Da killa clique syk yea dats a fact got all da money and da honeys chillin in da back ridin up lookin fresh caddy on 24s what dese girls really like is da laboghini daws  so surprised i see it in ya eyes you aint neva seen a whiteboy lookin so fly.


Just felt like m.cen gettin kind of bord tell me what u think of my rymes ill show u the rest if you do

Its good,and like some of your other poems,its more of a rap than a poem.It would make a good rap.

Nice rhymes but i believe you'll be better as a rapper than a poet
nice works with all your posts.
Cheers

'Tis Kool.

it's cool i love rap poems