(mazi hi,
I Ve been a nairaland regular for months now but I have not commented on more than a couple of posts.

I want to say that your posts make an interesting read,especially as you are been pressured to churn out updates regularly.

I ll be brutally honest with u here for your own good.

You'd agree that you are an amateur writer and I'm certain that you write just for the fun of it,and ofcourse to relay your experience whether real or fictional or a mixture of both.

That's fine.like I said interesting and tremendously entertaining.

But please do not for a single second consider yourself to be a serious writer.I'm a afraid you are not even close.

You have got serious potentials,and I must say passion.but if you really intend to be a serious writer you must take writing courses.

You need to work on your plot development,characterization,your writing technique and your delivery needs to be fine tuned.

Some may ask why I am saying ask these.#no hating#
The reason is that I do not want you to be carried away by the praises of your fans and make the mistake of thinking that you can put out a serious work out there that would be read by serious writers and literary critics.

In the form that you are presently in, your ego might be crushed by their criticism and you may lose confidence in yourself and your abilities.

You can do better.


Just saying.Regards every one)



Ogbeni bonjovi abi wetin u call yourself,you can't even write a single page with the right spellings or punctuation marks. Just in case ur head big like Federick Forsight own,don't think for a second that you criticised this gentleman intelligently. You are a typical Ota-aje.

If u know say you read all the sixty-something pages and you still wrote that observation,I would believe you wrote that because u no just get this kind talent. We know the errors in the write-up and even the author is not unaware of it too.

The author said this is his second ever work and the improvements are there to see,can u ever write something that can generate this kind of followership in ur lifetime? Ota-aje jati-jati.

Good job Ishi. Don't you think its better for you to let us know how often to expect updates to avoid what happened in Wasinmi chronicles and Mazi's thread? I sense the story hasn't even properly started. No shakings sista,I siddon dey await updates sha.

Nice one Ishi. Tiri "Gbosa" for you.

So what's next now?

Ishi,you made me stay up all nite reading from page one, Only kane and Abel,General's daugther,Prison Break and homeland has previously achieve this feat. Frankly, 'your head dey there'. If you know Nelson Demille,I think you are an upgraded version of him and whenever you are ready to write that book,you've got people who are ready to buy.

I respect ur patience and the fact that you think you are not yet matured to publish. For me,you are 'ripe'(I hope you don't mind my usage of that word) enough. You've got the plots,the suspence,that charm too and of course ,the talent. I'll advice that you begin your book immediately before family live consume your nearest future and deprive us of a classic book.

No vex ooo,can't wait to read your book. Can some magic happen for it to be out before "Homeland" season three?

This is my best poem from Rudyard kipling love it to bits.

adexsimply: sent!! check ur mail

I checked. Didn't find anything attached. Kindly resend.

adexsimply: i just had it sent to your mail..enjoy

hey bro. You skip me oooo. Jeffery Archer please. tundetoday@yahoo.com

adexsimply: ve sent it

kindly send me Jeffrey archer too. Tundetoday@yahoo.com

Guess Nelson Demille doesn't have much fans here. That guy's got swag. The Genaral's daughter,Cathedral,By the Rivers of babylon.

Lovely books.

A tie actually. Kurt Vunnegut's cat cradle / Nelson Demille's General's Daugter / Alex Haley's roots / kane and Abel