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sweetsmalsis: U already making me lose interest o. Update na.......or else......i go port o

Sorry na, today's not over yet... I might will still update

texanomaly: The end

Don't be sad na, there might be a season two.... I'm not promising o

debayun: PS: you guys shld nt get me wrong I bliv u all writters r exceptionally gifted human intellectuals am amazed hw a youthful nigerian mind with all d negativity surrounding d country can still put dia immence super imgiinative skills into writing 4 all to understand and b both entertained and intrigued by it
I even gv kudon to those who put dia life experiences into a very wonderful movie script dat r worth millions
Am really proud to b nigerian any time I see all dis.
But truth b told all of u dis writers una shakara too much especially dat proud homo-sapien with d title called moderator YES!! Its u mynd666 if u lyk ban me God sees u
Das all

*waiting 4 d various lashing I will receive takes chair and a bottle of red wine with boli at d side* oya am all ears

Mtcheeew.... Where is the unlike button sef?

texanomaly: Sorry Van. I just read it. I'm still reading and loving your story. Keep it coming.

Thanks ma

Ice4jez: pple don tire now cos na so so beg before we see update

I'm relieved then, I thought it was like way below par or something.

No vex for me my oga, the story don enter im final stages, I wan make sure say the end make sense wella .

Is something terribly wrong with my latest update? I mean why has nobody commented on it? .

ninja4life: Finally thru with all d 14pages,now oga van make una come update now

Thanks for bro. I'll update tomorrow

HumbledbYGrace: Hi, larry and partner
Mynd and partner
Dimples and partner
Princesa and partner
Tovot and partner
Vantee and partner
Fishoy and partner
SuperB and partner
Rap and partner
Jiraiyas and kids

No o. It's Vantee and Fishoy

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princesa: how is it they put it again

uhm






yes


'an oil stain on one palm, touches the rest'

so.......


it's hard to tell the cheaters from the non cheaters

phew!


happy Sunday everyone!

Tovot!

Ishi

Myndd

HBG

shuga

Larry

debayun


love you all

Where is my name and rap maestro's? ....

Double post

Cuddlemii: ****Together At Last****

She married and had 13 children. Her husband died. She married again and had 7 more children. Again, Her husband died. But, she remarried and this time had 5 more children. Alas, she finally died.

Standing before her coffin, the preacher prayed for her. He thanked the Lord for this very loving woman and said, Lord, they are finally together...

One mourner leaned over and quietly asked her friend, Do you think he means her first, second or third husband?? The friend replied, I think he means her legs!

Lmao ...

iebanehita: ^
Just read your last update. You would notice you omitted some words.

Yeah thanks. I typed the thing in a hurry...

iebanehita: You wan dey introduce error now?!

Why na..?

What error? Please point it out to me...

bishop4life: Hey Van,my observation so far is dat you hardly update,besides you dont even have updating schedules.well am only suggestin you pick certain time and days(say lik once,twice or thrice every week. Maybe every monday and friday etc). I think dat will help d situation

Thanks for the suggestion sir. I will certainly use a schedule for my next write-up. This one is very close to the end...

vizboy: Na wa oh I hate / love suspense abeg do make u update again

I don update again

iebanehita: See me oo!!
I totally forgot... No mind me jor.

''Lord of Neous''.. A befitting one!!
Your head dey dere jare.

Thanks my chairman

bishop4life: This thread caught my attention wen it came to the front page.since i joined nairaland i never entered most forum bt always use the front page. I was reluctant wen i saw the headline cuase i only read news to avoid wasting time to read useless topcs lik tonto dikeh and ini edo cooking indomie ,wen i started reading i fell in lov wit it bt my browser went off. And since today i hav been searchin the forum to d xtent dat i PM d mod to help me.luckily enuf i was able to get foxy and followed her down here. And now dat am here...i go dey follow follow(anyi ga afu isi ya)

Thank you sir

'Now there are some important things you need to know before you face Zygus,' said Fabianus. 'Normally, a dragon is vulnerable in only three parts of its body. The heart, the eye and the area under the wings where there are no scales.'

Hector and I listened on with rapt attention. Fabianus continued;

'Zygus, however, is no ordinary dragon. It is a very powerful one. Its heart cannot be pierced with any weapon. Its scales will break any weapon that come against them instantly.'

'How do we kill it then?' Hector asked.

'Well, you, Hector, will first engage it in a mock battle. Make sure you don't stand in front of it too long because of its fiery breath. Just disturb it a little and retreat. Athanasius will use the opportunity of the distraction to pierce its eyes with the the black sword of the gods,' He explained to us. 'Comprende?'

'Yes. It even sounds easier to what I have been thinking,' Hector replied.

'What about you, Athanasius?' Fabianus asked.

'It's fine by me,' I replied. I was being economical with the truth, of course. I didn't sound easy to me at all.

'Good then. May the gods grant you victory over Zygus,' Fabianus prayed. 'You need to rest well because of the task you have ahead. Please go to bed, sirs.'

I did not need a second urging, I just stalked out of the room. I was about getting on a vacant bed when someone pulled me back.

... Who did I offend o? This is the second time I'll be prevented from getting on bed dis night alone...

'Who is that?' I whispered into the darkness behind me. I really couldn't see the person, all the torches that were lit before I left the room had been extinguished.

'Hector,' came the reply. 'Just wanted to ask how you really about what Priest said.'

'Honestly, I don't know,' I confessed. 'What about you?'

'Well, I have this feeling that we are going to come of this with our socks on,' Hector said with conviction.

'I pray you are right,' I muttered.

... Let this cup pass over me, O Lord. I promise, I'll never miss any church service again if you let me wake up from this season dream before we meet that dragon...

EPISODE 16

'Okay. Let's stop here,' Fabianus ordered, with his voice sounding unusually loud. Maybe it was because it was dark already and everything was silent, save the sound made by the hooves of our horses as we rode.

'Why? Are we at the Zygus' place already?' asked Bryan.

'Not yet, although we are close,' Fabianus replied. 'The problem is that riding further now is not safe for us.'

'What do you mean?' Hector asked, echoing the same question I was about asking.

'This particular dragon is nocturnal. It rests in the day and hunts at night. Going to face it now is good is as suicide. Let us wait till morning before we strike,' Fabianus advised.

'Where shall we stay till morn then?' A pale faced soldier, who was one of Hector's men, asked.

'All of you, come with me,' Fabianus ordered.

We followed him through a rough, weedy path to a place where a big wall stood.

Fabianus muttered some words, magical words no doubt, and the wall flung open like a door to reveal a very large room with many bedding and furniture.

'Make yourselves comfortable,' he said with a broad grin on his face.

I was just about jumping on one of the numerous beds when I heard my name called.

'Athanasius and Hector, I'll like to see both of you over here,' Fabianus called.

I walked slowly to where he stood with Hector already by his side.

'What?' I asked, irritated at having my rest delayed.

'Let's go to that room,' he said, pointing to the adjoining room. 'We need to talk privately.'

'How come nobody is occupying this beautiful house?' I asked, when we walked into an empty but nicely decorated room.

'My thoughts exactly,' Hector chipped in.

Fabianus burst into heavy laughter. He laughed so hard that tears started flow from his eyes. Hector and I exchanged glances of surprise.

'What's funny?' Hector asked.

'So you guys think we are in a real house hen?' He asked, while trying to suppress his laugh.

'Of course we do. Are we not?' I asked.

'We are not. We are inside the wall you saw not long ago,' Fabianus told us.

'Inside the wall?' I asked, not believing my ears.

'Yes,' Fabianus concurred. 'All these nice things you see all around were conjured by magic.'

'This guy na something else o,' I muttered to myself, as I shook my head in awe.

'What is it you wanted to tell us?' Hector asked.

'Yes, yes. You see, the outcome of our battles with Zygus, Gustavus and Justus depends largely on both of you,' Fabianus started.

I scratched my head lightly as I tried to figure out who Gustavus was. I remember Zygus, the dragon and Justus, our chief enemy but I couldn't remember Gustavus.

'Olodo, Gustavus is the giant jor,' a Fabianus-like voice whispered in my ears. Oddly, Fabianus wasn't close enough to whisper in my ears.

'The gods have told me that the two of you have been chosen enter the red cave where the dragon dwells, so either of you will kill the dragon.'

'Only Hector and I? Why?' I asked, almost crying. 'What about the others?'

'We mustn't enter the cave with you two. We will stand guarding the entrance to the cave,' Fabianus informed us.

... Me and Hector go face death alone. Which kind unfair gods be dis sef?...

Tovot: i will tell fishoy

Sshhh. Don't tell her o...

I'm terribly sorry that I couldn't update yesterday as promised. My battery went flat, that's why. I'll update later today sha. Thanks

Ok, I'll drop the update in the afternoon, thanks ....

Now this is beautiful.... a beautiful piece from a brilliant writer.... God bless you for sharing this wonderful piece with us... More bullets to your rifle... *gives him a crisp military salute*

sweetsmalsis: Wow!
Interesting!
Funny!
Lovely piece!
Am really really enjoying your story...
God bless you

Amen. Thanks ma

iebanehita: Loool..
Choi!!!
Iebanehitus!!!!!!!!
I don turn character for VanTee20 City of Casville torri.

Ok na!. But who be me for d torri sef? ?
I nor wan be lanky dude o!...#hehehehe!!

In that part where they asked about Casville, you wrote

'No' answered Fabianus

I think it should be Hector, in place of Fabianus. Jt check it.

This update na midway between long and short o!..

hahahahahahaha... See guy o, you were too busy critisizing, you didn't even notice your name.... I introduced it in Episode 14 na....

Yes, it should be Hector. I'll go check it, thanks .

BeautyFULL85: @Vantee: Ur last post is quite different from all d others. The citizens of Camville only speak the "Shakespearean English", but in dis update, de all spoke "Standard English"... Just an observation dear!

You are correct. I decided to limit the Shakespearean English to the citizens of Casville with cameo appearances like Elvira, The King, the Queen, the bandits and others.

I believe using the shakespearen english for major characters is bound to affect the story because it might make the most of the conversations incomprehensible to some readers. Thanks ma'am

[quote author=Larry-Sun]Say That Again. *Sharpening Cutlass*[/quote] . Now you know how it feels.....

At last! Here comes the Tovot I've been waiting for .....