This will be the page a user will see first when he clicks the facebook ad. Then when he clicks on the CTA button, he will then be taken to the main index page of the website. From there, he will find every information he wants. Is the message on the landing page strong enough. Is there something I am missing?

http://www.ctrlshiftstudios.com/Landing-Page

Since u r paying per click/ad, I would think that you should maximize your chances by adding the CTA both at the top and the bottom. Especially on mobile devices, you don't want folks to scroll to eternity before seeing the button.

Either shorten the content or create more opportunities to display the CTA

I think its is too clustered. A good landing page elements are :
A. Headline

B. Benefits

C: What do you want them to do? Fill a form, download ?

That is a great characteristics of a landing page.

@Yawa, good point there. Pls check again.

@Cheavroi, thank you. In this case, it has a good heading. We dont want them to fill a form or download anything. We want the users to be hungry to know more about the services. So the cta button is what we want them to click.

Looks much better. It is even responsive to boot. Way to go!

2 more suggestions and should you choose to accept, you will be good to go:

1) Remove the 2nd sentence, "And we charge almost nothing to offer these services...". I think this is better served on the page they land on

2) Make the font responsive. My thinking here is that especially for those with very small viewports, make the font smaller will make the "learn more" button appear without them having to scroll. Again, you want them to click and you are paying for the facebook ad so you want to maximize clicking potential.

cheers!

I think it's ok now. The h1 font-size needs not be reduced in small viewports. Users aren't in a hurry like that. They will scroll down, even to the one at the footer.

Final improvement. Check it out: http://www.ctrlshiftstudios.com/Landing-Page/

The layout is way better but I think the 3 columns causes too much scrolling on a mobile device...especially a small one. I know we've talked about this before. However, I think you should consider placing "learn more" buttons after a short summary for each of those columns.