They looked back to see Mr and Mrs Attai in a pool of their own blood and smoke coming out of ibro's gun. Mixture of confusion and shock flushed their face while tension and fear tower in the face of the gateman and his supposed bodyguard.
"why did you kill them? They did nothing wrong na, they cooperated with us well" chairman said with confusion still in his face "did they try to attack us?" he continued moving closer to them but he saw that they are still in the position they left them expect that now Mrs Attai is lying down on her face with a hole at the back of her head that is gushing blood like a fountain and another blood stained back Mr. Attai sitting at the foot of the sofa resting his back on sofa with a bullet hole in front of his head and blood on the right part of his chest indicating he was shot there too. "why you shoot them na" lexo shouted and dropped the bag as he walked towards ibro and pushed him on the chest visibly showing that he was grieving his beloved big ass woman. "can't you guys think?, they saw our face, they might tell the police and we might be arrested" ibro tried to explain since he didnt want to tell them his real reason. "but we don tell them say we wear masks na" ade said "lets not argue here, the neighbour might have heard the shots and alarmed the police, lexo carry the bag and lets get out of here" as he didn't want then to waste time but he also didn't buy into the idea of showing their face because they had agree that they wont be using masks so as to gain easy entrance into the house without shedding too much blood thats if any blood will be shed and he(ibro) had agree without any arguement why he changed his mind he must definately explain but not here
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AT THE BACK OF THE HOUSE
"yepa, why i no come do this car yesterday wey i go dey drink beer for sam house" the mechanic that was repairing Mr. Attai's murano jeep in the garage that was situated at the back of the house which is not visible to people in front of the house. He was talking to himself under the car that he hid himself when he heard the sounds of the gunshot so close that he felt it was just outside the garage or beside him the gun had gone off. how will my mum and wife feel when they hear say i don die?, she will defintely die of heart attack, abi when did she lose her husband sef, no be last year october?, God save me out of this o. Na my gluttoness brought me this problem o were the thought that occupied him that made him not to know when his bladder failed its job of holding urine and gave way for hot urine that describe the degree of hotness of both his internal and external body. "chai, na so i piss for body." he said.
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OUTSIDE
"na wetin i dey happen for inside?" the gateman asked jade that sat opposite him which made jade remember that they had forget to tape his mouth while he was occupied with his own thought as he wondered who shot who. "you still get mouth to talk abi?" he asked the gateman as he went to the car to get the cellotape. "i no go talk again abeg" the gateman begged him as he saw the cellotape with him. Jade tapped the gateman mouth whilst struggling with him. He went to sit down on the bench in front of him so that he can watch him. Few minutes after he sat down, he saw ade coming followed closely by lexo and then ibro with chairman at the back. "wetin happen for inside na?" he asked as he stood up, "Who shoot who na? Make una answer me na" he asked again as noone answered him "you sef go inside and check yourself " ade replied him "guy open door make we dey go, we go dey explain everything for house" ade opened the driver's door and got in, he pressed the booth button so that lexo can drop it in there while jade went to open the gate and they all got and ade reversed the car in the right direction and swerved the car out in the left direction. As they were going out ibro rolled down the glass and shot the gateman twice. Everybody including the chairman looked at him with the eyes that can kill and jade asked "why you kill that man now?" as it occured to him that ibro had been the one who had shot someone inside the house.
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To be Continued.

Lol Damexx, u finally made it. Nice try.

Now to criticism.

Like me, so much errors, especially in spelling and tenses. Make use of commas and use only past tense.. Also work on the structure of the whole story so as to make reading easy.

Noticed an improvement in the latter works than earlier ones. Nice work though.

frank3.16:
Lol Damexx, u finally made it. Nice try.

Now to criticism.

Like me, so much errors, especially in spelling and tenses. Make use of commas and use only past tense.. Also work on the structure of the whole story so as to make reading easy.

Noticed an improvement in the latter works than earlier ones. Nice work though.

thanks to my realest boss. Thanks 4 stopping by and i will surely work on ur observations

Ok, na front seat i dey from now on... Ride on bro

Nice write up,welldone bro

Jor o! Damexx ton writing.nice one bro

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thanks sister, welcome to the ride

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boss, its just like peak. Thanks 4 following.

AFTER TWO MONTHS "Kpooaa" "kpooaa" the sounds of gun as they release bullets into the bodies of the unsuspecting unarmed security officials that were guarding The Peoples First Community Bank that was situated at No 56 Oko Oba Road, Agege, Lagos. With the sounds of the gunshots the market that was just starting the work activities of the day at ten o' clock on a thursday because of the goverment policies that all markets must observe a compulsory environment sanitation, the mini market quickly became as quiet as the grave yard. Inside the bank, the workers that were all in the banking hall are seen removing their badges and their coats so that the coming robbers wont identify them as workers. The gang of robbers quickly stick the explosives they had brought with them into wall that holds the electric door and "gboooaaaa" it exploded bringing the walls around the door all down, making the door very easy to push down, they shot security in the leg and started shooting into the air sporadically, all four of them enter the bank with three of them running into it while chairman walked like a boss he was jade as been told to study the environment very well for more than one week, he had find and know all escaping route in case the police try to pursue them while they are going. Inside the bank, chairman was giving orders "everybody lie down flat, i dont need to see any body's face or eyes " he ordered with authority as everyone lie low. Their faces was hugged tight with black cotton made masks with dark shades blocking their eyes and same material gloves giving them another fingerprint
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THIRTY MINUTES BEFORE 10A.M
" Hello DPO, i will be needing some of your boys to escort some money out of the bank this money." the manager of PFCB, A fast rising bank that most trader of the mini Oko Oba market that is just six blocks away from the bank keeps their daily money. A bank that uses most of GTB'S (Guarantee Trust Bank) policies like building their banking structures in an unfenced compound said into the mouth piece of his phone that was pressed to his chin,
"when do you need them?" the DPO voice ranged from the far piece of the manager's phone,
"i need them between now and 10 this morning" the manager answered him
"owkay, i will get to the office within the next fifteen minutes and will arrange the boys for you, expect them in the next twenty-five minutes
" the DPO said while driving his officiall police car that looks like the police patrol van. "owkay, i will be expecting them, hope they know where they will enter through?" the manager asked, "you know we dont want to disturb our customers" the manager continued
"i understand all your policies" DPO answered maneuvering his car to the right. "they will strictly adhere to it" he added, after saying that he pressed the red button among the keypads of his nokia c3 phone and removed the ear piece he used in answering his call.
Twenty six minutes later, a police armoured tank and two patrol vans filled with police stopped and parked in a small compound at the back of the bank and police jumped out as if they are ready for war. They marched out of the compound into the back of the bank through the small gates while two policemen stopped at d gates more policemen stopped at many point before getting to the stairs that connects the manager's office with the back of the bank, four senior sergents went up to the managers office to collect the parcel. They were still in the manager's office when they heard the sounds of gun very close by, before they could think or draw up conclusions they heard another sound that sounds like a bomb. Then their walkie talkie sounded,
"sir, what is happening there?" one of the sergents carried the radio and waited for the beep before talking back into the radio
"we dont know yet, but it seems like there is a robbery going on right here" he pressed the button at the right side of the radio,
"i will send one of the boys to check it out, and will give you a reply immediately i get it" the reciever said into the radio
"do that and be quick about it, give him a radio with him, i want the information first hand" the senior sergent said. There was little silent from the other side but not for long as a voice rang from the radio
"sir, the robbery is happening in this bank sir, they are at the hall"
"owkay, boys get prepared, try get to all the exit to the hall and wait for my directives.
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Pls, drop comment, dont just read and go, try and encourage a brother, and pls i need the constructive criticising also.

Glued 2 dis story.kip it up.

You are toomuch oooh.. Come and do continua please

nice one Damex...i just started...

i love your story.

Aghagba: Glued 2 dis story.kip it up.

thanks for following, i will surely keep it up

E<R>F:
You are toomuch oooh.. Come and do continua please

thanks for reading, will continue but right now damex is preparing for an exam he is to write on wednesday, he will be dropping an update on wednesday

jayloyexten: nice one Damex...i just started...

i love your story.

boss, thanks for reading o, abeg, help me preview it o, and tell me how to improve o. Thanks again.

Nice story,I Think you need to work on your tenses and are you writting in plain english or pidgin?

Tovot: Nice story,I Think you need to work on your tenses and are you writting in plain english or pidgin?

its a mixture of plain english and pidgin, but mostly plain english. Thanks for reading, will surely work on em tenses.

Where Damex333 they nah?! Abeg do come update jawe

Damex333 will surely update, he is only trying to charge his palasa nokia 3310 fone.

Damex333: Damex333 will surely update, he is only trying to charge his palasa nokia 3310 fone.

Heheehheh...., asif nokia 3310 fit broswe

" Sir, there is a robbery going on at the bank you sent us" the sergent, olamide said into his radio, he had connect the DPO as soon has he had given the other police around the around the bank orders, the three other sergents that went to the manager's office with olamide had all gone down the stairs through another stairs different from the one they had used when coming. This stairs was the one that linked the manager's office to the banking hall. He ( Olamide ) was on the stairs.
"What!" the DPO exclaimed, "what really happened"
" we have no idea sir, but we just heard some gunshot and a blast, so we decided to check it up, all i can say now is that there is a robbery operation going on here" olamide replied the DPO while stopping on the stairs because he was half way already
"can you hold them?" The DPO asked again
"we can hold for now, but i dont know how many robbers they are" Olamide answered and continued " we need backup sir"
" owkay, tell your boys to try and hold them, i will send in backup now," he said and he hanged up.
Olamide walked swiftly but silently, when he got to the base of the stairs he saw a half closed door, and he opened it cautiously, not knowing what lies behind the door, when he opened the door, he he met the three policemen that left him earlier, "what is the situation outside there" he asked them with a steady voice, "i think you need to see it yourself" one of them answered him.
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Meanwhile, in the banking hall.
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When chairman entered he gave am order that everybody should lie down flat, lexo and ade both picked up a dustbin and poured the content away as papers flew out of the dustbin, "everybody drop your phones, jewelry, and money in basket that will soon be with you now" chairman ordered again. Lexo went to the end of the bank and started collecting their properties while ade did the same at other end, the security man that was shot at the leg had managed to crawl abit towards the small passage that leads to the manager's office.
"owkay, there are four guys in there" olamide said to the policemen with him while checking his pistol if there are enough bullets in the cartridge, after confirming that he still had enough, he picked his radio and pressed the button at the left side and said into it
" are the guys in position" he pressed the button again
" yes, they are in position, four guys at two doors each" the radio responded,
"that good, you will respond immediately you hear a shot" he said again. Then he peeped through the key hole and saw that one of the robbers is coming at a security man that was crawling.
Ibro saw the security he shot crawling and he thought he was crawling away, and he went to him, pick him up by the hand and if turned him around facing the hall and backing the door since he thought it was only a door to the toilet, he gripped his neck with his bro and tightened it, the security man groaned in pain then he asked him "where is the manager's" but before he finished his question he felt cold iron sinked inside his head, he lost his grip and the security fell down and rolled from him then another bullet buried itself inside his back as soon as it left olamide's gun, "everybody lie down flat" olamide shouted as more bullet fled from his gun, the robbers faced olamide's door and started shooting at it but olamide had shut the door before the first bullet got to him, lexo who was standing close to chairman both moved closer to the counter, the other doors flung opened and the policemen behind it shot at the robbers, some bullets entered into ade's system. Lexo and chairman both flew to the back of the counter and started shooting at the police, some policemen got hit,
"chairman, what are we going to do now?" lexo asked him
"we should just stand up and let them shoot us, silly" chairman retorted,
"ehn"
"ehn, we shoot our way through" chairman replied him with a sad tone.

Vivy Gift:

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made from aba nokia 3310 dey browse o. Make i show/borrow you?

Damex333: made from aba nokia 3310 dey browse o. Make i show/borrow you?

Tnks for the update. Hahaha..! U fit show mi but I no borrow abeg. I dey gbadun d one wey I dey use biko

Vivy Gift:

Tnks for the update. Hahaha..! U fit show mi but I no borrow abeg. I dey gbadun d one wey I dey use biko

biko, you go come check am ni o. GOOD morning to you.

Damex333: biko, you go come check am ni o. GOOD morning to you.

Good morning. Come ko come ni abeg upload 4 here jawe

Vivy Gift:


Good morning. Come ko come ni abeg upload 4 here jawe

make i upload? :O owkay, expect am 2day.

Damex333: make i upload? :O owkay, expect am 2day.

I mean make u take the pic of d fone con upload am here make I see.

Damexx baba,good job you've got here.

Damexx baba,good work you've got here.

Vivy Gift:

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Update in a bit.

Damex333: lol, you wan see magic abi?

Yes nah abi no bi u dey claim say nah 3310 wey dey browse na em u dey use.

Damex333: Update in a bit.

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" we shoot our way out through" chairman replied him with a sad tone
" you mean we have to shoot them?, or we die?" lexo asked again but with fear all over his person.
"anything we can do, lexo" chairman replied him with a tone that tells lexo that the end of the road is already upon them. Lexo then crawled to the other counter end of the counter where there is no police cos there are no door except the entrance door which was still very far away from where he is, if he ever thought of running he would be shot down before taking one step.

He got to the edge and saw ade coming towards the banking hall with his gun in his hands taking easy strides, looking farther from him he saw a police car driving in. "ade in trouble" he whispered to himself.
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SOME MOMENT AGO
Jade was seen in the car waiting impatiently for the gang to come out, he wanted to go and check them himself but warnings earlier from chairman that he must stay in the car throughout the duration of the operation kept him in the driver's seat, he heard gun shots coming from the insides of the bank, shaking his head he said to himself. "there guys are killing too much people. Am sure that ibro is taking over" he stayed put in the car but couldn't endure it anymore after sitting for more minutes with more and more gun shots ringing in the air like war already playing out, "they are taking too long o." he said to himself again impatiently "the shots coming from this bank is coming from more than four guns o" he continued talking to himself "i should check it out myself" he thought as he stepped out of the car they had drove in, he say that the road is empty "who wan die?" he said to himself chuckling, he remembered the day chairman told them not to speak pidgin english anytime they were operating, he claimed their victims will take them as local champion "who take big guns as local champion?" he continued while taking calculated strides towards the bank.
As he moved closer to the entrance of the bank, he saw a figure that can be describe as lexo dodging behind the counter, then he knew there was a huge problem, he decided to run back to the car and speed away but unfortunately for him the police van had already blocked the car and the police saw the gun with him, and they deposited a couple of bullets in his brain, lexo saw this and tried to crawl back to chairman place but saw chairman in the pool of his own blood, "what had happened" he asked noone but himself.
" anyone else there should surrender his arms now or risk being killed too, they whole building has been surrounded by the police " olamide shouted as more police came in from the out side, lexo quickly thought about the choice and he weighed his chances,would he would prefer living but locked in the cell or being dead? He choosed the later, its better than being caught, he wanted to shoot but something in him told him to check his gun for bullets but was shocked that his bullet compartment was so empty.
" Oh my God, why today?" he thought "do you think you can escape it even if your gun is filled up with bullets?" a part of him said and advised "you had beta surrender your weapon".
He threw his gun over the counter and put his hands up so that everyone can see before standing up, the police men quickly handcuffed him and led him away before the mob recovered themselves,
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"so, you were caught while robbing a bank?" Tunji asked with astonishment "mehn, na you be the boss, you don chop money while it lasted." one the two other prisoners named Jakes said excitedly


to be continued.


Thanks to you all for reading, will compile your names later.

Nice story building up.but please take out time to re-read before posting some errors are avoidable.
...it is good to see damex333 writing.
Update kia

wonder2***:
Nice story building up.but please take out time to re-read before posting some errors are avoidable.
...it is good to see damex333 writing.
Update kia

bros, thanks 4 reading, and i don tire for that errors o, i don do wella o, and thanks again.