Ghozye: I think ds z d point whr I v 2 speak Chinese...zhege gushi you yisi!
This story z so interestin!

Princesa Princesa,u rock!U've got me feelin lovey dovey

who wil b my Jide?;(

I think this baton shud be held by me.

I 've been glued to ur story,from d very start and i must admit to d fact that u are such a brilliant writer.keep up d good work.

And she is back to finish what she started, perfect writer is what to describe you with.
You are just awesome.

Looking forward to more of your work in the future.

Princesa. I dont like this o.
Why will u write about my marriage after telln u nt to do so.

Phew!

Hello people, finally i ended the story......apologies for the delays in update, i got lots to do here..

So let me hear what you think about the chapter finale!


#If you are a chop and clean mouth reader here enh, my E-spirit will haunt you oh#

Wow! Can't believe I devout the whole of my weekend reading this master's piece. I have been a ghost reader since, but with your recent update i can't keep silent anymore! Princessa you're just way too good with you writing skills and I covet your resilence too: 4months! (though don't want to be a jerk but since none has corrected you, i would like to bring your attention to these two words: pERturbed which you continuously spelt pREturbed, and uMpteenth which you spelt upteeth) Thumbs up once again.

#singing# this girl is too good ooo........i love everything about this story.
Thank you sweetheart

Splendid.....ℓ̊ enjoyed every bit of it.
Wished the story won't end now.
Keep up the good work.

Thank you too smart and shola, for reading

corrections noted and whoa, three months you say!

Princesa!!!XXXXX. Awesome work>I really enjoyed your story, thanks for a great story. cheers

princesa: Thank you too smart and shola, for reading

corrections noted and whoa, three months you say!

I think I don't need no mills&boon nomore, we should have a series of african writers romance what do you say?

You need to brush up it here and there, check your spelling, marks should be in proper places but all in all you did good.

As they say, we are many parts in one body, that's how we artists are like. Different strokes for different folks.

Much love.

it actually 4months and still counting!

Am a silent reader & i must confess that after nourishment, shelter and companionship, stories are the thing we need most in the world,you are a good writer....welldone.

HumbledbYGrace:
I think I don't need no mills&boon nomore, we should have a series of african writers romance what do you say?

You need to brush up it here and there, check your spelling, marks should be in proper places but all in all you did good.

As they say, we are many parts in one body, that's how we artists are like. Different strokes for different folks.

Much love.

thank you, much love...offcourse I'll do the editing later. And yes, i think its long overdue for African romance piece.

shollaire:
it actually 4months and still counting!

that's why i was shocked, cos i know it took me longer.

ojingbe:
Princesa. I dont like this o.
Why will u write about my marriage after telln u nt to do so.

I noticed a lot of mistakes in ur writing.
1. Wrong moniker: change ur name to mrs mutaino8.
2.wrong names 4 xter: the name that suits jide shud av bin mutaino7 while daisy shud be u, ade will fit ITbomb, brenda will fit h.grace lastly repogal will fit the bimpe xter..... oh b4 i go gran-ma shud be ishilove. seriously u held me spell bound.

Mutaino7: I noticed a lot of mistakes in ur writing.

You always know Ade when u see one.
What has been written has been written, u can go ahead and change Ade to Mutaino if that will satisfy you

I wasn'nt going to comment because ur update late well, well but ehnn... this is a lovely ending and I must say thumbs up girl. hope you will do the editing and publish it? this is a master piece.

Guess it would be against all that I believe in if I don't say a big weldone to princesa for this story. Kida busy now, can't type much but I promise to comment later. Weldone dear and thanks. Wanted to comment after the story ended. Would be back with my full epistle.

hmm,wish princesa was a guy,n i cud mary im
*sobs*
if wishes were horses.....

Hi Princessa, you've done a wonderful piece in taking chances. Really enjoyed every bit of the story, and can't wait to see other publications from you. Go girl! You rock!

Weldone. Noticed u used d word 'screamed' a lot. Most times conversations were a shouting match, mayb Jide shld b talkn sarcastically smetimes instead of always screaming. And d part whre Daisy kept saying 'begone' dint quite flow 4 me, guess its cos she's an Americana. All in all, I enjoyd ur story line. Tanks 4 putting time in2 dis even wit all d pressures, appreciate much. U 4 write "THE END" o, mke pple no cry say d tory still remain.

ITbomb:
You always know Ade when u see one.
What has been written has been written, u can go ahead and change Ade to Mutaino if that will satisfy you

dont take it serious am only jiving.

Princessa, I cut cap for u. wonderful work, I see another Chimamanda in u keep it

Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
princesa you are a darling , Finest work on NL

Mutaino7:
dont take it serious am only jiving.

Too late
I've already dispatched the Bomb Squad.
Start writing ur will
And when u see Peter at the Pearl Gate , tell him the truth that u died cos u wanted to covert another man's wife

princesa, nice story u gt dia, tnks 4 d tip

Choi, I don miss o, I'm just reading this concluding part. Great work, darling Princessa. Well done, well concluded. Have fun at your 'sunset'.

next page things

Then we go write,

THE END

Ghozye: I think ds z d point whr I v 2 speak Chinese...zhege gushi you yisi!
This story z so interestin!

Princesa Princesa,u rock!U've got me feelin lovey dovey

who wil b my Jide?;(

Neduzze xuyao Yi ge nüpengyou... Ni yao bu yao?
he can be ur jide

Nice story. Hope to See another lovely story 4rm you. Love U

Bravo