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Tovot:
. Hello. Are you a student or teacher here?

Hey Tovie. Sorry I wasn't here for class. I was driving in a winter storm at the time. Glad you came.

donifez:
sorry,i meant who to..don't want to derail this thread.

You were right. It is whom. I was just wonder what the end of the sentence was. Never mind. We shouldn't derail.

donifez:
walking to and fro looking for whom to____

Whom to?

donifez:
For me this is enough christmas gift,Thanks @ larry.

Doni what are you doing up?

Thanks LarrySun. What a great gift. Merry Christmas to you too Sweetz.

1miccza:
*whispering*check yo end rhymes and try the rhyme scheme for effect. I am not good ooo

Already been said.


Here's hoping she was in class last night. All the classes so far have been really helpful, to me as well.

@the bolded
We both know you could teach me a thing or two.

ninakurtz:
gud p.m
pls when is d assignment due?

There is not really a due time or date. Have you opened a thread in "Poetry for Review" or "Diaries"? Once you do that you can write to your hearts content. If you would like input from the teachers or anyone else simply tag them. They can only comment if you open in Poetry for Review though.

It's not mandatory that you open a thread, but we hope you will so we can see your work. We look forward to you poetry.

There wasn't much to do.


Sitting alone in my dorm,
Drinking up the sound of a storm,
Wailing behind the pane of glass.
The girls all gone to class,
All trying to avoid me.
I look out into the dark night,
All I did was have one fight.
My crime wasn't worse than that.
Now I'm tagged a brat.

It's not my fault that I'm misunderstood,
I blame the law that got me fooled.
Being quiet was tagged weird,
Now my thoughts and actions are weld.
I am resolved, I won't cross the line,
And I don't expect anyone to cross mine,
But as I look down the window,
I realise with a start. It wasn't just a fight,
'Cause the girl I hit, is dead!

youngcrysta:
Muder story (continuation)

Now the light is on, Silence ruling
In a lucid moment, Eve remembered
Her loved ones kissing the earth,
A fair masked man with metalic weapons
With a wicked grin.
Eve bowed her head while her heart kept saying a silent prayer.
"I am known to perform three action",
The thunderous sound made her heart skip
Silence bow down for it.
"To kill, steal and Destroy"


Everyone immediately became a silent prayer warrior
Wishful thinking.
Alas! it was granted
They stole
A soul, was taken
by the recuse team.

CC: texanomaly, laykorn, cisse7575, krystalxxx, everestdebliu, Donifez, leki10

Not sure I understand this one.

preshuzpearl:
Sitting alone in my dorm,
Drinking up the sound of storm,
Wailing behind the pane of glass,
The girls all gone to class,
All trying to avoid me.
I look out into the dark night,
All I did was have one fight,
My crime wasn't worse than that.
Now I'm tagged a brat.

It's not my fault that I'm misunderstood,
I blame the law that got me fooled,
Being quiet was tagged weird,
Now my thoughts and actions are weld.
I am resolved, I won't cross the line,
And I don't expect anyone to cross mine,
But as I look down the window,
I realise with a start. It wasn't just a fight,
'Cause the girl I hit is dead

Cc: laykorn, texanomaly, dre11, everestdebliu, cisse7575, leki10 and others

What'd I miss in this poem??

This is a really good poem.
Check your punctuation.

Is this for real?