Adinije:
@Larry, I don't like the idea of Lot mating with Ruth. I was thinking u could have find a means to reconcile her with her husband. this act also drastically reduce Lot's integrity and the respect I have for him.

Thanks for this comment. That part would be cut off. Ruth couldn't reconcile with her husband. There is a reason behind that.

I luv dis!it shows dat detective Lot is human afteral .

Ruth is definitely sometin else
Weldone Larry n pls dnt cut it off,its an added spice

I finally catch up with you guys....
Larrysun u are good oooooo
Larrysun,are u a mathematician?
Should i call u a historian
or a dectective?
or a doctor?

But ds story.....i wonder their state of mind after each of them re been questioned in that house.
But finally,have unveil the secret.....
Lot sleeping with Ruth....is this for good or another terror wanna pour like sweat?

I finally catch up with you guys....
Larrysun u re good oooooo
Larrysun,are u a mathematician?
Should i call u a historian
or a dectective?
or a doctor?

But ds story.....i wonder their state of mind after each of them re been questioned in that house
But finally,have unveil the secret.....
Lot sleeping with Ruth....is this for good or another terror wanna pour like sweat?

Larry pls dont cut that part..shits like this are bound to happen even in real life situation
tnx boss

waiting for next update

Larry, are you trying to elongate this story? Cus Ruth will not have s*x for nothing and I can't believe Lot will think with his d*ck than his head.

Mind you, it can happen.

krispee:
I luv dis!it shows dat detective Lot is human afteral .

Ruth is definitely sometin else
Weldone Larry n pls dnt cut it off,its an added spice

Okay, one point against two.

uchebest2006:


I finally catch up with you guys....
Larrysun u are good oooooo
Larrysun,are u a mathematician?
Should i call u a historian
or a dectective?
or a doctor?

But ds story.....i wonder their state of mind after each of them re been questioned in that house.
But finally,have unveil the secret.....
Lot sleeping with Ruth....is this for good or another terror wanna pour like sweat?

Thank you, sir. Ruth slept with Lot because of her high libido. And doing the man who didn't like her was a conquest on her part.

Flakeey:
Larry pls dont cut that part..shits like this are bound to happen even in real life situation
tnx boss

waiting for next update

Now two against two.

rapmike:
Larry, are you trying to elongate this story? Cus Ruth will not have s*x for nothing and I can't believe Lot will think with his d*ck than his head.

Mind you, it can happen.

Ruth slept with Lot because she wanted to sleep with him; no string attached. So, should it remain there or be scratched?

veave:
Chai!

Lol! You spooked me.

Scapashini3:
Them say dem bad pass LARRY but i swear them no reach o . The don-doro-bucci-writer LARRYSUN

Lol! Thank you, sir. I'm pleased and honoured.

Iaz93:
20 man shall for that day if dem try compete oh eh..

Lol! We have many literary giants here. I'm just a midget.

elpiroski:
Ahha
Hope Ruth is not trying to sire a detective
anyway, still following

Lol! Thanks.

Flakeey:
Holy mother of Jesus
az in, ehen
iyen Detective Lot...u mean he actually erm erm...
Why am I even surprised? he patronises brothels naaa

and Ruth, her libido ehnnn na die, she's not even sober about her newly discovered secrets. Not sure she's even ready to look for her real parent.

Mr. Larry, the boss...come let me give u a bear hug for your wild sense of imagination and creativity. I envy you walahi

Thanks for the hug, dear.

Yea I fnk I hv an idea of d person wu did d killing, Jamal Malik's first Son wv Cain's wife

DzTzl:
Yea I fnk I hv an idea of d person wu did d killing, Jamal Malik's first Son wv Cain's wife

Wrong. Lol!

LarrySun:
Ruth slept with Lot because she wanted to sleep with him; no string attached. So, should it remain there or be scratched?

Hmn...... its depends on you. Since there are no strings attached, I see no reason for it to remain. However, Like in a stories of a perfect man there must be a flaw, and this should serve as Lot's flaw.

Therefore leave it alone

The last update was odd.... waiting for more revelations.

@last update....na wa oh
and who's mailer

but then u haven't said anyfn bou d guy after the bank's operation

LarrySun:
Wrong. Lol!

LarrySun:
Thanks for this comment. That part would be cut off. Ruth couldn't reconcile with her husband. There is a reason behind that.

Yea. You certainly need to cut that part off. Couldn't believe my eyes when I read it.

DzTzl:
Yea I fnk I hv an idea of d person wu did d killing, Jamal Malik's first Son wv Cain's wife

He's the one that wrote the letter addressed to Famous I think.

Guys,
its time to nominate that writer you so wish to have interviewed this saturday on Nairaland. Just go in here and hit the like button on any post which has your favourite writer's name.
This is the link to the thread;
https://www.nairaland.com/1952165/weekly-interview-thread-subsidiary-dammysammytv/4....
You can also read the last edition of the interview. The guest was
Royver.
__________________________________________
Its also that time of the year to vote for those writers who have kept us entertained all through the year.
Nominate your favourite writers in the following genres;
1. Action
2. Crime
3. Comedy
4. Thriller
5. Romance
6. Fantasy and many more.
The link to the nomination thread is;https://www.nairaland.com/1958564/literature-section-awards-nomination-thread

LarrySun:
Okay, thanks. I'll cut off that part.

for what nw dnt even tink about it

D boy who escaped d armed robbers at d bank d day Cain's son was shot dead and made away with d boy's passports. Its him right?

rapmike:



Hmn...... its depends on you. Since there are no strings attached, I see no reason for it to remain. However, Like in a stories of a perfect man there must be a flaw, and this should serve as Lot's flaw.

Therefore leave it alone

Won't that flaw bring him to an unexpected negative end?

Do you enjoy this story and that of others, are you going to keep on reading and not nominate your best writer. Please, do at the link below...
https://www.nairaland.com/1958564/literature-section-awards-nomination-thread


#Nairawriters

OMA4U:


Won't that flaw bring him to an unexpected negative end?

As I said, it depends on how Larry wants to play it.

Larry, as much as I find the romp between Lot and Ruth titillating,I still think it's very unlikely that a man of Lot's calibre (even if he visits brothels) would do a thing that foolhardy. It just doesn't add up with the picture of the detective you've painted beginning from the Brand of Cain. A man like Lot should have the ability to rein his libido in a way that most men can't. It spoils everything. I think you should cut it off.


P.S: If at all there must be any romp, let it be between Daniel and Esther. He needs it badly.

Iaz93:
20 man shall for that day if dem try compete oh eh..

Back to the matter!