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Re: Rhymes by angelempy(f): 9:39am On Feb 23, 2008
@colors
hey, colors
u've beibg as always so hot
like a steaming chiken in a pot

though u've being quiet of late
cant help but thinj of ur fate
are u ok with ur state

or are things still so stale
please dont get pale
so u can tell us all ur tale

@princessa

u seem so relaxed abt ur flows
i so miss ur blows
which always gets me in the throws

how's ya book
hope u improved on its look

pls do well to write
so u wouldnt miss the excitement

@lekana
u're really so good
its not abt the hood

but ur flows are always so bold
reminds me of the words of the old
which always manages to get told
to the brethen of the fold

but keep the flows coming
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 9:56am On Feb 23, 2008
SINCE YOU'VE BEEN GONE

since you've been gone my heart stopped beating
can't think, can't sleep, have even stopped eating
tell me please why is love so fleeting
i can still recall our very first meeting

the worst part is that i caught you cheating
my best friend, in an embrace but you said it was mere greeting
that i forgave but no you kept on repeating
so i had to leave, for your love i cannot be competing

its too late to apologise, i can no longer be committing
you are now a part of me i definitely will be deleting
to a doctor i must go, i need some assisting
since you've been gone my heart has stopped beating


angel-empy thanks, where have you been

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Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 12:49pm On Feb 23, 2008
Got transferred to Asaba
Thank God it was not Aba
Now ready to unleash
Will not stop till i'm finished

This is dedicated to ryhmers in the house
Remember this is not meant to douse
LEKANA, ANGEL EMPY,BTT, COOL JOE, ACAN, CHIOGO, OPI ORORO, COLORS
THIS IS ALL YOURS

@colors
Is it something I did
Or is it written in the creed;

That you don’t talk to strangers
Even the lone rangers?;

Please, don’t get it wrong
Don’t make me feel like a dung;

Just trying to be a friend
Without being a fiend;

Hope you’ll have a nice day
Without getting into any fray.


THIS THREAD

This thread, my very best
Is such a beautiful nest
Filled with overzealous pest
Scrambling for the best
In their rhyming quest
Please, no need for a heist
For this particular test
Just have some fest
Cause the winner’s crest
Will stay on the shirt breast
So after the conquest
Please, no jest
Or you forego your imprest
Which will be a big test
To know if you’ll rest.
So for all in the west
Where is your zest?
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 12:54pm On Feb 23, 2008
ONE NIGHT STAND

Give me some room
Or you rather I boom?
You are getting on my nerve
And killing my verve;
Okay, let’s talk
So you won’t stalk-
me on my way home
if I decide to roam.
Without much ado
What did I do?
To warrant such abuse
From you, whom I never ruse;
I need to know
So I can flow;
Please say something
Or is it that fling?
With your friend called rose
We were not even close;
Just a one night stand
In a motel called Lhand.
Could you forgive me?
I’m on my bended knee;
This would not happen again
I know I caused so much pain;
You’re the one, I still love
Please don’t turn the curve;
Oh! Rose, What’ve you done
Because of a silly fun;
Wish I could reverse this day
When I went astray;
Without much of a gain
Now I’m loosing my gal Jane;
For a flimsy reason
I think I deserve a prison.
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 12:56pm On Feb 23, 2008
DO YOU ?

You really like you job?
Or you rather work in the pub?
Where you can watch your club,
When they loose, have a sob.

Do you really like your boss?
Who does nothing but to curse
At times shout himself hoarse
Over issues as small as a match box.

Do you really like your house?
Filled with nothing but little mouse.
You try all your best just to douse
And end up like a louse.

Do you really like your car?
Which can’t go too far;
Sometimes compared to a rolling jar
When put to test on road filled with tar.

Do you really like your best friend?
Who acts sometimes like a fiend;
The relationship you want to end
But just have to blend.
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 1:00pm On Feb 23, 2008
POLITICIAN
Is that really your stance?
In this avenue of chance?
Is that really your poise?
In the mode of a tortoise?
No, I don’t mean it as an insult
Since that is your result
After so much hope,
You decide to elope
With the national cake
Which you didn’t bake
Tis really a pity
You are turning into a nonentity.
Ofcourse, you rigged the election;
Though we know is your true reflection
Despite all the pleas
You turnout as rotten peas.
Another four years is by the corner,
Believe me all this will come to the burner
Then you will be shown the exit way
Don’t bother to come back, by the way.
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 1:03pm On Feb 23, 2008
NAIRALAND

Gone through several website
With intention of getting better respite
I tell you, none like nairaland
It has its own special brand
Lined with captivating forum
Filled to the last column
Thanks to Seun Osewa
You are hot like a lava
I say, more grease to your elbow
Or is this just a demo?
I know there is more up your sleeve
We are all ready to receive.
Remember, khaki no be leather
But I know you can weather
Nairaland till I kpai
I tell you I no dey lie.
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 1:05pm On Feb 23, 2008
MEETERIOX

PART ONE

My name is meexteriox
Sometimes a bit ludicrous
All I want is to survive
Without carrying any AK-45
What I seek is paradise
Which I think would be nice
Could you do me a favour?
Beyond the human nature
Can I trust you?
With the residue
Of things left on undone
Pricking my tomorrow yet unborn
Who can save my soul
Without giving a howl
I feel so much emptiness
Taking all my liveliness
Where do I start from
Please, give me a rum
To allow me tell my story
I will take it slowy
Once upon a time………….
In the year 1999-

Watch out for part two
So you can take a cue.
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 1:07pm On Feb 23, 2008
[quote][/quote]

hi meex i thought i replied
to the questions you supplied

sorry, don't feel sad
i take all the blame, its my bad

ok now i'm listening, talk to me grin grin grin
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 1:10pm On Feb 23, 2008
PART TWO

During the valentine season
Love was the reason
In the city of Calabar
Drinking with friends in a bar
Friends?  I was with the love of my life
And a best friend who was with his wife
We were sharing jokes about love and good times
On our table was a book written by Howard Grimes
I was sipping  from a bottle of baileys
Made from the best of barleys
Suddenly, I heard shouting outside the bar
Sounds of a broken windshield of a car
Followed immediately  by a gunshot
Then I knew this was more than hot
Now, I became scared
Wondering if we would be seared
In our bid to escape from the commotion
I heard a cry that stopped me in my motion
                                            Body falling
                       Voice calling
My gal has been hit
A stray bullet did it
Is this possible, my best friend followed suit,
My friends are the culprit
Confusion was sporadic
I became barbaric
Hmmmm……, by last count
Seven human has turned discount
Because of disharmony among cultist
Arguing on issues beyond any purist
I lost my luv and best friend for no just cause
Recovery from that incident eludes my just course
The boys were never found, imagine…………
The matter was left hanging
I lost my luv and best friend to stray bullet
For me,it’s still hard to go down my gullet
A black valentine
In the year 1999…………………………,
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 1:14pm On Feb 23, 2008
@colors
Didn't mean to take over the thread
just wanted to download before i bled
from issues, i can't control
before it starts to roll


can we go online
maybe things can go in line?
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 2:06pm On Feb 23, 2008
LET US PRAY

i thank you lord for thy talent
by thy will i shall not relent
at times i write for self fish interest
but always i acknowledge Christ
as my personal lord and saviour
he stood by me as one of his valour
gave me hope when i taught all was lost
i will be damed if i don't  know worth it cost

please teach me how to pass thy messages on
to everyone even the unborn
make me a tool that can't be neglect
someone every one will reflect

am forever grateful, this is why i pray
i mean it lord cause i don't want to go astray
bless every rhymers and bless there write ups
bless there hands, multiply there works like crops
bless all guest as they come for shops

there is so much i can't thank you for
i appreciate your love always as done before
i love you all,  i mean down to the core
i wouldn't be relief if i don't do what am supposed too
spread thy words and love others too
you lifted me back to my feet when i fall
any time in need i have your name to call
like a seed you planted me on a fertile land
so my aim will gain more ground
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 2:58pm On Feb 23, 2008
@meexteriox

so sad to hear about your ordeal
it's an heck of a sad deal
worst when none of the culprit are reveal
and you see this guys they feel
people threatened with much zeal
more deaths like its meant to be seal
i keep wondering when this harms will be heal
with no more threats or any more killing
a situation whereby everyone will be chilling
walking around campus minds relaxing
no fears or awkwardness and no enviousness
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 3:08pm On Feb 23, 2008
@angel_empy

thanks angel, am only trying

@meex
you're the don, am looking up to you

@acan
well done, am feeling you

@colors
Female lord of rhymes
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 3:09pm On Feb 23, 2008
Only God can take you out of depression
To your destination
For better promotion
Which will be beyond your imagination.
Then, I can now say congratulations
Because you have become a solution
To your generation.
Re: Rhymes by aslan333: 3:39pm On Feb 23, 2008
untitled

pot-bellied, bowlegged; what am i to do?
even on my wedding day i might have to climb a stool
we need films like shrek, guys like me, it helps us get through
and gives us hope we'd find a girl who just might say "i do"

i met a girl in a chat room who said beauty lies within
to call Gods creation ugly she said was a sin
but when she saw me face to face she said "something is amiss"
it'll take more than kissing i heard her say, to make this frog a prince

so here i am asking cos i dont have a clue
even the plain girls when i say hi look like i said boo
they say it'd be a crime against humanity for me to bear fruit
but am in search of love, or at least a hug, oh what am i to do?


pls suggest a good title for this poem grin
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 3:51pm On Feb 23, 2008
aslan333

love dosen'[quote][/quote]t make one a fool
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 3:52pm On Feb 23, 2008
aslan333

love dosen't make one a fool
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 4:39pm On Feb 23, 2008
though love sometime hurt
and at times we fought
sometimes settled in court
even when the person is not yet caught
but always i put you forst

don't expect one all time to be right
or always put up a fight
cause love always believe in right
i don't mean tit for tat
disregard any differences, infact
make sure you don't forget that
Re: Rhymes by cooljoe(m): 4:42pm On Feb 23, 2008
A TRIBUTE TO MY AUNT
               
                 I lost my aunt last december,
                 I cried for as long as I can remember,
                 I was consoled my many,
                 I cursed and cursed till I got weary,
                 I saw her the previous week at my cousin's wedding,
                 The following week, I saw her in a coffin.
                 She did things calmly,
                 she was always lively,
                 dull moments with her were rare,
                 she always showed love and care,
                 death's so cruel,
                 though it seem's to win every duel,
                 it's a pity one day, we'll have to go,
                 but before I go, I've got things to do,
                 I've to say AUDIVIERSE to my beloved AUNT.
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 4:46pm On Feb 23, 2008
OPEN INVITATION

this is an invitation to explore my world
mental liberation thats what it's called

you will be surprised at what you will find
trust me, i'm nothing of the usual kind

i can be your fantasy
take you to higher heights of ecstasy
don't doubt me this ain't a fallacy
just a deeper level of intimacy

i want to
invade your senses
lower your defenses

inspire in you an insatiable desire
make you hot like burning fire

infiltrate your mind
let me help you unwind

i'm not trying to be a tease
this is free, there are no fees

i want you to
let go of all your inhibition
this ain't a movie on the television

i can introduce you to new things
nothing like your usual flings

this exploration is not sexual
more of deeply intellectual

take a walk with me
i can make you what you want to be
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 3:41pm On Feb 24, 2008
i glimpse at the night from my window
the whole place pale wind moving slow
as the night blows away
like our pains, sorrows they wouldnt come to stay
everyman calm, sleeping with problems wetin
minds feebles, relax and celestine
man journeys where he doesnt know it destine
conscious that the next day fast approaches
the weak holding on to there crouches
valants ready to mount there shields again
for battles left the previous day in strain
like chaff memories pervades afar
struggling in a country you see people suffer
so someday one alas will reside
merry and relax all stress aside
restless untill each cups is filled
and all wickedness killed
how i wish the night will come to stay
and our sorrow blown away
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 4:31pm On Feb 24, 2008
@ color RE-OPEN INVITATION

you must be a women really so prestige
to invade a man with so much love
such love as pure as dove
damn if that man wouldn't get lust
he will be crazy no matter the cost

just hope it doesn't drive him insane
cause if it does, it will be in vain
how can he then be loved when there is no rain

i have decided to take the strain
to fall in love again
with you if you will sustain
to have me a pauper with no restrain
i tell you i will be prouder than a prince and king
and happier all day long within and hide nothing
from you my queen as you make me your king
Re: Rhymes by olulu(m): 10:33am On Feb 25, 2008
wow, i love what i read and i want it all.
i neva explored this part of nairaland b4, am happy i found it.
its good to meet people of like minds .

here is my rhymes, just a bit of it though,


i have got what it takes,
to give u sweet cakes,
take a dip in my lake,
and u'll discover am not fake.
Re: Rhymes by olulu(m): 11:35am On Feb 25, 2008
shocked shocked shocked
Re: Rhymes by aslan333: 2:39pm On Feb 25, 2008
acan it was meant to be satirical  wink
Re: Rhymes by aslan333: 2:52pm On Feb 25, 2008
falling again

just when you think its the end, it happens again
you fall in love with someone
forgetting your heart needs to mend, your knees start to bend
in awe of this new love

you dont know her name, all the same, you dance in the rain
when you think of her smile
and sway to a tune no one hears, of that someone so dear
who has made you feel so high

but the best of times are when your so close and you can cherish your rose
admiring her beauty
and for that moment in time, to all else your blind
except for this unique human being
Re: Rhymes by Chigotex(f): 4:53pm On Feb 25, 2008
This rhyme of a thing
is a thing of keen

I like princesa post
But I love colours' most

Princesa predicaments
attracts colours comments

@ poster, this is a challenge
for those who love challenge

I'm a literature lover
But sometime I allow my thinking to suffer

I want to improve
But I want groove

Literature is an art of life
and it takes only those that can strife
Those who kept the fight
Are the once to thrive

Dear forum members
I hope I ve added to the numbers

@ colours, u er a gem in this field
I believe i can get the same shield
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 5:20pm On Feb 25, 2008
aslan333 well, what can i say
i was only expressing my self on a good day
not like i need a pay
but i get your point though
useful like my pocket full of doe
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 5:38pm On Feb 25, 2008
[center]@ Lekana
Me your H.O.D?
Am I better than thee?
You’ve picked up pretty quick
Continue, I bet you won’t squeak.

Me the Don?
Please, not in an eon
Believe, the sky is your stepping stone
Note - any mistake, remember your bone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![/center]
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 5:42pm On Feb 25, 2008
[center]@Chiogo
Welcome to the rhyming thread
Tis just like tea and bread
Hope you have fun while here
Please, always be in top gear.[/center]
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 5:58pm On Feb 25, 2008
@meex


yes i know i have come so quick
and i hope i will continue to pick
as i feel i want to fall sick
from the kick i got from my chick
because i told her the milk
i got for her was with a brick of mine
and she thought it was a trick
and decided to beat me with a thick stick
I am tired and can't even speak
thank God am typing
as i am weak of speaking
but i hope to be better by next week
to get back to you guys "my clique"

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