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Re: Rhymes by Nize(f): 8:33am On Aug 02, 2008
@ PRINCESA

When I read your post
I knew you missed your folks

So I though I should help
Though there’s not much to tell

I’m not a pro
It’s obvious it shows

But I’ll have to try
Rather than see you cry

your Friends would be back
So please don’t snap

Just give me little’ more time
To get this place back to its usual vibe

I can’t believe I’m on my 13th line,
‘Cuz I never tot I could rhyme.

Well, I guess with determination
I could erase my misconceptions
Re: Rhymes by princesa(f): 9:35am On Aug 02, 2008
good one again girl cheesy
too bad all the ryhme fire
are out of me embarassed
Re: Rhymes by Nize(f): 1:10am On Aug 04, 2008
@ Princesa


I’m not happy that you have lost your fire
Surely, this would mean that you want to retire

Because this thread was one you once treasured
Trying to restore it has placed me under pressure

What can I do to make you not feel blue?
Should I wait and just keep staying true?

Allowing this thread to stay dead
Is the very one thing that I dread

‘Cuz of all the threads I looked
This was the one that got me moved

So many people here with talents
None could make a quiet man silent

Now you see I feel your pain
‘Cuz I wouldn’t let it just go down the drain

So my dear, don’t you worry
I’ll try as much as I can to hurry

No matter what, I would still persist
‘Cuz I’m not one to accept defeat

Even if it seems like regaining its life isn’t feasible
I’ll make sure I try my very best to make it possible.
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 3:34pm On Aug 16, 2008
stumbled upon this thread today
wow, really really cool

@Colours, thumps up cheesy
your words and rhymes are colourful indeed
like someone said you're "Female lord of rhymes" *duffs Cap"

@Princesa, @Nize, @Stillwater
you ladies sure, are good, keep it real

from the start
looks like you gals dominate the thread

but, the Guys 've given u a comeback
they couldn't just sit and watch you gals take all home

@BTT, @Acan, @COOL JOE, @meexteriox, @Lekana
You guys are surely the bomb, keep it up

Hope i'll be up 2 it like you guys.

Alright let me drop a line As my Intro in2 da thread

My Missio' n Questio'
'because of Depressio'
But Like a Chameleo',
I ain't n Confusio'
I change my Motio' n Visio' 4 progressio'
Like a Clario'
I cause Commotio'
Y?
'because a Champio's n Productio'



cheesy cheesy cheesy cheesy cheesy cheesy cheesy   Hope am welcomed.
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 9:51pm On Aug 16, 2008
Boomerang

Da shits I've done,
Tryin' 2 have ma Fun,
Now I'm on the Run,
coz behind me points a Gun,
cnt believe ma Time has Come
Tistill Up there, The Sun
& while it still shines, I'll never be Done.
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 9:57pm On Aug 16, 2008
I'm Lovin' this thread more and more

I love 2 Grin wink
When I wear Green cool
I've been & I've seen
Wts behind the Screen. grin

I rub in the Cream
and she just screams
"Do u want me Screamin' or Creamin'
I only wanted 2 b Pleasin'
but tis no time 4 dreamin'.

I made right,
and she felt right,
Alright,
I think I've got me a Night.
A Right, Bright, Night. grin
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 10:21pm On Aug 16, 2008
colors link=topic=101292.192.msg1988356#msg1988356 date=1218920273:

OPEN INVITATION

i can be your fantasy
take you to higher heights of ecstasy
don't doubt me this ain't a fallacy
just a deeper level of intimacy

i want you to
let go of all your inhibition


@colors

Bring it onBoo
I just want itCool
Lets do it by dpool
Trust me, I'm nofool
Pust it baby & let mepull
Lets do it, till wiafull
Let me brin' some Booze
Will make us all free & Loose
Whicheva style, I'll let you Choose
We've nothin'2 Lose
'cept Our cloths wink
U just want me & I want U 2 grin
Re: Rhymes by Nize(f): 4:20am On Aug 17, 2008
nice intro
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 10:55am On Aug 17, 2008
Nize:

nice intro
thank you
*cbase gives a bow* 2 Nize
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 2:48pm On Aug 17, 2008
Ode To @Rhymers Posters

@Nize
Like your name, You really are Nice,
Welcoming me into the thread without a Price
You deserve a Plate of Rice
A bottle of Gulder to wash it down, 2 will be Nice.

@Meex
You very well , your words can Mix,
Your posts, like a Poets, so full of Lyrics,
I'll give all, So none of them I'll miss,
Sure, your one of the Top Six.

@Colors
Your words are so full of Colors
Hidden Meanings, and yet so full of Flavor
Do me a favor,
Can I with humor, Savor.

@Princesa
I like your name Princesa
But I'll call you My Cesa
Maybe I'll even change my name 2 Cbasa
So we'll share the "C" in our names 2geda.

You sound fragile, Cesa
@Colors got your back doe, here she's an emperor, like Czar
Thanks to Rhyme Thread, bringing us 2geda
Now we'll all can sing "Pasa-Pasa"

@Acan
You really can rhyme in Pidgin, Can
Your Posts are so Tight, Man
Your name reminds me of my Quote on "Can"
I'll give it to you "When The Can, cannot, The Cannot, can Can. grin

@Lekana
I once had a girlfriend named Serena
Got nothing to do with this thread, 'cept Serena rhymes with Lekana,
'bout your posts , mmh O.k Na,
You're one of the very best, Shikina!. grin

@Still_waters
In Rhymes, compared to you am but a Starter
In My church, Flowers our needs Carter,
Though with the Bible, I'm still a Fresher
But I've got a favorite Quote- Ps 23 vs 2,  He leads me beside Still waters


To all Rhymes Thread Members
@ Rhymes Section
We all've got something in Common
The Voice in Us, calling out to the art in Us "come on"
We've got the brightest thread, lets trod on.
To everyone, at his or her posts, I give a Thumbs up,
The more we keep at it, the better we get on, Up
Lets keep the Thread alive,
A post a day, sure will keep it bubbling with life.

I wish everyone a Happy Sunday
To Rhymes Thread, HIP HIP HIP  HOOORAAYY
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 8:53am On Aug 19, 2008
where's everybody at?
come on, people don't leave this thread like that.
Re: Rhymes by clemcykul(f): 2:52pm On Aug 19, 2008
stumbling into the rhymes thread
threading with dread,
dreading to compose a
rhyme dat wunt rhyme,
with the rhymes of professional
rhymers, wishing my dread 2 die,
as i post my rhyme hoping,
i havent rhymed wrongly in the
rhymes thread.
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 7:37pm On Aug 19, 2008
Clems

Welcome in2 the thread,
Trust me, there's nothing to dread.

ha ha though, woulda felt beta if you've come with a bread
but tis cool, we're all together bred,
In rhymes. grin
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 8:07pm On Aug 19, 2008
As They flow through Ma heart.

I came in,
but no one was in,

Postin' ma rhymes with a smile,
I stayed on 4 a while,
hoping someone would drop in from across the cyber miles,
and comment on these rhymes of mine, which I so much like.

I gave my Intro, as I've just come,
Nize breezed in and gave me a note of welcome.

I read Posts of exams come and gone
and rhymes 'bout ghettos, their knives and gun.

Saw posts of questions, lamentations and cries,
countered equally with posts of answers, solutions and advice.

Marveled at such skills and talent,
I prayed you guys never relent.

For sometime I've been the only one posting,
seems like everyone's gone coasting,

i wonder if you've forgotten,
'bout this thread, so cosy as cotton.

Perhaps, life's not been rosy,
but Hey! whoever these days sits cosy? sad

Since I came, I've seen only 2 posts, from Clem n Nize,
surely seeing everyone post, would be Nice. cheesy

A post a day keeps me young and bright,
makes me think deep, easy, my Nights,
and my decisions, right.

Bible said "Tis not by Power or Might"
But I'll keep up the fight,
for my future is in sight,
and time, like a loop draws tight.

My Cesa, dear one, get me my hat,
for I'm old, ha ha,  grin but I'm young at heart.

Now, I've talked for long,
I'll stop now, before i sound strung,
, Guess I'm not as strong as I used to be
and not so good as I was, when I was me
grin


I'll drop in again, when I browse by
for now, tis Bye.

"bye" what a word!
Ain't it a Funny world?
Saying "HI"
and saying "Bye"
sad
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 7:53pm On Aug 21, 2008
@CBASE

u caught me unaware
on lovely text messages as it were
and swift my intension's back to rhymes zone
that i have bluff off for a while, a good ozone

i admire your rhymes
it reminds me, when i once said with rhymes there ain't crimes
its good to know that someone is trying to rekindled the heat
like taking hip hop back to the street
as was once embedded in our heart

keep up for real Cbase
@clemcykul you should be doing the same
you can be the best even in this game
though some might think you are insane
likewise rhymes can't be framed
its either you have it in you or you don't
and i know u do. so to relent , say i wouldn't

you will see more of me as before
maybe i might do bit of hardcore
to spice my rhymes savor
to feed our masses as once did our Saviour
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 2:39pm On Aug 24, 2008
@Acan

Tnks for comin back all of a sudden,
To rhyme alone is a burden,
the skillz we've Gotten,
If unexercised Rottens.

tnk u fr coming back, bro
expectin more frm u, as we post to n fro.
Re: Rhymes by BTT(m): 6:48pm On Sep 05, 2008
CBASE

I love your craze
It has brought me back to the race!

When u sent that sms to my Siemens
It healed the dents
Of my lenghty absense
So when I gave that response
I knew I had to report hence

I've seen your lines
They are some of the very kinds
That make rhyming worth our minds

My friend,
I wont pretend,
I'm struggling to fend
For what justifies the means.

Till then
It's the end. . .






. . .Of the beginning
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 11:45am On Sep 11, 2008
Chai! munwa Cbase
na me u talk say i dey Craze
but if say i Daze
i no go fit Bring u back to dis wonderful Race

u have a very good dentition
i bet it gets u a whole lotta recognition
no wonder u just dey shine am so often and on.

oh before i forget,
ah, dis old age sef, if say dem dey rent am, I for since don put "To Let"

Ur Name BTT,
Reminds me so much of Fashola's BRT

So na Siemens u dey use
I just dey wonder which kind e go be
but i trust u, u know how to cruize
very well to the groove.


My Friend
u talk say u no go pretend
oya tell me wetin be dat wey u dey fend
let me see if there's a way i go try mend.
dem talk say a friend in need
true true be a friend in deed
so tell me, don't kid.

My guy, hold on, carry hope
E no go tey, we go reach the end of the rope

Na so e be for dat boy from Bayelsa
wey dem dey call Timaya
now e don dey hot like Faya
dey sing Dem Mama ee, MMAYA

Na true u talk, no be d end
Me Just dey, till Then___
I still dey,
When The Can, Cannot, The Cannot can Can
Re: Rhymes by littlecaf(m): 12:34pm On Sep 12, 2008
i like your line, because it somehow tight,
but am lossing it right now so, you don't
be a f**king proud and second don't give a damn
fran, i did it becuz i can and you know, i don't give f**king
dan!, damn!
Re: Rhymes by ofala(m): 4:53am On Sep 13, 2008
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Life is funny
though not always as sweet as honey

labor begats honor
and poverty is horror

readers are leaders
as lenders are riders

life will be vain when love is lacking
and for all these we must never go slacking
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 7:37pm On Sep 14, 2008
ALLWAYS GIVE THANKS TO GOD

guys we need to they thank God
cause no one fit give us peace of mind like baba God
though sometime life fit they rough
as naija government they make things they tough
but deep within ourselves we still need to hold on
ofala with the lord, you no need any other inspiration

we all be leaders one way or the other
but na from within not from another
we go make the decision to drive on
on this life untied road and on sharp turn

wetin we write on this forum
na things wey no they common
somewhere somehow we they contribute to someone's life
also to the society, even if na half
search youself, u go dey suprise with within you done achieve in life

my advise to us all na make we they always they optimistic
cause if we no give up. we go eventually succeed
like inside bible,  Jesus talked about the parable of the seeds
some fall for rocks, like our dreams they seems hard to follow
but no how, we must see tomorrow
sooner or later we go forget our sorrow
and rejoice in God as he continue to help us grow
Re: Rhymes by ofala(m): 1:29pm On Sep 15, 2008
We all know that Nija will be great again
But sooner had our politicos struck again
Is it so rainy?
We wont leave them so shiny

Their sins in their faces must sprut!
For they all are spoilt
We nedd to embrace God
But dont forgot we need real guts
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 11:49am On Sep 18, 2008
ofala:

readers are leaders
as lenders are riders

Ofala Did I hear u say readers?
Then I Guess that makes me a Leader.
Right? both or neither?
I don't want the crown myself either.

If he, who can read
can as well, lead
then I plead
as if I Bleed
Let it not be Thrust on me.

for tis a great responsibility
to be held in dignity
have people trusting in my ability
believing in my Honesty
and in my Longevity, Loyalty and Royalty.

Uneasy lies the head that wears the crown
I am but a child, all around black and brown
to my mother smile when happy, and when unhappy frown
taught by my father, The King to either swim or drown.

To the Rhythm I've been taught to flow
Now, I think you know
what's underneath me, below.
I'll rather read than lead or follow,
and farther from me this responsibility Throw
but I can't run away or from it blow,
I guess i drew the Crow,
Am an Only Heir To a Throne.
Re: Rhymes by candide(f): 4:34am On Sep 19, 2008
nice Cbase!

With that rhythm you’ve been taught to flow
I got caught up in the undertow
you spit rhymes faster than chicks spend dough
Words shot sharp and straight as an arrow

Lets not leave you all alone
Reluctantly ruling from your rhythm throne
Someone stage a coup, sneak up and steal the crown!
The poor king would rather read than lead the town grin
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 12:13am On Sep 20, 2008
To Candide

Dear One Candide,
your words to me were truly candid.

I spit Rhymes faster than chics Spend dough
So you said, Candide, I've got dough too, though,
I don't know whether to look on it as my friend or foe.
True it has kept me far from farmlands, cutlass and hoe
took me to school, to books, pencil and Biro.

Still it isn't everything
I've got it, but my memory, my worries have kept thin
I pray my father, when he gets to know, forgives me of this Sin
because i don't want to rule or lead a thing.


About that Coup, Candide tell me more,
though I know it won't work, because am a royal blood to the core
Coup in my town is a word only heard in folklore
you know stuffs like that, stories 'bout The Tortoise and the wisdom it bore.


It still sits there, The Throne
In its Majesty, engulfing, I know to it am prone
Since I can't get ma Heir-ship Blown
all I ask, you guys never leave me alone,
indulge me even if it means everyday having a party thrown.

who knows, maybe I'm just scared and would make a great king when I'm all grown
and have ma Dad all his kingly and great secrets shown,
But till then, with ma Rhymes, Candide, to the rhythm I've flown,
to that secret alcove within where art is polished bright and as in the days of Shakespeare shone.
Re: Rhymes by Nobody: 3:17am On Sep 21, 2008
@Still_waters
In Rhymes, compared to you am but a Starter
In My church, Flowers our needs Carter,
Though with the Bible, I'm still a Fresher
But I've got a favorite Quote- Ps 23 vs 2, He leads me beside Still waters

Aww, you just put a smile on my face wink kiss
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 2:06pm On Sep 22, 2008
stillwater:

Aww, you just put a smile on my face wink kiss

thanks, dats the idea wink
Re: Rhymes by BTT(m): 9:36am On Sep 23, 2008
@Cbase

I see you still spit fire
It wont make even the weak retire,
Keep it up
It's the way to the top!

cbase:

Chai! munwa Cbase
na me u talk say i dey Craze
but if say i Daze
i no go fit Bring u back to this wonderful Race


Never meant you were crazy
Just saying I was lazy
But your passion
Has found my passion,

cbase:

Ur Name BTT,
Reminds me so much of Fashola's BRT
undecided Clown!
Don't draw my frown!

cbase:


My Friend
u talk say u no go pretend
oya tell me wetin be that wey u dey fend
let me see if there's a way i go try mend.
them talk say a friend in need
true true be a friend in deed
so tell me, don't kid.

Who tell u say i be your paddy
Make una see me see kasalla
By simply sayin "howdy"
Cbase don put me for wahala.
Anyway, thanx for d care
but tru if i tell u u go fear
Say wetin I dey fend
No dey gree bend
Go the direction wey people mind tend

Meanwhile that my Siemens
I don loss am for CMS
Pls call or flash my 07025025070
Bcs my phonebook don dey empty

cbase:

My guy, hold on, carry hope
E no go tey, we go reach the end of the rope

Your future bright
As prophet of light grin

cbase:

When The Can, Cannot, The Cannot can Can

Little epiteth
E nearly commot my teeth!

Take care. . .
No fear. . .
Till then, I dey here. . .
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 8:17pm On Sep 24, 2008
BTT:

@Cbase

I see you still spit fire

Hey B, yeah I still spit fire, na God.
tis a thing i like doing when am and not bored. grin
Re: Rhymes by cbase: 8:29pm On Sep 24, 2008
Moving on, up and about,
From east to west, north to south,
Through Lagos, with each street a tout
To Abuja, with politicians, money and their mouth
Ladies at each junction and roundabout
Rolling their eyes and seductively their lips pout
I’ve come to love 9ja more, about it there’s no doubt.

It is a love so pure,
It is a love so sure,
Ailments and loneliness, cure,
Time and distance, endure

Therefore I’ve taken the time to insure
Against hurt, pains and torture
In that sacred rule “not to injure”
Or pervasively and wickedly lure”




The labors of my palms,
The toils under the sun in the farm,
I’ll sit to enjoy under the fan,
My plantains, fry in the pan,
The yams full and plenty in the barn

Yes! I’ll toil like a man, cool
Hustle like a man,
And I’ll enjoy like a man,
Sipping my beer, like a big boy, from a can,
My ladies, take out in my van,
To a sunny picnic, so they’ll their skin tan.

I will have nothing my plans foil, angry
I’ve done ma part and share of the toil,
Haven’t I tilled the soil?
So, hmm, grin finger licking, my chicken I’ll broil
Ha Ha Ha grin the rice will boil,
Is it not time? I’ll the nuts and joints of my life oil,
I can fill it, watch and see a big boy uncoil,
Ha ha ha, cheesy am I not a son of the soil?
Re: Rhymes by vanni(f): 6:15am On Sep 25, 2008
good for you
food for thought,
shikenah
Re: Rhymes by candide(f): 6:26am On Sep 25, 2008
Alright, Cbase[/b], the coup has been postponed
With that rhyme you spun, you secured your throne!
Representing sons of the soil and bards toiling hard
Your tales of feasts promise just reward

Born from a supernova, I’m a daughter of the sky
singing intergalactic lullabies
I rode to earth on a shockwave cascade
Shooting through the milky way
like a stellar grenade
My astral body exploded on impact
leaving my earthly one intact
Though its been days
since I played
on this thread I am back! grin

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