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Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 6:34pm On Aug 04, 2013 |
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Re: Seduction In The Church by SONFGOD12: 9:07pm On Aug 04, 2013 |
I'll kip ma fingers crossed for nw |
Re: Seduction In The Church by biolabee(m): 9:19pm On Aug 04, 2013 |
Good plot but you did not use the technique of suspense to lead us in |
Re: Seduction In The Church by yajoe(m): 10:05pm On Aug 04, 2013 |
biolabee: Good plot but you did not use the technique of suspense to lead us inDt will keep us hungry 4 more 1 Like |
Re: Seduction In The Church by jumzzy448: 10:42pm On Aug 04, 2013 |
Silently followin..... By the way, try to keep your readers in suspense. It will make the story more interesting. |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 11:26am On Aug 05, 2013 |
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Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 11:53am On Aug 05, 2013 |
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Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 1:15am On Aug 07, 2013 |
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Re: Seduction In The Church by Samtolly4JESUS(m): 4:46pm On Aug 07, 2013 |
Ride on...... |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 4:37pm On Aug 11, 2013 |
Hello, readers and follower(s), i am sorry for not updating for a long time,i am just returning from the r.c.c.g camp ground-where there had been no network-i will update the story soon |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Samtolly4JESUS(m): 7:03pm On Aug 11, 2013 |
Divepen: Hello,great to know we've been experiencing JESUS together.... Now let's have the update |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 11:00am On Aug 12, 2013 |
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Re: Seduction In The Church by enobong18: 1:12pm On Aug 13, 2013 |
U are wasting too much time to update... wandering why |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 1:28pm On Aug 13, 2013 |
Brother,i thought i wasting my time |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Samtolly4JESUS(m): 1:38pm On Aug 13, 2013 |
Divepen: Brother,i thought i wasting my timeno oo.. We are right behind you |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 2:35pm On Aug 13, 2013 |
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Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 12:23pm On Aug 14, 2013 |
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Re: Seduction In The Church by SONFGOD12: 9:03pm On Aug 14, 2013 |
Ok wlcm bk..errm u have a nice story i lyk the name i had so wanted to read a story lyk tis on nl...dat said; i fink ur rushing d story. dnt u fink they should get to knw each other pretty well b4 she'll make d move on him? well as a writer u need to carry ur readers along tho its no easy task..i av a feeling u can pool it off if u push d rite button..uhrrh ok u've got watchout for typographical errors(they r so many of dem already) plus use ur figuratives(metaphors)superbly and ur will av readers all ova ya..i fink av said enough...gudluck ps i dnt mean to condasend jst my penny's worth |
Re: Seduction In The Church by psalm68(m): 12:41pm On Aug 20, 2013 |
not a bad start tho,... *Too much typos are taking the shine of it... *Where are the suppence, and dont keep us waiting |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 11:30am On Aug 22, 2013 |
divepen, update oh. |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Therock5555(m): 9:56pm On Aug 22, 2013 |
Keep this good work up, but come update abeg |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 7:57am On Aug 23, 2013 |
Ade died in his heart,he step back looking at speechlessly, 'what will i do now' he thought 'oh,lord i need your help'. He move toward her and gently take her hand,he look into her desiring-eyes -which refuse to loose hold of his body.He smile as he remember the word of Nigerians 'Bodi no be firewood', but then he remember his watchword 'i have made a covenant with my eyes,how will i think of a lady or how will i be moved by a lady to sin against God.' 'just this once?'he asked. she nod. 'just this once!' he said again. He draw her hand nearer and then he bend slightly towards her perfumed hand and kissed it. 'That's all',he mutter as he sigh in relief. 'that's what?' 'i just kissed you' 'no,you didn't' 'but i kissed your hands now,remember you only said i should kiss you once and you did not specifically tell me to kiss you anywhere' 'no now' she grumble 'it's remaining forty minutes to practice and we have done nothing..would you mind if we start now...' he said as she started wiping tears off her eyes... What a relief, 'only the seeing eyes knows what it is beholding' he thought as they started singing. ......................................................................... 'That's him',she wispered as he pass by her side,to sit at a front row. 'who is this one?' Ade asked himself. This is not the first time he will be seeing the girl in that fellowship and he knows that she is in the commercial unit but he is sure he has seen her somewhere before ,but he can't place his hands on the exact place. The preacher of the day start by talking of loose ladies who will want to give anything to be with a guy they love, 'hey handsome',they might start. 'hey handsome?' he repeated as he roll his eyes to remember where he had heard that phrase. 'hey handsome!!' he whispered... 'hey handsome!!!' he repeated,and again he let go,if only he had thought on them maybe he would have slept on his bed that night... |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Therock5555(m): 1:14pm On Aug 23, 2013 |
No giv up, just come cont ur story |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Danpersie31(m): 4:44pm On Aug 23, 2013 |
diz story is very very slow.infact d slowest story on nl xo far.pls update 2 make pple lyk ur story |
Re: Seduction In The Church by aprilwise(m): 11:50am On Sep 05, 2013 |
Uncompleted story |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Ogunleyetobi(m): 3:37am On Oct 20, 2013 |
Nice work, little error. Complete ur story man. |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 7:48am On Oct 20, 2013 |
[size=16]I noticed i am always free on weekend....so i would try to bring it in episode now...[/size] |
Re: Seduction In The Church by noblebright(m): 11:25am On Oct 24, 2013 |
ehhhhhhhhhhhhhh! |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 12:34pm On Oct 24, 2013 |
noblebright: ehhhhhhhhhhhhhh!wat happnd |
Re: Seduction In The Church by Nobody: 8:30pm On Mar 18, 2015 |
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