted and turned around. "What is it about God? You don't look like a Muslim, are you one? Even Muslims believe in God's existence." She walked back to him.

"Who are you? What do you want from me?" Richard wiped his tears as he spoke. He was down already, crying as usual. He found it difficult to stop thinking about Christie, what would become of her? Where would he get a donor as soon as possible?

"You're crying, what's wrong?" Pemisire was concerned, she frowned her face instantly as she approached him. She hoped she hadn't started being too familiar with a stranger, all she was after was to make him attracted to the bar so as to patronize regularly.

"Please.. just leave me." Richard said quietly dismissing her with the wave of his hand.

"You can't tell if I can solve your problem, there's no man without his or her own problem." Pemisire spoke softly.

"I'm... sorry, you can't be of help and besides I don't share my personal details with strangers." He said.

"Alright, I pray God will make you happy then." She smiled and walked back to her post.

Richard watched her as she walked back to her post, wondering how friendly she was. Despite she didn't know him, she was friendly. Wait, I can't tell, she might be of help! Can't she donate the kidney? Who knows when a donor would be gotten? I can just pay her off and besides she can use the money to start something meaningful other than being a bartender.

"Hey." He waved at her.

Pemisire smiled and waved back. "What else should I bring?" She asked.

"Bring yourself here." He said as he dropped the cup of wine.

Pemisire looked around. The other bartender that had been putting her through the work had left, there were also few people in the bar, drinking. She pressed her lips together for a while before she walked up to him. "Anything the matter?" She asked.

"Why do you wish to be my friend?" He asked her.

Pemisire laughed. "Your friend? I never said such, did I? I was concerned about you and God."

"That man and I? So, what about me? Why are you concerned about me?"

Pemisire tilted her head for a while. "Why did you term God as 'that man'?" She asked him.

"You've not answered my question." Richard said.

"Neither have you answered mine." She replied, squinting her face.

"What's your name?" He asked.

Pemisire grinned. "Call me... the unknown."

"You are weird!" Richard smiled.

Pemsire laughed again. "Honestly, you're weirder."

"Why do you now work here?" Richard asked.

Pemisire exhaled deeply. "Why do you come here to drink too?"

"Why are you difficult!"

"You're more difficult!"

Richard smiled again. "You haven't answered any of my questions."

"You haven't answered any of mine either." Pemisire replied him.

"You've made me smile, even in my predicaments. I don't know the kind of person you are. Alright, which of the questions do you want me to answer?" He asked her.

"Just be patient, I'm on duty right now. I have to leave." Pemsire left him on seat, smiling.

She relates well, she's full of life! This kind of person will make Christiana happy, wait... she hasn't told me her name!

update coming soon! Soon!

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