Hello my fellow nairalanders,this story am about telling u guys is a true life story which all started in the year 2006 and will surely touch ur heart.have been keeping this to myself all this years and i think this is the best time to pour it out.

We have same thing in common. I was also keeping my story to myself. Hope you nor go fall my hand?

The story has just began: The year 2006 will definetely be the year i will never forget.it all started on august 17 2006 which was after when i finished my junior waec exam and was 13 years old back then.

it was on saturday morning around 9:00am"a very rainy day it is" where me and my friends where playing football in front of my compound which is said to be a storey building which has one of the renowed barbing salon and chemist in my area.

i was a very good player that i hardly play football with my mate except with people who are far older than me which always caught the attention of people who gather around us to watch me play with great skills,with so much amusement on their face.

as all this was going on,the owner of the barbing salon whose name is joe came with a very gorgeous and astonishing lady whose name is judith aka"look and tell"which i later learnt was his cousin who came for a short visit in lagos from kaduna.

I believe this is your first ever write-up.
You need to work on your spacing, use paragraph and make your update long

yemi2plus2: I believe this is your first ever write-up.
You need to work on your spacing, use paragraph and make your update long

let him finish naw

madone: let him finish naw

i'm a new writer myself, i just stated what i observed.

both joe and judith were speaking their dialect while i went closer to greet them but not until she put up an angelic smile that can melt a steel which make me go dumpfounded looking at her as if have lost my mind.As time went by,my football pals got exhausted and have to go their seperate ways while i go get water to take my bath and eat my already prepared breakfast which was around 12pm. Later that day my mum who was about going out to get somethings for the family called on me to help her stay at the shop which was next to joe salon(who is said to be judith cousin),which left me with no other option than to adhere to her instructions.

both joe and judith were speaking their dialect while i went closer to greet them but not until she put up an angelic smile that can melt a steel which make me go dumpfounded looking at her as if have found heavens gate.As time went by,my football pals got exhausted and have to go their seperate ways while i go get some water to take my bath and eat my already prepared breakfast which was around 12pm. Later that day my mum who was about going out to get somethings for the family called on me to help her stay at the shop which was next to joe salon(who is said to be judith cousin),which left me with no other option than to adhere to her instructions. As i was busy helping my mum she came out from her cousins barbing salon and sat at a bench which was meant for customers who are waiting for their service to be rendered and was adjacent to were i sat but all of a sudden i noticed her gazzing at me whenever i looked towards another direction but when i turned towards her direction she will quickly throw her heads of,this continues to the extent that she couldn't help but to stare at me.i was somehow embarrased wondering what would have caused her to stair at me that way i couldn't withstand it anymore that i have to call out my younger sister to take my place while i went in.later on a thought came to my mind that i have to wash my dirty cloth cos i have non left to wear for the next day but for me to wash it that evening wasn't possible cos i don't want her to have a glimps at me,while i schedule to wash it in the night thinking she might have gone by then not knowing that she will be around until her cousin(joe)close for the day.

It was some minute after 8 in the night,while i was busy washing my cloth at the backyard i heard some foot step coming towards my direction without wanting to know who the person is but not until i heard the soft voice of a lady seeking for an assistance,i quickly brought my head up and behold it was her(judith),i almost fainted that my legs were shivering without her noticing cos every where was dark,and the conversation goes this way.

Judith:hello good evening. Salore:evening so many things started going through my mind wondering what would happen next and then she continues. Judith: pls where can i urinate salore: oh u want to urinate judith:yes salore: ok,come let me take u to one of our bathroom so that u can urinate. judith:thanks she followed me while i quickly ran inside to bring the key for her to make use of the bathroom,on getting back to her i opened the door and ask her if she will need any form of light inorder for her to see clearly cos every where was so dark that even bat will find it hard to find their way which she denounced and decided to urinate behind the bathroom while i left her to continue my washing.

oruchechuks: Your story funny die, bt lets do some construction here #grabs chiesel and hammer#.
1. Learn to use paragraphs, how? Each statement said by you or anothe person should be started on a new paragraph.
2. Use quotation mark effectively, how? Quotation mark should be used on words said and not on what you are thinking.
3. #flips through pages of literature writing guide#. . .uhmm. . . I think thats all for now

kindly follow this steps. Na how many user id you get?

After about 2minute or more she came towards where i was washing my cloth. Judith:thanks i really appreciate. Salore:u are welcome. she adjusted her skirt and left for the back door of his cousin salon which lead to the backyard but after some few second she came out from the backdoor that lead to the backyard and started coughing towards my direction until she finally got to where i was. But before then,i couldn't help that i wish i can disappear into thin air. As she bent down beside me immediately i felt a great cold as if an iceberg was put right beside me.then she complained to me that something inform of fly entered her mouth which lead to her cough then i quickly gave her the water i bought to surpase myself when i feel thirsty for her to drink inorder to relief her of the cough which deliberately did,then all of a sudden her cousin joe who expected her to have been back from the backyard opened the back door and called on her which she responded but at that point in-time i was through with what am doing and later retired to bed.

@oruchechuks,thanks it is just that am using a mobile phone that is why it looked that way,it would have been different if i have used a system.u re welcome

Salore4real: @oruchechuks,thanks it is just that am using a mobile phone that is why it looked that way,it would have been different if i have used a system.u re welcome

using a phone to type is not an excuse.
There are so many writers on nairaland that use phone in typing.
Just follow the above steps and you work will look neat.
Thanks

Salore4real:
After about two minute she came towards where i was washing my cloth.
"thanks, i really appreciate" she said with a smile on her face.
"you're welcome" i replied her and started washing my cloths again.
she adjusted her skirt and left for the back door of her cousin salon.
After some few seconds she came out from the backdoor that lead to the backyard and started coughing towards my direction until she finally got to where i was.
I couldn't help that i wish i could disappear into thin air.
As she bent down beside me, immediately i felt a great cold as if an iceberg was put right beside me.
She complained to me that something like an insect entered her mouth which lead to the cough.
i quickly gave her the water i bought to surpase myself when i feel thirsty for her to drink inorder to relief her of the cough which she deliberately did.
then all of a sudden her cousin joe who expected her to have been back from the backyard opened the back door and called on her which she responded but at that point in-time i was through with what i was doing and later retired to bed.

i just type this using a mobile phone.
You can do better bro.

The next day,
my mum and dad ask me to go and cut my hair which was so full to the extent that if a bucket of water is been poured on,it won't get to the scalp.
so i went to the salon for my hair to be cut,which was done by mr joe a.k.a master as fondly called "which was judith cousin".so after been through with my hair,he jokingly called my name while smiling and said to me.
joe:quadri it seems as if my cousin like u.
salore:which cousin.
joe:u no no
salore:bros i no understand u
joe:i mean judith,the girl wey come yesterday.
that was when i know her name.then he continues.
joe:yesterday wey we reach house,she come tell me say im like u say u get good height,character and all that.
seriously i was shock cos that will be the first time in my whole life i would have such compliment from an opposite sex.i was so dumpfounded that i couldn't remember what happen next.
i later went inside,lie on our couch and was pondering on the event that happen the day before which was how nature came and took it course.
am kind of been too shy when it comes to been in the midst of an opposite sex not to talk of looking into the eyes of such a damsel creature to the extent that whenever she is around i wouldn't come out of the house until i comfirm she is gone,and later be told by her cousin that she came and ask after me,while i will lie to him that have not been around for a while which i always feel guilty of.
one sunday evening around 8:30pm i was already in the salon watching the football match against italy and france which was meant to be 2006 world cup final where matterazi was given the nodding of his life by zidane.
the match was very crucial that i did not know when she came in,pass behind me and sat at the extreme end of the salon while she joined us but not until zidane missed a chance which got the people around shouting"eh zidane na dead",see chance wey him miss".then someone altered a word saying "zidane na mumu if na me i go score am"immediately i looked back to see the person that altered that word but to my surprise,it was an old man who came to cut his hair,then i put up a smile and continue watching the game.
later on a thought came to my mind to look back that someone else may be looking at me which i deliberately did and found her gazzing at me,people are much in the salon that u hardly take a step forward.at this point i almost have an high bp feeling very uncomfortable waiting for the football match to end so that i can just dissapear like a speed of light all because i was too shy.
it was about 10:30pm,italy were crowned the winner of the tournament with people rejoicing till they all left their seperate ways,while i stay back,sweep and arranged the salon with mr joe,which i always do before she came from kaduna.after all this were done i escorted them to the bustop while discussing the football match with joe without talking to her.

Salore, u tried! Keeep it up bro

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