Any more feedback please? Positive or negative, I'd appreciate it. I'm having a fair amount of views. How's the story? Is it captivating?

natkel1: Any more feedback please? Positive or negative, I'd appreciate it. I'm having a fair amount of views. How's the story? Is it captivating?

I'm enjoying every bit of it

Thank u Handsomeemmy

Nice write up.

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Veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery captivating,luvin it d more...



Y did Suzz leave Matt?

Brightmexy thank you

Candis009, we will see why she left. Let's keep reading.

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Nice work you've got, when is the next update coming up ?

Always knew you've gat talent. Here I just wanna enjoy myself big tym. Tanx alot for such a piece

U're really gud dear...weldone n keep up the gud work.....waiting for the next update pls make it lengthy!!

Candis, na me carry suzzane commot, we re getting married.
@natkel, some typos here and there and try and explain d environment small(am not a writer o) but generally, wonderful write, lovely story kind, from a beautiful, wonderful writer. @natkel, will u be my seventh wife?

Thank you, Smhart1

Thank you Jiraiyas

Thank you Emerald dan, is this long enough?

Thank you Damexx333, note taken. Lol, 7th wife. Too many in the family.

Damex,i know sey u fit carry Suzz run buh abeg pity Matt na
Carryon jare natkel,we dey ur back gidigbam!

Just bumped on this now,dunno if u've noticed,but d update comes in 2s,u can just check it out. Am loving ur story!

Uhm not really buh it will do for now.... Why is samantha acting so spoilt n bi*tchy??

Nsesilas, its just that my phone doesn't show that the update has gone. So I'm working on sending one post. Thanx.

Emerald dan: samantha is spoilt

Hahahahhahahaha

Na where hm go meet Suzanne i wan read shaperly


good job natkel

Thank you Candis009

Wonderful write up....